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		<title>Three different ways to use a title slide</title>
		<link>https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/05/28/the-title-slide/</link>
		
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2026 05:15:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The title slide is usually the gateway to a presentation. And most presenters usually use it the same way. The slide is up on the screen, the presenter walks on stage and then says what they are going to talk about by essentially repeating the information that the audience has already read. It&#8217;s a missed [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>The title slide is usually the gateway to a presentation. And most presenters usually use it the same way.</p>



<p>The slide is up on the screen, the presenter walks on stage and then says what they are going to talk about by essentially repeating the information that the audience has already read.</p>



<p>It&#8217;s a missed opportunity.</p>



<p>The first minute of a presentation is disproportionately important.<br><br>Psychologists call it the <a href="https://thedecisionlab.com/biases/primacy-effect" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">primacy effect</a>: people tend to remember what comes first more than what follows.<br><br>That’s why I often cringe when a speaker walks on stage, projects a title slide … and then spends the first minute repeating what everyone can already read. Sometimes the title slide is up before the speaker even comes on stage.<br><br>“Good morning. Today I’m going to talk about innovation in the age of AI.”<br><br>Ugh.<br><br>Your opening should create curiosity, tension, emotion, surprise.<br><br>Your first slide is a tool to help you do that, and you can use it in different ways.</p>


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<p><br>Sometimes the best approach is to begin with a black screen and let the audience focus entirely on your words.<br><br>Sometimes it’s better to open immediately with a powerful image or piece of content and reveal the title later once people are engaged.<br><br>And sometimes you can skip the title slide altogether.<br><br>There is no universal rule.<br><br>The key is to be intentional.<br><br>Ask yourself:<br><br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/1f449.png" alt="👉" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> What experience do I want the audience to have <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2010/10/22/the-first-seven-seconds/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">in the first minute</a>?<br><br>Because audiences don’t decide whether a talk was “good” only at the end.</p>



<p>They begin judging from <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2021/01/17/six-ways-to-hook-the-audience-from-the-beginning/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">the start</a>.<br><br>Strong openings create momentum for everything that follows.</p>
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		<title>The Coffee Test</title>
		<link>https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/05/13/the-coffee-test/</link>
		
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2026 11:19:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[presentation skills]]></category>
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		<category><![CDATA[simplicity]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[Would you say it this way over coffee? Winston Churchill said, “All the greatest things are simple, and many can be expressed in a single word: freedom; justice; honour; duty; mercy; hope.” A good reminder for all of us who communicate for a living. In presentations, simplicity is not a weakness. It&#8217;s a sign of [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>Would you say it this way over coffee?</p>



<p><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2021/01/22/churchill-greatest-things/">Winston Churchill</a> said, “All the greatest things are simple, and many can be expressed in a single word: freedom; justice; honour; duty; mercy; hope.”</p>



<p>A good reminder for all of us who communicate for a living. In presentations, simplicity is not a weakness. It&#8217;s a sign of clarity.</p>



<p>Last year, I worked with a client who had this line on a slide:</p>



<p class="has-text-align-center" id="h-champion-end-to-end-process-optimization-and-deliver-a-seamless-experience"><strong>Champion end-to-end process optimization and deliver a seamless experience</strong></p>



<p>I asked him what it meant.</p>



<p>After he explained, I walked over to the computer and changed the slide to this:</p>



<p class="has-text-align-center" id="h-make-the-process-easier-for-everyone"><strong>Make the process easier for everyone</strong></p>



<p>I looked at him and asked, “Is that what you mean?”</p>



<p>He smiled and said, “Yes.”</p>



<p>I replied, “Then say it like that.”</p>



<p>Too many presentations are buried under <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2015/11/02/lose-the-jargon/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">jargon</a>, buzzwords, and inflated language. People speak as though they are writing for a corporate policy manual instead of talking to human beings.</p>



<p>But audiences don&#8217;t connect with jargon.</p>



<p>They connect with <a href="https://www.karalambert.com/small-business/clarity-in-business-why-is-it-important/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">clarity</a>.</p>



<p><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/03/11/simplicity-is-the-key-to-brilliance/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Simple</a> language is harder to create because it forces us to think clearly. It forces us to understand what we really mean. And when we finally do, our message becomes more powerful, more memorable, and more human.</p>



<p>This week, look at your slides, your speeches, your emails, your meetings.</p>



<p>Ask yourself: “How would I say this to another person over coffee?”</p>



<p>Then say it that way.</p>



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		<title>Attitude is everything</title>
		<link>https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/04/22/have-the-right-attitude/</link>
		
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2026 11:53:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is Jerrold. He has a great attitude. Jerrold is a server at Eggspectation, a great place for breakfast in Toronto. Last week, my wife and I had breakfast at Eggspectation. Jerrold was not our server. So why am I writing about him and his attitude? After we finished our meal, I went to restroom [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>This is Jerrold. He has a great attitude.<br><br>Jerrold is a server at <a href="https://www.tripadvisor.com/Restaurant_Review-g155019-d1057947-Reviews-Eggspectation_Bay_Street_toronto-Toronto_Ontario.html" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Eggspectation</a>, a great place for breakfast in Toronto.<br><br>Last week, my wife and I had breakfast at Eggspectation.<br><br>Jerrold was not our server.<br><br>So why am I writing about him and his attitude?<br><br>After we finished our meal, I went to restroom to wash my hands. When I walked in, there was Jerrold, standing in front of the mirror, doing arm stretches, neck stretches, shoulder rotations and other exercises to limber up.<br><br>I asked him what he was doing. Jerrold said that his job involves a lot of walking and bending and lifting. He said that he always warms up so that he can move as easily as possible and give people the best service possible.<br><br>I was impressed. That is someone who has a fantastic attitude towards the work that he does and the people whom he serves. <img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/1f44f.png" alt="👏" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /></p>



<p>Speakers should have the same attitude before every speech and presentation.<br><br>Whenever I have a speaking engagement, a few minutes before I go onstage (or online), I do the same thing. I do several stretching and breathing exercises to warm up. I swing my arms like windmills and bounce lightly up and down to lift my energy and channel the adrenaline in a positive way. I encourage you to do likewise.<br><br>But Jerrold&#8217;s practice of warming up speaks to something even more important &#8230; a desire to be in the best position to give his clients the best service possible. Speakers should approach their <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/07/11/sawubona-see-your-audience/">audiences</a> in the same way.<br><br>That is an attitude that people notice.<br>That is an attitude that makes a difference.<br>That is an attitude that opens up opportunities.<br><br>So whatever you do, the next time you are getting ready to work with your clients, be like Jerrold.</p>



