<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:blogger='http://schemas.google.com/blogger/2008' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005" xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496</id><updated>2024-11-08T08:10:30.508-08:00</updated><category term="writing"/><category term="fiction writing"/><category term="writing fiction"/><category term="writers"/><category term="editing"/><category term="setting"/><category term="authors"/><category term="Nancy Drew Mystery Stories"/><category term="characters"/><category term="reading"/><category term="books"/><category term="books for writers"/><category term="stories"/><category term="where to get ideas"/><category term="book reviews"/><category term="keep your story going"/><category term="novels"/><category term="where to get story ideas"/><category term="writing books"/><category term="Assassin&#39;s Flower"/><category term="Dark Moon Gates"/><category term="Gary Provost"/><category term="Lawrence Block"/><category term="Make Your Words Work"/><category term="Nenfari"/><category term="dealing with distractions"/><category term="distractions"/><category term="ideas"/><category term="inspirations"/><category term="red herrings"/><category term="romance"/><category term="story ideas"/><category term="vampires"/><category term="Anne Perry"/><category term="Catch as Cat Can"/><category term="Lemur"/><category term="MZB"/><category term="Marge Piercy"/><category term="Marion Zimmer Bradley"/><category term="Mrs. Murphy Mystery Series"/><category term="Singe"/><category term="Sneaky Pie Brown"/><category term="Storybook 4 software"/><category term="Sue Grafton"/><category term="Tathea"/><category term="Telling Lies for Fun and Profit"/><category term="Victoria Woodhull"/><category term="Witches&#39;  Gates Saga"/><category term="Writing the Novel from Plot to Print"/><category term="adverbs"/><category term="antagonists"/><category term="backing up your writing"/><category term="backups"/><category term="beginnings"/><category term="bitter baristar"/><category term="cats"/><category term="character emotions"/><category term="character tags"/><category term="contractions"/><category term="contrived beginnings"/><category term="creative dreaming"/><category term="critiques writers"/><category term="customer support"/><category term="description"/><category term="dialects"/><category term="dialogue"/><category term="disaster preparedness"/><category term="dreams"/><category term="ebook"/><category term="ebooks"/><category term="editors"/><category term="humor"/><category term="hypnosis"/><category term="inner editors"/><category term="interruptions"/><category term="interruptopns"/><category term="locations"/><category term="marketing"/><category term="murder mysteries"/><category term="mystery novels"/><category term="neuro-linguistic programming"/><category term="nlp"/><category term="plots"/><category term="politics"/><category term="presidents"/><category term="query letters"/><category term="regional dialogue"/><category term="remembering your dreams"/><category term="runes"/><category term="sequels"/><category term="series books"/><category term="software"/><category term="spell check"/><category term="spelling"/><category term="themed breaks"/><category term="thesaurus"/><category term="transitions"/><category term="true stories"/><category term="true story"/><category term="twitter"/><category term="villains"/><category term="wicca"/><category term="witchcraft"/><category term="witches"/><category term="women&#39;s suffrage"/><category term="word usage"/><category term="writing fast"/><category term="writing software"/><title type='text'>Naked Without A Pen</title><subtitle type='html'>Oh no! Not another Writing Blog! Why yes, exactly that! Come join my friends and me as we play with words, ideas, plots and characters. This blog is dedicated to those of us who love to write and who feel naked if they&#39;re not carrying a pen or notebook or something else to jot down their ideas. No doubt I&#39;ll be suggesting my favorite books on writing, and sharing my favorite novels as well.</subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default?redirect=false'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><link rel='next' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default?start-index=26&amp;max-results=25&amp;redirect=false'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>46</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-7325575483936275395</id><published>2016-03-12T13:23:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2016-03-12T13:23:25.568-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><summary type="text">I&#39;m moving to hubpages!

It&#39;s a struggle balancing several blogs and websites. Over the next several weeks I&#39;ll be moving my articles to http://hubpages.com/@lionrhod. You can also find my magickal, witchy and metaphysical writing at http://www.lionrhod.net.

Blessings!</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/7325575483936275395/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2016/03/im-moving-to-hubpages-its-struggle.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/7325575483936275395'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/7325575483936275395'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2016/03/im-moving-to-hubpages-its-struggle.html' title=''/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-4863300683676686816</id><published>2013-05-26T08:13:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2013-05-26T08:13:25.676-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Assassin&#39;s Flower"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="books"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Dark Moon Gates"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Nenfari"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="wicca"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="witchcraft"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="witches"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Witches&#39;  Gates Saga"/><title type='text'>Finally Published!</title><summary type="text">Weee! Earlier this month I FINALLY published Nenfari and Dark Moon Gates! LOL you&#39;d think I&#39;d have blogged about it before now, right? 



