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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" media="screen" href="/~d/styles/atom10full.xsl"?><?xml-stylesheet type="text/css" media="screen" href="http://feeds.feedburner.com/~d/styles/itemcontent.css"?><feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:openSearch="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/" xmlns:georss="http://www.georss.org/georss" xmlns:gd="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005" xmlns:thr="http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0" gd:etag="W/&quot;DEIAR3c4eSp7ImA9WhVUFUk.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260</id><updated>2012-05-20T15:42:26.931-05:00</updated><category term="reading" /><category term="me" /><category term="advice" /><category term="tools" /><category term="ebooks" /><category term="Pomodoro Technique" /><category term="internet explorer" /><category term="passwords" /><category term="goals" /><category term="pseudonyms" /><category term="Technical Tuesday" /><category term="Blogger" /><category term="inspiration" /><category term="Whitney Awards" /><category term="help" /><category term="writing groups" /><category term="Dashner" /><category term="chrome" /><category term="tip" /><category term="browsers" /><category term="publishing" /><category term="agents" /><category term="board games" /><category term="firefox" /><category term="NaNoWriMo" /><category term="websites" /><category term="LastPass" /><category term="book review" /><category term="video" /><category term="marketing" /><category term="editing" /><category term="fun" /><category term="blogging" /><category term="writing" /><category term="safari" /><category term="backup" /><category term="humor" /><title>A Universe Behind Your Eyelids</title><subtitle type="html" /><link rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/posts/default" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/" /><link rel="next" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default?start-index=26&amp;max-results=25&amp;redirect=false&amp;v=2" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><generator version="7.00" uri="http://www.blogger.com">Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>60</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><atom10:link xmlns:atom10="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://feeds.feedburner.com/JohnWaverly" /><feedburner:info xmlns:feedburner="http://rssnamespace.org/feedburner/ext/1.0" uri="johnwaverly" /><atom10:link xmlns:atom10="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" rel="hub" href="http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/" /><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;A0ECRHk7eip7ImA9WhVVGEk.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-2122038560198347881</id><published>2012-05-12T14:07:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-05-12T14:07:45.702-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-05-12T14:07:45.702-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fun" /><title>Diet Sickness</title><content type="html">FREE LIMITED TIME OFFER! ACT NOW!&lt;br /&gt;
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For a limited time, you can visit my house and contract your very own diet sickness. Do you need to lose weight? Having problems getting over that diet hurdle?&lt;br /&gt;
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WE HAVE THE ANSWER!&lt;br /&gt;
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Using our patented &lt;b&gt;Triple Strike Technology&lt;/b&gt;&amp;nbsp;you too can be on your way to being pasty and too-thin.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Strike One:&lt;/b&gt;&amp;nbsp;With our diet sickness you will lose all desire to eat anything. No more wanting that mid-morning snack or your bedtime ice cream. In fact, you won't want to eat anything. And if you do succumb to your habits or common sense and try to eat anything it will be regurgitated a few hours later. This greatly reduces your caloric intake.&lt;br /&gt;
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BUT THAT'S NOT ALL!&lt;br /&gt;
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ALL THIS CAN BE YOURS TODAY!&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Bonus:&lt;/b&gt; Just by visiting my home and hanging out for a few hours you too can catch the diet sickness. And for the first 100 people who take advantage of this opportunity, we will throw in an extra-special gift. While you wait for inoculation, you can keep yourself busy by doing laundry, dishes, vacuuming, or mowing the lawn.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: x-small;"&gt;Void where prohibited. Not valid in all states. All weight loss results are speculative and not verified by the FDA, FFA, BSA, NASA, or any other acronym or initialism. Sickness not actually patented. This opportunity is not rare. Side effects may include headache, body aches, slowed thoughts, lethargy, grumpiness, exhaustion, and an unhealthy increase in sarcasm.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-2122038560198347881?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/2122038560198347881/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=2122038560198347881&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2122038560198347881?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2122038560198347881?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/05/diet-sickness.html" title="Diet Sickness" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DU4BQ3k9eyp7ImA9WhVWEU0.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-8902769168120204140</id><published>2012-04-22T10:17:00.003-05:00</published><updated>2012-04-22T10:19:12.763-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-04-22T10:19:12.763-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="goals" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>I'm done. I'm done. I'm done! Hooray?</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cusKZr5qELk/T5QeCjY3J6I/AAAAAAAAAKg/L3ON5MbNcxI/s1600/3234213571_609fc47a70.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cusKZr5qELk/T5QeCjY3J6I/AAAAAAAAAKg/L3ON5MbNcxI/s1600/3234213571_609fc47a70.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
I accomplished a big goal. I worked many hours over many weeks, and now I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should be happy, right?&lt;br /&gt;
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Instead, I feel like I should still be working toward my goal. I'm a bit lost, and unsure what to do with my time.&lt;br /&gt;
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Strange?&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't think so. My guess is that I've spent so much time, consistently, over the last two months that I've built a habit, so my brain and body still want to perform the habit. The thing is, I'm done. Finished. The end. No more.&lt;br /&gt;
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I read all 35 &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/2012/02/03/665/"&gt;Whitney Award finalists&lt;/a&gt; and cast my votes!&lt;br /&gt;
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Now what?&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll keep reading books. I've got a couple manuscripts that need work. I'm woefully behind on my blog posts. And I need to write some more in my journal.&lt;br /&gt;
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But I think I'm going to just relax for a while, until my accomplishment feels like an accomplishment.&lt;br /&gt;
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And maybe celebrate with some ice cream. Now, that sounds exciting!&lt;br /&gt;
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Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* Whoa! &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/gregfoster/"&gt;Greg Foster&lt;/a&gt; snapped this picture while out hiking. I'm glad he did, and I'm glad he shared it on &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/gregfoster/3234213571/"&gt;Flickr&lt;/a&gt;. He has lots of other great images, too. I almost used &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/gregfoster/4279303187"&gt;this one&lt;/a&gt; instead.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-8902769168120204140?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/8902769168120204140/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=8902769168120204140&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8902769168120204140?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8902769168120204140?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/04/im-done-im-done-im-done-hooray.html" title="I'm done. I'm done. I'm done! Hooray?" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cusKZr5qELk/T5QeCjY3J6I/AAAAAAAAAKg/L3ON5MbNcxI/s72-c/3234213571_609fc47a70.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DU4DSX09eip7ImA9WhVRGEg.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-8097152965315594187</id><published>2012-03-27T09:19:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T09:19:38.362-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-27T09:19:38.362-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Daughter of Helaman by Misty Moncur</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o49mS73Rg9Y/T3HLk6bA4HI/AAAAAAAAAKY/P33jLmM1USQ/s1600/Daughter_Helaman.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o49mS73Rg9Y/T3HLk6bA4HI/AAAAAAAAAKY/P33jLmM1USQ/s320/Daughter_Helaman.png" width="212" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
Today's spotlight is &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/10991547-daughter-of-helaman"&gt;Daughter of Helaman&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://mistymoncur.blogspot.com/"&gt;Misty Moncur&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's the story of a teenage girl, Keturah, who wants to join Helaman's 2000 Stripling Warriors.&lt;br /&gt;
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Although she does encounter gender-based obstacles to her dream, most of them are of her own making. That's what makes this story so unique, it's not as much about a girl overcoming a restrictive society as it is a girl overcoming her own view of society.&lt;br /&gt;
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There are many memorable characters and scenes, but it was Keturah's dedication and spirit that pulled me through the story. She stands at the crossroads of youth and adulthood where there are so many possibilities ahead. These possibilities are both thrilling and overwhelming. Her choices strengthen some paths and close off others. It is an exciting time of life.&lt;br /&gt;
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The story also explores the multifaceted relationships between the characters. Sometimes Mother is a mother, other times a friend, other times a healer. Keturah's childhood friend, and fellow soldier, might become her betrothed. While her captain, and trainer, might just steal her heart. She doesn't have long to find her way before the Sons (and Daughter) of Helaman have to march against the Lamanites.&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked Misty how writing this story was special to her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
The thing that makes my first novel special to me is the knowledge and faith I gained while writing it.  The Lord blessed me . . . and opened my mind to details in the scriptures I had never noticed before.  As I wrote &lt;i&gt;Daughter of Helaman&amp;nbsp;&lt;/i&gt;and continued on to the next books in the series, I learned to write by the promptings of the Spirit more than by the promptings of my outline.  I learned so many things about myself during this process and my testimony increased so much that even if no one else ever gets much from it, I know it was totally worth writing.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
She also shared some great advice for all writers.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
As a writer, you . . . become attached to your writing.  You put so much of yourself into it, and not just your thoughts and ideas.  Completing a novel takes a lot of your time.  It steals your sleep.  It takes an emotional commitment--you have to basically develop a one-sided relationship with your characters (sometimes at the expense of your real relationships with real people!)  And the whole time you're wondering if your voice is even worth being heard.&lt;br /&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;Though I am completely emotionally involved with my characters and the scriptural events I write about, I really tried not become too attached to the actual writing in &lt;i&gt;Daughter of Helaman&lt;/i&gt;.  Knowing I was going to have to share it with others by publishing it, I didn't want to get possessive of it, to think of it as only mine, or become too attached to something an editor might want to change.  Still, I love it because it is mine and there is a piece of me on every page and in every character.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
I agree. While writing a novel isn't the hardest job in the world, it's not easy at all. Then it takes courage to share your creation with the world.&lt;br /&gt;
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So, let's jump right into the very beginning of the story. It starts with danger.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I crouched, still as stone,  behind the&amp;nbsp;broad leaves of an evergreen tree, watching the men below&amp;nbsp;me. Usually when I came to the high cliff above the falls, I&amp;nbsp;watched the stream meander through the valley down below or&amp;nbsp;daydreamed while I gazed at the large temples in the distance.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Today I watched for my brother. Micah had left a month ago&amp;nbsp;to recruit boys for the Ammonite army, and he was supposed&amp;nbsp;to return to the village today. But though I watched for him all&amp;nbsp;morning, I hadn’t seen him yet. Instead, I saw the small group of&amp;nbsp;men traveling north toward Ammonihah. They stayed near the&amp;nbsp;West Road but skulked in the cover of the trees.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Lamanite spies.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
