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		<title>Hi-Tech Comedy: Dan Levy</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jul 2010 12:55:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today I’m interviewing Dan Levy. Dan‘s had a half-hour special “Comedy Central Presents: Dan Levy“ and a MTV produced a TV pilot based on Dan‘s 10-part weekly web series, “My Long Distance Relationship“ which first ran on Sony‘s Crackle.com. Dan also produced and starred in the popular collegehumor.com series “The I Have To Go In [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.bigbencomedy.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/LevyAP1.jpg"><img class="alignright" style="margin: 10px;" title="LevyAP" src="http://www.bigbencomedy.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/LevyAP1.jpg" alt="LevyAP" width="225" height="230" /></a>Today I’m interviewing <a href="http://www.danlevyshow.com" target="_blank">Dan Levy</a>. Dan‘s had a half-hour special “Comedy Central Presents: Dan Levy“ and a MTV produced a TV pilot based on Dan‘s 10-part weekly web series, “My Long Distance Relationship“ which first ran on Sony‘s Crackle.com. Dan also produced and starred in the popular collegehumor.com series “The I Have To Go In a Minute Show with Super Host Dan Levy.“ He has been seen in The Montreal Just For Laughs Comedy Festival, Aspen Comedy Festival, Comedy Central‘s “Premium Blend“, “The Late, Late, Show,“ and is a regular round table guest on Chelsea Lately. Dan will be recording an album for Comedy Central Records during shows on October 1<sup>st</sup> &amp; 2<sup>nd</sup> in Denver at Comedy Works Downtown (<a href="http://www.comedyworks.com/comedians/499" target="_blank">get tickets</a>) and has just joined the cast of HBO’s upcoming comedy series “Enlightened.”</p>
<p><strong><a href="http://www.bigbencomedy.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/LevyAP1.jpg"></a>1. How are you using the internet / social media to promote your career?</strong></p>
<p>I use <a href="http://twitter.com/danlevyshow" target="_blank">Twitter</a> and <a href="http://www.facebook.com/danlevyshow">Facebook</a> to ramble and update things I think are funny as well as tell people where my shows are. But as far as new media goes&#8230; I’ve done a lot within the webisode world. I did a series for College Humor and a show for Sony “Crackle” which I then sold. I’m  also doing my second series of shorts  comedy central&#8217;s for atom TV.  I’m using digital media to incubate some of my ideas and then have them become TV shows or movies.</p>
<p><strong>2. Have you noticed the payoff yet?</strong></p>
<p>My following is growing from twitter and <a href="http://danlevyshow.com/videos/" target="_blank">online videos</a>. When I did “The I Have To Go In One Minute Show,” we did a show every day for eight weeks. That was great, because it built a mini-following and now I headlined the College Humor Live tour.  And the Crackle web series became a TV pilot, which didn’t get picked up, but I am writing another TV pilot for MTV now that came off the digital web series.</p>
<p><strong>3. What do you think about posting videos of your live stand up online?</strong></p>
<p>I don’t like to post recent videos, I’ll post my Comedy Central Presents or when I&#8217;m me on TV.  But I don’t think it’s a good idea to post jokes from live shows  because if everyone sees it online, it spoils it when they get to see you live and they&#8217;re like &#8220;write some new jokes!!!!&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>4. Do you think the internet is better suited for sketch comedy than for stand up videos?</strong></p>
<p>I think sketch comedy and shorts are perfect for the internet. I think short stand up clips also work well but sketches are better for this media. Sketches can go viral but it’s rare for a stand up clip to go viral. I did a show at UCB for College Humor where I have this ongoing feud with Dan Levy (a host on MTV-Canada) and that went viral which was great, but I think the internet is more fitted for shorts, parodies, interviews, and of course porn.</p>
<p><strong>5. How do you think digital tools will change comedy?</strong></p>
<p>I don’t think it will change comedy, I think it’s been able to help progress careers. It’s also one of those things where the cream always rises to the top. As digital becomes more popular, what ends up happening is people make videos. The perfect example is <a href="http://www.boburnham.com/" target="_blank">Bo Burnham</a>, he’s hilarious and he posted funny videos when he was  in high school and now he’s playing theatres, whereas before the internet, that couldn’t have happened because the exposure wasn’t there.  A lot of people make videos, but if they’re not good, nobody cares. Just ask my mom Linda.</p>
<p><strong>6. How much information do you tend to share on the social networks?</strong></p>
<p>I post whatever, I don’t hold back. I twitter jokes and stuff about my life. But I have never showed my dick online. . . Yet.</p>
<p><strong>7. What’s your weirdest online experience involving your comedy career?</strong></p>
<p>I’ve gotten some weird emails. The weirdest thing one was a hate mail (email) that was supposed to  be sent to Dan Levy the MTV Canada host.  Because apparently he called Kristin Stewart a bitch  (from Twighlight)  so I got an email from some person with the subject line of “fuck you asshole, we love vampires”. That was very confusing&#8230;but very hilarious.</p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 23c</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jul 2010 20:20:52 +0000</pubDate>