Dark Moon Gates is the first installment in the Witches&#39; Gates Saga.

Willa, high school 
Junior and witch-in-training has a problem. No, not the ordinary problem
 of being a lonely, geekish misfit, though sure, she can add that to her
 list. And not the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/4863300683676686816/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/05/finally-published.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4863300683676686816'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4863300683676686816'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/05/finally-published.html' title='Finally Published!'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhqOy5GML2gCJiN7YC_p8zQT_OUuRV1eeFApx4fIBpr6wZOR80v_WrTxqjh56xoBhvcVfVc5UpczuDbCXcM0hPs1YsYG-7V3E5CrEICw-wMW6PG9QEGrSEfuQIZzA9qPXni85lynBaZa4I/s72-c/dmgcoverSIG.jpg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-4526020759924349023</id><published>2013-03-02T09:28:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2013-03-02T09:33:42.049-08:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Assassin&#39;s Flower"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Dark Moon Gates"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="ebook"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="ebooks"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Marion Zimmer Bradley"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="MZB"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Nenfari"/><title type='text'>OMG Ebook Week Starts on Smashwords! Can I Get Nenfari Ready?</title><summary type="text">Ohmigosh! Smashwords announced that Read an Ebook Week starts tomorrow! I&#39;ve been prepping four books for ebook publication, Nenfari (free), Bad Man (free), Dark Moon Gates and Spellcraft Secrets.

Not a one of them is done yet! Eeek!

Nenfari is mainly waiting for a cover pic before we can face the evil Meatgrinder (the Smashwords tool that converts docs to ebook). Hubby is on it, fortunately. </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/4526020759924349023/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/03/ebook-week-smashwords-nenfari.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4526020759924349023'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4526020759924349023'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/03/ebook-week-smashwords-nenfari.html' title='OMG Ebook Week Starts on Smashwords! Can I Get Nenfari Ready?'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-3715846264103045572</id><published>2013-02-14T09:38:00.002-08:00</published><updated>2013-02-14T10:12:32.804-08:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="bitter baristar"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="true stories"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="true story"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><title type='text'>The Bitter Barista - What Not to Do If You&#39;re Writing True Story</title><summary type="text">
I was pretty shocked by the BitterBarista debacle. Some guy blows off steam on Twitter. Some other blog
exposes him and links to the company he works for. The guy gets
fired.



Here were my first thoughts: The posts
are satire, and people think he&#39;s funny. What&#39;s the big deal? Wow
the blog that exposed him must be creeps!&amp;nbsp;



Based on the feedback they got, a lot of other folks thought </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/3715846264103045572/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/02/bitterbaristawriterswritingtruestory.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/3715846264103045572'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/3715846264103045572'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2013/02/bitterbaristawriterswritingtruestory.html' title='The Bitter Barista - What Not to Do If You&#39;re Writing True Story'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-6672324899349283560</id><published>2012-11-17T14:07:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-11-17T14:07:47.259-08:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="spell check"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="spelling"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="word usage"/><title type='text'>Spell Check is Your Friend...Sort Of (Word Usage 1)</title><summary type="text">


Sorry, yes this is a rant. And no,
despite the title, my rant isn&#39;t really about spelling. Not exactly.




Maybe I&#39;m super-sensitive to the issue.
I was, after all, raised by an English teacher or two. I&#39;m not
perfect either. I&#39;m sure if you dredge the waters of my blog you
might find a spelling or grammar mistake here and there that I
haven&#39;t found and corrected yet.




But hey, this is a </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/6672324899349283560/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/11/spell-check-is-your-friendsort-of-word.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6672324899349283560'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6672324899349283560'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/11/spell-check-is-your-friendsort-of-word.html' title='Spell Check is Your Friend...Sort Of (Word Usage 1)'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-4081188759379977312</id><published>2012-10-13T16:36:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-10-14T09:40:30.548-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="characters"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="plots"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><title type='text'>Annoyance or Writing Opportunity?</title><summary type="text">
Wisdom has it that when faced with a
bad situation, you can either cry about it, or laugh. As a writer, I
can go one better and write about it.