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		<title>Rhetoric is not neutral</title>
		<link>https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/03/04/rhetoric-is-not-neutral/</link>
		
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2026 06:57:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Adolf Hitler]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[ethics]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[Rhetoric is not neutral. It never has been. Martin Luther King and Adolf Hitler. Two masters of rhetoric. Two completely different human beings. Every speech, every presentation, every strategic message carries a moral charge, whether we acknowledge it or not. When rhetoric is joined to ethics, it can persuade, inspire and motivate. It builds trust. [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-rhetoric-is-not-neutral-it-never-has-been">Rhetoric is not neutral. It never has been.</h3>



<p><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Martin_Luther_King_Jr." target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Martin Luther King</a> and <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adolf_Hitler" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Adolf Hitler</a>. Two masters of rhetoric. Two completely different human beings.</p>



<p>Every speech, every presentation, every strategic message carries a moral charge, whether we acknowledge it or not.</p>



<p>When <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/category/rhetoric-2/page/4/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">rhetoric</a> is joined to ethics, it can persuade, inspire and motivate. It builds trust. It strengthens institutions. It moves people toward something worthy.</p>



<p>When rhetoric is devoid of ethics, the result is manipulation, exploitation and propaganda. And the consequences can be catastrophic.</p>



<p>The techniques may be identical. The difference is moral.</p>



<p>As professionals who lead, advise and influence, we have a responsibility to practise rhetoric as an ethical discipline, not merely a strategic one.</p>



<p>In an age of increasing noise, speed and polarization, character still matters. Values still matter.</p>



<p>When you are developing leaders, shaping narratives or speaking on behalf of your organization, it’s not just about being effective; it’s about doing the right thing.</p>



<p>Rhetoric is not neutral. The key variable is the presence — or absence — of ethics.</p>



<p>That’s the equation.</p>
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		<title>What the cobblestones of Warsaw can teach us about public speaking</title>
		<link>https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/02/13/speaking-with-deliberation/</link>
		
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2026 08:08:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Last week in Warsaw, it was cold. Very cold.The temperature frequently dipped below minus 20 degrees Celsius. The cobblestones of the Old Town were covered in ice.You couldn’t rush.Every step demanded attention. As I walked, I realized how much this applies to public speaking. When moving over slippery terrain, you have to walk with deliberation. [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>Last week in Warsaw, it was cold. Very cold.<br>The temperature frequently dipped below minus 20 degrees Celsius.</p>



<p>The cobblestones of the <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Old_Town,_Warsaw" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Old Town</a> were covered in ice.<br>You couldn’t rush.<br>Every step demanded attention.</p>



<p>As I walked, I realized how much this applies to public speaking. When moving over slippery terrain, you have to walk with deliberation. When delivering a speech or presentation, you have to speak with deliberation.</p>



<p>Here&#8217;s a short video that I shot in the Old Town. (For subscribers reading this post via email, <a href="https://youtu.be/7KyrI-6L51s?si=W7xSKFZOvFL3sUl_" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">please click this link</a>.)</p>



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<p>When we hurry:<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> our words blur<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> our ideas collide<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> our audience struggles to follow</p>



<p>Cobblestones don’t allow speed.<br>And <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/01/28/pausing-when-speaking-in-public-important/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">neither does a clear message</a>.</p>



<p>Good speaking, like careful walking, is deliberate:<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> one step at a time<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> one idea at a time<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> one message at a time<br><img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/25aa.png" alt="▪" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> pauses to allow the audience to think</p>



<p>When you speak too quickly, your audience struggles to keep their footing, just as I did on those icy streets. But when you slow down, when you speak with deliberation, you create space for meaning to land.</p>



<p>The cobblestones of the Old Town in Warsaw forced me to <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/01/28/pausing-when-speaking-in-public-important/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">slow down</a>.</p>



<p>The stage teaches the same lesson: speak with deliberation, and you — and your audience — will find your balance.</p>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jan 2026 10:50:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[At the World Economic Forum meeting in Davos, the world has grown accustomed to speeches that are loud, polished, and quickly forgotten. This one was different. On 20 January 2026, Canadian Prime Minister Mark Carney delivered a speech that has garnered international attention and praise. It was a speech that came at a fraught time [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p id="ember1038">At the World Economic Forum meeting in Davos, the world has grown accustomed to speeches that are loud, polished, and quickly forgotten.</p>



<p id="ember1039">This one was different.</p>



<p id="ember1040">On 20 January 2026, Canadian Prime Minister Mark Carney delivered a speech that has garnered international attention and praise. It was a speech that came at a fraught time for the world.</p>



<p id="ember1041">The unpredictable wrecking ball that is Donald Trump’s administration is creating havoc around the world politically, economically, and socially. As a country that shares a 9,000-km border with the US, Canada is in a unique—and uniquely vulnerable—position. Being a proud Canadian, I feel it personally.</p>



<p id="ember1042">Yet in the face of these challenges, Carney did not try to dominate the room. He did not rely on slogans or bravado. Instead, he did something far more difficult: he&nbsp;named the reality, calmly and without illusion, and proposed a way forward.</p>



<p id="ember1043">This was not a speech about incremental change. It was a speech about&nbsp;rupture—moral, economic and geopolitical. And crucially, it was a speech that used language with precision and restraint to signal a break between an old world that no longer works and a future that has yet to be built.</p>



<p id="ember1044">In this post, I share my analysis of Carney’s speech: what worked well and what might have been improved. I focus on how he uses language, structure, and rhetorical choices to frame reality, build credibility, and persuade. And I explain why these choices matter for anyone who speaks about complex, high-stakes issues.</p>



<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-watch-the-speech">Watch the speech</h2>


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<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-a-courageous-speech-delivered-with-class">A courageous speech, delivered with class</h2>



<p id="ember1047">This was a courageous speech. Without naming him directly, it was clear that Carney took direct aim at Trump and his policies. He didn’t use hyperbole, and he didn&#8217;t use insults or <em>ad hominem</em> attacks. He simply laid out, step by step, why the old rules-based international system no longer works and what countries must do in response.</p>



