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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 16:26:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Alexis Operle</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[So this past weekend I officially graduated with my bachelor&#8217;s degree from UMSL! Phew&#8230; what a relief! It was a long road but I finally made it! That means my internship with the SLWG is over as well. But I have decided to stay active and continue to participate in the Guild.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So this past weekend I officially graduated with my bachelor&#8217;s degree from UMSL! Phew&#8230; what a relief! It was a long road but I finally made it! That means my internship with the SLWG is over as well. But I have decided to stay active and continue to participate in the Guild.</p>
<p>I have enjoyed my time working under Rebbecca and Brad, they are the greatest! They have been helpful, warm, caring, and often comical! Thanks for that guys! I also really enjoyedthe events I have been able to attend. Especially the open mic nights. If you haven&#8217;t had a chance to go to one, I definitely recommend it!</p>
<p>I will keep posting blogs as often as possible. Even though, I have a feeling they might be updates keeping you all informed about how difficult it is finding a job in the journalism/print media field. But hopefully now that school is over I can find the time to write for fun instead of writing for grades.</p>
<p>So until next time, I hope you all have a great week. And if anyone has any leads as to where a fresh-outta-college graduate with a background in feature/editorial and creative writing, some graphic design, and adveritising could send a resume please let me know!</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Rainbow Hall in Rock City
Rock City is an amazing set of ancient rock formations and gardens, located atop Lookout Mountain in Chattanooga, Tennessee.  Although much of Rainbow Hall, seen below, is man-made, unlike most of the other structures in Rock City, the colored window panes create interesting light effects on the natural rock.

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<p><a href="http://www.seerockcity.com/Flash/index.htm">Rock City</a> is an amazing set of ancient rock formations and gardens, located atop Lookout Mountain in Chattanooga, Tennessee.  Although much of Rainbow Hall, seen below, is man-made, unlike most of the other structures in Rock City, the colored window panes create interesting light effects on the natural rock.</p>
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<p style="text-align: center;">Photo Courtesy of James Hulsey<br />
Copyright ©2008 James Hulsey. All Rights Reserved.</p>
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Send photos to <a href="mailto:webmaster@stlwritersguild.org">Photos</a>.</p>
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		<title>Hook, Line and Sinker</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 03 Aug 2008 18:59:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Obermoeller</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;m almost embarrassed to say that Saturday, August 2, was my first SLWG workshop that&#8217;s held the first Saturday of the month at the Barnes &#38; Noble-Crestwood. I&#8217;m puzzled as to why it has taken me so long to attend.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m almost embarrassed to say that Saturday, August 2, was my first SLWG workshop that&#8217;s held the first Saturday of the month at the Barnes &amp; Noble-Crestwood. I&#8217;m puzzled as to why it has taken me so long to attend.</p>
<p>My first experience proved delightful and informative, facilitated by Dr. Rebecca Carron, SLWG Vice President of Programs and Brad Cook, SLWG Historian. I had met both members before, but I never knew they could be so funny and entertaining. You would think their workshop, &#8220;Feed Your Head: What Good Writers Should Read To Become Great Writers&#8221; might be a little dry talking about classics. This topic interested me because as much as I hate to admit it, my parents were not readers and as a child I was not exposed to books. I can remember learning to read <em>Dick and Jane</em>, but that&#8217;s about the extent of my reading as a child. Anytime I would sit in a writing workshop and the names of books and authors were rattled off, I&#8217;d want to hide.</p>
<p>I have since read some of the classics, but I love to read anything that hooks me into the story. Cook had a valid point that one needs to be hooked to get you to read the book. But one person&#8217;s hook is another&#8217;s sinker. Rather than the author reeling you in, you can drown in the sea of hard-to-understand-the-point words. We found that out when Carron and Cook bantered back and forth in a humorous way. Carron loving one book while Cook wanted to throw it across the room. Or how Cook&#8217;s choice turned him around as a writer while Carron dropped a book in the trash to prevent anyone else from the misery. I felt better knowing this when I struggled to read <em>Scarlet Letter.</em> I&#8217;m excited to read <em>Dracula</em> - a book I never thought I&#8217;d pick up to read.</p>
<p>I scribbled fast and furious writing down titles of books and the names of authors from suggestions of those attending when Carron and Cook passed out a form asking what books stood out for: Setting, Plot, Dialogue, Wordsmithing (a category Cook created), Characters and Symbolism. I&#8217;m curious and want to learn from these suggestions.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re like me and haven&#8217;t attended an SLWG workshop yet, I suggest you plan to - you&#8217;ll be hooked.</p>
<p>Thanks Rebecca and Brad!</p>
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		<title>Signs, signs, everywhere are signs …</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 02 Aug 2008 03:59:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>marymenke</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[Is anyone out there familiar with Essay Writers (www.essaywriters.net)? I&#8217;m beginning to think it has all the earmarks of a scam.