Right now I&#39;m virtually homeless. Can&#39;t
afford gas to run the generator (for heat and computer) up at my land
so I&#39;m staying at a friend&#39;s house. Unfortunately, my buddy is the
Beta roommate. The Alpha roommate (the lease is in his name) sits on
the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/4081188759379977312/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/10/annoyance-or-writing-opportunity.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4081188759379977312'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4081188759379977312'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/10/annoyance-or-writing-opportunity.html' title='Annoyance or Writing Opportunity?'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgZHH5o7E1F4Bbt8mLtuyJyBoqIVwN6D0n017GHxWMR-bDIr27dffqiPbymbhXLqkHXZK-94G0V5ppQ9scVShSg2o0tvUEkSzodsrbOcLfG-KX5vqwHQdO6e509M9OcJpBgQj1nxUaC_IY/s72-c/knifesports.jpg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-341823646411850308</id><published>2012-09-03T13:13:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-09-03T13:13:40.963-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="authors"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book reviews"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writers"/><title type='text'>Other Writers Aren&#39;t Your Rivals</title><summary type="text">


&amp;nbsp;Nothing like an excuse to rant! Today I found An Open Letter AboutAuthor Behavior








In short, one particular author has
been going around using pseudonyms to 1) give himself glowing reviews
and 2) give his &quot;rivals&quot; bad reviews.




While giving your own writing glorious
reviews under a false name is clearly unethical, I was really
surprised with the second half of that equation, </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/341823646411850308/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/09/other-writers-arent-your-rivals.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/341823646411850308'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/341823646411850308'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/09/other-writers-arent-your-rivals.html' title='Other Writers Aren&#39;t Your Rivals'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-4724865792421534051</id><published>2012-07-25T18:28:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-25T18:28:41.504-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="humor"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="query letters"/><title type='text'>A Query Nightmare (Humor)</title><summary type="text">What happens when you&#39;ve spent the last couple weeks reading Query Shark and a few dozen other query letter websites? You wake up from weird dreams about the worst queries someone could possibly write. Here&#39;s the one I came up with, and the really scary part is that I can imagine it might not be the worst one some of these agents might have to read. (Or have to delete.)

As someone who was </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/4724865792421534051/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/a-query-nightmare-humor.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4724865792421534051'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4724865792421534051'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/a-query-nightmare-humor.html' title='A Query Nightmare (Humor)'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-8249448737403967273</id><published>2012-07-12T18:37:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-12T18:37:45.229-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="marketing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="twitter"/><title type='text'>Don&#39;t Want to Be a Twitter &quot;Twit&quot;</title><summary type="text">

So I&#39;m at the point where I think my
novel&#39;s ready enough to start sending out, and I actually got up the
nerve to send to the first agent.




 Meanwhile I&#39;m reading as much advice
as I can on marketing. Most agents these days want you to have a
&quot;platform&quot; already. Meaning you should have a gazillion
folks who read your blog, have crazy numbers of friends on Facebook.
A roiling mob just </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/8249448737403967273/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/dont-want-to-be-twitter-twit.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/8249448737403967273'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/8249448737403967273'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/dont-want-to-be-twitter-twit.html' title='Don&#39;t Want to Be a Twitter &quot;Twit&quot;'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-930005730099287573</id><published>2012-07-09T13:14:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-09T13:14:30.870-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="books for writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="character emotions"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="thesaurus"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing books"/><title type='text'>The Emotion Thesaurus - An Awesome Writing Resource</title><summary type="text">


If you&#39;ve ever been working on a
story, and wanted a more original way to show (rather than tell) your
character&#39;s emotions, The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer&#39;s Guide toCharacter Expression by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi is the book
for you! It&#39;s full of gestures and physical, mental and internal cues
that give the reader an idea of what your character is going through.
The book covers 75 </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/930005730099287573/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/emotion-thesaurus-awesome-writing.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/930005730099287573'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/930005730099287573'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/emotion-thesaurus-awesome-writing.html' title='The Emotion Thesaurus - An Awesome Writing Resource'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiGBE4DM9yh07ZHyjDbA3bfNVMO7p7y15w060SbTCLJY9EhrwGySSgnoftVoaaM9pznX_FA9z5pEvoGWfibtEosmaRYYjv-gPOffzVACtvtn2l5cM_CoK8CF83NIx4CUaA8CiCVp6q1Ji8n/s72-c/resized+by+half.jpg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-143806414819961087</id><published>2012-07-09T12:00:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-09T12:00:57.079-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="authors"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book reviews"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="romance"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="vampires"/><title type='text'>Nice Girls Don&#39;t Date Dead Men</title><summary type="text">



&quot;Hostility toward human males
marrying into were clans is to be expected and taken seriously.
Potential sons-in-law may want to carry wolfsbane or silver items in
their pockets. Weres find both substances to be extremely irritating.
-- Mating Rituals and Love Customs of the Were.&quot; (from Nice Girls Don&#39;t Date Dead Men)



Some sequels don&#39;t live up to the first
book. This certainly isn&#39;t one </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/143806414819961087/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/nice-girls-dont-date-dead-men.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/143806414819961087'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/143806414819961087'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/nice-girls-dont-date-dead-men.html' title='Nice Girls Don&#39;t Date Dead Men'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-6716109479096707855</id><published>2012-07-05T17:26:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-06T08:21:08.963-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="authors"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="romance"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="vampires"/><title type='text'>Nice Girls Don&#39;t Have Fangs</title><summary type="text">



Jane Jameson&#39;s having a bad day. She
gets fired from her job as a librarian. She doesn&#39;t even get a
severance check, just a $25 gift certificate to a local pub. There,
she meets the gorgeous and mysterious Gabriel. Her evening starts
looking up, but as she drives home (alone) her car breaks down.



