Comments for Taels Online http://taelsonline.com I Just Want To Tell Stories Sat, 13 Jun 2009 05:31:40 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 Comment on Chapter Four by Ahma http://taelsonline.com/2009/06/13/chapter-four/comment-page-1/#comment-71 Ahma Sat, 13 Jun 2009 05:31:40 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/?p=206#comment-71 Can't wait for the next exciting episode! Can’t wait for the next exciting episode!

]]> Comment on Chapter Four by Busy Evening: Podcasts, iTunes, New Stories — Stu Andrews http://taelsonline.com/2009/06/13/chapter-four/comment-page-1/#comment-70 Busy Evening: Podcasts, iTunes, New Stories — Stu Andrews Fri, 12 Jun 2009 16:28:20 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/?p=206#comment-70 [...] I’ve added Chapter Four of Awakening onto the Taels [...] [...] I’ve added Chapter Four of Awakening onto the Taels [...]

]]> Comment on To Forgive by Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Witchary Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:36:53 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-6 Actually, not a good question at all:-/ Just reread the whole piece, which kind of answered my own question. Nicely done. Actually, not a good question at all:-/

Just reread the whole piece, which kind of answered my own question. Nicely done.

]]> Comment on To Forgive by Stu http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Stu Thu, 31 Jul 2008 10:23:42 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-5 Good question. There are a couple of hints towards the end, especially in the last big paragraph. Good question. There are a couple of hints towards the end, especially in the last big paragraph.

]]> Comment on To Forgive by Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Witchary Thu, 31 Jul 2008 09:54:34 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-4 I know it's short story but are you going to do a follow up? I would very much like to know what happened to Cris. Did he survive. and was he always running? Or was Bradley Gerod searching in the wrong places? I know it’s short story but are you going to do a follow up?

I would very much like to know what happened to Cris. Did he survive. and was he always running? Or was Bradley Gerod searching in the wrong places?

]]> Comment on To Forgive by Stu http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Stu Thu, 31 Jul 2008 00:43:08 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-3 Witchary, Cheers! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. Witchary,

Cheers! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.

]]> Comment on To Forgive by Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Witchary Thu, 31 Jul 2008 00:16:58 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-2 Because of the nature of a short story, often the biggest challange is to make the reader care about the characters. I think that you have done an excellent job in achieving this. You would need to be a glacier not to be touched by Casar and her dad. Good effort. Because of the nature of a short story, often the biggest challange is to make the reader care about the characters. I think that you have done an excellent job in achieving this. You would need to be a glacier not to be touched by Casar and her dad.

Good effort.

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