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		<title>Tracy and Tricia: Some Detective Work of Their Own – Page 4</title>
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A few minutes later, a couple of spot lights came on, shining on a box amongst the four figures in the front.&#160; Once it was opened, it revealed a gem in the center.&#160; A gem which seemed to glow.&#160; &#34;The Glowing Gem.&#34;&#160; Tracy whispered to herself.
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<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">A few minutes later, a couple of spot lights came on, shining on a box amongst the four figures in the front.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Once it was opened, it revealed a gem in the center.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>A gem which seemed to glow.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;The Glowing Gem.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy whispered to herself.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;This gem is what I figure you are here for.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The bidding price will start at 10,000,000 dollars.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Anyone who can afford this or higher is invited to Honolulu, Hawaii on April 17, where the auction will be held.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Accommodations will be made starting on April 15.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>For right now, we are headed to Orlando, Florida.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>You may come up and look at the gem for the next ten minutes.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The man said.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy got up and went to the front of the room to look at the gem.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">After five minutes, she exited the room and returned to the bar, where Tricia was waiting.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;So, how did it go?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia asked.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;The bidding starts at 10 million dollars, and the auction&#8217;s being held in Honolulu, Hawaii.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Whoa!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Where are they off to next?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Shhhh&#8230;&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy said as the two couples passed by them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Orlando, Florida.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>You know, I think I recognize those two girls.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She thought for a moment.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Now I remember!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They were two of the Amazons that captured us in South America!&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>With that, the two girls followed the couples outside, got in their car, and returned to the hotel.</p>
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		<title>Tracy and Tricia: Some Detective Work of Their Own – Page 3</title>
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&#34;Yes, or an alarm goes off,&#34; the man replied.
&#34;Could you alert me when the couples in rooms 335 and 336 come down?&#34;&#160; She said, writing something down on a sheet of paper.&#160; &#34;Could you give them this?&#34;&#160; She said, handing him the paper.&#160; He nodded, she gave him her number at the other hotel, and [...]]]></description>
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<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Yes, or an alarm goes off,&quot; the man replied.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Could you alert me when the couples in rooms 335 and 336 come down?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She said, writing something down on a sheet of paper.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Could you give them this?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She said, handing him the paper.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>He nodded, she gave him her number at the other hotel, and they left.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">Once they had arrived and were getting ready to sleep, Tricia asked Tracy, &quot;What did you put in that note?&quot;</p>
<p> <span id="more-805"></span>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I said that I was interested in the gem, and I told them to leave me an address or somewhere where I could get in touch with them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>That is what they&#8217;re here for, isn&#8217;t it?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Yeah, but what if they ask you to show them the money?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I&#8217;ll ask them how crazy they think I am to carry large amounts of money on my person.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh yeah.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>That&#8217;ll work.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia said, sarcastically.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;It&#8217;ll have to.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I want you to put some make up on me, and me you.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Just in case this falls through, I don&#8217;t want them to be able to recognize our real faces.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Good idea.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia said.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The two girls went to sleep and were awakened by the telephone.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia got out of her bed to answer it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Hello?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Hello, is a Miss Tracy Martin there?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Yes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Just a moment, please.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia roused Tracy and handed her the phone.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Hello?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Miss Martin, the couple you wanted to be notified about have arrived.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Thank you.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Did they get my message?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Yes, and they left one.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I&#8217;ll hold it until you come and get it.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Thanks.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Bye.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She said, hanging up.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;I&#8217;ll run over to the hotel and get the message.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy got dressed and ran over to the hotel to get the message.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>When she came back, Tricia was dressed, and getting out the make-up kits.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;What does it say?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia asked.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;It says that anyone interested in buying the gem should show up at 11:00 PM at the Blue Flamingo.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;That gives us about two hours to get ready.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Good.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>We&#8217;re going to have to pick out just what to wear.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The girls got made-up and then picked out their clothes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>By the time they had completed getting ready, they had ten minutes to get to the Blue Flamingo.