D.B Fiction

2014-01-17T23:48:00.002-05:00

Funny how there is a an increase in visitors here when ever I post a chapter. I guess it's a way of know I'm not talking to dead space.

Puddle of Memories re-write

2013-08-05T22:58:00.000-04:00

The green is new text, the red is deleted text, and the black is original text....shit

Hmm...

2013-08-04T19:35:00.000-04:00

I've been MIA for bit, haven't I? I'd like to have a nice excuse, but if anyone even reads this you must be so bored of my excuses. I keep thinking about writing, but never actually writing. I hear a song, a see something/someone and think of a small story. Yet, I never write it down anymore. Today I feel like re-reading Puddle of Memories, don't ask why. I miss the story, I guess? Who knows. Also I got a review (yay, lol). It wasn't very encouraging. It said something like "This story went from best I've read to worst" I am paraphrasing and fixed the grammar. I'll go back to Best Friends one day and try to improve. I may even finish posting it on FP. Who knows...

2012-11-16T00:14:00.001-05:00

Something Like Summer by Jay Bell
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I'm writing this review about two (?) years after I read this book for the first time. I highly recommend you give it a try. I bought it on whim, on a day I was home alone, feeling super depressed. I grabbed on to my iphone (bought kindle version), and did not leave my bed or stop reading until I finished it. I still remember laying down with a diet coke at 10am and finishing the book at 7pm, having 3 empty cans of coke around me and a very empty stomach.

it's cliche, it's a coming of age, it has it's moments were you have suspend you disbelieve, but it's sweet, poignant, feel bad then good story. I've read it once more since the first time and it took me 2 days to read and I'm highly considering reading it for a third time.

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Feedback

2012-11-10T16:52:00.002-05:00

I don't write for reviews. Well, technically it seems like I don't write at all lately, but when I do I don't do it hoping for reviews. I do it because I enjoy it, it helps distract me, and helps keep the voices in my head quiet.

However, when you post a story you do wish for a bit of feedback. It's like speaking to an empty room, even though you have things to say, why continue when not even your echo answers back?

I'm not the best at reviewing. I admit it but I'm going to make a compromise with myself to at least leave a one word review when I read something. Because, I don't want the stories I like to fade.

wow...

2012-10-07T21:50:00.001-04:00

I've been terrible lately. I haven't written anything at all in months. I don't have an excuse what so ever, other than little time, little inspiration.

Posting FP.com is such a hassle I haven't even finished posting BF there, I'm sorry about that. I'll get to it I promise.

I have to be sincere here that the lack of reviews is not encouraging either, though when I write I do it mostly for my own sanity, posting them and getting no response is disheartening. I post because I'd like feedback, no one in real life reads what I write so I have no way of knowing if I'm doing something worthwhile or not.

I've set my self a goal anyway and it is to finish letters and posting BF on FP.com, no dateline but a goal. At least.

Thanks to anyone who reads or cares know that eventually I will be back.

Jack and Dustin

2012-05-19T22:50:00.001-04:00

I sat down today to try and write a quick short about Jack and Dustin. I failed miserably, I don't know why Jack refuses to talk to me, and Dustin is not the best story teller out there. He wanted to talk about an awkward meeting her had with Jack's ex.

Let's see if we get Letter's done instead.

What I'm listening as I try to write:

Stan and Joseph

2012-05-07T00:18:00.003-04:00

I've resurfaced two stories I started back in '07 and haven't finished. I have some time to write until class starts, so lets see how this goes. I hope the garner some interest and reviewers will help me take these stories down the right path.

I also wanted to share this with everyone, to set the tone to the stories

School's back

2012-01-08T18:03:00.000-05:00

Yeah,so I go back to school on Monday. Been like crazy trying to write the next chp to TBC before then but getting nowhere with it. I'm also slowly reposting BF onto fictionpress.com. I want to write something new, but I'm unsure of what to write. Truth be told I'm not all that inspired at the moment. On a random note seriously considering going vegetarian.

Best Friends means you pull the trigger

2011-12-18T22:47:00.000-05:00

50550 words, and what? 3 years later this story is finished!!

Songs for the epilogue and Title song.

Sad Eyes (epilogue)
There is NO "I" in Team (title song)

Happy dance!!

2011-11-23T11:46:00.001-05:00

I finished, I finishes, I I finished, I finished

Last chapter to Best Friends means you pull the Trigger is finished!!

22chp long, and an epilogue. I'm so happy to be done with it!!

2011-11-18T15:46:00.001-05:00

Here are some "ending of BF" song previews

They are decidedly not my typical music choice. I guess it shows the roller-coaster writing this story has put me through.

Chp. 22 If I go for Chp. 23 Epilogue

Best Friend Means you pull the Triger, there is an ending at sight!

