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		<title>March’s Commpose Meetup: Style Guides, Lorem Ipsum, and Combating Bad PR</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 20:46:02 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This month&#8217;s episode of Commpose will cover everything from Lorem Ipsum as content in design, to managing and writing for bad PR, to utilizing style guides for your clients.</p>
<p>Our guest speaker will be <a href="http://julieespinosa.wordpress.com/" target="_blank">Julie Espinosa</a>, a content strategist at ASU as well as a freelance writer. Her presentation, A Guide to Style Guides, will discuss the benefits of creating a style guide to control quality in all of your content creation. With a style guide, you won’t have to continually reevaluate if it’s Web site  or website, e-mail or email, or whether you use ampersands. Having a style guide where all these questions are decided saves copywriters, editors and clients time and headaches. This presentation is for anyone wanting style guide peace of mind, whether you’re starting a new project or working for the same client or company you’ve been with for years.</p>
<p>Come on our to see real examples of what a style guide is, what it commonly includes, points of grammatical contention and how to customize your own style guide.</p>
<p>Prior to Julie&#8217;s presentation, our CopyChat will be lead by <a href="http://www.victormoreno.com" target="_blank">Victor Moreno</a> and it will discuss the pros, cons, and reasons designers use Lorem Ipsum as content placeholders. We will also be lead in an exercise by <a href="http://theideasthatstick.com" target="_blank">Lawrence Riddick</a> about writing for companies experiencing negative PR.</p>
<p>So come on out to the March meeting of Commpose at 6pm, on Tuesday, March 16th at <a href="http://www.terralever.com" target="_blank">Terralever</a>. The event is free and open to everyone, and this month&#8217;s food is being sponsored by <a href="http://www.strongdesignstudios.com" target="_blank">Strong Design Studios</a>.</p>
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		<title>Recap of February’s Commpose Copywriting Meetup</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Feb 2010 17:29:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A huge thanks goes out to both <a href="http://www.copythatclicks.net" target="_blank">DD Kullman</a> and <a href="http://www.editbydesign.com" target="_blank">Jen Halloran</a> who did great presentations for this month's Commpose meetup on how copywriting has changed in the past ten years as well as the proper way to use i.e. and e.g]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A huge thanks goes out to both <a href="http://www.copythatclicks.net" target="_blank">DD Kullman</a> and <a href="http://www.editbydesign.com" target="_blank">Jen Halloran</a> who did great presentations for this month&#8217;s Commpose meetup on how copywriting has changed in the past ten years as well as the proper way to use i.e. and e.g. Below are their presentations for reference:</p>
<div style="width:425px;text-align:left" id="__ss_3204534"><a style="font:14px Helvetica,Arial,Sans-serif;display:block;margin:12px 0 3px 0;text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/ddkullman/commpose-021610" title="Commpose 02/16/10">Commpose 02/16/10</a><object style="margin:0px" width="425" height="355"><param name="movie" value="http://static.slidesharecdn.com/swf/ssplayer2.swf?doc=commpose-100216234118-phpapp01&#038;stripped_title=commpose-021610" /><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"/><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always"/><embed src="http://static.slidesharecdn.com/swf/ssplayer2.swf?doc=commpose-100216234118-phpapp01&#038;stripped_title=commpose-021610" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="355"></embed></object>
<div style="font-size:11px;font-family:tahoma,arial;height:26px;padding-top:2px;">View more <a style="text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/">presentations</a> from <a style="text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/ddkullman">Copy That Clicks</a>.</div>
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<div style="width:425px;text-align:left" id="__ss_3209470"><a style="font:14px Helvetica,Arial,Sans-serif;display:block;margin:12px 0 3px 0;text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/kimstearns/ie-vs-eg-from-commpose" title="i.e. vs. e.g. from Commpose">i.e. vs. e.g. from Commpose</a><object style="margin:0px" width="425" height="355"><param name="movie" value="http://static.slidesharecdn.com/swf/ssplayer2.swf?doc=meetingpresentation-100217110933-phpapp02&#038;stripped_title=ie-vs-eg-from-commpose" /><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"/><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always"/><embed src="http://static.slidesharecdn.com/swf/ssplayer2.swf?doc=meetingpresentation-100217110933-phpapp02&#038;stripped_title=ie-vs-eg-from-commpose" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="355"></embed></object>