<p id="ember1048">Some have said that the speech was less a courageous one and more one given out of the necessity to finally stand up to Trump. I don&#8217;t share this view.</p>



<p id="ember1049">It is clear from Trump&#8217;s speech at Davos the very next day that Carney’s speech had irked him. Given Trump’s tendency to be erratic and his taste for vengeance, it is impossible to know how he might respond. Indeed, just a few days after Carney’s speech, Trump posted this message on social media: “If Canada makes a deal with China, it will immediately be hit with a 100% Tariff against all Canadian goods and products coming into the U.S.A.”</p>



<p id="ember1050">So we now have the President of the United States threatening Canada—its greatest ally—for trying to find markets for its goods. It’s absurd. And with the Canada-US-Mexico free trade agreement due to be renegotiated this year, who knows what will happen. There is so much at stake.</p>



<p id="ember1051">Carney deserves credit for calling out the elephant in the room and for doing so in a dignified manner; a manner befitting the leader of a country. It is high time that the world stood up to Trump and stopped trying to appease him. Anyone with a cursory knowledge of the events of the last 90 years will know that appeasement does not work. It only emboldens those who are more powerful.</p>



<p id="ember1052">At <strong>14:04</strong>, Carney says that we have to name reality. We have to call the current international order what it is: “a system of intensifying great power rivalry where the most powerful pursue their interests using economic integration as coercion.”</p>



<p id="ember1053">And at the end of the speech (<strong>16:45</strong>), he says, “The powerful have their power. But we have something too: the capacity to stop pretending, to name realities, to build our strength at home and to act together.”</p>



<p id="ember1054">Canada finds itself a David facing a dangerous Goliath. Carney’s speech was nothing if not courageous.</p>



<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-connecting-with-the-audience">Connecting with the audience</h2>



<p id="ember1056">Speakers who can demonstrate that they share something in common with the <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2022/02/21/empathy-for-your-audience/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">audience</a>—values, experiences, hopes, dreams, concerns—have the ability to connect on a deeper level.</p>



<p id="ember1057">Business leaders often react to politicians’ speeches with emotion that ranges from skepticism to contempt. Indeed, at Davos, business leaders expressed significant suspicion and frustration toward politicians because of concerns over erratic policy, geopolitical instability, and a perceived retreat from a rules-based global order.</p>



<p id="ember1058">So, as a politician, Carney faced this challenge. However, he had a few things going in his favour.</p>



<p id="ember1059">First, he came to the stage already in possession of solid credentials to connect with a Davos audience. Not only is he the Prime Minister of Canada, but he has a track record that includes: 13 years at Goldman Sachs, 5 years as the Governor of the Bank of Canada, and 7 years as the Governor of the Bank of England.</p>



<p id="ember1060">Carney already had ethos when he stepped onto the stage. But he went further. He used a specific moment in his speech to connect with the audience on a practical level.</p>



<p id="ember1061">At <strong>07:03</strong>, he addresses the room’s experience directly: “This room knows this is classic risk management. Risk management comes at a price, but that cost of strategic autonomy, of sovereignty, can also be shared. Collective investments in resilience are cheaper than everyone building their own fortresses. Shared standards reduce fragmentations. Complementarities are positive sum.”</p>



<p id="ember1062">The people in the audience have almost certainly had experience with risk management so Carney is meeting them on familiar ground with his words.</p>



<p id="ember1063">Whenever you can show the audience that you share something in common with them, it is always a net positive.</p>



<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-a-powerful-extended-metaphor">A powerful extended metaphor</h2>



<p id="ember1065">At <strong>01:50</strong>, Carney warns against the tendency for countries to accommodate and avoid trouble in order to buy safety, because it won’t. And so, he asks, “What are our options?”</p>



<p id="ember1066">His answer begins with reference to a 1978 essay by the then Czech dissident Václav Havel entitled, <a href="https://hac.bard.edu/amor-mundi/the-power-of-the-powerless-vaclav-havel-2011-12-23" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">“The Power of the Powerless.”</a> In it, Havel wrote about how under the communist system, a greengrocer would place a sign in his store window supporting the regime. He didn&#8217;t believe it; nobody believed it. But everyone put a sign up to avoid trouble and to signal compliance.</p>



<p id="ember1067">The power of the communist system came not from its truth, but from everyone’s willingness to behave as if it were true. And that was also the source of its fragility. Because when even one person stopped performing—when the greengrocer and other merchants removed their signs—the illusion would begin to crack.</p>



<p id="ember1068">Carney uses Havel’s story and the metaphor of the sign throughout his speech to persuade others to stop pretending that the old international order still works.</p>



<p id="ember1069"><strong>03:27</strong> – “Friends, it is time for companies and countries to take their signs down.”</p>



<p id="ember1070"><strong>04:36 </strong>– “So we placed the sign in the window. We participated in the rituals, and we largely avoided calling out the gaps between rhetoric and reality.”</p>



<p id="ember1071"><strong>13:47</strong> – “Which brings me back to Havel. What does it mean for middle powers to live the truth?</p>



<p id="ember1072"><strong>14:20</strong> – “When middle powers criticize economic intimidation from one direction but stay silent when it comes from another, we are keeping the sign in the window.”</p>



<p id="ember1073"><strong>16:15</strong> – “We [Canada] are taking the sign out of the window. We know the old order is not coming back.”</p>



<p id="ember1074">People around the world are talking about taking the sign out of the window and it is something that will stick for a long time.</p>



<p id="ember1075">Having said that, there has been some criticism that the metaphor, as used by Carney, does not work. My good friend <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/anttimustakallio/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Antti Mustakallio</a>—an expert speech writer and the founder of the <a href="https://www.retoriikankesakoulu.fi" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Retoriikan kesäkoulu</a> (Summer School of Rhetoric in Finland)—has written a thoughtful analysis of Carney&#8217;s speech which I encourage you to read here.</p>



<p id="ember1077">Antti rightly argues that whereas the communist system in Europe “was a repressive regime that systematically violated human rights, one in which people participated out of fear and, ultimately, under the threat of violence,” the rules-based international order was not that. Indeed, Carney admits, at <strong>03:43</strong>, that Canada prospered under that system for decades.</p>



