2m44s Set this up slightly clearer

3m55s Open eyes wider during blinks

4m14s That’s also not the right punch line there

6m03s They high fived, kinda funny

6m16s Try saying “for our first date” more seductively

Overall: Steady but weak laughs.

1m05s Good in room awareness to add the “proud of it” comment

1m41s The “maybe” should be whispered more

3m59s Last name line doesn’t work either

5m08s I should say “don’t awww” and go right into it instead of “yeah”

Overall: Average set. Got steady laughs throughout but not many huge laughs.

1m18s Really no reason for that aside

2m07s Say “DAP” first then explain it

2m34s Warning the audience it’ll be rougher is a fun way to tone it down a little

3m28s I should do just talking to the audience more often

Overall: Ok for late night. The new entitlement joke needs work but has potential.

0m30s Joke might work without the word “probably” in there

3m18s Open eyes wider for the blinks

4m39s Smile during the first two examples

Overall: On the weak side of average, had laughs but not that many big laughs

3m00s At least try a save line

3m50s Say this smoothly

Overall: Horrible even for checks. Should’ve tried crowd work.

2m17s It should be “don’t” instead of “didn’t”

4m39s Needs a better punch line

5m55s Cut the horny line

6m14s Say that more playfully

Overall: Great set for checks, good set without the curve

2m52s Seem more upset about it

4m05s Slight pause after “woah”

7m39s Say the “calls me up right after” line slower so I can get the mic properly adjusted

Overall: Good consistent set

0m50s Make going into material feel more seamless

4m52s Good honest save line

6m06s Cut the horny line

6m34s Might be worth reusing “I’m not gonna change for you”

Overall: Average to poor.

1m40s Could’ve added “yeah you’re not leader” or something

6m55s Feels forced there

7m35s Cut the heat line

7m58s Tighten the previous three sentences into one

Overall: Mediocre set. A couple of big laughs off of crowd work but the rest of the laughs were too low.

4m18s Pause for a second before “imagine”

5m42s Do the “yeah right” look for longer

Overall: Not great not terrible.