Someone referred me to them in the spring but said they didn&#8217;t know if they were legit or not. From what I can gather from their website, they pay freelance writers to write on a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Is anyone out there familiar with Essay Writers (www.essaywriters.net)? I&#8217;m beginning to think it has all the earmarks of a scam.</p>
<p>Someone referred me to them in the spring but said they didn&#8217;t know if they were legit or not. From what I can gather from their website, they pay freelance writers to write on a variety of academic topics. Sounds like it may involve writing essays for students, but they never come out and say that. I tried signing up on their website, but had a number of problems and never could get the form to submit, so I gave up. A week or so later, I got an email from them telling me, oh, so nicely, that they didn&#8217;t want me. That was a shock&#8211;not that I was rejected, but I didn&#8217;t even know I had applied!</p>
<p>This evening I received an email from them. This is what it said:<br />
<em>Dear Mary,</p>
<p>As the season is fast approaching, we would be happy to refresh our cooperation with you after a 3-months summer break. We value your professionalism and hard work in EssayWriters.net team and hope to continue our collaboration in a new season of 2008/2009.</p>
<p>We have updated our Fine policy and added new services to make you work easier, more diverse and motivating. New academic year will also bring changes to our Bonus Programs and Writers Upgrade process. As always, Writers Support Team is open to new ideas and suggestions from our creative writers.</p>
<p>We are looking forward to see you in our friendly team this September:<br />
http://EssayWriters.net/index.php</p>
<p>Best Regards,</p>
<p>EssayWriters.net</em></p>
<p>If you read it carefully, it appears to have been written perhaps by someone who  speaks English as a second language&#8211;not that there&#8217;s anything wrong with that. Since I&#8217;m &#8220;desperately seeking work,&#8221; however, I decided to give it another shot. </p>
<p>I tried four times this evening to sign up, and each time ran into a roadblock. And it&#8217;s a pain to fill out the form in the first place! &#8220;What is plagiarism and how do you avoid it?&#8221; &#8220;How do you meet deadlines?&#8221; Legitimate questions, to be sure, but I answered them FOUR TIMES! The first two times, I received an error message that I hadn&#8217;t correctly entered the &#8220;magic code&#8221; at the bottom of the form (I&#8217;m sure I did; they weren&#8217;t that tricky). The third time, I got all the way through, they accepted the magic code, I hit SUBMIT, and I got a fatal error message! I don&#8217;t give up easily, so I tried one more time. This time when I hit SUBMIT, I got a message that I was already registered and if I forgot my sign-in name or password to go to their Live Chat or call a number.</p>
<p><em>Heavy Sigh &#8230; </em>It gets even better.</p>
<p>I clicked on Live Chat, and got Stacey, who was completely clueless. She had no idea what code I referred to (&#8221;Was it a discount code?&#8221;) and then &#8230; get this &#8230; she asked me what website I was on! When I said Essay Writers, she said &#8220;one moment&#8221; and then never came back!</p>
<p>I finally gave up and called the phone number&#8211;twice. Both times, it (I say &#8220;it&#8221; because I don&#8217;t know if there was a live body involved) picked up and then disconnected. </p>
<p>I believe in signs, but sometimes I guess those signs have to knock me over the head. </p>
<p>I think all these signs point to &#8220;Run, don&#8217;t walk, in the other direction.&#8221; What do you think?</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 31 Jul 2008 19:32:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Alexis Operle</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[I just read an article written by Christine Byers of the St. Louis Post Dispatch about Ryan Hummert, the firefighter that was killed in the line of duty. This story not only moved me because I have some close friends who knew Ryan very well, but also because it was so well written. Although it was about [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="Arial;">I just read an article written by Christine Byers of the St. Louis Post Dispatch about Ryan Hummert, the firefighter that was killed in the line of duty. This story not only moved me because I have some close friends who knew Ryan very well, but also because it was so well written. Although </span><span style="Arial;">it was about such a horrible tragedy it was still very enjoyable to read. I felt compelled to email Christine and tell her what a great job she did, I also told her I would share it on our blog. So if you weren&#8217;t able to catch the story in the Post here it is:</span></p>
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<div class="stl-story-headline"><span style="x-small;"><strong>&#8216;He was never alone&#8217;</strong></span></div>
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<div class="stl-story-byline"><span style="x-small;">By </span><a class="storyByline" href="mailto:CByers@post-dispatch.com"><span style="#990000;">Christine Byers</span></a></div>