If you liked that you can &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/1599554976/ref=sib_dp_pop_ex?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;p=S008#reader-link"&gt;read the first few pages&lt;/a&gt;, and then &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Daughter-Helaman-Misty-Moncur/dp/1599554976/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1332857585&amp;amp;sr=1-1"&gt;get your own copy&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-8097152965315594187?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/8097152965315594187/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=8097152965315594187&amp;isPopup=true" title="0 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8097152965315594187?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8097152965315594187?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-daughter-of-helaman-by.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Daughter of Helaman by Misty Moncur" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o49mS73Rg9Y/T3HLk6bA4HI/AAAAAAAAAKY/P33jLmM1USQ/s72-c/Daughter_Helaman.png" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;A0UERnk5cCp7ImA9WhVRF0s.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-8403055964553179688</id><published>2012-03-26T08:40:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-26T08:40:07.728-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-26T08:40:07.728-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Quick Update: The Third 'R'</title><content type="html">So, I done me some 'rithmatic and I've got me a lot of reading to do.&lt;br /&gt;
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My goal is to read all the Whitney finalists by April 23rd, and the goal is in sight. I have 13 books left which calculates to reading 1 book every 2 days. *whew*&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going to keep posting spotlights. I have 3 that are close to being done, and several more in the works. I hope to get all 35 books spotlighted before the gala. If not, I'll post a few after the gala.&lt;br /&gt;
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My biggest hurdle, other than time, is that there are still two books I haven't been able to get my hands on.&lt;br /&gt;
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Wish me luck.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-8403055964553179688?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/8403055964553179688/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=8403055964553179688&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8403055964553179688?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8403055964553179688?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/quick-update-third-r.html" title="Quick Update: The Third 'R'" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DEcERnY7fCp7ImA9WhVRFEU.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5660222615645199869</id><published>2012-03-23T02:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-23T02:00:07.804-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-23T02:00:07.804-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: With a Name Like Love by Tess Hilmo</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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Today I'm going to spotlight &lt;a href="http://tesshilmo.com/books/"&gt;With a Name Like Love&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://tesshilmo.com/"&gt;Tess Hilmo&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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When I read the title, I immediately thought, "Romance," but I ended up being surprised. This is a story about growing up, wrapped in a murder mystery, wrapped in a historical. So, why the title?&lt;br /&gt;
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First, this book is all about love and it's many faces. It's about love in a family, in a community, between friends, and yes there's a bit of innocent crush going on, too. This isn't an in-your-face type of theme. In fact, I didn't really catch on to it until I'd finished the entire book. It was cleverly woven into the events of the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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Second, the main character's last name is Love.&lt;br /&gt;
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This is a character-driven story, but Tess also worked in the time period so well it felt natural. I guess that would be my main point in this spotlight, the story just felt natural.&lt;br /&gt;
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I would introduce the characters and setting, but Tess does it so well in the first few paragraphs:&lt;br /&gt;
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It was the eighth of July, 1957, when Ollie's daddy slowed their rusted-out Chevy pickup near the junction of Highway 29 and Carter Road. They had come to set up for a three-day revival. Ollie sat in the truck bed with her sisters. She was thirteen and the oldest of Reverend Love's five daughters, followed by Martha, Gwen, Camille, and Ellen. Ellen was at Ollie's side, clutching Baby Doll Sue and singing "Mama's Little Baby." Ollie noticed her sister was getting the words twisted up and wrong--again.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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It may have been only nine o'clock in the morning, but the summer sun was already high in the sky and sweating up the land. Fields of soft green barley laid themselves out across the earth in perfect rows--as if God had reached down and combed them just so. Ollie noticed a carved-up plank of wood that someone long ago had shoved into the dark Southern soil. It read: Binder, Arkansas.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
Want to &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/0374384657/ref=sr_1_1?p=S004&amp;amp;keywords=tess+hilmo&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1324527995#reader_0374384657"&gt;read some more&lt;/a&gt;? Go ahead, I'll wait.&lt;br /&gt;
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Tess was so kind to tell me some of her personal feelings about the story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I wanted to tell the story of characters who were in a broken situation, but who didn't consider themselves broken people.  I love Jimmy and how, even though he has been terribly mistreated, he still has a deep river of conviction about who he is and what he can someday become.  I love Ollie because she sees a boy who needs a friend and lets nothing stop her from being that person.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;I grew up in a somewhat tough situation.  It wasn't as bad as Jimmy's, but it was really difficult at times and, in spite of the chaos that surrounded me, I believed in myself.  That was what got me through.  So, when I started writing, I wanted to share that part of my personal experience on some level and I guess With a Name Like Love is that story.  It celebrates family.  It celebrates friendship.  It shows us that we can overcome trials.  It is really a piece of my heart.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
I enjoyed this story, and couldn't believe this was a debut novel. There were so many layers to it, and it was put together well and felt natural. I suggest you &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/With-Name-like-Love-Hilmo/dp/0374384657/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1332465935&amp;amp;sr=1-1"&gt;get your own copy&lt;/a&gt; and see for yourself.&lt;br /&gt;
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Our next spotlight is a retelling of Jane Austen's Pride &amp;amp; Prejudice, with many of the major characters replaced by high school students.&lt;br /&gt;
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While I don't consider myself an Austen fan, I do enjoy her writing. I've read Pride &amp;amp; Prejudice and liked it. Surprisingly, I liked it more than my wife did, who is a true romance fan. (I'm not sure what that says about me, but, thankfully, this spotlight isn't about me.)&lt;br /&gt;
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When I heard that &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12092005-pride-popularity"&gt;Pride &amp;amp; Popularity&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://authorjennijames.blogspot.com/"&gt;Jenni James&lt;/a&gt; was a faithful retelling, I had two reactions: "Hmmm, sounds interesting," and "Sigh, another one?"&lt;br /&gt;
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This book was light and enjoyable. The scenes were snappy. The characters and situations were interesting. And Jenni manages to stay true to the original story line. Which, I think, makes the writing that much more impressive.&lt;br /&gt;
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Since I'm familiar with the original, once I figured out which characters were Elizabeth, Darcy, Jane, Bingley, Lydia, Wickham, Charlotte, and Collins then I knew how things were going to turn out. The story doesn't try to keep these roles a secret. In fact, several of the characters are named after their archetype. The real fun was in seeing how they were going to fill their roles. Jenni did a good job of making enough changes to keep things modern and interesting.&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked Jenni what made this story special to her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Pride &amp;amp; Popularity is special to me, because not only did it begin my fascinating craving for the writing world (Teaching me that writing a book was WAY more fun than reading one!), it also launched a career I never knew I would have four years ago.  It has changed my life in more ways than one, and allowed me to contribute to the world.  I've written several books (10) since beginning this one, and all are slotted for publication through different publishers over the next couple of years.  I hope every single one gives a happy voice and cheerful hope to those teens who are struggling to find their way right now, or the ones who'd like to break from the norm and read something light and fun for a change.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
And here's a bit of the story to get you hooked.&lt;br /&gt;
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"Chloe!"&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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As I spun around in the crowded hallway by my locker, Madison caught me up in a bear hug. She had gone to stay with her cousins in Florida for two months of summer break, and she had come back tan and beautiful. I laughed as I removed a piece of her streaked blond hair that was caught on my backpack.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"Wow! Maddi, you look gorgeous. You obviously had a great time in Florida."&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Madison sighed. "It was wonderful!"&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"So, tell me, did you find some amazingly hot lifeguard to sweep you off your feet?"&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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She rolled her eyes. "I wish." then she glanced at me suspiciously. "So how about you? Did you find anyone this summer?"&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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I laughed. "Yeah, right. I just hung out and did my theater gig. Besides, every guy I'm remotely interested in ends up too self-centered and a total jerk anyway, so--"&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"You know, Chloe, one of these days some guys is going to prove you wrong. And when he does you're going to fall for him hard. Personally, I can't wait."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
If you're looking for a light, clean, teen romance, you should &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Pride-Popularity-Jane-Austen-Diaries/dp/0983829306/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1332169054&amp;amp;sr=8-2"&gt;get your own copy&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-2615597531930883591?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/2615597531930883591/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=2615597531930883591&amp;isPopup=true" title="0 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2615597531930883591?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2615597531930883591?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-pride-popularity-by.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Pride &amp; Popularity by Jenni James" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Xgn42ZSZcfg/T2clsjrRf-I/AAAAAAAAAKI/rJUr4IBGiSw/s72-c/PridePopularity.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CkMEQ3czcSp7ImA9WhVREUk.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-4940449775038326508</id><published>2012-03-19T02:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-19T02:00:02.989-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-19T02:00:02.989-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Smokescreen by Traci Hunter Abramson</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator tr_bq" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-NpN3EYTzSSA/T2QBCAN2ewI/AAAAAAAAAJ4/l7RX9XMsIPM/s1600/Smokescreen.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-NpN3EYTzSSA/T2QBCAN2ewI/AAAAAAAAAJ4/l7RX9XMsIPM/s320/Smokescreen.jpg" width="214" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
Action, drama, conspiracy, friendship, danger, Navy SEALS, art, love, and bullets--but not in that order. There you have it: &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/9461028-smokescreen"&gt;Smokescreen&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://www.tracihunterabramson.com/"&gt;Traci Hunter Abramson&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, okay. There's a lot more to it than that, but I don't know what else to say. The story held me from beginning to end. I didn't even have time to try to figure out the mystery because I was so worried about what was going to happen next.&lt;br /&gt;
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The cool thing is that, this book wasn't all about action. The characters also develop solid and deep relationships while crazy men are on the loose hunting them.&lt;br /&gt;