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy was wearing a navy suit and was a brunette.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia was in a brown suit and was a red head.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They looked nothing like themselves, needless to say.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span></p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">They drove up to the Blue Flamingo, and exited their car.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The valet took it away.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Walking in the door, they scanned the room for the meeting place.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>It was an interesting night club, filled with interesting people.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>A jazz band was playing on-stage while the lights were dimmed.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy, followed by Tricia, walked over to the bar and asked the bartender where the meeting for the DG was to be held.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>He pointed toward a room, and they went over to it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Tricia, you stay out here and keep an eye out, while I go inside.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">Knocking on the door, a sliding panel, about eye-level, opened.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;Who&#8217;s there?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>A voice came from a pair of eyeballs behind the door.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I&#8217;m here about the DG.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy said.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Do you have an invitation?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The voice asked.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Yes, here.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy handed the sheet of paper through the hole in the door.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The sliding panel closed, there was a click sound, and the door opened.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Walking inside, Tracy observed the room.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>To the right and left were chairs.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The lights were dimmed, and there were four figures in the front of the room.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Other figures were seated in the chairs.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy took a seat near the back.</p>
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		<title>Tracy and Tricia: Some Detective Work of Their Own – Page 2</title>
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&#34;Tracy?!&#160; How did you&#8230;&#160; Why did you&#8230;&#34;
&#34;Karin explained it to me.&#160; How&#8217;s the hunt going?&#34;
&#34;Well, I saw the two of them today.&#160; They had two ladies with them.&#160; They&#8217;re trying to start some kind of auction.&#160; I think they&#8217;re carrying the gem in a suit case with them.&#34;
&#34;I see.&#34;
&#34;I figure that if I can get [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style="float: right"><img style="border-right-width: 0px; display: inline; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px" title="Tracy Martin" border="0" alt="Tracy Martin" src="http://fiction.minthegap.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/TracyMartin_thumb.jpg" width="244" height="164" /></div>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Tracy?!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>How did you&#8230;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Why did you&#8230;&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Karin explained it to me.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>How&#8217;s the hunt going?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well, I saw the two of them today.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They had two ladies with them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They&#8217;re trying to start some kind of auction.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I think they&#8217;re carrying the gem in a suit case with them.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I see.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I figure that if I can get the gem from them one of these times, then we can have this case solved and Adam will go back to work again.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Could I help?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;You bet!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I&#8217;m getting tired, tracking these people.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The only problem is how to get you over here.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I mean, that would make me suspicious!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Right.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy said, thinking.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;I know!!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I could give you a call in a couple of days from my house!&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She proceeded to give Tricia the number, so she would know who to call when her pager went off, then hung up.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She picked up the receiver once again, and called her mom&#8230;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">
<p>&#160;</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">When she was at her mom&#8217;s house, she called Tricia once again.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;So what&#8217;s your plan?&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia asked.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I got my mom to ask me to come home to plan for the wedding, then I had Adam call me here.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Now I can come and help you.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;But what if he calls your house again?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;My mom will say that I can&#8217;t be reached, and call me to tell me to call him back!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;But how does he know you were ever there?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I let him hear my mom on her answering machine before I picked up the phone!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh!!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I get it.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She proceeded to give Tracy her location, and Tracy got on the next plane headed there.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Arriving at the airport, Tracy exited her plane and headed toward the baggage claim where Tricia was waiting for her.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The came toward each other, and Tricia said, &quot;How was the flight?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Swell.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Where are the thieves?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;They, and their girls, went to sleep a few hours ago in their hotel.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They do their business transactions at night.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Can you take me there?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Sure,&quot; Tricia said, &quot;But first I think we ought to stop by our hotel room and drop off your suitcases.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Now there&#8217;s a good idea.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy responded.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>They left the airport and went to their hotel room.