<div style="font-size:11px;font-family:tahoma,arial;height:26px;padding-top:2px;">View more <a style="text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/">presentations</a> from <a style="text-decoration:underline;" href="http://www.slideshare.net/kimstearns">kimstearns</a>.</div>
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<p>Thanks again to everyone that came out and we hope to see lots of you out next month on March 16th!</p>
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		<title>February Meetup: A Look at Copywriting History, Emotions, and Latin</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Feb 2010 22:23:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This month's Commpose meetup will be packed with useful information, exercises, and our special guest speaker, DD Kullman. Come on out on February 16th from 6:00-8:00 over at Terralever for a night of copywriting!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This month&#8217;s Commpose meetup will be packed with useful information, exercises, and our special guest speaker, DD Kullman. Come on out on February 16th from 6:00-8:00 over at <a href="http://www.terralever.com" target="_blank">Terralever</a>.</p>
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<p>Veteran copywriter and creative director,<a href="http://www.copythatclicks.net/templates/section-view.php?id=78" target="_blank"> DD Kullman </a>will be sharing significant changes that have impacted the craft of copywriting, as well as predictions for its place in the future of media. DD currently freelances for several local ad agencies, design firms and corporate clients, and teaches copywriting and scriptwriting to advertising and graphic design students as an adjunct faculty member of The Art Institute of Phoenix. DD also serves on the board of the American Marketing Association – Phoenix Chapter, and is a member of AAF Metro Phoenix. She was editor of Southwest Graphics magazine, a trade publication for the communications industry, from 2006-2009. Don’t miss her great <a href="http://www.copychat.net/" target="_blank">blog</a> discussing all aspects of copywriting!</p>
<p>We will also be featuring a <a href="http://www.commposeaz.com/introducing-copychat/" target="_blank">CopyChat</a> by <a href="http://www.editbydesign.com" target="_blank">Jennifer Halloran</a> on the difference between using &#8220;e.g.&#8221; in your writing versus &#8220;i.e.&#8221; as well as an exercise in evoking emotion in your writing.</p>
<p>Food and refreshments will be provided along with our 100% enjoyment guarantee, so bring a pen, some paper, some friends, and get ready to delve into a night of copywriting fun. This event is free and open to everyone! If you&#8217;re a beginner, veteran, or completely clueless as to what copywriting even is, come on out–you&#8217;re bound to learn something new!</p>
<p>Free parking is available at the NE Corner of 5th and Ash. After 6pm, all metered parking is free as well.</p>
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		<title>January CopyChat Recap: Dashes</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 02:20:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This past month's CopyChat was on proper dash usage. It turns out that there are three main dash styles: hyphens, en-dashes and em-dashes. Here is a quick rundown of how each is to be properly used...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This past month&#8217;s CopyChat was on proper dash usage. It turns out that there are three main dash styles: hyphens, en-dashes and em-dashes. Here is a quick rundown of how each is to be properly used:</p>
<p><strong>Hyphens</strong><br />
A hyphen is the shortest of the dashes. On a keyboard it is implemented using the key directly to the left of the zero key. A hyphen is used within compound words or as part of a non-continuing numbers, such as phone numbers.</p>
<p><em>Examples: </em>555-123-1234, co-worker, editor-in-chief</p>
<p><strong>En Dashes</strong><br />
An en-dash is about twice the width of a hyphen, or the width of a capital N—hence its name. An en-dash is also sometimes denoted as two hyphens without any spacing between them, and is therefore sometimes referred to as a double dash. An en-dash denotes a range, and is most often used with numbers such as dates or times. An en-dash should be typeset &#8220;tight&#8221;—meaning without any spaces before or after the dash. On a Macintosh computer, you can type an en-dash by holding option-hyphen.</p>
<p><em>Examples:</em> 8:30am–10:00am, January 1–10</p>
<p><strong>Em Dashes</strong><br />