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Both sides of the story worked together to pull me along and raise the tension.&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked Traci what she felt made this book special to her, and you can get a feel for how she can juggle the human-side of the story with the all-out action:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Smoke Screen gave me the opportunity to go back and develop characters I had grown very attached to in &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Lockdown-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5018021"&gt;Lockdown&lt;/a&gt;. Quinn Lambert had become very three dimensional to me, and I discovered things about him in this book that I hadn't considered previously. I also had a great time getting to know Taylor and seeing their relationship develop.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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For the suspense side of things, I enjoyed using some of my CIA background in the development of the story. Writing about CIA headquarters and some of the work I was able to do while I was employed there always feels like an opportunity to go back and visit a time in my life that I very much enjoyed. And of course, I loved seeing how the rest of my Saint Squad was doing since their last book.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
This is the fifth book in the Saint Squad series, but if you haven't read &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Freefall-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5005212?sku=5005212"&gt;any&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Lockdown-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5018021"&gt;of&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Crossfire-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5036449"&gt;the&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Backlash-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5051426"&gt;others&lt;/a&gt; that's fine too. This book stands on its own.&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a few paragraphs to pique your interest:&lt;br /&gt;
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Five men. Five targets.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Quinn Lambert visualized the mission once more in his mind, a&amp;nbsp;mission the whole world was watching on the evening news. Once again&amp;nbsp;pirates had commandeered a vessel in the Indian Ocean, only this time&amp;nbsp;the two Americans on board weren’t just a couple of innocent bystanders&amp;nbsp;who happened to get caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. No,&amp;nbsp;these two hostages had been specifically chosen because of the ransom they&amp;nbsp;could command.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Hotel tycoon Monte Eastman and his wife, Georgia, had boarded a&amp;nbsp;friend’s yacht in Sri Lanka for an extended vacation. Four days into their&amp;nbsp;voyage, pirates had intercepted them and had taken control of the vessel.&amp;nbsp;The ransom demands began within hours. If all went as planned, another&amp;nbsp;hour would be all that was needed to end those demands permanently.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
If you liked this, you should pick up &lt;a href="http://deseretbook.com/Smokescreen-Traci-Hunter-Abramson/i/5057851?s_iid=tt3_fctn_7"&gt;your own copy&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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I got to the store, explained the situation, then I sat down to wait and read.&lt;br /&gt;
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It was a good time, no one bothered me. I did notice one person behind the counter look in my direction a few times, but whatever.&amp;nbsp;My device was fixed in, surprisingly, record time, and I was on my way.&lt;br /&gt;
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It wasn't until I left that I realized I was reading a book that was clearly titled "&lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/8872180-i-don-t-want-to-kill-you"&gt;I Don't Want to Kill You&lt;/a&gt;".&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not saying that the book had anything to do with my uninterrupted reading time or even the speedy repair, but you never know.&lt;br /&gt;
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Has anyone else gotten better service or more attention using this little trick? If so, I'd like to hear about it. If not, it might work for you.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-8648031632216526024?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/8648031632216526024/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=8648031632216526024&amp;isPopup=true" title="3 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8648031632216526024?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/8648031632216526024?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/thank-you-dan-wells.html" title="Thank You Dan Wells" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;C0UEQ3g8eSp7ImA9WhVSGEU.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5508798271556595166</id><published>2012-03-16T02:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-16T02:00:02.671-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-16T02:00:02.671-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Miles from Ordinary by Carol Lynch Williams</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-IMYKPzUlxJo/T187TLkmITI/AAAAAAAAAJo/23s8bwTsD-Q/s1600/Miles+from+Ordinary.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-IMYKPzUlxJo/T187TLkmITI/AAAAAAAAAJo/23s8bwTsD-Q/s320/Miles+from+Ordinary.jpg" width="212" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
As the title says, the book starts out as anything but ordinary, spends some time trying to get close to ordinary, then turns its back on ordinary altogether and sprints headlong into the abnormal.&lt;br /&gt;
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I enjoyed &lt;a href="http://us.macmillan.com/milesfromordinary/CarolLynchWilliams"&gt;Miles from Ordinary&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://throwingupwords.wordpress.com/"&gt;Carol Lynch Williams&lt;/a&gt;.&amp;nbsp;The whole book kept me off balance, in a good way. As soon as I started to get my feet under me, things would shift again.&lt;br /&gt;
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The story starts with fourteen-year-old Lacey who's mother has a mental illness. It's not taken lightly--it's not the "mom is crazy and we all have to walk on pins an needles" type of story. Instead, Lacey truly loves her mother, and their daily life incorporates all of Mom's quirks and symptoms into a "normal" routine for them.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's the thing about mental illness, it affects everyone. My oldest child has Autism. It's not severe, but it still shades everything we do and affects all our plans. I remember quite a few years ago having a conversation with several of my neighbors. A family that just moved in asked what restaurants we liked. I shared one of our favorites--the food was decent and the playplace was arranged in such a way that it was easy to see the kids and also keep an eye on both exits. A good friend of mine put his hand on my shoulder and said, "John, I don't think I've ever considered that. Most kids don't try to escape." He didn't say it in a derogatory way, and it really made me think how much my "normal" was really not that normal.&lt;br /&gt;
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Back to the story. We get to accompany Lacey on a day that turns out anything but "normal", even for her. And when I say day, I mean that the entire story takes place in a single day, but it doesn't feel rushed or forced. That's not easy to do. By the evening, the story dives into the darkness and deliciously creepy and downright scary. I love a good scary story, especially one that isn't gory or crude.&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked Carol what made this book special to her:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Many years ago, I was walking through Utah Valley University when I met a woman who was 45-years-old and about to become a great-grandmother. A GREAT-GRANDMOTHER! She, her daughter and her granddaughter all had, or were going to have, babies at or younger than 15 years of age. So, I began a novel about a little girl who's very young mom is sort of losing it. But I couldn't make it work, no matter what I tried. Later, much later, I looked back at the book. I had two novels there, somehow, twined together like wrestling snakes. I pulled them apart and began the story of a matriarchal family and a little girl with Progeria. The book was published as &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3779484-pretty-like-us"&gt;Pretty Like Us&lt;/a&gt;. Then I went to work on the story of a child who's mom is suffering. That one became &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/8814993-miles-from-ordinary"&gt;Miles from Ordinary&lt;/a&gt;. I think that's what makes the books important to me--that I was able to pry the two apart and they were published (after much revision).&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I also like what makes Lacey succeed, what makes her strong. That she can finally get free of something she has had to carry for too long. I think there are lots of kids out there who are suffering in similar ways.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
Before I give you a taste of the story, I need to share a warning: when my wife read this book it freaked her out a bit and she had a hard time getting to sleep. You've been warned.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;i&gt;There are mice.&lt;/i&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Lots of mice. Running all over my room. Letting out crying sounds that grate on my ears. They crawl on my feet. My legs. I feel them on my arms. Soft things with toenails like blunt needles.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
“Momma?” I say. She’s dressed in a long nightgown. Her fingernails are sharp like the tops of just-opened cans. “We gotta get rid of the mice. We gotta call an exterminator.” I hand her an old-fashioned phone.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
“You’re right, Lacey,” Momma says. But instead, she cuts at her face with her nails. Deep wounds open up, split wide, and blood, dark blood like ink, makes paths down her face to the floor. She cries.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
“Stop that,” I say. “Stop it now.”&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
But Momma doesn’t listen. Just cuts and cries.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
*   *   *&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I AWOKE with a start, my heart thudding in my neck. My whole body felt like I’d been dunked in an ice bath.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
“Only a dream,” I said to myself, then glanced at the clock: 3:46 A.M. I started to close my eyes. The wind nudged at the house. I could smell the magnolia tree.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Something moved in the corner. &lt;/blockquote&gt;
Ooooo, that's creepy. I like it. If you like it too, you can read the &lt;a href="http://us.macmillan.com/BookCustomPage_New.aspx?isbn=9781250002600"&gt;rest of the chapter&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;and&amp;nbsp;&lt;a href="http://us.macmillan.com/milesfromordinary/CarolLynchWilliams"&gt;get your own copy&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5508798271556595166?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5508798271556595166/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5508798271556595166&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5508798271556595166?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5508798271556595166?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-miles-from-ordinary-by.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Miles from Ordinary by Carol Lynch Williams" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-IMYKPzUlxJo/T187TLkmITI/AAAAAAAAAJo/23s8bwTsD-Q/s72-c/Miles+from+Ordinary.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;AkMEQXs7fyp7ImA9WhVSF00.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-7417747963311942425</id><published>2012-03-14T02:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-14T02:00:00.507-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-14T02:00:00.507-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Miss Delacourt Has Her Day by Heidi Ashworth</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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I'm a firm believer that writers should read stories outside their favorite genres. For me, &lt;a href="http://www.heidiashworth.com/my_novel.html"&gt;Miss Delacourt Has Her Day&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://www.heidiashworth.com/"&gt;Heidi Ashworth&lt;/a&gt; is one of those books. It's a Regency-era, light romance with a bit of comedy.&lt;br /&gt;
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I have to admit, it took me a while to get into this story, but once I did I found it had quite a bit of humor and some interesting character perspectives. As I expected, there isn't a lot of action in the book, although there were some fun scenes near the end. Instead the drama lies in who knows what and who has what power. There were many times I had to stop and remind myself that "Miss Delacourt didn't know such-and-such". And even going so far as to try to tease out the motives behind different character's actions (which made me feel like quite the socialite).&lt;br /&gt;
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There are a lot of different characters each with their own motives, knowledge, and background. The descriptions of the period were good. I got to "see" the clothing, furnishings, transportation, and social activities. And a lot of time spent working through the social ladder of the day.&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked Heidi her thoughts on the story:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I wrote the first Miss Delacourt book 15 years prior to this one for a class and never really expected it to be published.  As a result, I wrote it to please myself and it turned out to be fairly autobiographical when it comes to the central conflict. So, it was a pleasure to revisit the story between these characters who had a lot in common with my husband and me to give them more air time.  After 15 years, I had a different perspective on things and hopefully a more mature one.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Also, it was a fun challenge to make a sequel work in a genre that "doesn't do sequels".  Really fun.  Oh--and I adore the cover&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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&amp;nbsp;Here's a taste of the writing from the Prologue:&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Sir Anthony Crenshaw was the happiest of men.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;. . .&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Why, then, did he feel such a presentiment of doom when the butler entered and placed a thick letter, the address scratched out in a familiar chicken scrawl, into his outstretched hand? The vellum inside was sure to be replete with more of the same, and since the author rarely had anything to say that promised even a hint of good news, Sir Anthony was tempted to toss the whole of it, unopened, into the fire that burned merrily in the grate. The thought that the composer of this ominous epistle, though in and of himself a harbinger of doom, rarely committed his nay-saying to paper and ink stayed his hand. Reluctantly, he broke the wax indented with the seal of the seventh Duke of Marcross and took in the shockingly brief message.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Tony,&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; Reed is dead. Come at once.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Marcross&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Reed dead! Sir Anthony thrust the letter with shaking hand into the fire as he should have in the first place. As tragic as it was for his cousin, a man in the prime of life, to have met his end so suddenly, it was tantamount to disaster for Sir Anthony. He would mourn Reed's death, but he would mourn the demise of his own freedom that much more. Just a moment ago he had been himself, Sir Anthony, a man free of any constraint except for that of impending wedded bliss. Now, he walked from the room with feet like lead, as &lt;i&gt;Crenshaw&lt;/i&gt;, the recalcitrant heir to death, duty, and the Duke of Marcross.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