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>After they stopped off there, they went to the thieves hotel, and the &quot;Do Not Disturb&quot; sign was outside their door.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tricia and Tracy checked downstairs with the man at the desk, and he said that they hadn&#8217;t left the building.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">Tricia commented to Tracy, after looking at her watch, &quot;It&#8217;s going to be a while until they wake up.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>What do you suggest we do until then?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well, one of us should stay and watch them, while the other gets some rest.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;But what if they go to fly away?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>How will the one of us get the other up?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Good question.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>I guess we had better stay together.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;So, let&#8217;s go get a little &#8217;shut eye&#8217;.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I&#8217;ve got an idea.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Going over to the desk again, Track asked the man, &quot;Does everyone who stays here have to turn in their key before leaving the hotel?&quot;</p>
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Little did I know of what was going on &#34;behind the scenes&#34; at my house.&#160; A couple of my friends decided that if I wasn&#8217;t going to solve the case, they were going to try.&#160; You see, before Tricia had taken off for Vegas, she told Karin that she had gotten a lead and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style="float: right"><img style="border-right-width: 0px; display: inline; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px" title="Tricia Downing" border="0" alt="Tricia Downing" src="http://fiction.minthegap.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/TriciaDowning.jpg" width="248" height="168" /></a> </div>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">Little did I know of what was going on &quot;behind the scenes&quot; at my house.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>A couple of my friends decided that if I wasn&#8217;t going to solve the case, they were going to try.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>You see, before Tricia had taken off for Vegas, she told Karin that she had gotten a lead and was going to help me out.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>So, one day at my house, while I was out job hunting, Tracy and Karin got to talking about Tricia.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>&quot;You know,&quot; Tracy started, &quot;It&#8217;s not like Tricia to just take off all of a sudden, spontaneously.&quot;</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;She&#8217;s a big girl now, and I&#8217;m sure she can take care of herself.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;True.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>But it&#8217;s not like her.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Did she tell you anything?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Can you keep a secret?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Sure!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;She&#8217;s got a lead on the Glowing Gem.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;She&#8217;s what?!!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well, Tricia found a map of Las Vegas in the thieves&#8217; house.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She thought that they were going to go there to try and sell the gem.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh, I see.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Why didn&#8217;t she tell anyone?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well, with Adam not being on the case and all, she decided that it would be better if she just went after then and got the gem herself.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Did she leave you some way to contact her?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;As a matter of fact, yes&#8230;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>But, she said that she didn&#8217;t want anyone to know.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She&#8217;s got a pager on her.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She told me that if I really needed her, to go to her apartment and call her pager.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>She&#8217;d call back as soon as she could.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I&#8217;ve got to get a hold of her, and since Adam&#8217;s job hunting, I&#8217;ve got a little time.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;But what if he finds something fast?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well then, tell him that I went down street and will be back in a little while.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Okay.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>If you say so.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>So Tracy went down to Tricia&#8217;s apartment, went inside using the key Karin gave her, and went to her phone.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Calling the pager number, she hung up the phone and waited for Tricia to call back.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">Ten minutes came and went before the phone rang.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy answered it, &quot;Hello, Tricia?!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;This is Better Apartments and Condominiums.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Is a Miss Drowning there?&quot; asked the male voice on the other end of the line, mispronouncing Downing.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I&#8217;m sorry, she&#8217;s not.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>This is Jon Wagner, Sales Rep for BAC.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>We were just wondering if she could answer a few questions for us.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Could you help?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I don&#8217;t know.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Do you own an apartment?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Not exactly.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;What do you mean, &#8216;not exactly&#8217;?&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Well, I&#8217;m&#8230; Well&#8230; I guess you&#8217;d say that I&#8217;m employed and I live in the house where I work.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;Oh.&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;d be much help.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Sorry!&quot;</p>
<p style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in" class="DefaultText">&quot;That&#8217;s okay.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Good-bye.&quot;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>Tracy hung up the phone, and waited some more.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&#160; </span>The phone rang again, and this time it was Tricia.&quot;</p>
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		<title>Must We Show It All Off?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Kristin</dc:creator>
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		<category><![CDATA[clothing]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Hannah Montana]]></category>
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So I was listening to Adam McManus yesterday and I was so like loving his show when he brought Stacy McDonald on.&#160; I’m not sure if you’ve read her blog, but she’s the writer of Raising Maidens of Virtue—a book my mom made me read.