<p id="ember1078">Thus, Antti concludes that Carney committed an error because the metaphor “&#8230; equates a voluntary, agreement-based international order with a coercive system built on fear and violence. Used this way, the analogy suggests that commitment to the rules-based order was, in itself, an unethical performance rather than an attempt to restrain power.”</p>



<p id="ember1079">I have given this point a lot of thought, both because of my respect for Antti and because I want to be sure that my favourable impression of the metaphor is not skewed by me being a Canadian who, like most of my fellow Canadians, is deeply offended by the way in which Trump and his administration have acted toward us.</p>



<p id="ember1080">In the end, I believe that the metaphor works. It works because Carney isn&#8217;t comparing the post-WWII order to Soviet communism. He’s comparing the <em>current moment</em>—where middle powers feel compelled to perform deference to avoid retaliation—to Havel&#8217;s insight about complicity. The sign in the window isn&#8217;t about the old rules-based order; it’s about the pretence that it still exists. This conclusion is reinforced at several points in the speech.</p>



<p id="ember1081">At <strong>04:24</strong>, Carney acknowledges the good that American hegemony has done in the past: public goods, open sea lanes, a stable financial system, collective security and support for frameworks for resolving disputes. But 25 seconds later (<strong>04:49</strong>), he says that “this bargain <em>no longer</em> works.” (Emphasis added.)</p>



<p id="ember1082">Then, just 18 seconds further (<strong>05:07</strong>), Carney says, “But <em>more recently</em>, great powers have begun using economic integration as weapons, tariffs as leverage, financial infrastructure as coercion, supply chains as vulnerabilities to be exploited.&nbsp;You cannot live within the lie of mutual benefit through integration when integration <em>becomes</em> the source of your subordination.” (Emphasis added.)</p>



<p id="ember1083">At <strong>07:45</strong>, Carney says that Canada was amongst the first to hear the “wake-up call.” I think this is a clear reference to Trump’s imposition of tariffs on Canada and his constant statements about Canada becoming the 51st state. (Not going to happen.)</p>



<p id="ember1084">At <strong>10:38</strong>, Carney says that Canada stands firmly with Greenland and Denmark and fully supports their unique right to determine Greenland&#8217;s future. At <strong>11:22</strong>, he states Canada&#8217;s strong opposition to tariffs over Greenland. It is clear that he is talking about the current situation created by Trump.</p>



<p id="ember1085">Even Antti concedes in his post that the metaphor could be charitably viewed the way in which I have described it above.</p>



<p id="ember1086">Where I do agree with Antti is that Carney could have made the metaphor more powerful with just a little more precision. For example, at <strong>04:36</strong>, when Carney speaks of putting the sign in the window, he could have said that we placed the sign in the window because we believed in the system as it used to exist. Although not perfect, it was a system that worked and that provided security and prosperity. Carney could then have said that the system is no longer working, and that it is now time to take the sign down.</p>



<p id="ember1087"><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2014/11/09/rhetorical-devices-metaphor/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Metaphors</a> can make abstract ideas concrete and vivid, helping audiences grasp complex concepts instantly. They engage emotions, spark imagination and are memorable, turning analysis into storytelling that moves listeners to action. If you use a metaphor, just make sure that it is clear and precise.</p>


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<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-rhetorical-devices">Rhetorical devices</h2>



<p id="ember1090"><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/?s=rhetorical+devices" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Rhetoric</a>&nbsp;is the art of using language to communicate effectively and persuade. Aristotle wrote the classic book on the subject, <em>On Rhetoric</em>, in the 4th century BC. For centuries, the study of rhetoric—the ability&nbsp;to speak in public and to move audiences with logic, emotion and credibility—was an important component of many educational systems.</p>



<p id="ember1091">In his speech, Carney uses several rhetorical devices to great effect. In addition to the extended metaphor discussed above, below are four others.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-antithesis">Antithesis</h3>



<p id="ember1093"><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2016/02/06/rhetorical-devices-antithesis/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Antithesis</a> is the contrasting of two opposing ideas in a grammatically balanced or parallel structure. It clarifies complex thoughts by sharpening the contrast, making arguments more memorable and persuasive. Think Charles Dickens: “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.”</p>



<p id="ember1094">As Aristotle noted in his <em>Rhetoric</em>, this opposition aids understanding and retention by highlighting differences starkly, engaging the audience intellectually and emotionally.</p>



<p id="ember1095">Carney’s speech is a masterclass in the use of antithesis. It is by far the most important rhetorical device. He uses it to set out in stark terms the contrast between the way the international order was and the way it is now. And he uses it over and over again. Not just for show, but for impact (which is also an antithesis).</p>



<p id="ember1096"><strong>00:30</strong> – (In French) “Today I will talk about the breakdown of the world order, the end of a pleasant fiction, and the beginning of a brutal reality &#8230;”</p>



<p id="ember1097"><strong>01:35</strong> – “It seems that every day we’re reminded &#8230; that the strong can do what they can, and the weak must suffer what they must.”</p>



<p id="ember1098"><strong>04:55</strong> – “We are in the midst of a rupture, not a transition.”</p>



<p id="ember1099"><strong>05:20</strong> – “You cannot live within the lie of mutual benefit through integration when integration becomes the source of your subordination.”</p>



<p id="ember1100"><strong>06:07</strong> – “When the rules no longer protect you, you must protect yourself.”</p>



<p id="ember1101"><strong>07:00</strong> – “They’ll buy insurance, increase options in order to rebuild sovereignty—sovereignty that was once grounded in rules but will increasingly be anchored in the ability to withstand pressure.”</p>



<p id="ember1102"><strong>08:46</strong> – “We actively take on the world as it is, not wait around for a world we wish to be.”</p>



<p id="ember1103"><strong>12:42</strong> – “Our view is the middle powers must act together because if we’re not at the table, we’re on the menu.” (Also a powerful metaphor.)</p>



<p id="ember1104"><strong>13:13</strong> – “This is not sovereignty. It’s the performance of sovereignty while accepting subordination.” (The second clause adds a layer of&nbsp;irony&nbsp;or&nbsp;paradox, underscoring how the act of pretending to be sovereign actually reinforces dependency.)</p>



<p id="ember1105"><strong>13:22</strong> – “In a world of great power rivalry, the countries in between have a choice: compete with each other for favour, or combine to create a third path with impact.”</p>