<div class="stl-story-agency"><span style="x-small;">ST. LOUIS POST-DISPATCH</span></div>
<div class="stl-story-timestamp"><span style="x-small;">07/27/2008</span></div>
<p><span style="x-small;">From the moment Maplewood firefighter Ryan Hummert died, firefighters were there.</p>
<p>At first, it was his Maplewood crew, who, along with 22-year-old Hummert, had thought they were responding Monday to a routine car fire. Instead, they found themselves in the middle of a gunman&#8217;s killing field.</p>
<p>Before it was over, two police officers were shot, Hummert was killed and several other bullets barely missed their intended targets.</p>
<p>Minutes that seemed like hours passed until police could safely remove Hummert&#8217;s body. Then firefighters were there to carry him to an ambulance. </span></p>
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<p><span style="x-small;">Clayton firefighter Brian Zinanni knew it was time to begin a firefighter&#8217;s tradition.</p>
<p>&#8220;We need somebody to stay with Ryan,&#8221; Zinanni told a visibly shaken crowd of firefighters.</p>
<p>Rock Hill Fire Chief Kevin Halloran and Clayton firefighter Ted Destatte volunteered and boarded an ambulance for a somber ride to the hospital.</p>
<p>&#8220;We wanted him to go in a fire department ambulance because it was the start of us taking care of him,&#8221; Halloran said.</p>
<p>When Hummert was pronounced dead at the hospital, firefighters were there.</p>
<p>When the medical examiner autopsied the body, firefighters were there.</p>
<p>Halloran and Destatte delivered Hummert to the funeral home, where other firefighters relieved them.</p>
<p>Nearly 12 hours had passed since Halloran had boarded the ambulance to escort a firefighter he barely knew through the post-mortem motions.</p>
<p>&#8220;I said I would do it not knowing fully what the day was going to entail,&#8221; Halloran said. &#8220;It was one of the biggest honors I&#8217;ve had in my career.&#8221;</p>
<p>Many felt the same way. Within hours of Hummert&#8217;s death, firefighters from across the country had called Zinanni to volunteer to stay with Hummert&#8217;s body at the funeral home.</p>
<p>&#8220;It&#8217;s a process of healing for firefighters as well as considered an honor to sit with a fallen comrade,&#8221; said Zinanni, team coordinator for the Missouri Fire Service Funeral Team. &#8220;And it&#8217;s a comfort to the family to know he was never alone.&#8221;</p>
<p>When funeral directors placed</p>
<p>Hummert&#8217;s casket at the front of the funeral parlor, firefighters were there.</p>
<p>Two firefighters stayed with the casket for two-hour shifts. Often, the group grew to six as some stayed past their allotted time, or others just showed up. Some came in T-shirts and jeans. Others wore their dress blues.</p>
<p>They passed much of the time as they would at their respective firehouses, waiting for the next call. Talking shop. Sharing laughs. And sitting together.</p>
<p>It was their way of bringing the firehouse Hummert loved so much to him for his final moments among them.</p>
<p>Every once in a while, the group quieted. Their eyes turned to the casket.</p>
<p>&#8220;So he was only 22?&#8221; asked Grovespring, Mo., firefighter Brandon Miller during a shift that lasted until midnight Wednesday.</p>
<p>Maryland Heights firefighters nodded.</p>
<p>&#8220;Wow, that&#8217;s scary,&#8221; Miller said. &#8220;I&#8217;m only 20.&#8221;</p>
<p>Maryland Heights firefighters got a kick out of Miller and his fellow Grovespring firefighter Robert McClanahan. Their stories about life in a rural volunteer district south of Lebanon, Mo., kept the mood light. They discussed donating equipment to the volunteer department.</p>
<p>&#8220;Do you think we could come by for a tour of your station?&#8221; Miller asked. &#8220;I&#8217;ve never been in a paid fire department before.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Sure,&#8221; replied firefighter Larry Tennison.</p>
<p>Soon, Maryland Heights Capt. Bill Matzker&#8217;s eyes drifted once more to Hummert&#8217;s casket.</p>
<p>&#8220;So who was this Knobbe guy anyway?&#8221; he asked of the alleged gunman, Mark Knobbe.</p>
<p>The group shared what they knew: Knobbe was estranged from his family. He had worked for the Art Museum. He set his home on fire and shot himself in the head.</p>
<p>&#8220;Just senseless,&#8221; Matzker said.</p>
<p>About seven more shifts passed before the informal casket vigil gave way to a formal honor guard. Firefighters in full dress blues stood at both ends of the casket for 10-minute shifts during the seven-hour visitation.</p>
<p>Halloran took his post at 2 p.m. Wednesday at the foot of the casket. Brentwood firefighter Tim Hammer stood at the head.</p>
<p>Hummert&#8217;s tearful mother, father and sister were the first to visit. Firefighters were there.</p>
<p>They stood rigid until the next pair relieved them. But once in the hallway, their tears flowed.</p>
<p>The rotations continued until 10 p.m., even through a 40-minute procession of more than 600 firefighters, saluting the casket two by two.</p>
<p>Once the formal honor guard retired for the night, the informal watch resumed. Funeral directors dimmed the lights and told the firefighters where to find the restrooms and coffee.</p>