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1m31s Cause the guy was asian
7m07s Good job referencing previous crowd work
Part 2
0m24s Don&#8217;t say “terrible” two sentences in a row
Overall: Nice long 17 minute set with more or less steady laughs throughout
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<p><strong>1m31s</strong> Cause the guy was asian</p>
<p><strong>7m07s </strong>Good job referencing previous crowd work</p>
<p>Part 2</p>
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<p><strong>0m24s</strong> Don&#8217;t say “terrible” two sentences in a row</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Nice long 17 minute set with more or less steady (although small) laughs throughout</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 23b</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jul 2010 13:19:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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2m22s Add “because” before “Jesus would&#8217;ve wanted&#8230;”
5m44s Too wordy
6m41s Decent call back
Overall: Decent, but not great. I tried doing a lot of mom stuff in a row and it got a bit repetitive, even
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<p>A bar show</p>
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<p><strong>2m22s</strong> Add “because” before “Jesus would&#8217;ve wanted&#8230;”</p>
<p><strong>5m44s</strong> Too wordy</p>
<p><strong>6m41s</strong> Decent call back</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Decent, but not great. I tried doing a lot of mom stuff in a row and it got a bit repetitive, even for me.</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 23a</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Jul 2010 20:17:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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1m35s Either say “Rock and Roll” or “Heavy Metal” not both
3m03s Make an erasing the chalk board motion
3m24s The word “lie” should be last in the sentence
4m28s I need to say “comedy” before “class”
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<p><strong>1m35s</strong> Either say “Rock and Roll” or “Heavy Metal” not both</p>
<p><strong>3m03s</strong> Make an erasing the chalk board motion</p>
<p><strong>3m24s</strong> The word “lie” should be last in the sentence</p>
<p><strong>4m28s</strong> I need to say “comedy” before “class”</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Decent for an open mic</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 22</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Jul 2010 13:15:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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3m12s Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out
4m16s Don&#8217;t say “If I wasn&#8217;t hosting I would&#8230;”
4m45s So creepy it&#8217;s funny
5m28s Get rid of the word “really” in there
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">0m18s Working too hard for an answer that&#8217;s not even needed for the joke</div>
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could&#8217;ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.</div>
<p>Hosting my show in Queens</p>
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<p><strong>3m12s</strong> Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out</p>
<p><strong>4m16s</strong> Don&#8217;t say “If I wasn&#8217;t hosting I would&#8230;”</p>
<p><strong>4m45s</strong> So creepy it&#8217;s funny</p>
<p><strong>5m28s</strong> Get rid of the word “really” in there</p>
<p><strong>5m43s</strong> Don&#8217;t say “terrible” in two examples in a row</p>
<p><strong>7m29s</strong> Too wordy of a punch line</p>
<p><strong>8m14s</strong> Throw in a “clap it up for young love” or something</p>
<p>Part 2</p>
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<p><strong>0m18s</strong> Working too hard for an answer that&#8217;s not even needed for the joke</p>
<p><strong>2m56s</strong> Put the word “lie” last</p>
<p><strong>3m22s</strong> Pick three of the four</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could&#8217;ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 21</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Jul 2010 20:14:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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0m28s Or gifts
5m40s Oppressor football is a funny statement
7m33s I didn&#8217;t handle the interruption as smoothly as possible
Part 2
Overall: I could&#8217;ve been more high energy as the MC
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5m40s Oppressor football is a funny statement
7m33s I didn&#8217;t handle the interruption as smoothly [...]]]></description>
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<p>Hosting a Monday show in a restaurant</p>
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<p><strong>0m28s</strong> Or gifts</p>
<p><strong>5m40s </strong>Oppressor football is a funny statement</p>
<p><strong>7m33s </strong>I didn&#8217;t handle the interruption as smoothly as possible</p>
<p>Part 2</p>
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<p><strong>Overall: I could&#8217;ve been had more energy as the MC, but I did a good job engaging them</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 20</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Jul 2010 13:12:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Sunday writer&#8217;s mic