So, I went to her site to see what all the [...]]]></description>
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<p>So I was listening to <a href="http://takeastand.net/">Adam McManus</a> yesterday and I was so like loving his show when he brought <a href="http://www.yoursacredcalling.com">Stacy McDonald</a> on.&#160; I’m not sure if you’ve read her blog, but she’s the writer of Raising Maidens of Virtue—a book my mom made me read.</p>
<p>So, I went to her site to see what all the fuss was about, and it turns out that Noah Cyrus, Miley Cyrus (AKA Hannah Montana) has got a new clothing line out… or should I say, lack of clothing line.</p>
<p> <span id="more-797"></span>
<p>I mean, look at it.&#160; The photos on the left aren’t bad—if you’re in a ballet.&#160; The ones on the right—I’m trying to figure out if they’re supposed to be underwear or what?</p>
<p>I mean, maybe as sleepwear it’d be ok, but it’s a grownup look that seems out of place for the age group.&#160; The tops look ok, but come on!</p>
<p>What do you think?&#160; Do you think that 8 year old should dress like this?</p>
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		<title>Jack Bauer, the Movie</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Feb 2010 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Adam</dc:creator>
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After watching this latest installment of 24, Tracy and I were excited to see that things have gotten back to normal—especially the second half of the show.&#160; For a while there it seemed that they were getting Renee ready to take Jack’s place, if you can believe that.
Now there’s news that they are writing a [...]]]></description>
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<p>After watching this latest installment of 24, Tracy and I were excited to see that things have gotten back to normal—especially the second half of the show.&#160; For a while there it seemed that they were getting Renee ready to take Jack’s place, if you can believe that.</p>
<p>Now there’s news that they are writing a <a href="http://scifiwire.com/2010/02/jack-bauer-and-24-to-tort.php">movie for 24</a>, staring Keifer Sutherland of course, but the gags abound as far as how it will go.&#160; Some think it will be the end of Bauer, some think that it be called “2”.</p>
<p>Who is your favorite love interest that Jack has had?&#160; It seems like only one of them survived being associated with Jack—and that’s because she left.</p>
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		<title>What Does Jack Do During Commercial Breaks?</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Feb 2010 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>MInTheGap</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Quickie]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[24]]></category>
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“The following takes place between 10 AM and 11 AM—Events occur in real time.”
So starts every episode of 24.&#160; But what’s the deal!?&#160; I mean, I’ve watched so many of these episodes on DVD, and I know that it’s not a full hour.&#160; There’s very precious time that is spent where we don’t see it.
And [...]]]></description>
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<p>“The following takes place between 10 AM and 11 AM—Events occur in real time.”</p>
<p>So starts every episode of 24.&#160; But what’s the deal!?&#160; I mean, I’ve watched so many of these episodes on DVD, and I know that it’s not a full hour.&#160; There’s very precious time that is spent where we don’t see it.</p>
<p>And there’s so many unanswered questions:</p>
<ul>
<li>When is the last time that you saw Jack Bauer eat?</li>
<li>When does Jack take a dump?</li>
<li>How is it that CTU can be so high tech and so vulnerable?</li>
<li>Did Jack wear glasses for the same reason that Superman wears glasses—I mean, if it worked for Supe’s…</li>
<li>How come there aren’t wanted posters in all terrorist headquarters with photos of Jack from CSPAN?</li>
</ul>
<p> <span id="more-795"></span>
<p>And I’m sure we could come up with some more.</p>
<p>So what do you think?&#160; What does Jack do during a commercial break?&#160; I personally think that’s when he says sweet nothings in Chloe’s earpiece and tells the President how to run the country.</p>
<p>But maybe he’s just scarfing down some Dunkin’ Doughnuts and hit the shower/toilet…</p>
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		<title>Almost Done</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Feb 2010 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Adam</dc:creator>
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So, the last story has almost been finished.&#160; That’s right, I’ve almost finished writing about my detective years, so I’ve started wondering what to do next.