<p id="ember1106"><strong>14:52</strong> – “And diversification internationally is not just economic prudence; it’s a material foundation for honest foreign policy&#8230;”</p>



<p id="ember1107"><strong>16:08</strong> – “We understand that this rupture calls for more than adaptation. It calls for honesty about the world as it is.”</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1108">Asyndeton</h3>



<p id="ember1109">Asyndeton is the omission of conjunctions such as “and”, “or”, “for” and “but”&nbsp;from a series of related phrases or clauses. It adds speed and rhythm to the words, and it leaves an impression that the list is not complete. This creates emphasis and emotional intensity, leaving the audience with a sense of incompleteness that draws them in.</p>



<p id="ember1110">It is not the most common of rhetorical devices, but Carney uses it well a few times.</p>



<p id="ember1111"><strong>01:50</strong> – “&#8230; there is a strong tendency for countries to go along to get along, to accommodate, to avoid trouble, to hope that compliance will buy safety.”</p>



<p id="ember1112"><strong>05:10</strong> – “But more recently, great powers have begun using economic integration as weapons, tariffs as leverage, financial infrastructure as coercion, supply chains as vulnerabilities to be exploited.”</p>



<p id="ember1113"><strong>16:25</strong> – “Nostalgia is not a strategy, but we believe that from the fracture we can build something bigger, better, stronger, more just.”</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1114">Chiasmus</h3>



<p id="ember1115">Chiasmus is a rhetorical device where words, phrases, or grammatical structures in one clause are repeated in reverse order in the next clause. It forms an A-B-B-A or &#8220;criss-cross&#8221; pattern (named after the Greek letter <em>chi</em> (Χ, χ)).</p>



<p id="ember1116">Chiasmus creates symmetry and rhythm, making phrases instantly memorable and persuasive. It reinforces ideas through inversion, simplifies complex contrasts, and gives arguments a sense of completeness, engaging listeners emotionally and intellectually.</p>



<p id="ember1117">In the middle of Carney’s speech, he uses a powerful chiasmus about which I have written more in a <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2026/01/21/a-canadian-chiasmus/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">previous post</a>.</p>



<p id="ember1118"><strong>09:10</strong> – “And we are no longer just relying on the strength of our values, but also the value of our strength.”</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1119">Tricolon</h3>



<p id="ember1120"><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2015/03/16/rhetorical-devices-tricolon/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Tricolon</a> is a rhetorical device using three parallel words, phrases, or clauses of increasing length or power, often for rhythmic emphasis. The rule of three taps into how our brains process information, boosting memorability and emotional punch in speeches.</p>



<p id="ember1121">Carney uses several tricolons in his speech, some of which are also asyndetons.</p>



<p id="ember1122"><strong>02:45</strong> – “But he places the sign anyway to avoid trouble, to signal compliance, to get along.”</p>



<p id="ember1123"><strong>03:50</strong> – “We joined its institutions, we praised its principles, we benefited from its predictability.”</p>



<p id="ember1124"><strong>06:00</strong> – “A country that cannot feed itself, fuel itself or defend itself has few options.”</p>



<p id="ember1125"><strong>06:15</strong> – “A world of fortresses will be poorer, more fragile and less sustainable.”</p>



<p id="ember1126"><strong>08:44</strong> – “So we&#8217;re engaging broadly, strategically, with open eyes.”</p>



<p id="ember1127"><strong>15:40</strong> – “Canada is a pluralistic society that works. Our public square is loud, diverse and free.”</p>



<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1128">A call to action</h2>



<p id="ember1129">Every speech should have an objective. What do you want the audience to do after you have finished speaking? If you don’t want them to do anything, you could save everyone a lot of time and just send an email. The most powerful speeches are the ones that have a call to action; that move the audience to something.</p>



<p id="ember1130">Carney begins his call to action at <strong>13:50</strong> by asking what all of this means for middle powers. He then gives his answer which, by my count, encompasses six things:</p>



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<li>Name reality and admit what is going on</li>



<li>Act consistently and apply the same standards to allies and rivals</li>



<li>Create institutions and agreements that function as described</li>



<li>Reduce the leverage that enables coercion</li>



<li>Build strong domestic economies</li>



<li>Diversify internationally</li>
</ol>



<p id="ember1137">One might argue that six things is a lot for an audience to absorb. Fair enough, but given the complexity of what is transpiring in international relations these days, I have no problem giving Carney a pass. There are many variables at play and there is no one thing that will address them.</p>



<p id="ember1138">Furthermore, by this point in the speech, Carney has established his credibility to make this call to action. At <strong>09:20</strong> of the speech, Carney sets out all of the things that his government has been doing and which address most of his call to action above. This includes:</p>



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<li>$1 trillion of investments in energy, AI, critical minerals, new trade corridors</li>



<li>Doubling defence spending</li>



<li>Establishing a strategic partnership with the EU</li>



<li>Signing 12 other trade and security deals on four continents in six months</li>



<li>Establishing strategic partnerships with China and Qatar</li>



<li>Negotiating free trade pacts with India, ASEAN, Thailand, Philippines and Mercosur</li>
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<p id="ember1145">When you are preparing for your next speech or presentation, spend some time thinking deeply about what you want your audience to do and why. And although Carney (appropriately) proposes six things for his audience to do, I recommend that you keep the call to action as simple as possible. Ideally, one thing.</p>


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<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1147">What could have been improved</h2>



<p id="ember1148">No speech, no matter how good, is perfect. There is always room for improvement, and Carney’s speech is no exception. Here are a few thoughts.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1149">Poor opening words</h3>



<p id="ember1150">Carney’s first words are procedural housekeeping: “Thank you very much, Larry. I’m going to start in French, and then I’ll switch back to English.”</p>



<p id="ember1151">If you want to begin by publicly thanking the person who introduced you, fine. It’s not the end of the world. What I typically do is thank the person, on stage, by shaking their hand and saying a few private words to them in front of the audience so that it is clear that I am thanking them.</p>



<p id="ember1152">But the second sentence should have been dropped. Instead, Carney should have asked the person who introduced him to tell the audience that the speech would begin in French and then switch to English.</p>



<p id="ember1153">You get one chance to make a good first impression, so make your first words count.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1154">The extended metaphor of the greengrocer and the sign</h3>



