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	<title>Karen Reddick, The Editor's Blog</title>
	
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		<title>Single Most</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=164</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2011 14:08:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[People often ask me, &#8220;What&#8217;s the single most common error you read while editing a manuscript?&#8221; I need look no further than that question itself. While single most isn&#8217;t the worst grammar gaffe, it does make many an editor cringe. The phrase is redundant. Simply saying most, which is already superlative and doesn&#8217;t need any [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>People often ask me, &#8220;What&#8217;s the single most common error you read while editing a manuscript?&#8221; </p>
<p>I need look no further than that question itself. While <em>single most</em> isn&#8217;t the worst grammar gaffe, it does make many an editor cringe. The phrase is redundant. Simply saying <em>most</em>, which is already superlative and doesn&#8217;t need any help. </p>
<p>And while we are at it, avoid <em>absolute best</em> and <em>absolute worst</em>.</p>
<p>Happy writing!</p>
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		<title>I.E. vs. E.G.</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=160</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Sep 2010 15:07:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Editing/Proofreading Tips]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Many people think these two words are interchangeable, but they are not. i.e. means that is, in other words, or more commonly, namely. The Latin term is id est. e.g. means for example. The Latin term is exempli gratia. The easiest way to remember this is to use the rule of association: i.e. means in [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many people think these two words are interchangeable, but they are not.</p>
<p><strong>i.e.</strong> means <em>that is, in other words</em>, or more commonly, <em>namely</em>. The Latin term is <em>id est</em>.</p>
<p><strong>e.g. </strong>means f<em>or example</em>. The Latin term is <em>exempli gratia</em>.</p>
<p>The easiest way to remember this is to use the rule of association: <em>i.e.</em> means <strong>in</strong> other words, and that <strong>is</strong>; both have the letter &#8220;i.&#8221;</p>
<p>And, <em>e.g.</em> means for <strong>example</strong>; both have an &#8220;e.&#8221;</p>
<p>It should, also, be noted that <strong>i.e.</strong> and <strong>e.g.</strong> are not italicized, and they are best used in lists, parenthetical statements, and citations rather than in text.</p>
<p><strong>Example</strong>:<br />
The U.S. has many states that begin with the letter A (i.e., Alabama, Alaska, Arizona).<br />
French fries go well with dipping sauce (e.g., ketchup, ranch dressing).</p>
<p>When it comes to using these terms in text, it is more acceptable to write out the meaning instead of using the abbreviation.</p>
<p><strong>Example</strong>:<br />
The U.S. has many states that begin with the letter A; namely (or in other words, that is), Alabama, Alaska, Arizona.<br />
French fries go well with a dipping sauce, for example, ketchup, ranch dressing.</p>
<p>A quick word about punctuation. Because these are abbreviations, always use a period after each letter (but no spaces) and it is recommended by most style manuals to use a comma following <strong>i.e.</strong> and <strong>e.g.</strong> just as you would if you were spelling them out.</p>
<p>Happy writing!</p>
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		<title>Toward vs. Towards</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=157</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Apr 2010 16:56:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Grammar Help]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Word Choices]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[Both of these words are correct and interchangeable. You can use either one because they mean the same thing, but many reference manuals state that attaching the [s] is used mostly in British English and without the [s] is preferred in American English. Another tidbit about the word toward is its pronunciation. Toward is pronounced [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Both of these words are correct and interchangeable. You can use either one because they mean the same thing, but many reference manuals state that attaching the [s] is used mostly in British English and without the [s] is preferred in American English.</p>
<p>Another tidbit about the word <em>toward</em> is its pronunciation. Toward is pronounced /tord (rhymes with board) &#8212; not /tword or /tward.</p>
<p>Toward, like backward, implies movement.</p>
<p><strong>Examples</strong>:<br />
The horses knew they were headed toward home.<br />
He likes to sit with his back toward the wall.<br />
Mom didn&#8217;t like her teenager&#8217;s attitude toward her father.<br />
He threw in five dollars toward the bill.<br />
Their efforts toward peace were successful.</p>
<p>Happy writing!</p>