2011-11-17T22:43:00.001-05:00

Chp. 22 of BF is at 1587 words. I'm at a point where I could call this chp finished, not just based on the word # but the point of "they arrived", they've had their moment. However, I think the climax will be in the next half and with out it the chp won't be as entertaining and with it the story will be DONE. This will be the difficult part to write and if I call this chp done. I will use this as an excuse to take a bit longer on 23.t

I'm not sure what I'll do, but know that repost of 21 should be soon (waiting on Beta) and 22 should also be around next week (also waiting on beta).

Little something about the Epilogue

Not much truly I don't want to give tooo much away:

There will be a change in POV

Someone Dies

Someone is born

Off to the beta it goes!

2011-11-11T21:48:00.001-05:00

Believe it or not chps. 20 and 21 of BF was just emailed to my wonderful beta. Will post as soon as I have them back. :)

11/13/11

Quick update about 200 words done on chp. 23 of BF. :) Could this story be finished before 2012?

BF?

2011-11-10T19:22:00.001-05:00

What is that I see? Over there not too close but not too far. Could it really be or am I dreaming? Yup, I think it is right there in the not too near not to far future an update.

I haven't given up and I hope you guys haven't given up on me either.

Best Friends will be update, I'm working on it.

Note to Self

2011-10-08T00:15:00.000-04:00

I owe you guys a review for The Far Away Years. I have a tight tight budget so I rarely will pay for a story I read for free, but this one was worth it. I'd like to say this started my rock star addiction, but it would be a lie. It simply fed it the most delicious supply ever...

Teahouse Web-Comic

2011-10-06T22:16:00.002-04:00

What can I say about this...

Pretty Boys
Sexy Boys
Pretty drawings
Sexy drawings
Angst
Funnies
Free

Please do visit and please do enjoy...

gmail...grrr

2011-10-05T16:17:00.003-04:00

Hello everyone! Did anyone notice that for two days my blog disappeared? Well gmail decided that I was not over 13 years old and blocked my account with the thread of deleting it with in 29 days. This completely sucked. However, after forking over some money I've solved and so we are back!

I'm kind of pissed this all happened and I'd like to say F U gmail I'm finding another email provider but what a hassle that would be!

Anyway welcome back and hope you guys enjoy my posts and stories.

TBC Soundtrack

2011-09-28T21:32:00.002-04:00

Trying to finish this story but as always I'm having a bit of a hard time. A lot of music is mentioned on TBC and I'd figure I share with you music that helps inspire the story. Music that the band members would enjoy, etc.

Smashing Pumpkins:

Bullet with Butterfly wings (youtube.com)
1979 (youtube.com)
Tonight (youtube.com)
Today (youtube.com
Ava adore (youtube.com) *this is one of my favorite*

Metallica--basically the whole black album, but to be specific:

Enter Sandman
Unforgiven
Sad but true
One
Sad but true
The god that failed

Most song can be found here

My Chem (obviously)

Kill all your friends (youtube.com) ** Cause we all want to party when the funeral ends**
Heaven Help us (youtube.com)

I may add more to this list but this is pretty much it. I think they are pretty good songs so I rec you give them a chance if you haven't heard them. (OMG I hope you've all heard at least one from this list!)

Black Choir missing scene

2011-09-24T15:21:00.000-04:00

This scene was one of the first written for TBC. Unfortunately it won't make it into the story and this character, Al, will not likely make it either. It's really a shame because I absolutely adore her. I wish I knew how to draw so that I could show you what she looks like in my mind. She is strong, she takes charge, doesn't give a shit. She has long black hair w/ bangs, tattoos as though they were giving them out for free. Her voice is rough but melodic I wish she'd made it into the story. She might be mentioned now, but will not be playing the part I had planned for her.

Anyway I hope you guys enjoy this little peek.

“Come on people! Get fucking moving, we don’t have all night. Jason! What the fuck man. Do you have any fucking idea how much the equipment in that stupid box costs?”

Jason stared at Al, he stared and shook a little inside. She was a legendary bad ass, she was the girl you didn’t

mess with. Allie J. Hudson was 25, she had worked with Fred since her first tour back in 1999. Fred liked her from day one; she didn’t take shit from no one and new how to do her job. Her dad was a musician and she had grown up on a tour bus. Fred had all his trust on her and if she said you’re fired, you were fired there was no sweet talking to her.

You respect Al, you never say she does a good job for a girl or even think to assume she got were she is by nothing else but hard work. She has a mean right hook and won’t hesitate on kicking your ass if you cross the line.

Yes, Al meant business and when she turned to yell at Jason.

“Drop something again and your ass is fucking out of here.” Jason tried to lift the box once more but his arms had become jelly, it didn’t help that the stupid thing was heavy too. Al strode towards him it seemed she had moved the several feet between them in less than a step “You learn to do the job; you learn to do it fast and right. If you can’t cut it then you will be cut.” She leaned down and lifted the box as though it were empty. “Go change your freaking pants and don’t let me catch you being distracted again.”

Jason ran off to the side, checking down at his crotch to see if he really had peed himself. He hadn’t.