<p>When Hummert&#8217;s family arrived the next morning for the closing of the casket, firefighters were there.</p>
<p>Members of Hummert&#8217;s Rockwood Summit High School football team carried the casket to the door. From there, firefighters bore their brother to a pumper and then to Immaculate Conception Church.</p>
<p>Maplewood firefighters sat in the front rows to the right of the casket. The family sat to the left.</p>
<p>Firefighters delivered many of the nine eulogies.</p>
<p>Two nearby churches opened for the overflow. Firefighters from as far as New York, Nebraska, Tennessee, Kentucky and Indiana quickly filled more than 800 chairs and stood in the aisles.</p>
<p>About 135 firetrucks escorted the casket to the cemetery.</p>
<p>The family waited at the grave site as more than 1,000 firefighters marched behind the pumper carrying Hummert&#8217;s casket. It&#8217;s a tradition called &#8220;the Sea of Blue.&#8221;</p>
<p>An honor guard stood at attention while Maplewood firefighters delivered the casket to its final destination.</p>
<p>More than a dozen firefighters on bagpipes played &#8220;Amazing Grace.&#8221; And firefighters on bugles played taps.</p>
<p>The Hummerts returned to a limousine, in awe of the firefighters&#8217; role in their son&#8217;s final journey.</p>
<p>&#8220;We could have taken months and never planned anything as beautiful as this,&#8221; said Andy Hummert, Ryan Hummert&#8217;s father.</p>
<p>The limo pulled out, and the firetrucks lined up to exit. Cemetery workers prepared to lower the casket.</p>
<p>They pushed a mound of earth over Hummert&#8217;s grave.</p>
<p>And a firefighter was there.</p>
<p><strong>cbyers@post-dispatch.com | 636-500-4106</strong><br />
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		<title>My Weekend Project</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jul 2008 23:58:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Alexis Operle</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[Over the weekend a friend asked me to write a bio/feature on him for a press kit he is taking with him to L.A. to meet with record labels. I felt honored that he would ask me to do this! This is ultimately my dream, to write feature articles on musicians. Along with the help of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Over the weekend a friend asked me to write a bio/feature on him for a press kit he is taking with him to L.A. to meet with record labels. I felt honored that he would ask me to do this! This is ultimately my dream, to write feature articles on musicians. Along with the help of one of our mutual friends who is amazing in graphics he came up with quite a presentation. I told him if he gets signed I want 10% of the signing bonus - haha. So enough introduction, I thought I would share with everyone my weekend project&#8230;</p>
<p><span style="underline;"><span style="16pt;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><strong>ReMARCable Talent: The Life and Rhymes of M.A.C.</strong></span></span></span><span style="Times New Roman;"> </span></p>
<p><span style="Times New Roman;">Standing in the “writing room” of the studio, Black and Mild cigar hanging from his lip, Marc Cox spits out ideas for a hook on a new song with whom he is collaborating with fellow Dirty House Wrecordz artists J-Skeet and Truth. Marc who goes by MAC (his initials) is casually dressed in an Ecko T-shirt and Akademiks jean shorts. The 21 year old rapper begins to reveal to me information that he claims is the basis of his being. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>Born in North St. Louis City on Euclidand Ashland Marc is no stranger to the high crime and low income rate of his neighborhood. He is the baby boy of 5 children born to Margaret Smith and Wendell Cox. He attended city schools until the age of 9, then for 4<sup>th</sup> grade was bussed out to South St. Louis Countyto attend Bayless Elementary which is a public county school. </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>“Entering interracial public school in the county greatly opened my eyes and my mind to things I never had seen or heard at home.” MAC informs. The influence of his new peers of all races and ethnicity&#8217;s was one of Marc’s greatest life experiences. </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">“It’s made me the man I am today. I never really knew any white people, or Bosnian people, or even any other type of black people.” His introduction and interaction with other children of other races has made him the type of person he is today; one who can get along with anyone. This characteristic shapes MAC’s mission statement as a musician. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">“I want all races to listen to my music and I want all kinds of people to relate to my lyrics.”</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>MAC’s influences include famous men such as Dr. King, Will Smith, Cedric the Entertainer, and Luther Van Dross. They also include a small array of people whom are not famous but have made a difference in his life. </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">“My family has played such a huge part in my life but two women who have really influenced me are my Mother and my Big Momma (Grandmother).” Other influences include his high school principal and basketball coach. Musically, MAC’s biggest influence is a long time friend from high school with whom he still raps with today. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">“Opie taught me how to rap. He made me want to rap.” Opie more recently known as LB is a young Caucasian rapper who is also an artist under the independent Dirty House Wreckordz label. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>Along with his music MAC spends a lot of his time at school. He attends St. Louis Community College and plans on graduating in a couple years. A famous MAC quote that can be heard more often than not is, “I go to school to make money, I rap because I love that shit.” </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">MAC is currently working on his first solo mixtape. It has been in production since December of 2007 and it is scheduled to be released fall 2008. In the mean time MAC can be found performing on stages across St. Louis.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">Although he loves performing he also loves the time he spends in the studio writing or in the booth recording. MAC is an unsigned artist so that allows him to work with a few independent labels. Presently MAC records with YNP (Young n’ Productions) and HuSTLmo Ent. / Dirty House Wreckordz. He explains his style to be smooth but vocal. The slight crunk sound grabs the attention of his listeners. When asked if a record company came to him today and asked for one single what would he present to them? MAC responded with, </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0.5in;"><span style="Times New Roman;">“ ‘Focused’. Although it’s something most of my fans have never heard I think it is a great track with a lot of potential.”</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>Fashion is not only a large part of urban musical culture but it plays a large part in MAC’s life as well. As an unsigned rapper one must always look their best because you never know who is watching. “If I was going out to a club I’d have to put on my button up baby blue Christain Dior oxford shirt with LRG light washed jeans. My feet would be dressed in classic, white on white, Nike Air Force One’s. If I was going to perform at a show I’d dress a little more causal with an Ecko T-shirt, Bathing Ape jean shorts, high top Nike Elites, and a New Era St. Louis Cardinals fitted cap. I love the grown and sexy look but I gotta keep it true to the streets as well.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>In the Future Marc Cox hopes to become a strong and successful solo artist. Not interested in the fame, MAC just wants to be well-known, well-respected, and lyrically established. “Ten years from now I’ll be 31. By then I hope to own my own house here in South St. Louis County and be starting a family. I would love to be the co-founder of a major production label by then as well.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>MAC’s strong St. Louisroots and life experiences have made him a talented lyricist. Although he has only been rapping since high school MAC is determined to be a hip hop legend and will do whatever it takes to get there. He will use his influences and mentors to grow as a person as well as a rapper. MAC’s heart and soul goes into his music. His words will tell the audience a story while his wittiness will change your average day to day objects and encounters into comical rhymes. If Marc stays focused in life and also on his goals there is no doubt this young man will have great opportunities in the future.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="small;"><span style="Times New Roman;"><span style="1;">            </span>“Life has taught me that no matter what it might be: family, friends, money, rights, or love, you never really appreciate any of it until it’s gone. So I live everyday like it’s my last and I cherish every moment I have here on Earth doing what I love to do.”<span style="1;">          </span></span></span></p>
<p>&#8212; I am aware I might be the only fan of hip-hop music that reads these blogs, but let me know what you think about the article itself. Writing about music and artists is my passion and I hope one day to make it my career.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2008 20:47:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Wilfred Bereswill</dc:creator>
		
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Main Street Books, St. Charles, Missouri Look in the window
It’s a full day and a half later and I’m still trying to wipe the grin off my face.  On Friday night, we had the launch party for A REASON FOR DYING at Main Street Books in St. Charles, Missouri.  Over eighty people came [...]]]></description>
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Main Street Books, St. Charles, Missouri Look in the window</p>
<p>It’s a full day and a half later and I’m still trying to wipe the grin off my face.  On Friday night, we had the launch party for A REASON FOR DYING at Main Street Books in St. Charles, Missouri.  Over eighty people came out which was totally amazing and overwhelming. And a couple of people worked really hard to make it such a special night.</p>