An em-dash is about three times the width of a hyphen, or the width of a capital M—hence its name. It is sometimes denoted as three hyphens without any spacing between them. An em-dash denotes a pause in thought, a parenthetical statement, afterthought statement or is added for emphasis. It is traditionally set &#8220;tight&#8221;—meaning without any spaces before or after the dash. However, AP style specifies that a space should be used before and after the dash. Unless one must follow the formatting specified in a specific style guide, it seems that since either tight or spaced formatting seems excepted, <em>consistent</em> formatting is the most important thing. On a Macintosh computer, you can type an em-dash by holding shift-option-hyphen.</p>
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		<title>Do Typos Really Matter?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 17:06:08 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I recently had an interesting discussion over Twitter that got me thinking. The gist of the conversation was that meticulously reviewing, rewriting, and editing your tweets defeats the purpose of utilizing a medium designed to allow you to communicate on the fly. Stated by Stephanie at Bold Avenue,  &#8220;IMO pouring over Twitter all day making sure you craft perfect tweets is missing the point. But even with a quick glance before posting, Twitter is about being transparent + in the ...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recently had an interesting discussion over Twitter that got me thinking. The gist of the conversation was that meticulously reviewing, rewriting, and editing your tweets defeats the purpose of utilizing a medium designed to allow you to communicate on the fly. Stated by Stephanie at <a href="http://www.boldavenue.com/" target="_blank">Bold Avenue</a>,  &#8220;IMO pouring over Twitter all day making sure you craft perfect tweets is missing the point. But even with a quick glance before posting, Twitter is about being transparent + in the moment&#8230;and typos happen.&#8221;</p>
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<p>I wanted to follow up this discussion by stating why I believe it is important to review everything you send out on a public forum, regardless of the audience or how the tool you are in reference to was designed to be used.</p>
<p><strong>Being transparent, honest, and open is not reflected in the typos you make.</strong> Sure, it adds a human element to something, but human error is probably not the human element you&#8217;re looking to get across. There are better ways to demonstrate transparency, and that&#8217;s in the content of what it is you&#8217;re saying. A typo-filled tweet consisting of valuable information that adequately portrays your company&#8217;s personality and brand might actually be saying something other than what you intended.</p>
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<p><strong>Typos do happen, but you can make it so they don&#8217;t. </strong>Yes, we&#8217;re all human and there are bound to be mistakes somewhere within our writing, but this shouldn&#8217;t negate the fact that you are posting on a public medium that potential clients, employers, suitors, friends, etc. can easily and readily see what you&#8217;ve written. Unlike many things in your life, this is one area that you actually can control. Reviewing before you post doesn&#8217;t mean you&#8217;re removing transparency from your information, it simply means you&#8217;re making certain that potential clients will feel safe knowing the &#8220;A&#8221; you received in 3rd grade English was actually deserved.</p>
<p>So do I think typos really matter? Certainly. Do they happen? Yep. Can you avoid them? Yep. Does it ruin the point of Twitter? Not in my opinion. How hard is it to make sure your perfectly crafted tweet that delicately balances information, snark, and wit is also, then, conveyed how you intended and spelled correctly?</p>
<p><strong>Let&#8217;s play a game! Who can guess which company this copy belongs to?</strong> Ok, there&#8217;s no typos in here, but there certainly are glaring grammatical errors.</p>
<blockquote><p>All of the built-in apps on XYZ Product were designed from the ground up to take advantage of the large Multi-Touch screen. And they work in any orientation. So you can do things with these apps that you can’t do on any other device.</p></blockquote>
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		<title>Copywriting Veteran, DD Kullman, will be February’s Guest Speaker</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 16:39:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Next month, we&#8217;re proud to announce the well-respected and well-known, DD Kullman, will be our special guest speaker! Veteran copywriter and creative director, DD Kullman shares significant changes that have impacted the craft of copywriting, as well as predictions for its place in the future of media.