Al walked over to the trailer with the box over her shoulder; she turned around looking at the frozen crew members around her. “We aint in fucking Alaska, so no one should be fucking frozen!! Move the fuck up, move! Move! Move! We have fifteen minutes to have everything packed and out!”

Sam was running around making sure the band hadn’t left anything behind. Zin had left his hair straighter at the last venue and Sam had to run to 6 different stores to find one just like the one Zin had lost. Fred didn’t want a repeat of that. He heard Al yelling and hollering like she always did, he was used to it, he knew that under all that intimidation was a really sweet girl who wouldn’t hurt a fly unless that fly hurt her first.

Jason walked by him still a bit pale after his encounter. Jason was new he had just joined the tour in Alabama and had never worked with Al before.

“She is more noise than anything.” Sam said handing Jason a Gatorade.

Jason was 18 it was his first tour and at times he felt lost. He would stare at everything around him still not fully believing he was part of it all. He was carrying the box when Surf had walked by him, tapped him on the back and thanked him for the great job he was doing. The box just slipped out of his hands it wasn’t his fault.

“Relax,” Sam tried again. “She will probably forget all about it by dinner time.”

Jason nodded thinking that maybe it was too much for him.

Al was still yelling orders when she felt warm breath against her neck.

“You shouldn’t be so tough.” She could feel a blush growing and hid her face behind her long hair.

Once composed she turned to Surf, “You like it tough.”

“Mmm…yeah I do.” Surf boldly stole a kiss from Sam. Well perhaps not that boldly, there was only a slight chance she would knock him out for it.

She didn’t instead she pulled her arms around his neck and deepened the kiss. They hadn’t had time for themselves for awhile now. She had to go home and miss a few shows because her grandmother got sick.

“I missed you,” she whispered against his lips.

“I’ve missed you too. You have no idea how crazy shits been around here.” He kissed her once more and pulled away, “I need your help.

The Black Choir

2011-09-19T16:36:00.000-04:00

I finished chapter 4 of The Black Choir!! The first chp has been posted on AFF.net hope you guys enjoy it! Please do wish me luck on chapter 5 which would be my last. Got to figure out how to fix everything in one chapter.

2011-09-13T22:03:00.000-04:00

I'm sorry. I've re discovered T.V and fallen into major writers block. I'll be back...I hope

Meet the Black Choir

2011-09-04T20:39:00.000-04:00

I started this story about a century ago and I used to post it on FP.com. Then what usually happens happened and I got stuck. Now, I was trying to get into writing again (I'm trying to work on DCFR), and was just reading this story.

Of course the story is about Rockstars (what do I like more than that, really?)and it's only about 2 chps from the ending. So, I've posed myself a challenge. If I can manage to write a chap for that story tonight. I will post the story of AFF.net. I won't post this story until I write at least 1 new chp. for it.

I think you guys will enjoy this story here are the characters:

Alan, youngest guitarist and Zin's brother. He has some seriuos issues.
Surf, 2 years older than Alan is the drummer. He is on a constant sugar high, loves his 90's rock.
T, no one is 100% sure what the T stands for. Some believe Zin knows what it stands for since they've known each other for a long time. Oh, his the base player.

Zin is the lead singer and has trouble controlling his impulses, his pride, and admitting any type of weakness. Well except how terrified he is of his mother.

Butch is head of their security team and one of their best friends. About the only person Zin will actually listen to. He has a huge crush on Erika.

Erika is a fan, who follows them around every tour. She isn't the scary type.
Fred, is the tour manager. He yells a lot, and just wants to avoid a head ache.
Al, is actually a girl. She is strong and won't hesitate to kick your ass. The roadies are terrified of her, and there's a rumor going around 'bout her and Surf.
Sam roadie, seems to always be around and is the go to guy for simple errands (coffe, suitcase, beer)

I know it's been a long time...

2011-08-28T21:01:00.000-04:00

And I am sorry, life like always got crazy but in a good way. Proud to say I know have an A.A degree and that I made the dean's list. Sad to say I haven't had time to write at all. I tried a quick re write of DCFR but it didn't go very well. I think I'm going to keep it as it is.

Today was the first day in a loooong time that I actually had off as in nothing urgent to do at all. I said I was going to write but instead I got caught up with Dr. Who and Torchwood. I hope you all are watching the shows because they are simply AMAZING!

I was a little disappointing with Torchwood b/c it seemed to have lost some of it's "feeling". Yet the last episode had everything in it to yell Torchwood is back!!

To end this quick note I want to tell you all: I haven't forgotten about my stories, I will continue and I am very sorry for such a long wait.

DCFR re write, again?

2011-06-19T20:23:00.000-04:00

I am sincerely considering re writing that story again. I think the problem with it may be that it is in Dan's POV. Perhaps it should be third person? I don't know how I feel about switching POV's I'm afraid it will end up like Profe.
I'd like to finish this and and BF before the end of the summer but it just gets harder and harder.