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		<title>Comment on Simple Proofreading Process with a Big Name: Ratiocination by Alise Isbell</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alise Isbell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Feb 2012 17:51:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you for the clarification and source of this wonderful technique.  Having learned about the technique in 1991 at a New Jersey Writing Project course, it was never sourced.  It was not my intention to claim ownership of the concept, merely to explain how it works.  I'm happy and honored to give credit for the concept and sincerely apologize for any confusion.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for the clarification and source of this wonderful technique.  Having learned about the technique in 1991 at a New Jersey Writing Project course, it was never sourced.  It was not my intention to claim ownership of the concept, merely to explain how it works.  I&#8217;m happy and honored to give credit for the concept and sincerely apologize for any confusion.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Simple Proofreading Process with a Big Name: Ratiocination by Edward Wilson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Edward Wilson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jan 2012 19:23:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Isabel has no ownership nor creation of ratiocination. Dr. Carroll developed, wrote and published about ratiocination in her seminal work: "Ratiocination and Revision or Clues in the Written Draft," ENGLISH JOURNAL, November 1982.  It is egregious for someone to take Dr. Carroll's intellectual property with its long and well established provenance.

Dr Carroll has published a book on Rationciation: Weaving the Threads of Grammar, Revision, and Editing, Absey and Co. Inc. 2011.

It is unprofessional to take someone's intellectual property and copyrighted material without permission and attribution. It is also illegal.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Isabel has no ownership nor creation of ratiocination. Dr. Carroll developed, wrote and published about ratiocination in her seminal work: &#8220;Ratiocination and Revision or Clues in the Written Draft,&#8221; ENGLISH JOURNAL, November 1982.  It is egregious for someone to take Dr. Carroll&#8217;s intellectual property with its long and well established provenance.</p>
<p>Dr Carroll has published a book on Rationciation: Weaving the Threads of Grammar, Revision, and Editing, Absey and Co. Inc. 2011.</p>
<p>It is unprofessional to take someone&#8217;s intellectual property and copyrighted material without permission and attribution. It is also illegal.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Become a Pitchman: Marketing the Billy Mays Way by david</title>
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		<dc:creator>david</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 08:13:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I sell products door to door one piece of advice a very famous person named zig zigler once said you miss 100% of the sales you never ask for in my industry the way to ask is like nike says just do it i would try somthing like adding tie downs to your pitch while talking about your product a tie down is a question or phrase that forces the customer to answer in the affirmative like "that makes sense right" or "lets go ahead and  wrap this up for you will that be cash or credit" or maybe say somthing like "which two flavors are you gonna get" or maybe offer a two for one special or somthing to that effect just play with it timid salesmen have skinny kids</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I sell products door to door one piece of advice a very famous person named zig zigler once said you miss 100% of the sales you never ask for in my industry the way to ask is like nike says just do it i would try somthing like adding tie downs to your pitch while talking about your product a tie down is a question or phrase that forces the customer to answer in the affirmative like &#8220;that makes sense right&#8221; or &#8220;lets go ahead and  wrap this up for you will that be cash or credit&#8221; or maybe say somthing like &#8220;which two flavors are you gonna get&#8221; or maybe offer a two for one special or somthing to that effect just play with it timid salesmen have skinny kids</p>
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		<title>Comment on Google Places Listings: Free Online Small Business Marketing by Usman Azad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Usman Azad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 17:51:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am Really Impressed with your Articles,Keep It up  :) I Recommend this Blog to Everyone</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am Really Impressed with your Articles,Keep It up  <img src='http://www.thewritersforhire.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I Recommend this Blog to Everyone</p>
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		<title>Comment on Google Places Listings: Free Online Small Business Marketing by Usman Azad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Usman Azad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 17:49:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am Really Impressed with your Articles,Keep It up  :)</description>
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		<title>Comment on 56 Google Search Tricks for Students by Gift Happy Birthday Song</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gift Happy Birthday Song</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2012 14:17:08 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>[...]very few websites that happen to be detailed below, from our point of view are undoubtedly well worth[...]&#8230;&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Secret to Marketing to Millenials by Women entrepreneurs</title>
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		<dc:creator>Women entrepreneurs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Dec 2011 11:53:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great site. I like your style. I will be checking back very often. Keep up the good work!.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great site. I like your style. I will be checking back very often. Keep up the good work!.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Secret to Marketing to Millenials by Louise</title>
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		<dc:creator>Louise</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Dec 2011 13:36:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think you've written some actually interesting points about the millenials. Not too many people would actually think about this the way you just did. Genuinely wonderful stuff here.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think you&#8217;ve written some actually interesting points about the millenials. Not too many people would actually think about this the way you just did. Genuinely wonderful stuff here.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Bring vs. Take.  You only think you know how to use these. by John</title>
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		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 22:47:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>"If “take” is a movement away from the speaker, why do we say, “May I take your order please”?"

I know I'm late on answering this, but, you just answered your own question.  The waiter is writing your order down and taking it AWAY from you and giving it to the cook.  It wouldn't make sense to "bring" you your own order.  I thought that was pretty obvious.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;If “take” is a movement away from the speaker, why do we say, “May I take your order please”?&#8221;</p>
<p>I know I&#8217;m late on answering this, but, you just answered your own question.  The waiter is writing your order down and taking it AWAY from you and giving it to the cook.  It wouldn&#8217;t make sense to &#8220;bring&#8221; you your own order.  I thought that was pretty obvious.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Grammar-Fail Photo from Kevin by Lily Rose</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lily Rose</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Nov 2011 10:46:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love it! Sometimes, I can feel my fingers itch because I'd love to correct somebody, but I know that it will change the course of discussion. 

Hello, my name is Lily, and I am a grammar addict!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love it! Sometimes, I can feel my fingers itch because I&#8217;d love to correct somebody, but I know that it will change the course of discussion. </p>
<p>Hello, my name is Lily, and I am a grammar addict!</p>
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