http://dowagershadow.disqus.com/NoneenTue, 09 Feb 2010 17:36:51 -0000http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/DowagerShadow-Comments/~3/fQEDRpVSWNI/Yeah, Kintere's always an awkward one to write from an in-the-head perspective. I'm still a bit uncertain just HOW big he is, how obvious his trip ups would be to others. It'll sort, though, especially during the parts that are heavily his later on. <p><a href="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/4ga1graIXz6Hi6Q4YblxA2sxqoM/0/da"><img src="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/4ga1graIXz6Hi6Q4YblxA2sxqoM/0/di" border="0" ismap="true"></img></a><br/> <a href="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/4ga1graIXz6Hi6Q4YblxA2sxqoM/1/da"><img src="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/4ga1graIXz6Hi6Q4YblxA2sxqoM/1/di" border="0" ismap="true"></img></a></p><img src="http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/DowagerShadow-Comments/~4/fQEDRpVSWNI" height="1" width="1"/>iRountreeTue, 09 Feb 2010 17:36:51 -0000http://dowagershadow.com/vol-1/ch01-ogre/#comment-33316138http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/DowagerShadow-Comments/~3/LTgKlKgrsqY/I'm not sure we get a full idea of Kintere's physicality in this bit, compared to his compatriots an his own inner fear. Something of the five senses missing, but I'm not sure what I mean by that. But it still makes me grin. <p><a href="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/lCUBcXWL86xdenZNixCTDNoWCug/0/da"><img src="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/lCUBcXWL86xdenZNixCTDNoWCug/0/di" border="0" ismap="true"></img></a><br/> <a href="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/lCUBcXWL86xdenZNixCTDNoWCug/1/da"><img src="http://feedads.g.doubleclick.net/~a/lCUBcXWL86xdenZNixCTDNoWCug/1/di" border="0" ismap="true"></img></a></p><img src="http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/DowagerShadow-Comments/~4/LTgKlKgrsqY" height="1" width="1"/>LeilaTue, 09 Feb 2010 17:29:12 -0000http://dowagershadow.com/vol-1/ch01-ogre/#comment-33315467