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		<title>Acknowledgment vs. Acknowledgement</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=155</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Mar 2010 19:30:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Grammar Help]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[At the beginning of many books, you will see an author has a dedicated page acknowledging those that help with their book. What you might not know is that the preferred spelling in American English is without the medial &#8220;e&#8221; (just like in judgment and abridgment). Keep that in mind next time you can&#8217;t decide [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At the beginning of many books, you will see an author has a dedicated page acknowledging those that help with their book. </p>
<p>What you might not know is that the preferred spelling in American English is without the medial &#8220;e&#8221; (just like in judgment and abridgment). </p>
<p>Keep that in mind next time you can&#8217;t decide which is correct.</p>
<p>Happy writing!</p>
<p>Sources: Garner&#8217;s Modern American Usage, p 15<br />
The American Heritage Dictionary, p 75</p>
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		<title>Yay, Yeah, Yea</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=153</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Mar 2010 15:23:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Many people get confused by the terms yay, yeah, and yea. The word yea is an archaic formal way of saying yes that was used mainly in voting. It&#8217;s the opposite of, and rhymes with, nay. Examples: All in favor of ordering pizza say, yea. All opposed say, nay. When writing the common casual version [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many people get confused by the terms <em>yay</em>, <em>yeah</em>, and <em>yea</em>.</p>
<p>The word <em>yea</em> is an archaic formal way of saying yes that was used mainly in voting. It&#8217;s the opposite of, and rhymes with, <em>nay</em>.</p>
<p><strong>Examples</strong>:<br />
All in favor of ordering pizza say, yea.<br />
All opposed say, nay.</p>
<p>When writing the common casual version of yes the correct spelling is <em>yeah</em> (sounds like yeh).</p>
<p><strong>Examples</strong>:<br />
Yeah, I&#8217;ve heard of that terminology before.<br />
Yeah! Rock and roll lives forever!</p>
<p>The word <em>yay</em> also rhymes with nay but is the opposite of <em>boo</em> (as in the negative, not the scary).</p>
<p><strong>Examples</strong>:<br />
When the piping hot pizza arrived, we all yelled, &#8220;yay!&#8221;<br />
Yay! The concert starts in five minutes!</p>
<p>Happy Writing!</p>
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		<title>Hyphens at the Beginning or Ending of Words</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=145</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 03:50:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Many of us aren&#8217;t sure when to use a hyphen at the beginning or ending of a word. Here are some common beginnings and endings that don&#8217;t usually need a hyphen. Beginnings: anti: The entire group was antiwar. bi: The paychecks come out bimonthly. co: Her book used many coauthors. extra: The student&#8217;s extracurricular schedule [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many of us aren&#8217;t sure when to use a hyphen at the beginning or ending of a word. Here are some common beginnings and endings that don&#8217;t usually need a hyphen.</p>
<p><b>Beginnings</b>:</p>
<p><b>anti</b>: The entire group was antiwar.</p>
<p><b>bi</b>: The paychecks come out bimonthly.</p>
<p><b>co</b>: Her book used many coauthors.</p>
<p><b>extra</b>: The student&#8217;s extracurricular schedule is full.</p>
<p><b>inter</b>: Those two words are interchangeable.</p>
<p><b>micro, mini</b> or <b>multi</b>: The boss&#8217;s micromanagement of the project caused a minicrisis among his multitalented staff.</p>
<p><b>non</b>: Susan chose to be nonpartisan in this election.</p>
<p><b>over</b> and <b>under</b>: It&#8217;s important to be overcautious if serving alcohol when underage children are present.</p>
<p><b>post</b>: He came from the postwar era.</p>
<p><b>semi</b>: He drove that huge semitrailer under that tiny bridge.</p>
<p><b>sub</b> and <b>super</b>: Our subbasement got supersaturated during the flood.</p>
<p><b>Endings</b>:</p>
<p><b>ache</b>: I&#8217;ll trade a headache for a toothache any day.</p>
<p><b>less</b> or <b>more</b>: The ageless soprano can still hit the uppermost notes.</p>
<p><b>like</b>: That painting was so lifelike.</p>
<p><b>wide</b>: Sewer rats are a citywide problem in some parts of the country.</p>
<p>Happy Writing!</p>
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		<title>Enhance the Power of Your Writing</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=140</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2010 18:08:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Grammar Help]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Although important in all communication, choosing the correct words are especially important in writing, where ideas and attitudes are expressed without the help of facial expressions, tone of voice, or gestures. You can enhance the power of your writing by following these guidelines: Use the correct word Beware of confusing words that sound alike and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Although important in all communication, choosing the correct words are especially important in writing, where ideas and attitudes are expressed without the help of facial expressions, tone of voice, or gestures. You can enhance the power of your writing by following these guidelines:</p>
<p><b>Use the correct word</b><br />
Beware of confusing words that sound alike and have related or similar meanings, like <i>imply/infer; convex/concave; disinterested/uninterested; emigrate/immigrate</i>).</p>