What started out as a desire to chronicle my exploits has grown into a desire to write about what I see day to day.&#160; A lot has happened since these [...]]]></description>
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<p>So, the last story has almost been finished.&#160; That’s right, I’ve almost finished writing about my detective years, so I’ve started wondering what to do next.</p>
<p>What started out as a desire to chronicle my exploits has grown into a desire to write about what I see day to day.&#160; A lot has happened since these events finished, and though I haven’t been in the game for a while, I think I might do that.</p>
<p>Plus my friends want to get in on the fun, and so I figured I could make this into a group blog.&#160; I mean, I hardly have the time to do all the writing myself.</p>
<p>So look for some fiction tips, reviews, and some comments about fiction that we see…</p>
<p>Also, I can’t always guarantee that Noah will be serious, <strike>so be careful about what he posts</strike>.&#160; <em>Honestly, Adam, I’ll be good, I promise.</em></p>
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		<title>Kristin and Katie: Our Girlfriends? – Page 5</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:42:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>MInTheGap</dc:creator>
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&#8220;Those two are the men we followed to South America!&#8221; They soon left, and with two girls of their own.
&#8220;I recognize those two.&#8221; Noah said. &#8220;They&#8217;re girls from the Amazon camp!!&#8221;
&#8220;Right! Now I remember them. I wasn&#8217;t used to seeing them dressed like that!&#8221; Kristin stated.
&#8220;I think I&#8217;ll go have a chat with our friendly [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style="float: right"><img style="border-right-width: 0px; margin: 0px 0px 0px 10px; display: inline; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px" title="Noah Prescott" src="http://fiction.minthegap.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/NoahPrescott1.jpg" border="0" alt="Noah Prescott" width="172" height="252" align="right" /></div>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Those two are the men we followed to South America!&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>They soon left, and with two girls of their own.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I recognize those two.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah said.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;They&#8217;re girls from the Amazon camp!!&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Right!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Now I remember them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I wasn&#8217;t used to seeing them dressed like that!&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Kristin stated.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I think I&#8217;ll go have a chat with our friendly neighborhood bartender.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, getting up.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;Excuse me, ladies.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I walked over to the bartender, and leaned over onto the bar.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;What&#8217;ll it be?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>He asked, cleaning out a glass.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;What do you know about those two who just left?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Who?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The dames, or the fellas?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Either.&#8221;</p>
<p><span id="more-784"></span></p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Well, the dames are from out of town.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>They speak very broken English.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The guys come here more often, about once a night.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Rumor has it that they&#8217;re trying to get hot merchandise off their hands.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Thanks.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, leaving the bar.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I started back, &#8220;Just one more thing.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Yes?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Can anyone get involved in the bid?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Not saying I know anything about which you are talking&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Of course&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Do you have money?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I could have, if the price was right.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Well, I&#8217;ll tell them that you&#8217;re interested.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;All right.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I stated.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;They won&#8217;t be back for another two weeks.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;What if they find another buyer?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh, don&#8217;t worry.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>There&#8217;s going to be an auction.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Right now they&#8217;re just looking for perspective buyers.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Thanks.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, going back to my table and sitting down.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;How&#8217;d it go?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Kristin asked.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I&#8217;ve got an appointment with the two guys in two weeks.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I replied.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Why not earlier?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah asked.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Because it&#8217;s the next time that those two are in town.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Won&#8217;t they sell the DG by then?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie asked.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;No.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The bartender says that they&#8217;re going to auction it off.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>First they have to get some buyers together, though.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie replied.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Do we get to come the next time?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Kristin asked.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;If you keep your grades up.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, looking right in Kristin&#8217;s eyes.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh, we will.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>She stated.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We all got up and walked out to the car.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Once inside the car, we drove back to Noah&#8217;s house, and all went down to his basement.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>There, we changed out of our outfits, making sure to leave them hidden.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Kristin, Katie, and I then got into the car, and headed for my house.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">Once home, Katie immediately went to Kristin&#8217;s room to get ready for bed.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Karin came in and told me, &#8220;Adam, Tricia called while you were gone.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Said that she was fine and that she&#8217;d be back in a few days.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I wonder where she could be.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I don&#8217;t have the foggiest idea.&#8221;</p>