<p id="ember1155">I have discussed how the metaphor could have been tighter above.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1156">Some convoluted language</h3>



<p id="ember1157">There were moments when Carney’s language drifted into vague jargon.</p>



<p id="ember1158">For example, at <strong>08:04</strong>: “We are calibrating our relationships so their depth reflects our values, and we’re prioritizing broad engagement to maximize our influence, given the fluidity of the world at the moment, the risks that this poses and the stakes for what comes next.”</p>



<p id="ember1159">At 41 words, it is a long sentence. The key insight—relationships based on values and pragmatic engagement—is buried under abstract process language: calibrating, prioritizing and maximizing. It is nothing like the simple, powerful language that Carney uses elsewhere in the speech.</p>



<p id="ember1160"><a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/03/11/simplicity-is-the-key-to-brilliance/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Simplicity</a> is the ultimate sophistication. Carney could have chosen simpler language. For example, he might have said something like: “We will deepen our relationships with countries that share our values. But we also have to be pragmatic. So, we will also work, where possible, with countries other than our closest allies.”</p>



<p id="ember1161">Alternatively, Carney could have kept the complex language and then explain it. In fact, he does this very thing a bit later in the speech.</p>



<p id="ember1162">At <strong>10:20</strong>, he says “We’re doing something else: to help solve global problems, we’re pursuing variable geometry.”</p>



<p id="ember1163">I had to look up the definition of “variable geometry”. (It is a design principle where components of a system, like as aircraft wings, adjust their shape or configuration in real-time to optimize performance under changing conditions.) In the context of Carney’s speech, it is very abstract. But Carney immediately explains what he means and gives a concrete example:</p>



<p id="ember1164"><strong>10:23</strong> – “In other words, different coalitions for different issues based on common values and interests. So, on Ukraine, we’re a core member of the Coalition of the Willing and one of the largest per capita contributors to its defence and security.”</p>



<p id="ember1165">Never forget that we all suffer from the curse of knowledge. Just because you know what you are saying, it does not guarantee that the audience will understand. If you have to choose between clarity and eloquence, choose clarity every time.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1166">An mistimed smile</h3>



<p id="ember1167">The metaphor “&#8230; if we’re not at the table, we’re on the menu” was brilliant. If you listen around <strong>12:45</strong>, you will hear some people laughing. Carney pauses for a moment and smiles. I know it is hard not to smile when you get a laugh from the audience—the reaction is, understandably, often automatic and hard to control—but I wish that Carney had kept his serious demeanor.</p>



<p id="ember1168">If the metaphor is powerful, it is because it is accurate. Nobody wants to be “on the menu.” It would have been more powerful for Carney to maintain a serious look so that there was coherence between what he said, how he said it, and the way he looked while saying it.</p>



<p id="ember1169">One way in which Carney could have pre-empted the laugh would have been to deliver the line more forcefully and with even more gravitas. It’s an example of how the quality of your voice—volume, tone, pace, pauses—can affect the audience.</p>



<p id="ember1170">Carney’s smile certainly wasn’t fatal to his speech. But it’s a useful reminder that when you deliver powerful lines in your speeches and presentations, you want to make sure that you deliver them the right way. The words, tone and facial expressions should be congruent.</p>



<h2 class="wp-block-heading" id="ember1171">Conclusion</h2>



<p id="ember1172">Mark Carney’s Davos speech is a rhetorical triumph that could mark a turning point in middle-power diplomacy. It calls out the rupture in the global order, using the extended metaphor of the greengrocer and the sign to expose performative illusions of sovereignty and mutual benefit.</p>



<p id="ember1173">Carney blends realism with moral clarity (“&#8230; we aim to be both principled and pragmatic”). His repeated use of antithesis drives home contrasts and builds urgency. The speech is structurally tight and calls middle powers to strategic autonomy and genuine coalitions without nostalgia or naivety.</p>



<p id="ember1174">Carney’s speech is worthy of study and I encourage you to spend some time with it. There is lots to learn.</p>



<p id="ember1175">And then, go take down whatever “signs” no longer belong in your window. Don’t let someone else tell you what to display.</p>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jan 2026 10:03:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[As a Canadian, I am very proud of Prime Minister Mark Carney&#8217;s speech at Davos yesterday. His talk deserves careful attention. Not because it was loud.Not because it was dramatic.But because it was&#160;firm and precise. At a moment when the international order is truly at an inflection point—and when the consequences of words are no [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>As a Canadian, I am very proud of Prime Minister Mark Carney&#8217;s <a href="https://www.theguardian.com/world/2026/jan/21/nostalgia-is-not-a-strategy-mark-carney-is-emerging-as-the-unflinching-realist-ready-to-tackle-trump" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">speech at Davos</a> yesterday.</p>



<p>His talk deserves careful attention.</p>



<p>Not because it was loud.<br>Not because it was dramatic.<br>But because it was&nbsp;firm and precise.</p>



<p>At a moment when the international order is truly at an inflection point—and when the consequences of words are no longer abstract—Prime Minister Carney chose something far more effective:&nbsp;principles and pragmatism.</p>



<p>One sentence, in particular, stood out to me:</p>



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<p><em><strong>&#8220;We are no longer just relying on the strength of our values, but also on the value of our strength.&#8221;</strong></em></p>
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<p>That isn’t accidental phrasing.<br>It&#8217;s&nbsp;chiasmus:&nbsp;a <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2011/06/08/rhetorical-devices-antimetabole/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">rhetorical device</a> that balances two clauses by reversing their key terms.</p>



<p>Why does this matter?</p>



<p>Because chiasmus forces an audience to&nbsp;hold two ideas at once.<br>It resists simplistic thinking.<br>It acknowledges tension rather than denying it.</p>



<p>Values matter.<br>Strength matters.<br>And in today’s world, pretending otherwise is no longer credible.</p>



<p>Great political speeches don’t just express positions.<br>They&nbsp;frame reality&nbsp;in a deliberate and disciplined way.<br>And they give us a reason not just to hope, but to work, for a better future.</p>



<p>In uncertain times, language like this doesn’t inflame.<br>It clarifies.<br>And right now, clarity is leadership.</p>



<p>Prime Minister Carney&#8217;s speech is a masterclass in how rhetorical devices such as chiasmus can signal seriousness, restraint and resolve. All at the same time.</p>