DD currently freelances for several local ad agencies, design firms and corporate clients, and teaches copywriting and scriptwriting to advertising and graphic design students as an adjunct faculty member of The Art Institute of ...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Next month, we&#8217;re proud to announce the well-respected and well-known, <a href="http://www.copythatclicks.net/templates/section-view.php?id=78">DD Kullman</a>, will be our special guest speaker! Veteran copywriter and creative director, DD Kullman shares significant changes that have impacted the craft of copywriting, as well as predictions for its place in the future of media.</p>
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<p>DD currently freelances for several local ad agencies, design firms and corporate clients, and teaches copywriting and scriptwriting to advertising and graphic design students as an adjunct faculty member of The Art Institute of Phoenix. DD also serves on the board of the American Marketing Association – Phoenix Chapter, and is a member of AAF Metro Phoenix. She was editor of Southwest Graphics magazine, a trade publication for the communications industry, from 2006-2009. Don&#8217;t miss her great <a href="http://www.copychat.net/">blog</a> discussing all aspects of copywriting!</p>
<p>The meetup will be held on Tuesday, February 16th at 6pm over at Terralever on Mill Ave. Additional information on our copywriting exercise and CopyChat will be posted soon.</p>
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		<title>January’s Meetup: Dashes, Concise Copy, and Improv! January 19th at 6pm</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 16:51:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This month&#8217;s meeting will feature a CopyChat by Melissa Balkon on proper dash usage, an exercise in simplifying your copy by James Archer, and a special guest presentation by Jeff Moriarty on Improv Writing. 
Improv is a form of controlled chaos, and an excellent way to tap into spontaneity and creativity. This talk by Jeff will be an improvisational look at the techniques, games, and approaches of improv and how they can help in your writing.
So come on out January ...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This month&#8217;s meeting will feature a <a href="http://www.commposeaz.com/introducing-copychat/">CopyChat</a> by <a href="http://www.strongdesignstudios.com">Melissa Balkon</a> on proper dash usage, an exercise in simplifying your copy by <a href="http://www.fortyagency.com/about/james">James Archer</a>, and a special guest presentation by <a href="http://www.improvmedia.net/">Jeff Moriarty </a>on Improv Writing. </p>
<p>Improv is a form of controlled chaos, and an excellent way to tap into spontaneity and creativity. This talk by Jeff will be an improvisational look at the techniques, games, and approaches of improv and how they can help in your writing.</p>
<p>So come on out January 19th at 6pm to <a href="http://www.terralever.com">Terralever </a>for a night of copywriting madness! As always, please be sure to bring a pen, paper, an open mind, and an appetite (for both knowledge and food, of course.)</p>
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		<title>Introducing CopyChat</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Dec 2009 22:59:02 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Melissa Balkon</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Do you ever wish you knew the difference between a hyphen, en dash and em dash? What about how to properly use a colon? Now there is a great new way to learn about topics like these. With no further ado, we'd like to introduce CopyChat.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Do you ever wish you knew the difference between a hyphen, en dash and em dash? What about how to properly use a colon? Now there is a great new way to learn about topics like these. With no further ado, we&#8217;d like to introduce CopyChat. CopyChat is a new segment of our monthly Commpose copywriting meeting. The segment consists of one of our members researching a writing, grammar or punctuation topic of their choosing, and giving a short 5-10 minute mini-presentation on it at our monthly meeting.</p>
<p>We are currently booking up the next quarter of meetings and we still have many months available, so please email <a href="mailto: melissa@commpose.com" target="_blank">melissa@commpose.com</a> to get on the schedule. Don&#8217;t know what you&#8217;d like to present on? We can help with that too, just ask!</p>
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		<title>December Copywriting Meetup Details, Venue + More!</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Dec 2009 00:26:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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Come on out to Terralever in Tempe on December 15, 2009 at 6pm for a night of Copywriting Karaoke!  Curious what the heck Copywriting Karaoke is? Well then just come on out and see. It&#8217;s much more fun than anything that could be described here.