If you want to read more you can purchase the book &lt;a href="http://avalonbooks.com/catbloghr/1097-miss-delacourt-has-her-day"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-7417747963311942425?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/7417747963311942425/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=7417747963311942425&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/7417747963311942425?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/7417747963311942425?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-miss-delacourt-has-her.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Miss Delacourt Has Her Day by Heidi Ashworth" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-ngQapj49oBw/T11z-T9GvYI/AAAAAAAAAJY/LMfaWvRQtXI/s72-c/ashworth_mdhhd.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;A0UFQ3s4eCp7ImA9WhVSFU4.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5585443885624146456</id><published>2012-03-12T03:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-12T03:00:12.530-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-12T03:00:12.530-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Rearview Mirror by Stephanie Black</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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Best first chapter of the finalists I've read.&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know what it was about the first chapter of &lt;a href="http://www.stephanieblack.net/Site/Rearview_Mirror.html"&gt;Rearview Mirror&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://www.stephanieblack.net/Site/Welcome.html"&gt;Stephanie Black&lt;/a&gt;, but when I got to the end I had to find my wife and read it to her. I'm definitely going to pick this apart once all my reading is over and figure out its secrets.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
If you've never read one of Stephanie's books you're missing out. She's very talented. She's won the Whitney Award for the &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/winners/2010-winners/"&gt;last&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/winners/2009-winners/"&gt;three&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/winners/2008-winners/"&gt;years&lt;/a&gt;, so she's the one to beat. And this category is no cakewalk either.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've met Stephanie several times over the years. She is always pleasant and incredibly nice. I don't know where all those dark, creepy, mysterious thoughts hang out in her psyche, but you'd never know it to meet her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I asked Stephanie what made this book stand out for her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;"One thing I particularly like about this book is the way several story lines feed into the main plot, all adding layers of interest and tension."&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
It's true. The storylines wove together nicely. And as for interest and tension (and creepiness and surprise and twists and layers of mystery), this book has them.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I wish you could read the whole first chapter, and lucky for you, it's already online. Here are the first few paragraphs to whet your appetite, and a link to the whole thing. Enjoy.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; Sleet whipped Linda Taylor across the face. She bent her head and trudged along the muddy path that led deeper into the wooded acres of her property. Bare branches dotted with spring buds wouldn’t provide much shelter, but this was exactly what everyone wanted for her, wasn’t it? Linda, cold and wet and alone. Shoved aside.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; On the top of the bank that sloped down to the creek, she stopped and listened to the water rushing onward to oblivion, unheeded. Just like Linda. She tried, but did anyone care?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; The wind tore at her hood, pulling it off her head. Sleet and rain soaked her hair, but she didn’t bother to fix her hood. It would only blow off again. She’d freeze out here, but better frostbite than going home to be insulted and ignored.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; She glanced over her shoulder, but saw only the empty path, bumpy with roots, and the gray-brown branches of trees trembling in the wind. No one cared enough to follow her. When she was dead of hypothermia, they’d realize what they’d done to her. Linda wiped her face with numb fingers. She’d forgotten her gloves. Why hadn’t someone at least brought her some gloves? How could she possibly remember her gloves when she was so upset?&lt;/blockquote&gt;
Go ahead, click &lt;a href="http://www.stephanieblack.net/Site/RM_excerpt.html"&gt;here to read the whole chapter&lt;/a&gt;. Then click &lt;a href="http://www.stephanieblack.net/Site/Rearview_Mirror.html"&gt;here to learn where to buy it&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5585443885624146456?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5585443885624146456/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5585443885624146456&amp;isPopup=true" title="6 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5585443885624146456?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5585443885624146456?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-rearview-mirror-by.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Rearview Mirror by Stephanie Black" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-89L4o7g1JFw/T1yxvjlviGI/AAAAAAAAAJQ/38bm41AoF0I/s72-c/Rearview-Mirror_COVER.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CEIHSHc8cCp7ImA9WhVSEks.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-906446942328205367</id><published>2012-03-08T21:08:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2012-03-08T21:08:59.978-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-08T21:08:59.978-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><title>Whitney Finalist: Bloodborne by Gregg Luke</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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I've been shoulder deep in Whitney Awards since the first of the year, and I've used that as an excuse not to blog. That was plain stupid because I've been reading some really awesome books, and I should be sharing.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So the blog drought is over, and I couldn't be more pleased with my first Whitney spotlight.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;b&gt;Bloodborne by Gregg Luke&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
My wife met &lt;a href="http://greggluke.com/"&gt;Gregg&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;several years ago at the Whitney Gala, and we've been friends ever since. He's one of the nicest guys you'll meet, which is surprising because, man, can he write a tense story with some of &amp;nbsp;the most despicable bad guys you've ever met.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He's made it to the finals &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/2008-finalists/"&gt;several&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/2009-finalists/"&gt;times&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/2010-finalists/"&gt;before&lt;/a&gt;. And this book is good too. I had a hard time putting it down.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I asked Gregg what made this book special to him.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;"&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;I love taking actual facts and&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;weaving them into an adventure. All of the medical details and&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;geographic references in Bloodborne are accurate--except for the&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;Armageddon virus. But I made that up using characteristics from&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;existing viruses, so its existence is plausible"&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
Did I mention that Gregg is a pharmacist? He knows his medical details.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;"One thing many people&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;are surprised to find is real are all the facts about the island of&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;Ni'ihau. It really is part of the Hawaiian archipelago, and it really&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;does have the largest lakes in the island chain."&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
I'd never heard of that island before. If you have, let me know in the comments. Sorry for interrupting again, Gregg, please continue.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;"&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;Over all, I think the&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;thing I liked most about the story was the relationship between Erin&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;Cross and Sean Flannery (aka John Ferguson), how they combined their&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;respective talents to stop the bad guys from wiping out the entire&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;population of Ni'ihau, and how Erin helped Sean uncover his mysterious&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.917969); color: #222222;"&gt;past."&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
I want to thank Gregg for answering my questions and for his friendship. Before we go, I want to let the book speak for itself. Here are the first few lines:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
Erin Cross's phone plinged and vibrated, indicating the receipt of a text message. The incoming number was a string of zeros; no name was attached. She pressed View.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
&lt;i&gt;You are about to die.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
What to read more? I know you do? Go &lt;a href="http://greggluke.com/"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt; to learn how to get your own copy.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-906446942328205367?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/906446942328205367/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=906446942328205367&amp;isPopup=true" title="4 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/906446942328205367?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/906446942328205367?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-finalist-bloodborne-by-gregg.html" title="Whitney Finalist: Bloodborne by Gregg Luke" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-bmK5rIBm_TQ/T1lsHSFT2SI/AAAAAAAAAJI/rPrIp9jEVFA/s72-c/Bloodborne_COVER-sm-1.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;A0UBQnkyeyp7ImA9WhVSEEU.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-3074121546932383847</id><published>2012-03-06T21:00:00.001-06:00</published><updated>2012-03-06T21:00:53.793-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-06T21:00:53.793-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="inspiration" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Whitney Awards" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="publishing" /><title>The Whitney Awards and Me</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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Several years back, &lt;a href="http://www.robisonwells.com/"&gt;Robison Wells&lt;/a&gt; asked me to serve on the committee for the &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/"&gt;Whitney Awards&lt;/a&gt;. I was both flattered and perplexed. I wasn't an author and wasn't a publishing insider. Maybe that's why he chose me. I don't know, and I didn't ask.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I wasn't a complete newb. I had started my own company and founded a non-profit, so I knew how that side of it worked. I also knew technology.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
But I was a newb in so many ways. By-laws--I could handle. Analyzing and improving processes--good there. But one of my responsibilities was to judge a category.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Over the course of a year, anyone can &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/nominate/"&gt;nominate&lt;/a&gt; novels for consideration. At the end of the year, a select group of judges reads nominees and votes to narrow each category to the five best novels.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It was hard. I agonized over each book. Thinking of their strengths and weaknesses. Thinking of the hundreds of hours each author spent on the work. I would narrow things down and re-read scenes and sections until I finally came to a decision.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The great thing about the Whitney Awards, is that it's not just about a select group of judges. Once each category is narrowed down to five finalists, they are sent out to a much larger group, called the Academy, made up of booksellers, publishers, authors, and other publishing professionals. This large group casts their votes, which determine the winners.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