<p>I’ll be publishing a deeper analysis of the speech soon. It’s worth studying, especially for anyone who believes that words still matter in global leadership.</p>



<h6 class="wp-block-heading has-text-align-right" id="h-photo-credits-world-economic-forum-ciaran-mccrickard-photo-1-and-photo-2"><em>Photo credits: World Economic Forum / Ciaran McCrickard</em> (<a href="https://www.flickr.com/photos/worldeconomicforum/55052119909/in/dateposted/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Photo 1</a> and <a href="https://www.flickr.com/photos/worldeconomicforum/55052043468/in/dateposted/">Photo 2</a>)<em> </em></h6>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[johnzimmer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2026 08:13:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Three questions that your audience will always have for you: Most business presentations answer What? Good ones also answer So what? Great ones finish with Now what? Your audience is asking all three &#8230; whether you address them or not.]]></description>
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<p>Three questions that your <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2024/04/07/dont-overwhelm-your-audience/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">audience</a> will always have for you:</p>



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<li>What is this about?</li>



<li>Why is this important?</li>



<li>What happens—or needs to happen—next?</li>
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<p>Most business presentations answer <em>What?</em></p>



<p>Good ones also answer <em>So what?</em></p>



<p>Great ones finish with <em>Now what?</em></p>



<p>Your audience is asking all three &#8230; whether you address them or not.</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Jan 2026 13:59:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[2026 is here. A new year full of potential. Here are 26 New Year’s resolutions to take your public speaking to a new level in 2026. In no particular order: 1. I will prepare thoroughly. 2. I will have a clear message. 3. I will always ask myself: “Why should the audience care about my message?&#8221; If I cannot answer [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p>2026 is here. A new year full of potential.</p>



<p>Here are 26 New Year’s <a href="https://www.bbc.com/news/articles/c8xd7vg7872o" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">resolutions</a> to take your public speaking to a new level in 2026.<br><br>In no particular order:<br><br>1. I will prepare thoroughly.<br><br>2. I will have a clear message.<br><br>3. I will always ask myself: “Why should the <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2021/09/13/your-audience-wants-meaning-before-detail/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">audience</a> care about my message?&#8221; If I cannot answer that question, I will find a new message. Or a new audience.<br><br>4. I will arrive early for my speaking engagements.<br><br>5. I will have a back-up plan in case the equipment doesn’t work.<br><br>6. I will have much less text on my slides.<br><br>7. I will give a presentation without slides.<br><br>8. I will use a prop in a presentation.<br><br>9. I will read one <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2018/09/30/5-books-for-public-speakers/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">book on public speaking</a> and presentation skills.<br><br>10. I will seek—and be open to—feedback on my performance.<br><br>11. I will join Toastmasters or another speaking association.<br><br>12. I will seek out speaking opportunities at work.<br><br>13. I will give a speech without notes.<br><br>14. I build stories into my presentations.<br><br>15. I will remember that being a little nervous before a speech is normal.<br><br>16. I will make eye contact with the audience.<br><br>17. I will pause more often when speaking and become comfortable with the silence.<br><br>18. I will not speak longer than my allotted time.<br><br>19. I will learn about logos, ethos, pathos and <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2022/07/27/kairos-the-foundation-of-rhetoric/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">kairos</a>, and how to use them in my presentations.<br><br>20. I will use a quote in presentation.<br><br>21. I will use <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2020/08/03/humour/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">humour</a>, when appropriate.<br><br>22. I will be willing to be vulnerable on stage.<br><br>23. I will remember that my audience doesn’t expect me to be perfect; they expect me to be present.<br><br>24. I will remember that, as Ralph Waldo Emerson said, &#8220;All the great speakers were bad speakers at first.&#8221;<br><br>25. I will accept that the degree to which I improve is directly related to the consistency of my effort over time. I now understand that I am playing the long game.<br><br>26. I will enjoy the ride.<br><br>So there you go. Take your pick, or add your own.<br><br>Happy New Year and all the best for a health, happy and successful 2026! <img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/1f387.png" alt="🎇" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /></p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Oct 2025 11:55:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is a guest post by Stephen Welch, and the follow up to his post entitled Breaking the Pattern. You can read that post here. Stephen is an expert in communication, HR and professional change. Stephen is the Director and Co-founder of Archetypical Ltd, the company behind Corporate Snakes and Career Ladders, a new approach [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p><em>This is a guest post by Stephen Welch, and the follow up to his post entitled</em> Breaking the Pattern. <em>You can read that post <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2025/08/19/break-the-pattern/">here</a>. Stephen is an expert in communication, HR and professional change. Stephen is the Director and Co-founder of Archetypical Ltd, the company behind Corporate Snakes and Career Ladders, a new approach to learning through play. He is also a visiting lecturer at the University of London. You can find Stephen&#8217;s LinkedIn profile <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/stephenwelch11/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">here</a>.</em></p>



<p class="has-text-align-center">&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;</p>



<p>Recently I wrote about &#8220;breaking the pattern and using inspiration from musicians. Today we’re going to talk about &#8220;making the pattern&#8221; using inspiration from magicians. Public speakers can learn a trick or two from magicians!</p>



<p>(Before I start, time to acknowledge a debt. Lots of this content was inspired by <a href="https://www.amazon.co.uk/stores/Nick-Fitzherbert/author/B007CKVPWS?ref=dbs_a_mng_rwt_scns_share" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Nick Fitzherbert</a>, author of <em>Presentation Magic</em>. He was a PR professional, a presentation skills coach and a member of <a href="https://themagiccircle.co.uk" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">the Magic Circle</a>, the most famous society of magicians in the world.)</p>



<p>Let’s set the scene.</p>



<p>You are presenting to an <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2022/02/21/empathy-for-your-audience/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">audience</a>. You have one simple goal: get information which is in your brain into the brains of the audience members. So that they feel, think, or do something differently. Your success as a presenter can only be measured according to your ability to change people’s minds, give them new information, or get them to act in a different way.</p>



<p>This post will not teach you any magic tricks &#8230; or will it? Either way, you will learn some of key principles of magic and how to apply them in your presentations. Just like magicians do.</p>



<p>We’re going to cover three key themes:</p>



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<li><strong>Relevance</strong></li>



<li><strong>Proximity</strong></li>



<li><strong>Focus</strong></li>
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<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-relevance">Relevance</h3>