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&#8220;Let&#8217;s let them decide.&#8221; Noah said, looking at Kristin with a smile. We walked over to them, and Noah said, &#8220;All righty now. It&#8217;s up for you girls to decide who you want to be your date.&#8221;
&#8220;Him.&#8221; They both said at the same time, pointing to me. I shrugged my shoulders and looked at him. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div style="float: right"><img style="border-right-width: 0px; margin: 0px 0px 0px 10px; display: inline; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px" title="Kristin Smith" src="http://fiction.minthegap.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/KristinSmith1.jpg" border="0" alt="Kristin Smith" width="192" height="252" align="right" /></div>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Let&#8217;s let them decide.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah said, looking at Kristin with a smile.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We walked over to them, and Noah said, &#8220;All righty now.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>It&#8217;s up for you girls to decide who you want to be your date.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Him.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>They both said at the same time, pointing to me.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I shrugged my shoulders and looked at him.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>It was decided that Kristin and I were to go together, and Noah and Katie would be the other couple.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The girls did look a bit older than they really were, and we looked a bit younger, which balanced us out.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">In the car on the way over Noah and I sat in the front, while the two girls sat in the back.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;They were just trying to make you feel good, you know.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I know that Kristin wanted to pick me, but she knows that you expect her to pick you because she&#8217;s your daughter.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah said.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Well, Noah, if you&#8217;re that concerned, why don&#8217;t you use NLP 2.1 on Katie when we get there?&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Are you crazy!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>She&#8217;d be all over me, what with that increasing part.&#8221;</p>
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<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Oh, so now you&#8217;re scared.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Hey, I&#8217;ve given up on love potions.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>All I want to invent is a garbage can that takes itself out!&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Now there&#8217;s something practical.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We neared the place where we were going, so I pulled over about a block away, and Noah and Kristin switched seats.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;Okay guys and girls.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>It&#8217;s time for a little acting!&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I stated.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>As we drove the rest of the way to the Night Club, Kristin moved closer to me, and I put my arm around her.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie and Noah were in the back, and she was kissing him.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Under her breath though, I could hear them talking.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Ouch, not so tight!&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie whispered.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;You&#8217;re hurting me.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Sorry.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>He replied.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We pulled up, and we all got out. Noah had lipstick all over his face.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Here you go Noah.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, handing him a handkerchief.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;I think you&#8217;d better wipe your face off.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>He took it, and proceeded to do so.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We went around to the back to meet the girls, and then I put my arm around Kristin&#8217;s back, and Noah put his arm around Katie&#8217;s shoulders.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We walked into the club, where a prominent jazz musician was playing, and sat down at one of the tables.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Gee.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I&#8217;ve never been in one of these before!&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie stated.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Yeah, it&#8217;s kinda neat.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Kristin said, with a giggle.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Girls, behave yourselves.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I stated.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Just then, a tall waiter walked over, and winked at Katie.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Katie shrunk back a little and giggled.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Did you just make a pass at my girl?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah asked the waiter.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Turning to me, he asked again, &#8220;Did he just make a pass at my girl?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Turning to Katie, &#8220;Did he just make a&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Yes.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I just made a pass at your girl.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>What are you going to do about it?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The waiter replied.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Nothing,&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I replied.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;Settle down, Noah.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Settle down.&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I said, trying to hold Noah down.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;Settle down!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>He just made a pass at my girl!!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Why I oughta&#8230;&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Noah replied.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;You oughta what?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>He said, getting in Noah&#8217;s face.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I oughta back off, and leave you alone.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;I thought so.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>What&#8217;ll it be?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>We placed our orders, and he left.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>Needless to say, it wasn&#8217;t the standard night club order.</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">After the meals came, Kristin spotted two men walking in the back room.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>&#8220;There.&#8221;</p>
<p class="DefaultText" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 0.5in; tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 5.0in 5.5in 6.0in">&#8220;What?&#8221;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>I asked.</p>
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