To be a part of this process sparked something for me, but it wasn't until I went to my first gala that I really saw what the Awards were about. I met many authors and editors. I saw people moved to tears of happiness and sadness. The conflicting emotions of people cheering on their friends who won, while hiding their own ache of losing (Consolation Chocolate Cake anyone?). I saw, not a group of competitors, but comrades in arms.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I know I'm waxing a bit poetic, but it really struck me how cool everyone was about it. And how many friends I made.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Then the next year came. I saw authors roll up their sleeves to do better. Maybe this year was their year to win. I heard people talking about the Awards with anticipation.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It's awesome to be a part of something that can inspire my friends, but the awards do more than that. They help readers find great books. They bring writers together. They add some excitement to our little corner of publishing.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'm grateful for Rob. I still don't know what he was thinking, but whatever it was, it worked. I've been involved with the Awards ever since. I'm not on the committee anymore, but I try to help in whatever ways I can.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I encourage everyone to go read one of the &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/winners/2010-winners/"&gt;past winners&lt;/a&gt; or &lt;a href="http://whitneyawards.com/wordpress/2011-finalists/"&gt;finalists&lt;/a&gt;. They are great stories, told by great people.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
And to all my friends competing this year, Good Luck.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-3074121546932383847?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/3074121546932383847/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=3074121546932383847&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/3074121546932383847?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/3074121546932383847?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/whitney-awards-and-me.html" title="The Whitney Awards and Me" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-YZt4-cA8ImY/T1bEAvqOisI/AAAAAAAAAI4/YhVbXq4y8OY/s72-c/WhitneyAwardsLogo.gif" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CkIGR3g4eSp7ImA9WhVTFkw.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-6414333324320742850</id><published>2012-03-01T08:02:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2012-03-01T08:02:06.631-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-03-01T08:02:06.631-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="advice" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="reading" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>Becoming a Writer</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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Most software projects have testers. These are the people who get paid to break my code and report problems for me to fix. Without them, my work is a lot harder.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Over the years, I've worked with many people who made the transition from tester to programmer. It seems like a good fit: both of us work with software, we speak the same "language", and we're both detail oriented and have technical expertise.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
But it isn't an easy transition.&amp;nbsp;There's one hurdle that I see many people struggle with. You see, testers and programmers have a different view of software.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
A tester knows what the program is supposed to do, and they know lots of ways to break it. They know what they are looking for, then perform tests to verify there's nothing wrong.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Programming is different. No longer are there right and wrong answers. There are often many right answers--many different ways to make the software work. Answers that all appear correct to the user, but they each come with a different set of limitations. In fact, there are even wrong answers that will still appear to work correctly for now, but will come back to bite you later.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It's no longer a black-and-white world. It's not whether something passes or fails. It's about more than that.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What's interesting is that I see a similar transition when my friends who are readers become writers. As a reader, we get into the story, the characters, the setting, the writing. We can spot when an author makes mistakes like plot holes or confusing story lines or bad grammar. A well-written story feels like it is inevitable. "Of course he'd make that decision," we say to ourselves even though the decision surprised us.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
But as a writer, there isn't anything inevitable about a story even though many beginning writers think so. I used to think so, too. You feel like the story is driving you. Once you are done, you bristle when someone gives you negative feedback. You struggle with how to tweak your story without ruining it.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Well, let me tell you. There are no right answers anymore. There are many ways to tell your story once you get to the heart of it. You an cut out whole characters, change locations, have people make different choices, introduce any conflict you want at any time or take it out again. And you can still have &lt;i&gt;your&lt;/i&gt;&amp;nbsp;story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Once I realized this, I wasn't just &lt;i&gt;telling &lt;/i&gt;a story, I was &lt;i&gt;crafting&lt;/i&gt;&amp;nbsp;a story.&amp;nbsp;I could experiment. If the changes didn't work, I'd put it back the way it was. I started looking at other stories, not just for entertainment, but so I could see how the masters crafted their scenes, flowed their dialog, and built their settings.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It's a different way to look at story, but for a writer it's much more useful.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Here's an experiment for you. In your current story, go back to a previous scene and change something major. Have a character get hurt so they can't have that conversation or can't accomplish their goal right then. Or put a different character into the scene and watch what happens. For me, the story re-flows around the change all the way to the end. I can then decide which path to take.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Have fun. Experiment. And keep writing.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;i&gt;* I went searching for a picture that would show that "there's more than one path you can take." I think &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/flem007_uk/"&gt;Mike Fleming&lt;/a&gt; captured it with this one. I like it. If you like it too, you can check out his work on &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/flem007_uk/3035417754/"&gt;Flickr&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-6414333324320742850?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/6414333324320742850/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=6414333324320742850&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/6414333324320742850?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/6414333324320742850?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/03/becoming-writer.html" title="Becoming a Writer" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-0S5cvBHRwPU/T09-q9OAQFI/AAAAAAAAAIw/lhkzswC_zu0/s72-c/3035417754_635de1ba0b.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;C0EEQ3c-eSp7ImA9WhRbFk0.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-7781119024204342684</id><published>2012-02-07T02:00:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2012-02-07T02:00:02.951-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2012-02-07T02:00:02.951-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><title>The Great Barren Blog</title><content type="html">I know. I haven't posted in a long time. I thought about regaling you with all the crazy things that happened in December and January, but then I read this comic.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
So, no horror stories today.&lt;br /&gt;
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(Now, for those who are worried about me, don't be. Nothing was terminal or so bad that it hasn't been completely solved by now. Just events in life ganging up on us for awhile.)&lt;br /&gt;
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It wasn't all bad though. I read some awesome books. I learned the importance of market research. I had a friend hit #2 in her category on Amazon and then signed with an agent. I had a birthday.&amp;nbsp;Plus, I've been asked a few technical questions I need to answer.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's good to see you all again.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* &lt;a href="http://xkcd.com/1006/"&gt;xkcd&lt;/a&gt; is geeky comic that is funny, insightful, and quite often so profound it keeps me pondering for hours and sometimes days. Every once in a while a comic uses strong language, just in case you don't want to see that.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-7781119024204342684?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/7781119024204342684/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=7781119024204342684&amp;isPopup=true" title="1 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/7781119024204342684?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/7781119024204342684?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2012/02/great-barren-blog.html" title="The Great Barren Blog" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CUcFRngyeip7ImA9WhRWEU0.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-4913149956234862399</id><published>2011-12-28T09:55:00.002-06:00</published><updated>2011-12-28T14:10:17.692-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-12-28T14:10:17.692-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fun" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="board games" /><title>Tales of the Arabian Nights (Board Game)</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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Each year whooshes by faster and faster.
The last few months have been a whirlwind and the next couple don't look much better, but I did take some time off to hang out with my family.&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope everyone had a Merry Christmas and got to spend time with those you care about.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;
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One of my Christmas gifts this year was a cool board game called &lt;a href="http://www.zmangames.com/boardgames/tales_arabian_nights.htm"&gt;Tales of the Arabian Nights&lt;/a&gt;. When I first hefted the gift, I thought it was filled with bricks, but it wasn't. It was full of pages and pages of game material. It's like a choose-your-own-adventure on steroids.&lt;/div&gt;
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Unlike most board games, this one is about the story and less about the winning. If you're the kind of person who MUST.WIN.GAME. then you might not enjoy this. To be honest, I'm fairly competitive but I'm able to turn that off for this game. It's really fun to see all the crazy things that happen. Sometimes the fates are on your side, sometimes they're not.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;
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I enjoy creating a story as I go along. Here's how it works. Everyone starts the game with a random quest. You can ignore this quest if you want, but I like to build my whole character around it. Last night I discovered my father was the King of Thieves and I had to steal some awesome loot in order to take over as his heir.&lt;/div&gt;
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I traveled through the desert and mountains to Constantinople. The first person I tried to rob enslaved me, then I had to go searching for money to buy my freedom. After many turns, I escaped slavery and obtained one of the quest relics. Huzzah! On my way across the sea to India I aided a prince and successfully escaped a merman attack. The next person I robbed threw me in jail where I rotted for many turns. But it turned out to be a good thing because I met a jailer who taught me some skills that I used to get the last relic and claimed my title.&lt;/div&gt;
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I didn't win the game, but I had a blast trying to fit the crazy encounters into a cohesive story.&lt;/div&gt;
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If you like stories and board games, and have a couple hours to play. You might enjoy this game. I know I do. And my older kids do too.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* The image of the cover of the game belongs to &lt;a href="http://www.zmangames.com/"&gt;Z-Man games&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-4913149956234862399?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/4913149956234862399/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=4913149956234862399&amp;isPopup=true" title="0 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/4913149956234862399?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/4913149956234862399?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/12/2011-drawing-to-close.html" title="Tales of the Arabian Nights (Board Game)" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-XVKXzgYDs_I/Tvs1WR_H0dI/AAAAAAAAAIo/m9_knXit5yY/s72-c/AN_cover.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DUIHSX88cSp7ImA9WhRQE0Q.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5370461623499903609</id><published>2011-12-08T20:25:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2011-12-08T20:25:38.179-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-12-08T20:25:38.179-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book review" /><title>Bound by C.K. Bryant (Book Review)</title><content type="html">&lt;div&gt;