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In store display with American Beer books</p>
<p>First, there was our dear friend Laurie Kraft. If you were there, you would have seen the beautiful woman in the tux shirt serving for me.  She thought of all the little details that made things special. And despite a bad back, she worked the crowd like a professional and even brought in some people from the street to buy some books.  Laurie, you have my sincerest gratitude.</p>
<p>Then there was my beautiful wife, Linda. She is so special to me and none of this would have been possible without her. I’m also thrilled that two of my daughters were able to celebrate with me, Kelly and Kristen.  Kaitlin, my youngest, is out celebrating the Lord at bible camp.</p>
<p>Lisa Pavia, my publicist.  The long hours leading up to the launch. The push for media and spending the party with her boyfriend Liam taking photographs.</p>
<p>Then there was Vickie Erwin, owner of Main Street Books. All I can say is “WOW!”  I arrived to see a dozen or so copies in a window and a wonderful display right in front of the store.  She also demonstrated her sense of humor by placing a few books on American Beer on the display.  For those of you that don’t know, I work for Anheuser-Busch soon to be owned by the Belgium company Inbev.  Of course there was the book scare, when the books didn’t arrive until the day of the party.</p>
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My Cake</p>
<p>Now about the night. I actually had a line! People waiting to visit and have my book autographed. I am in awe. As I reflect back, I’m surprised at how it’s hard to remember details. I know I wanted to get up and talk to my friends and family, but I kept getting called to sit back in the comfortable author’s chair to sign some more. In almost three hours, I didn’t get a piece of cake and I only got to drink one beer.  My wrist and fingers ached, and even my face hurt from smiling all night.  But I wouldn’t change a thing.</p>
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My Line</p>
<p>There were a number of authors that turned out to support me; Laura Bradford, Bobbi Smith and John Lutz took time out of their busy schedules. Of course there were family and friends, also members of the St. Louis Writers Guild and Sisters in Crime.  There was even a couple from out of state, Bob and Alda that were on vacation and walking by.  They came in and bought a book and chatted with me. It was awesome. I know I’m missing somebody.</p>
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John Lutz and I</p>
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Bobbi Smith and I</p>
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Laura Bradford and I</p>
<p>Several of the things I stressed about; books arriving on time, would I spell everyone’s name right, would I spell my own name right (remember, I never use Wilfred), would I be able to come up with good thoughts to write? Practice makes perfect. Yes, I practiced my signature and sayings. I even had a few written out and in my pocket. Someone asked me, how I came up with what to write. I told them I practiced and they laughed. I pulled the piece of paper from my pocket and they laughed hysterically. When is was all over I was exhausted and hungry.  I realized I hadn’t eaten since 11 that morning and I was fighting to keep my eyes open.  Despite all that, when my head hit the pillow, well after midnight, I just stared at the ceiling and smiled.</p>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jul 2008 00:21:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Harvey Stanbrough</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[I just got wind of the contest listed at http://www.graveyardpublishing.com/id14.html. Here&#8217;s what you will find there:
 
Short Story Contest 
 


Graveyard Publishing is sponsoring a short story contest, and will be publishing a book with the selected winning stories. The Authors whose stories are selected will receive a publishing contract from Graveyard Publishing giving us exclusive [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just got wind of the contest listed at <a href="http://www.graveyardpublishing.com/id14.html">http://www.graveyardpublishing.com/id14.html</a>. Here&#8217;s what you will find there:</p>
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<div><span style="Times New Roman,Times,serif;"><span style="underline;">Short Story Contest</span></span> <!--"''"--></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;">Graveyard Publishing is sponsoring a short story contest, and will be publishing a book with the selected winning stories. The Authors whose stories are selected will receive a publishing contract from Graveyard Publishing giving us exclusive rights to publish their submitted work, a free copy of the published book, and 10% of any of the profits generated by sales from the book. (Profits being the sales price, minus any expenses associated with the publication of the book.)