<p>You want your audience to feel, think or do something differently. But why should they? Your job is to make your content relevant to them. What is the overlap between what you want to say and what they want to hear? Magicians know how to do this by bringing the audience &#8220;into&#8221; their act. You want to know what is going to happen. How is she going to saw the man in half?</p>



<p>As a presenter, you need to: define the key points for your audience (no more than three, please!); personalise your message (use the word <em>you</em> a lot); and give them a clear reason to listen. Many years ago, I was taught the <strong>WHY</strong> approach to crafting communication:</p>



<p><strong>W –</strong> What this is about?</p>



<p><strong>H</strong> <strong>–</strong> Hooks. <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2021/09/13/your-audience-wants-meaning-before-detail/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">Why should they listen?</a> What&#8217;s in it for them?</p>



<p><strong>Y – </strong>Your aim. The goal or purpose of the communication. </p>



<p><em>Secret 1:</em> I tried to make this relevant to you by giving you a clear reason to read at the beginning. The fact that you are still reading tells me that I’ve done my job.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-proximity">Proximity</h3>



<p>“The framework for any communication is determined by the expectations and perceptions you trigger.”  (Rule of Magic #1 from Nick’s book).</p>



<p>The classic trick here is to ask people to select a card, any card, from the standard playing card deck of 52. The moment you say &#8220;deck of cards&#8221; people make some assumptions: 52 cards, 4 suits, 13 cards in a suit, etc.  But let’s picture a magician. Go on, do it, take a moment to picture a magician …</p>



<p>The magician I have in mind, well, she has some knavery up her sleeve. Our knavess purchased 52 identical decks of cards and made up a new one with 51 knaves (also known as Jacks) of hearts, and the three of clubs (at the bottom of the deck to convince you it is real). That way, she automatically knows that you will pick the ‘right’ card. Of course there is always the opportunity of being unscrupulous, as <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KnCOdlQSeKQ" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">this James Bond video</a> demonstrates.</p>



<p>For presenters, this means exploring the liminal zone. You need to operate the edge of people’s experience. Start on familiar ground, then go on a journey together to explore new territories.  Communication can only register effectively when it builds on what the audience already knows (Rule of Magic #3). The liminal zone is where real learning happens. By starting on common territory for them you will get them in a positive frame of mind (saying, “yes, yes, yes” to each of your points – James Bond got Solitaire to agree with the power of the cards before his trick); then you can move them into unfamiliar territory.</p>



<p><em>Secret 2:</em> I started you on familiar ground with the desk of cards analogy and then we drifted into 1970s James Bond and Tarot cards; which I bet you weren’t expecting. Also, was the magician you pictured male or female? I bet it was male, even thought I primed you in the first paragraph of the section on relevance above.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-focus">Focus</h3>



<p>Our next key principle is the &#8220;single point of focus&#8221; concept (Rule of Magic #5).</p>



<p>Magicians are great at providing a single point of focus—drawing your eye to one place, and one place only.  This is so magicians can do some sleight of hand elsewhere! As presenters, we’re not going to do that, but we are going to make sure that your eyes (and therefore your brain) are focused on what we want you to focus on.</p>



<p>Here are three practical tips to achieve that:</p>



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<li>Decide in advance if you want your audience to be looking at you, or your slides. Then structure your presentation accordingly. Don’t let your slides compete for attention with you.</li>



<li>If presenting at a table, make sure you sit with the screen behind you so that your audience can look at you and the screen at the same time. (And don&#8217;t look at the screen while you are presenting!)</li>



<li>When using props, hold them up to your head, so that people can look at your talking face and the prop at the same time and don’t have to swivel back and forth.</li>
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<p>A subset of this idea is the concept of linearity: by presenting things in a linear and logical order you will be more likely to get people to do what you need them to. This not only means no dead ends or side channels, but also controlling the flow of information so that your audience can’t skip ahead and get to the punchline early.</p>



<p>An easy way to wreck linearity is to put a slide up on the screen and then proceed to talk through it. An easy way to achieve linearity is to give your audience’s brains only one thing to deal with at a time. One key concept per slide, or use builds for your bullet points, or shut up and let the audience process your slides while you remain quiet. Otherwise, you risk parallel tracks: while you are talking about point 2, they are still thinking about and processing point 1. Or, they are reading point 3 while you are still talking about point 1.</p>



<p><em>Secret 3:</em> Give your audience one thing to focus on at a time.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading" id="h-other-tricks-up-my-sleeve">Other tricks up my sleeve</h3>



<p>Of course, there is a lot more about creating magic in presentations. </p>



<p>Three of my favourite &#8220;tricks&#8221; are as follows:</p>



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<li>When using a flipchart, make some tiny pencil notes in a corner to remind you of what to say. Your seamless talk will then seem like &#8220;magic&#8221;. </li>



<li>Props or mock-ups. These can be a very powerful way of surprising and delighting your audience. This works especially well if you can tailor the prop or mock-up to your audience; bringing it to life in a &#8220;magical&#8221; way and making it relevant to them. And of course, when holding the prop or distributing the mock-ups, be sure to provide your audience with a single point of focus.</li>



<li>And finally, <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/2015/03/16/rhetorical-devices-tricolon/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">&#8220;the power of three&#8221;</a>. This is a well-known <a href="https://mannerofspeaking.org/category/rhetoric-2/page/5/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener">rhetorical device</a> and you will find it in almost every great speech, presentation, and sometimes even writing.</li>
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<p>Finally, did you notice how I started with familiar ideas (deck of cards) and then moved you into surprises (a female magician)? Did you notice how I used contrast (&#8220;breaking the pattern … making the pattern&#8221;; &#8220;An easy way to wreck linearity … An easy way to achieve linearity…&#8221;; general concepts with practical ideas). And really, truly, finally, how many times did I user the power of three in this article?</p>



<p><em>Answer:</em> 13. Did you find them all?</p>



<h6 class="wp-block-heading has-text-align-right" id="h-photo-courtesy-cleyton-ewerton-on-unsplash"><em>Photo courtesy <a href="https://unsplash.com/@cleytonewerton?utm_source=unsplash&amp;utm_medium=referral&amp;utm_content=creditCopyText">Cleyton Ewerton</a> on Unsplash</em></h6>
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