&lt;i&gt;I know I promised shorter posts, but I had a hard time cutting this one down.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/BOUND-The-Crystor-ebook/dp/B005U3TPBW/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1321520783&amp;amp;sr=8-1"&gt;Bound&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://www.christinebryant.blogspot.com/"&gt;C. K. Bryant&lt;/a&gt; is like a YA Paranormal with romance, tension, action, and suspense. It also adds elements of magic, alchemy, and pseudo-science fiction to create a unique backdrop that shows off strong characters and compelling scenes.&lt;br /&gt;
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The story starts with Kira—your typical high school girl—and her best friend Lydia, then continues to grow in scope all the way through to the end.&lt;/div&gt;
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As a debut novel, Christine delivers a good story. She has strong scenes and does an excellent job evoking emotion. For me, the story slowed down in the middle, but it picked up at the end in a big way. Christine writes strong, complex characters with internal motivations and feelings.&lt;/div&gt;
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If you're not into indie published books because of the low quality, you don't have to worry about this one. The whole book from cover, to layout, to editing was clean and very professional.&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;(Warning: A few minor spoilers ahead.)&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
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There was one aspect of the story that bothered me so much, I almost didn't write this review. Octavion, the male lead in the story, has several weaknesses. One of them is physical aggression. This is not new to the YA Paranormal genre, but in this story it crossed the line to physical abuse.&lt;/div&gt;
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I've known several women who have lived through abuse, and I guess that makes me especially sensitive. It is devastating. The women I know still feel its effects many, many years later.&lt;/div&gt;
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I'm not telling you these things to scare you away from this book, but I need to tell you a few more things.&lt;/div&gt;
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During the story Octavion shoves Kira several times, slams her against a tree, chokes her, holds her bodily against a car while she tries to escape, drugs her, kidnaps her, takes her to a place he knows is dangerous and she ends up breaking her arm, etc. After each of these episodes, he is extremely apologetic and even ashamed. Which is pretty typical in an abusive relationship.&lt;/div&gt;
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With all this in mind, I was surprised to read the following reviews:&lt;/div&gt;
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"Octavion . . . gives opportunities for swooning if you're the swooning type." - &lt;a href="http://theauthoritativeme.blogspot.com/2011/10/bound-book-review.html"&gt;Mere Motherhood&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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"Believe me, Octavion will make you swoon." - &lt;a href="http://writing4me2.blogspot.com/"&gt;Writing 4 Me&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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"Favorite moments involve a waterfall and a shirtless hottie named Octavian, . . . and some great kissing scenes that leave Kira—the main character—and the reader breathless." - &lt;a href="http://nicholegiles.blogspot.com/"&gt;Randomish&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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"Octavion . . . is a total hottie." - &lt;a href="http://www.rachellewrites.blogspot.com/"&gt;Rachelle's Writing Spot&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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"Octavion from Bound is one of my favorite new heroes, and I have to say, I'm a happily married woman, but he did make my heart go pitty-pat at least a couple of times." - &lt;a href="http://tristipinkston.blogspot.com/"&gt;Tristi Pinkston&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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"Octavian is a hot bundle of man that I'd love to meet one day." - &lt;a href="http://cindymhogan.blogspot.com/"&gt;Cindy M. Hogan&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Then I realized something. Christine got it right.&lt;/div&gt;
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There is something in the psyche of a woman that is drawn to the dangerous man. Just like there is something in the male psyche drawn to the mean girl. It's not an admirable part of us, but it's there. And Christine captured it in her story.&lt;/div&gt;
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The real world is not a perfect place, and neither is Bound. I know Octavion can find redemption someday, but I hope it's with someone else and after he spends a couple years in prison because Kira deserves so much better.&lt;/div&gt;
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It's not often that a fiction story (and a YA Paranormal at that) makes me think about a topic this deeply. I've wrestled my thoughts and emotions for weeks. I feel I have a better understanding why women stay in these dangerous relationships.&amp;nbsp;So, I encourage you to go out and read the book, then let me know what you think in the comments.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5370461623499903609?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5370461623499903609/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5370461623499903609&amp;isPopup=true" title="11 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5370461623499903609?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5370461623499903609?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/bound-by-ck-bryant-book-review.html" title="Bound by C.K. Bryant (Book Review)" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>11</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;Dk8FQHk8eCp7ImA9WhRQEUg.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5078141789837550862</id><published>2011-12-06T01:00:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2011-12-06T01:00:11.770-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-12-06T01:00:11.770-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Blogger" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Technical Tuesday" /><title>After Dynamic Views (Technical Tuesday)</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8WooDRZTlLA/Tt2R7nzd_II/AAAAAAAAAIc/QWdZpcqScG0/s1600/2505375131_fb85c1b501_edited.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8WooDRZTlLA/Tt2R7nzd_II/AAAAAAAAAIc/QWdZpcqScG0/s320/2505375131_fb85c1b501_edited.jpg" width="213" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;Life after NaNoWriMo is finally getting back to some kind of normal. I'll be posting a few of my thoughts on NaNo later, but for this Technical Tuesday I'm going to report on my other grand experiment: Dynamic Views.&lt;br /&gt;
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I switched my blog over a few months ago. During that time I tried most of the different views.&amp;nbsp;In the end, I decided to go back to my previous template. Here's why.&lt;/div&gt;
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From the moment I switched to Dynamic Views my page count skyrocketed. I expected this.&lt;br /&gt;
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Take a look at a normal template. When you visit the main page it shows the latest 10 posts all at once. This counts as 1 page view. You see, Blogger doesn't know if you read one post or all 10. It just knows you loaded the page.&lt;/div&gt;
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Dynmic Views are different. They only load what they need to. As the user scrolls down, it loads more and more posts. Each of these count as a page view. This means that if the person scrolled down through your first 7 posts, Blogger would count 7 page views.&lt;/div&gt;
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I'm sorry to burst your bubble if you thought your blog became 10x more popular after switching to Dynamic Views. It probably didn't.&lt;/div&gt;
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The real problem for me was the stats for individual posts didn't work the same. In other words, Blogger was counting how many total page views, but not which ones belonged to which post. This was annoying because I like to see which of my posts are most popular, but I couldn't figure out a way to do that.&lt;br /&gt;
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For example, I had several thousand page views in October, but my most popular post was visited only 85 times. Really? Compound that with the fact that I had less than 40 posts published and you begin to see the problem. Where were all those "total page views" going?&lt;/div&gt;
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I'm not a big fan of sidebars, but they do serve a purpose.&lt;br /&gt;
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It may surprise you, but I don't blog just to see myself write. (Okay, maybe that wasn't a big surprise.) I want to build a platform I can use for other pursuits. I use the sidebar for that.&amp;nbsp;My sidebar has an overview of the blog and information about me.&lt;/div&gt;
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Also, my sidebar is used to spotlight posts and other places I think deserve a little extra attention. I have a place for my most popular posts, my friends and followers. In the future, I plan on featuring books and articles I've written.&lt;/div&gt;
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The Dynamic Views didn't have any of this. They allowed my posts to be front-and-center, but they didn't allow for much else.&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Confusion&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
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The Dynamic Views didn't look enough like a blog. Sure they looked cool, but they were different enough that some people had a hard time figuring out what they could click on and what they couldn't.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;
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Sometimes readers had to click to read the entire post. A lot of people didn't do that. I know, that's mostly my fault. I could write posts better to have a hook "above the fold", but I didn't.&lt;/div&gt;
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There you have my biggest concerns with the Dynamic Views.&lt;br /&gt;
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From a technology perspective, I thought they were pretty cool. I like the dynamic loading, and if the stats issue could be resolved that would be a great thing. I think I could live without the sidebar if there were more ways to customize the layout and the look.&lt;/div&gt;
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All in all, I enjoyed this little experiment and I hope to try more things like this in the future.&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;*&amp;nbsp;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;I can see why this castle is in ruins. Who knew it was built on such a slope?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;Babak Fakhamzadeh did a great job of "framing" it though. You can find this and other photos with frames on &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/mastababa/2505375131/"&gt;Flickr&lt;/a&gt;.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5078141789837550862?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5078141789837550862/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5078141789837550862&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5078141789837550862?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5078141789837550862?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/12/after-dynamic-views-technical-tuesday.html" title="After Dynamic Views (Technical Tuesday)" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8WooDRZTlLA/Tt2R7nzd_II/AAAAAAAAAIc/QWdZpcqScG0/s72-c/2505375131_fb85c1b501_edited.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DkIGQH0-eSp7ImA9WhRSGUo.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-170156463318637145</id><published>2011-11-22T08:59:00.001-06:00</published><updated>2011-11-22T09:08:41.351-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-11-22T09:08:41.351-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><title>Some Housekeeping</title><content type="html">&lt;b&gt;I Like that Old Time Blog Template&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going back to the old look for awhile. My experiment with Dynamic Views was fun and I learned a lot. I'll be posting about that soon.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;We are the Champions of NaNoWriMo&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I crossed the 50K word goal, so I WON! Hooray! I'll be posting about that soon too. Now that I have time to get back onto a normal blogging schedule.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Who Wrote the Book of Paranormal?&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I have at least one book I'm going to review. Maybe two.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Y'all Ready for This?&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, there's a lot to catch up on, and the holidays are sneaking up on me like an elephant on a Harley. I'm sure you all feel the same way.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're still working on NaNo—KEEP WRITING!&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're not working on Nano—KEEP WRITING or READING or RUNNING or WOOD WORKING or whatever you do for personal fulfillment.&lt;br /&gt;
