http://insurancebbs.com Insurance reviews of the best insurance companies Wed, 29 Feb 2012 22:26:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 noInsurance reviews of the best insurance companies http://insurancebbs.com/i-would-really-love-some-honest-criticism-on-this-short-piece.html#comment-574149 Wiley Wed, 29 Feb 2012 12:24:54 +0000 http://insurancebbs.com/i-would-really-love-some-honest-criticism-on-this-short-piece.html#comment-574149 As far as the writing goes it is excellent. There are some mechanics that could use some fixing though. Some of them may be when you retyped it on here but still. In the fourth line there should be a with before you start describing the sounds in the background. things like that, have someone read over it for you, they will catch the things you don;t see. you left out a few small words that makes your sentences very choppy in places. try to read over it for fluency. Other than that I loved it. you were able to pull off dialogue, something I struggle with. VERy well written. As far as the writing goes it is excellent. There are some mechanics that could use some fixing though. Some of them may be when you retyped it on here but still. In the fourth line there should be a with before you start describing the sounds in the background. things like that, have someone read over it for you, they will catch the things you don;t see. you left out a few small words that makes your sentences very choppy in places. try to read over it for fluency. Other than that I loved it. you were able to pull off dialogue, something I struggle with. VERy well written.

]]> http://insurancebbs.com/i-would-really-love-some-honest-criticism-on-this-short-piece.html#comment-574148 Georgeanna Wed, 29 Feb 2012 09:14:54 +0000 http://insurancebbs.com/i-would-really-love-some-honest-criticism-on-this-short-piece.html#comment-574148 Whoa, that is REALLy good. There;s nothing to improve; it;s well-written, suspenseful, and intriguing. Great job! Whoa, that is REALLy good. There;s nothing to improve; it;s well-written, suspenseful, and intriguing. Great job!

]]> http://insurancebbs.com/how-do-i-get-over-my-ex-husband.html#comment-574151 Marco Tue, 28 Feb 2012 06:07:15 +0000 http://insurancebbs.com/how-do-i-get-over-my-ex-husband.html#comment-574151 It isn;t fair to this ;good guy; to be stringing him along while your husband continues to support you and be the focus of your obsession. It is time to talk to a lawyer and a counselor. If you have no income, you can probably get some alimony payments from your husband. If you have serious health issues, maybe you qualify for disability or something. you need to move on and take responsibility for your situation. you need to stop having an affair when you are not truly available emotionally or legally. There are social services available for legal and medical help when you have no income. Get the help you need.It isn;t right to call him your ex when you are still married. It isn;t fair to this ;good guy; to be stringing him along while your husband continues to support you and be the focus of your obsession. It is time to talk to a lawyer and a counselor. If you have no income, you can probably get some alimony payments from your husband. If you have serious health issues, maybe you qualify for disability or something. you need to move on and take responsibility for your situation. you need to stop having an affair when you are not truly available emotionally or legally. There are social services available for legal and medical help when you have no income. Get the help you need.It isn;t right to call him your ex when you are still married.

]]> http://insurancebbs.com/how-do-i-get-over-my-ex-husband.html#comment-574150 Ross Tue, 28 Feb 2012 04:23:44 +0000 http://insurancebbs.com/how-do-i-get-over-my-ex-husband.html#comment-574150 you are kinda addicted to your ex. Of course he has some redeeming qualities but now that you are a grown up you will have to make wiser choices with your life.As with any addiction you need to STOp interacting with him. GET the divorce. Stop contact. With time it will get easier but it will be difficult in the beginning.Time will help you move on. Don;t talk to your new boyfriend about your ex so much. It will not lead to anything good and he doesn;t deserve it to continue.Get healthy and don;t forget to pray sometimes about the difficulties you are going through. you are kinda addicted to your ex. Of course he has some redeeming qualities but now that you are a grown up you will have to make wiser choices with your life.As with any addiction you need to STOp interacting with him. GET the divorce. Stop contact. With time it will get easier but it will be difficult in the beginning.Time will help you move on. Don;t talk to your new boyfriend about your ex so much. It will not lead to anything good and he doesn;t deserve it to continue.Get healthy and don;t forget to pray sometimes about the difficulties you are going through.

]]> http://insurancebbs.com/im-21-and-get-in-trouble-for-drinking-still.html#comment-574218 Cleotilde Mon, 27 Feb 2012 23:01:40 +0000 http://insurancebbs.com/im-21-and-get-in-trouble-for-drinking-still.html#comment-574218 I feel for ya. It doesn;t help that it sounds like she is more radical than not with her religious views. Those typs of people are always harder to convince even when the truth stands out like a see through banana. you don;t have much leverage though..Seeing as she pays for a lot of your bills you either have keep her happy or lie. Or pay your own bills. I used to smoke pot and drink and my parents never approved of it but they understood more and more as time went by. I joined the military and already have money saved up to go to school afterwards. I never got in any more trouble and I have my habbits under control. So even though they still disapprove of me drinking they can;t deny the fact that I am a responsible drinker! So you;re choice are-Lie and still drink-Stop drinking-pay own bills-Talk to her logically-Or convince her with time that you are responsible enough to handle alcohol and get good grades! Choose the latter! I feel for ya. It doesn;t help that it sounds like she is more radical than not with her religious views. Those typs of people are always harder to convince even when the truth stands out like a see through banana. you don;t have much leverage though..Seeing as she pays for a lot of your bills you either have keep her happy or lie. Or pay your own bills. I used to smoke pot and drink and my parents never approved of it but they understood more and more as time went by. I joined the military and already have money saved up to go to school afterwards. I never got in any more trouble and I have my habbits under control. So even though they still disapprove of me drinking they can;t deny the fact that I am a responsible drinker! So you;re choice are-Lie and still drink-Stop drinking-pay own bills-Talk to her logically-Or convince her with time that you are responsible enough to handle alcohol and get good grades! Choose the latter!

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