<p><b>Example</b>:<br />
<i>imply</i> means to suggest but not express something. &#8220;His silence <i>implied</i> anger.&#8221;<br />
<i>infer</i> means to deduce or arrive at a conclusion from facts on hand. &#8220;We <i>inferred</i> from his tone of voice that he was angry.&#8221;</p>
<p><b>Use descriptive words</b><br />
Whenever possible, use a descriptive word over a vague word. Words such as <i>thing</i> and <i>stuff</i> and weak verbs such as <i>walk, act, move</i> can often be replaced by words that convey a more precise meaning.</p>
<p><b>Example</b>:<br />
<b>Vague</b>: My brother drove up in a rundown car.<br />
<b>Better</b>: My brother sputtered to a stop in his old, dilapidated convertible.</p>
<p><b>Use appropriate words</b><br />
Words that are right in one situation may be wrong in another (e.g., female siblings, is an acceptable expression by itself), but it would be awkward to use as follows:</p>
<p><b>Example</b>:<br />
<b>Awkward</b>: Jan, Sylvia, and I are best friends as well as female siblings.<br />
<b>Better</b>: Jan, Sylvia, and I are best friends as well as sisters.</p>
<p>Happy writing!</p>
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		<title>Using Capitals in Headlines or Articles</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=137</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2010 20:16:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Always capitalize the first and last words both in titles and in subtitles and all other major words (nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and some conjunctions). Lowercase the articles: the, a, and an. Lowercase prepositions, regardless of length, except when they are stressed (i.e., through in A River Runs Through It). Or, when used as [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Always capitalize the first and last words both in titles and in subtitles and all other major words (nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and some conjunctions).</p>
<p>Lowercase the articles: <i>the, a,</i> and <i>an</i>.</p>
<p>Lowercase prepositions, regardless of length, except when they are stressed (i.e., <i>through</i> in <i>A River Runs Through It</i>).</p>
<p><b>Or</b>, when used as adverbs or adjectives:<br />
<i>up</i> in <i>Look Up</i><br />
<i>down</i> in <i>Turn Down</i><br />
<i>on</i> in <i>The On Button</i></p>
<p>Lowercase the conjunctions: <i>and, but, for, or, nor</i>.</p>
<p>Lowercase the words: <i>to</i> and <i>as</i> just for simplicity&#8217;s sake.</p>
<p><b>Examples</b>:<br />
A Little Learning Is a Dangerous Thing<br />
Singing While You Work<br />
Tired but Happy<br />
Taking Down Names, Spelling Them Out, and Typing Them Up<br />
Sitting on the Floor in an Empty Room<br />
Turn On, Tune In, and Enjoy.</p>
<p>Happy Writing!</p>
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		<title>Toward vs. Towards</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=135</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2010 05:36:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Both of these words are correct and interchangeable. You can use either one because they mean the same thing, but many reference manuals state that attaching the [s] is used mostly in British English and without the [s] is preferred in American English. Another tidbit about the word toward is its pronunciation. Toward is pronounced [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Both of these words are correct and interchangeable. You can use either one because they mean the same thing, but many reference manuals state that attaching the [s] is used mostly in British English and without the [s] is preferred in American English.</p>
<p>Another tidbit about the word toward is its pronunciation. Toward is pronounced /tord (rhymes with board) &#8212; not /tword or /tward.</p>
<p>Toward, like backward, implies movement.</p>
<p><b>Examples</b>:<br />
The horses knew they were headed toward home.<br />
He likes to sit with his back toward the wall.<br />
It began to rain toward evening.<br />
Mom didn&#8217;t like her teenager&#8217;s attitude toward her father.<br />
He threw in five dollars toward the bill.<br />
Their efforts toward peace were successful.</p>
<p>Happy Writing!</p>
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		<title>Like vs. As or As If</title>
		<link>http://theredpeneditor.com/blog/?p=133</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Feb 2010 15:50:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Like is probably the least-understood preposition. It&#8217;s used to compare one thing to another. It means similar to or for example. Examples: This flower looks like a daisy. This tastes more like lemonade than iced tea. You look like your father. I&#8217;m good at water sports like skiing and sailing. As and as if are [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>Like</i> is probably the least-understood preposition. It&#8217;s used to compare one thing to another. It means <i>similar to</i> or <i>for example</i>.</p>
<p><b>Examples</b>:<br />
This flower looks <i>like</i> a daisy.<br />
This tastes more <i>like</i> lemonade than iced tea.<br />
You look <i>like</i> your father.<br />
I&#8217;m good at water sports <i>like</i> skiing and sailing.</p>
<p><i>As</i> and <i>as if</i> are conjunctions used before clauses. (Remember: a clause has a subject and a verb.)</p>
<p><b>Examples</b>:<br />
He worked hard <i>as</i> he knew he should.<br />
You look <i>as if</i> you&#8217;ve seen a ghost.</p>
<p>Happy Writing!</p>
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