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See you soon.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-170156463318637145?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/170156463318637145/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=170156463318637145&amp;isPopup=true" title="0 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/170156463318637145?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/170156463318637145?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/some-housekeeping.html" title="Some Housekeeping" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;A0IHQ3gzeSp7ImA9WhRSFEw.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-2067087510613392233</id><published>2011-11-15T22:55:00.000-06:00</published><updated>2011-11-15T22:58:52.681-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-11-15T22:58:52.681-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>I'm Sad</title><content type="html">Don't worry about me. I'm sad for a good reason.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've reached the point in my story where the MC is at the lowest. He and his friends are in the hospital. Despite his best efforts, he's lost Thor's hammer, gloves, and belt. Some people who were on his side turned out to be traitors. He's failed in his quest and has no hope of succeeding. I feel so bad for him.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been at this point in stories before. It's always hard emotionally, but this story seems to be even more acute. Since I haven't planned anything ahead of time, I don't have any idea how he's going to succeed either.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm interested to see what the next 15K words have in store, both for my MC and for me.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-2067087510613392233?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/2067087510613392233/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=2067087510613392233&amp;isPopup=true" title="4 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2067087510613392233?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2067087510613392233?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/im-sad.html" title="I'm Sad" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;DUYEQHg7cCp7ImA9WhRSE0s.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-6124039947312934238</id><published>2011-11-15T07:43:00.001-06:00</published><updated>2011-11-15T08:25:01.608-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-11-15T08:25:01.608-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="goals" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="humor" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="advice" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>Keeping Track of NaNoWriMo IRL (In Real Life)</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ChpJyoJGwM8/TsJxvwCVEhI/AAAAAAAAAIE/UnmzTg8-ro8/s1600/martanails.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ChpJyoJGwM8/TsJxvwCVEhI/AAAAAAAAAIE/UnmzTg8-ro8/s320/martanails.jpg" width="248" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
I bet you're wondering why I have a picture of pretty fingernails on my blog today.&lt;br /&gt;
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My friend and fellow writer, Marta Smith has an awesome way she keeps her NaNoWriMo status. She&amp;nbsp;paints her fingernails blue, and I mean Blue.&amp;nbsp;&lt;a href="http://martaosmith.blogspot.com/2011/11/nanowrimo-or-why-my-nails-are-blue_14.html"&gt;That's to remind her to write&lt;/a&gt;. Then she adds silver crackle to one nail for every 5,000 words she finishes. So her fingernails become a visible progress bar. Isn't that awesome!&lt;br /&gt;
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I just have one problem: I'm a guy, and as much as I would totally paint my fingernails as a joke or for Halloween, I'm not going to go to work all month with painted fingernails.&lt;br /&gt;
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So, here are a few ideas for my fellow dudes to track our NaNo status IRL. (Dudettes, you can use them too if you want.)&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Public Shaming Option&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Go ahead and paint your fingernails just like Marta. Choose a bright, bold color. Then for every 5K words you can &lt;i&gt;remove &lt;/i&gt;the paint from one nail.&lt;br /&gt;
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I predict that the guys who use this option will be finished with their 50K before the first work day of the month (or they'll take a couple sick days).&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Discomfort Option #1&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
While this one is not as effective as the first, it hits a little closer to the wallet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Go get 10 credit-card-sized cards. These can be from your stash of store rewards cards you barely use, or credit cards, old calling cards, empty gift cards, whatever. You just need 10. Cram them into your wallet. You've got to sit on that uncomfortable beast until you hit your word count goals. For every 5K words take one out.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Discomfort Option #2&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
This one is similar to the other discomfort option. This time get 10 extra keys and put them on your primary key ring. Not the one you keep in your bag or on your nightstand. I'm talking about the keys you carry with you in your pocket everywhere you go. Painful, I know. But for every 5K words you get to take a key off.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Reverse Progress Bar&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Go buy 10 of your favorite candy. Go ahead and get the good stuff, king-sized if you want. When you get home, hot glue all of it to some poster board. For every 5K words, take one off and enjoy. Bonus: If hot glue and poster board isn't manly enough for you feel free to epoxy those suckers to a 2x4.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;b&gt;Discomfort Option #3&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
This one takes a bit more setup. Get an old T-shirt you don't wear anymore. I know you've got dozens of them. Then buy some&amp;nbsp;Velcro&amp;nbsp;(the kind that already has glue on the back) and 10 bean bags (you can usually pick these up for cheap at your local Goodwill). Attach the bean bags to the shirt with the&amp;nbsp;Velcro. Make sure you use the soft side of the&amp;nbsp;Velcro&amp;nbsp;on the T-shirt.&lt;br /&gt;
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Throw that lumpy mass of cloth and beans into your favorite recliner or your spot on the couch. You have to sit on it while watching TV, but for every 5K words you finish you can take one bean bag off the shirt.&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope these ideas inspire some of my fellow writers to keep typing...Keep Typing...KEEP TYPING. We're halfway through. Huzzah!&lt;br /&gt;
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If you have other creative ways to motivate you through Nano let me know in the comments.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* The photo is a real picture of &lt;a href="http://martaosmith.blogspot.com/"&gt;Marta&lt;/a&gt;'s nails near the beginning of the month. I think it was taken by &lt;a href="http://www.alicross.com/"&gt;Ali Cross&lt;/a&gt;. If you want to use it you'll have to get a hold of them. Thanks Ali and Marta for sharing this cool idea.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-6124039947312934238?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/6124039947312934238/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=6124039947312934238&amp;isPopup=true" title="8 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/6124039947312934238?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/6124039947312934238?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/keeping-track-of-nanowrimo-irl-in-real.html" title="Keeping Track of NaNoWriMo IRL (In Real Life)" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ChpJyoJGwM8/TsJxvwCVEhI/AAAAAAAAAIE/UnmzTg8-ro8/s72-c/martanails.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>8</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CkAMRHwyeip7ImA9WhRSEUs.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5241010003266538739</id><published>2011-11-12T21:29:00.001-06:00</published><updated>2011-11-12T23:06:25.292-06:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-11-12T23:06:25.292-06:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="goals" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="me" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>My NaNoWriMo Groove</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-LouQc4Ye9Vs/Tr9PW9nZrMI/AAAAAAAAAH8/DnaVNoc2kgU/s1600/6069279608_6d458525c3.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="400" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-LouQc4Ye9Vs/Tr9PW9nZrMI/AAAAAAAAAH8/DnaVNoc2kgU/s400/6069279608_6d458525c3.jpg" width="266" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
The other day Heather Justesen blogged about &lt;a href="http://heatherjustesen.blogspot.com/2011/11/how-i-won-nano-in-five-days.html"&gt;how she was able to win NaNoWriMo in 5 days&lt;/a&gt;. 5 days! She talked about her strategies and process for churning out 10K words a day.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been writing for NaNoWriMo, too.&amp;nbsp;My current word count is 28,126. Which means I'm on track to winning. Hooray!&lt;br /&gt;
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My goal for this NaNoWriMo challenge was to practice some new things. One of those things was to &lt;b&gt;write without an outline&lt;/b&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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Scary.&lt;br /&gt;
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I admit, I'm a hard-nosed planner. Just ask my writers group.&amp;nbsp;All through October I wanted to make an outline or at least some notes, but I resisted. I don't know if that was the best decision, but I wanted to try writing completely by the seat of my pants at least once.&lt;/div&gt;
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Seriously, how can you know if your way is best if you don't try other ways?&lt;br /&gt;
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I started strong. Even though I resisted planning, I'd had the beginning scenes bouncing around in my head. But by day 4 I felt like I was on the edge of washing out.&amp;nbsp;I didn't know where my story was going. I didn't know who the bad guy was, or even all the good guys. Did I mention this was scary for me?&lt;/div&gt;
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It's been 12 days now, and it's not bad. I have quite the groove going. Here's how it breaks down.&lt;/div&gt;
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Each day, I grab a voice recorder and record the next couple scenes as they come to me. I usually do this while I'm driving somewhere or when I'm out for a walk. I just let the story flow. Sometimes I'm talking in first person, sometimes third, sometimes I end up recording stuff that sounds more like stage directions than a novel. I jump back and forth in time. In short, it's a cobbled together skeleton of a scene.&lt;/div&gt;
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I tried doing this without the recorder (just talking to myself), but it didn't feel right. Having the recorder makes the process work. I don't know why.&lt;/div&gt;
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Later in the day, I&amp;nbsp;sit down and type what I recorded. I end up making a lot of tweaks and changes, but it follows the same basic flow.&lt;/div&gt;
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I've been surprised to find that as soon as a scene is recorded, I can move on to the next one. If I don't record a scene it stays in my head like a road block keeping me from thinking of the next ones.&lt;/div&gt;
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So far it's been a fun journey. I've learned that my imagination won't fail me. I don't know if pantsing is for me. I'm not done with the month yet, so it might grow on me.&lt;/div&gt;
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What works best for you during the drafting process?&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* I've always been fascinated by these slot canyons. Sadly, I never visited them while I lived in Utah, but I don't let my guilt keep me from enjoying awesome photographs like this one by Damian Michalski on &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/fotocination/6069279608/"&gt;Flickr&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5241010003266538739?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5241010003266538739/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5241010003266538739&amp;isPopup=true" title="1 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5241010003266538739?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5241010003266538739?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/my-nanowrimo-groove.html" title="My NaNoWriMo Groove" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-LouQc4Ye9Vs/Tr9PW9nZrMI/AAAAAAAAAH8/DnaVNoc2kgU/s72-c/6069279608_6d458525c3.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;Dk8HR3k-cSp7ImA9WhRTFEw.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-3240515937251690586</id><published>2011-11-04T08:53:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2011-11-04T08:53:56.759-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-11-04T08:53:56.759-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="humor" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="inspiration" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>NaNoWriMo Update</title><content type="html">As you know, I'm writing a story for NaNoWriMo that is tentatively titled "I Can Finish This Story in a Month".&lt;br /&gt;
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It's a small thing, but since I double click on that file hundreds of times it's nice to get the little cheerleader in the back of my mind saying, "I Can Finish This Story in a Month".&lt;br /&gt;
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So far things are going well. I've written&amp;nbsp;over 9,000 words. Hooray!&lt;br /&gt;
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Here are few decent quotes.&lt;br /&gt;
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"We're going to have to run for it." It was a long way around the school. We didn't have much time left, but we could still make it.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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I ran to the right, but when I looked back Terry ran to the left. "This way. It's shorter."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"Yes, but this way is faster because you can go faster on the playground."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"Shorter is shorter."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"Faster is faster."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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"Fine. You go your way and I'll go mine." &lt;/blockquote&gt;