Meetings are free and open to anyone and everyone &#8212; so feel bring to bring someone you think would be interested. Remember to bring specific writing dilemmas you&#8217;re facing and be prepared to discuss them with ...]]></description>
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<p>Come on out to <a href="http://maps.google.com/maps?f=q&amp;source=s_q&amp;hl=en&amp;geocode=&amp;q=425+South+Mill+Avenue,+Suite+201,+Tempe+AZ,+85281&amp;sll=37.0625,-95.677068&amp;sspn=50.69072,114.257812&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;z=17&amp;iwloc=addr" target="_blank">Terralever </a>in Tempe on December 15, 2009 at 6pm for a night of Copywriting Karaoke!  Curious what the heck Copywriting Karaoke is? Well then just come on out and see. It&#8217;s much more fun than anything that could be described here.</p>
<p>Meetings are free and open to anyone and everyone &#8212; so feel bring to bring someone you think would be interested. Remember to bring specific writing dilemmas you&#8217;re facing and be prepared to discuss them with the group.</p>
<p>Food and drinks will be provided so just come with a pen and paper and prepare for a night of copywriting shenanigans! Please <a href="http://www.facebook.com/pages/manage/updates.php?id=125079807208&amp;sent=1&amp;e=0#/event.php?eid=215952217287&amp;ref=share" target="_blank">RSVP</a> or leave a comment below so we know how much food to grab.</p>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Dec 2009 17:28:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kim Stearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[One of the hardest tasks a copywriter must do on a daily basis is write compelling, motivating copy that not only appeals to and motivates its readers, but also does so without being over their head or too jargon-filled. One of the easiest ways I've discovered to accomplish this task is to create a point of reference that you can use in almost every situation. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of the hardest tasks a copywriter must do on a daily basis is write compelling, motivating copy that not only appeals to and motivates its readers, but also does so without being over their head or too jargon-filled. One of the easiest ways I&#8217;ve discovered to accomplish this task is to create a point of reference that you can use in almost every situation. This reference point acts as a way to make sure you&#8217;re covering everything needed, and doing so in an understandable way that can appeal to anyone that happens to be reading your copy. In my case, this is my mother.</p>
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<p>Now, my mother is a very bright person and can understand almost anything she reads, but she&#8217;s also very much representative of almost every type of reader that exists. She needs clear, spelled out directions to complete the task asked of her in the copy. She needs every possible way to get in touch with a specific person or company, as she sometimes uses the phone, but sometimes email. She, *gasp*, skims what she reads most of the time, therefore, she needs the information to be presented quickly and easily. She has eyesight that&#8217;s&#8230;well&#8230;aging (sorry, Mom!) and she needs text that accommodates this fact. Every possible thing that should be considered when crafting copy can be explained by my mother&#8217;s behavior, so it only makes sense to craft everything I write to appeal to her and her needs.</p>
<p>Similar to <a href="http://www.insideforty.com/1105/developing-and-using-personas-create-one-of-your-own/">personas</a>, writing for a certain person makes it much easier to entice your audience as it gives your writing a face, a personality, and something to always be thinking about.</p>
<p>Another great reason to use your mother as a reference point in your writing? It gives you an easy way to justify your reasoning to a client. I mean, really, no one can argue with your mother.</p>
<p>Do you have any writing tricks of your own that help you to appeal to a broader audience?</p>
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