</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;"><strong><span style="underline;">Requirements:</span></strong></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;">Short stories submitted for consideration in our contest must be of the Horror, Science Fiction, Science Fantasy, Macabre, or Occult genre. All stories submitted must be your original and never before published work. Stories must be a minimum of 20 single spaced pages, or 40 double spaced pages, and must be submitted in Microsoft Word format. Contest only open to those 18 years of age and older.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="center;" align="center"><strong><span style="underline;">All stories submitted for this contest must be received by December 1<sup>st</sup>, 2008</span></strong></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;">Stories submitted for this contest should be submitted to: <a href="mailto:submissions@graveyardpublishing.com"><span style="#000000;"><span style="#0000ff;">submissions@graveyardpublishing.com</span></span></a> <span style="yes;"> </span>Please and be sure to put “Contest Submission” in the email subject line.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;">You must also include your legal name, address, contact phone number, and contact email with your submission.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="0in 0in 0pt;">We will contact those Authors whose stories are selected once the contest has closed and we have revewed all submissions.</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jul 2008 01:22:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Obermoeller</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[I had the pleasure of attending Harvey Stanbrough’s “Writing the World™ All Day Intensive Workshop: Writing Effective Dialogue and Electric Narrative,” that took place at Chesterfield Arts on Saturday, July 12. I highly doubt anyone left there without a better understanding of effective dialogue and tips for electric narrative. No one would have been the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I had the pleasure of attending Harvey Stanbrough’s “Writing the World™ All Day Intensive Workshop: Writing Effective Dialogue and Electric Narrative,” that took place at Chesterfield Arts on Saturday, July 12. I highly doubt anyone left there without a better understanding of effective dialogue and tips for electric narrative. No one would have been the wiser if Harvey didn’t tell us he was in a car accident (his car declared totaled, but no injuries, thank goodness) the day before he arrived in St. Louis (coming from Huachuca, Arizona). Harvey carried on in his cool cowboy character, emphasizing with a “No! No! No!” or a “Never! Never! Never!” when he wanted to drive home a point, throwing in humor making everyone laugh. Harvey’s warm heart filled the room and his generosity proved evident when he encouraged Brad to draw another name, and then another, and one more, for an attendance prize – his book! Or in this case, both his books! (<em>Beyond the Masks</em> and <em>Writing Realistic Dialogue &amp; Flash Fiction</em>) </p>
<p>(How do you like all those exclamation marks? You had to be at the workshop to understand that question.)</p>
<p>The next day a friend asked, “What was the one thing that stood out for you in that workshop that you learned?” That was a tough question since there were many, but I’ll only give one (I recommend you attend Harvey’s next workshop if we are lucky enough to be blessed with his presence again). That is the usage (or non usage in Harvey’s case) of tag lines in dialogue.</p>
<p>If you can’t wait until Harvey comes in again and would like to know his tips for Effective Dialogue and Electric Narrative, then I’d suggest you purchase his book, <em>Writing Realistic Dialogue &amp; Flash Fiction</em>. (As a bonus you learn about Flash Fiction.) The book is definitely worth every cent.</p>
<p>Thanks Harvey, a great workshop!</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Jul 2008 15:41:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Thomas Anselm</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[Remember Jim McKay, the recently deceased expert sports commentator and long-time host of all things Olympics for ABC-TV?  Well, he said something like this every week on his award winning show.  It was a household regular among the Anselm brothers in our Wonder Years.  I will never forget his coverage of the 1972 Munich horror of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Remember Jim McKay, the recently deceased expert sports commentator and long-time host of all things Olympics for ABC-TV?  Well, he said something like this every week on his award winning show.  It was a household regular among the Anselm brothers in our Wonder Years.  I will never forget his coverage of the 1972 Munich horror of terrorists killing Israeli athletes.  Yeah, I <em>am</em> that old.  He was and is an idol of mine when it comes to regular-guyism combined with literate work. </p>
<p>I say all this just to ease into a blatant plug for an article I wrote about golf that has been accepted on EzineArticles.com.  Go to that website, click on Recreation and Sports, and then click Golf, and you can scroll down a few places to find it. </p>
<p>Now, excuse me while I go out in the back yard and work on my slice.</p>
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