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The bell was about the ring, I could feel it. We were going to be late. I didn't wait for him to say anything, I just ran. I didn't even look to see if Terry had come to his senses and followed me. I pounded my feet into the ground and swung my arms hard. I took the first corner and cut across the lawn. My heart started to beat faster and I breathed harder. Sucking air in and out. I weaved between a tree and the flower garden out front where they have the sign that shows all the important dates. Pizza day was coming up soon. I rounded the front of the school. My legs started to get tired, but I kept going.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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There were no cars parked on the curb and all the busses were gone. This was a bad sign. I couldn't see Terry yet, but he'd be coming around his corner soon. We could still make it.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Brrrrrrrrringggggggg!&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Or not.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Poor Arthur, he was late for school. Then later that night:&lt;/div&gt;
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I dreamed I was leading an army of ninjas disguised as guitar playing rock stars against Scott's army of paper sailboats, when someone turned on the lights in my room. It was a good thing too because, surprisingly, Scott was winning. I squinted my eyes shut even harder and brought the blankets over my head. "Not yet, Mom. I'm still tired."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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The blankets didn't help. The light shone right through. Ugh. School always came too early. I slipped my head under my pillow then I remembered, today was Saturday. Were we going on a trip? I lifted up one side of the sheets to look at my clock. "It's two in the morning. I want to sleep."&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Mom still didn't say anything. That wasn't like her. I felt a strange flicker in my head and along my back. It was like a little bit of electricity going up and down my body. I shivered and slowly pulled back my sheets. The whole room was so bright I couldn't see anything. I covered my eyes with both hands and tried to look through a little crack in one side.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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Mom wasn't standing in her normal spot by the lightswitch. Maybe she was getting out clothes. &lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;blockquote class="tr_bq"&gt;
I spun my head and had to wait even longer for my eyes to adjust. I had one eye mostly uncovered when I saw the body builder. He was huge. His head almost touched the ceiling, his hair and beard was bright red, and he had muscles everywhere. I know because he was only wearing a pair of swim trunks with bright blue flowers printed on them. I pulled the covers over my head again.&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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To be honest, I don't know how well these quotes will read. I usually like to let things settle in my mind for a few days, but during Nano that's not an option. So, you get what you get.&lt;/div&gt;
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Are you participating in NaNoWriMo this year? If so, WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING? (Just giving a little helpful encouragement, that's all.)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-3240515937251690586?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/3240515937251690586/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=3240515937251690586&amp;isPopup=true" title="2 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/3240515937251690586?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/3240515937251690586?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/11/nanowrimo-update.html" title="NaNoWriMo Update" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;CUEBRnszeCp7ImA9WhdaGEQ.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-2673525918295567918</id><published>2011-10-29T08:07:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2011-10-29T08:07:37.580-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-10-29T08:07:37.580-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="goals" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="inspiration" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="advice" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Pomodoro Technique" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>Pomodoro Technique - Surviving NaNoWriMo</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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This is my first year participating in NaNoWriMo, but as a computer programmer I'm no stranger to huge deadlines that require long-term focus to get done.&lt;br /&gt;
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When work is mounting and time is dwindling I turn to the Pomodoro Technique to get me through the "hell weeks" with my sanity intact.&amp;nbsp;It's simple. It's easy. It's powerful. And it strikes a good balance between pedal-to-the-medal activity and all-work-and-no-play-makes-John-a-dull-boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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All you need to make this work is a simple timer. You've probably got one in your kitchen or on your phone. Either of those will work great. If you don't have one, I'll put some recommendations at the end of this post.&lt;br /&gt;
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Step 1) Set your timer for 25 minutes. Put it somewhere you can see it.&amp;nbsp;Start typing.&lt;br /&gt;
Step 2) When the timer dings, stop typing and save your work.&lt;br /&gt;
Step 3) Set your timer for 5 minutes and take a break.&amp;nbsp;When the timer dings, go back to Step 1.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's it. Like I said it's simple, but it works.&lt;br /&gt;
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If anyone tries to interrupt you, point to the timer and tell them you'll be free in 11 minutes, or whatever your timer says. Then go back to work. There are very few things that can't wait a few minutes.&lt;br /&gt;
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One of the keys, is to stop when the timer dings. Stop right then. Immediately. If you're in the middle of a sentence that's even better. It will help you get back into writing when you return from your break. Don't be tempted to keep going. You'll wear yourself out.&lt;br /&gt;
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When I stop immediately, I've found that I get a burst of productivity when there's about five minutes left. When I don't follow the "Stop Immediately" rule I don't get this burst of productivity.&lt;br /&gt;
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During your breaks, don't work on your manuscript. Sure, you'll end up having thoughts about your story, but try to make your break count. Stand up, walk away from the computer, stretch a little. Chat with a friend. Handle any of the interruptions that popped up. Anything except writing your story.&lt;br /&gt;
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Then make sure to sit back down when the timer dings.&lt;br /&gt;
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This technique does wonders for me. I hope you find it useful as well.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;More Information&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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This post just scratches the surface. Go out to &lt;a href="http://www.pomodorotechnique.com/"&gt;www.pomodorotechnique.com&lt;/a&gt; to learn even more about this amazing idea.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Timers&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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If you need a timer there are a lot out there.&lt;br /&gt;
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On Windows or Mac I've used &lt;a href="http://www.focusboosterapp.com/"&gt;FocusBooster&lt;/a&gt;. They have an online version and a desktop version. I've also heard good things about &lt;a href="http://www.tomighty.org/about"&gt;Tomighty&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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On both Android and iPhone there are built-in timer applications. They will work just fine.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want to download an app. On Android, I use &lt;a href="http://www.pomodroido.com/"&gt;Pomodroido&lt;/a&gt;. It's easy to use. It keeps track of how many sessions you've done and you can "level up" as you do more.&lt;br /&gt;
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Since I don't have an iPhone, I don't have any recommendations here. All I can do is point you to this review by &lt;a href="http://thenextweb.com/lifehacks/2010/05/17/5-great-productivity-apps-for-iphone-owning-pomodoro-fans/"&gt;The Next Web&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;that looks useful.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* Ooooo! Now I'm hungry for a tomato sandwich. The tomato picture was taken by photon_de and can be found on &lt;a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/photon_de/2700323949/"&gt;Flickr&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-2673525918295567918?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/2673525918295567918/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=2673525918295567918&amp;isPopup=true" title="8 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2673525918295567918?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/2673525918295567918?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/10/pomodoro-technique-surviving-nanowrimo.html" title="Pomodoro Technique - Surviving NaNoWriMo" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-K0TZLh1yka8/TqbazdKv66I/AAAAAAAAAHo/TMGSsZNUxSI/s72-c/2700323949_591c921968.jpg" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>8</thr:total></entry><entry gd:etag="W/&quot;D0YARng5eCp7ImA9WhdaFUg.&quot;"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7663364954026725260.post-5836447170100050923</id><published>2011-10-25T10:05:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2011-10-25T10:05:47.620-05:00</updated><app:edited xmlns:app="http://www.w3.org/2007/app">2011-10-25T10:05:47.620-05:00</app:edited><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="NaNoWriMo" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="tip" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="advice" /><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing" /><title>NaNoWriMo Preparation</title><content type="html">&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;
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NaNoWriMo is less than . . . Seven. Days. Away. AAAAAAAAAAGH!&lt;br /&gt;
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You should have seen the looks on my kids faces when I ran screaming from the room. It was a curious mix of "My Dad's a goofball" and "Not again." I think I also detected some eye-rolling. I guess they know me too well.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're like me, there are still some things you need to get ready for NaNoWriMo. My wife wrote several great blog posts on the topic. I recommend you read them.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;ul&gt;
&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.queenoftheclan.com/2011/10/prepping-your-family-for-nanowrimo.html"&gt;Preparing your family&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.queenoftheclan.com/2011/10/nanowrimo-whats-your-goal.html"&gt;Setting goals that work for you&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.queenoftheclan.com/2011/10/nanowrimo-plot-and-conflict.html"&gt;Discovering plot and conflict in your story&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
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I know she has other posts planned, so you'll have to check back to learn more.&lt;/div&gt;
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I'm usually a plotter when it comes to writing, but this year I'm trying something different. I'm attempting to "pants" a novel. You know, like, write it by the seat of my pants. It's a little scary for me, but I'm also curious to see how well it works. I've never done it, so who knows? Maybe the story will turn out better.&lt;/div&gt;
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If you're a pantser as well, you'll enjoy Elana Johnson's post on how she gears up for NaNoWriMo. I did.&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://elanajohnson.blogspot.com/2011/10/how-to-gear-up-for-nanowrimo.html"&gt;How to gear up for NaNoWriMo.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
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The votes are in. I'm going to write the Middle Grade Fantasy story about Arthur and Thor. Not only did it get the most votes (thanks guys), but I think it will work better with my pantsing experiment. Middle Grade is supposed to be quirky and evoke a strong sense of wonder.&lt;/div&gt;
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I'll be posting a few more thoughts on NaNoWriMo this week, so stay tuned.&lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;i&gt;* The NaNoWriMo logo belongs to the Office of Letters and Light. To learn more about NaNoWriMo or to participate visit &lt;a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/"&gt;NaNoWriMo.org&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7663364954026725260-5836447170100050923?l=www.johnwaverly.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel="replies" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/feeds/5836447170100050923/comments/default" title="Post Comments" /><link rel="replies" type="text/html" href="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7663364954026725260&amp;postID=5836447170100050923&amp;isPopup=true" title="0 Comments" /><link rel="edit" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5836447170100050923?v=2" /><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7663364954026725260/posts/default/5836447170100050923?v=2" /><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.johnwaverly.com/2011/10/nanowrimo-preparation.html" title="NaNoWriMo Preparation" /><author><name>John Waverly</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16713672229062119995</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail" width="32" height="32" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VMfLRxf9Xt8/Tg5lzIXtwyI/AAAAAAAAABw/_Ei5k60_S8I/s220/Blogger%2BProfile%2B02.jpg" /></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xoe-_LsrhHc/TqbObfa4nZI/AAAAAAAAAHg/jXpm4FcMHDI/s72-c/1222416_com_nano_logo_.png" height="72" width="72" /><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry></feed>