0m20s Awkward pauses are funny
0m40s Instead of “do a joke about this” say “talk about this on stage”
0m58s Say “send guys to Ben&#8217;s new camp”, I missed “guys” in that setup
1m34s Don&#8217;t do the baby spleen crack analogy, HD TV is stronger
2m35s I need to start this joke with almost getting run over [...]]]></description>
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<p>Sunday writer&#8217;s mic</p>
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<p><strong>0m20s</strong> Awkward pauses are funny</p>
<p><strong>0m40s</strong> Instead of “do a joke about this” say “talk about this on stage”</p>
<p><strong>0m58s</strong> Say “send guys to Ben&#8217;s new camp”, I missed “guys” in that setup</p>
<p><strong>1m34s</strong> Don&#8217;t do the baby spleen crack analogy, HD TV is stronger</p>
<p><strong>2m35s</strong> I need to start this joke with almost getting run over by a jogger</p>
<p><strong>2m53s</strong> Make it more of a rock song than a rap song</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Worked out some newer jokes, some have potential but they need more work</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 19</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jul 2010 20:12:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Saturday 8pm show
2m42s Get rid of “the wine”
2m46s Don&#8217;t make “would you let Jesus shave you?” into a question, make it into a statement
3m41s Just say “I&#8217;ll wave my hand till you laugh”
4m10s I can stop after “weight of failed expectations” no need for “for son”
4m39s Not a strong enough of a punch
6m20s Need a [...]]]></description>
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">Overall: Good ten minute set, especially since I&#8217;m still figuring out a bunch of these jokes.</div>
<p>Saturday 8pm show</p>
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<p><strong>2m42s</strong> Get rid of “the wine”</p>
<p><strong>2m46s</strong> Don&#8217;t make “would you let Jesus shave you?” into a question, make it into a statement</p>
<p><strong>3m41s</strong> Just say “I&#8217;ll wave my hand till you laugh”</p>
<p><strong>4m10s</strong> I can stop after “weight of failed expectations” no need for “for son”</p>
<p><strong>4m39s</strong> Not a strong enough of a punch</p>
<p><strong>6m20s</strong> Need a better punch than “straight jacket”</p>
<p>Part 2</p>
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<p><strong>Overall: Good ten minute set, especially since I&#8217;m still figuring out a bunch of these jokes.</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 18</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jul 2010 13:09:30 +0000</pubDate>
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0m55s Pause another second before “maybe”
2m43s Don&#8217;t add “the wine”
5m11s Instead of “do that” say “make a website like that for”
6m46s Funny improvised statement
7m36s The biggest laugh was when it wasn&#8217;t material
7m56s Checking getting dropped towards the end of my set
Overall: Decent but not great. It started out stronger than it ended.
Friday night [...]]]></description>
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">7m36s The biggest laugh was when it wasn&#8217;t material</div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">7m56s Checking getting dropped towards the end of my set</div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">Overall: Decent but not great. It started out stronger than it ended.</div>
<p>Friday night show</p>
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<p><strong>0m55s</strong> Pause another second before “maybe”</p>
<p><strong>2m43s</strong> Don&#8217;t add “the wine”</p>
<p><strong>5m11s</strong> Instead of “do that” say “make a website like that for”</p>
<p><strong>6m46s</strong> Funny improvised statement</p>
<p><strong>7m36s</strong> The biggest laugh was when it wasn&#8217;t material</p>
<p><strong>7m56s</strong> Checking getting dropped towards the end of my set</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Decent but not great. It started out stronger than it ended.</strong></p>
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		<title>Performance Critique: June 17b</title>
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3m55s I need a different end to this joke
4m16s I don&#8217;t need to verify this that much
7m53s Milk the “eye fucking” line for longer
Overall: Solid set, but the Jewel joke isn&#8217;t getting enough laughs throughout the bit.
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">3m55s I need a different end to this joke</div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">4m16s I don&#8217;t need to verify this that much</div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">7m53s Milk the “eye fucking” line for longer</div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow-x: hidden; overflow-y: hidden;">Overall: Solid set, but the Jewel joke isn&#8217;t getting enough laughs throughout the bit.</div>
<p>A show at a Hostel, with a mostly international crowd</p>
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<p><strong>3m55s</strong> I need a different end to this joke</p>
<p><strong>4m16s</strong> I don&#8217;t need to verify this that much</p>
<p><strong>7m53s</strong> Milk the “eye fucking” line for longer</p>
<p><strong>Overall: Solid set, but the Jewel joke isn&#8217;t getting enough laughs throughout the bit.</strong></p>
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