Who should come by just then? Gabriel?
Nope. It&#39;s a drunk redneck hunter who mistakes her for </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/6716109479096707855/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/nice-girls-dont-have-fangs.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6716109479096707855'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6716109479096707855'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/nice-girls-dont-have-fangs.html' title='Nice Girls Don&#39;t Have Fangs'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-686202851136635715</id><published>2012-07-05T16:03:00.003-07:00</published><updated>2012-07-05T16:03:49.992-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="books for writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fast"/><title type='text'>How to Write Fast (While Writing Well)</title><summary type="text">

One of the challenges of writing is
that we talk ourselves into believing that writing is &quot;painful
and frustrating and slow. Those are lies,&quot; author David Fryxell
says. &quot;You can write. Writing is joyful and liberating and
fast.&quot;



Fryxell was one of those annoying kids
who always turned his homework in on time. (His teacher made him an
example for the class--and must have REALLY made him </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/686202851136635715/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/how-to-write-fast-while-writing-well.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/686202851136635715'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/686202851136635715'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/07/how-to-write-fast-while-writing-well.html' title='How to Write Fast (While Writing Well)'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-5112769653633843487</id><published>2012-06-29T18:54:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-06-29T18:54:14.789-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="customer support"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="software"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Storybook 4 software"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing software"/><title type='text'>Storybook 4 A Sad Story in Software Support</title><summary type="text">

It&#39;s a sad day when you find a piece of
software that looks like it will make organizing your writing easier
and more efficient...and learn that the support behind that software
is not only unhelpful, but downright rude.




Storybook 4 seemed like a dream come
true. It would help me organize my characters, my scenes, and the
other bits of information in my story (objects, relationships between</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/5112769653633843487/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/06/storybook-4-sad-story-in-software.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5112769653633843487'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5112769653633843487'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/06/storybook-4-sad-story-in-software.html' title='Storybook 4 A Sad Story in Software Support'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-677812264070819547</id><published>2012-06-27T16:19:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-06-27T16:19:29.453-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="editing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="red herrings"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><title type='text'>Killing The Non-Smoking Guns</title><summary type="text">

This week I&#39;m revising my novel and
feel almost ready to send it out in search of a publisher.




So imagine how silly I feel when I find
I&#39;ve written an entire long paragraph about a woodstove. 





Now this post could almost have been
entitled &quot;Kill Your Babies&quot; because that&#39;s what I had, a
lyrical and long description of a woodstove, based on, yes, an
antique parlor stove that I once owned</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/677812264070819547/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/06/killing-non-smoking-guns.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/677812264070819547'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/677812264070819547'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/06/killing-non-smoking-guns.html' title='Killing The Non-Smoking Guns'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-1354193527472716152</id><published>2012-03-27T13:51:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:51:19.565-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="critiques writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><title type='text'>Ladies Who Critique</title><summary type="text">I just joined LadiesWhoCritique.com an online site to help you find a critique partner.

Living out here in the woods has been challenging especially since I haven&#39;t yet found a community of writers here to share with.

The site is free and seems friendly, so I&#39;m looking forward to meeting some folks.

Will keep you all updated!</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/1354193527472716152/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/ladies-who-critique.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/1354193527472716152'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/1354193527472716152'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/ladies-who-critique.html' title='Ladies Who Critique'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-5503031689936267302</id><published>2012-03-27T11:36:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:15:09.900-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="editing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="setting"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Too Much Tea - Vary Your Scenes</title><summary type="text">I was reading this book review on Kat Loves Books where the protagonist spent most of her time drinking tea. It seems like every other action she took was drinking tea. (Once or twice she had wine instead.)

It made me go back and look at my manuscript and wonder if my characters are cooking and eating too much. In Chapter One my protagonist is cooking dinner, and there are a LOT of other scenes </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/5503031689936267302/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/too-much-tea-vary-your-scenes.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5503031689936267302'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5503031689936267302'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/too-much-tea-vary-your-scenes.html' title='Too Much Tea - Vary Your Scenes'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-1006348374414712513</id><published>2012-03-25T13:46:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2012-03-25T13:46:44.373-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Back Finally</title><summary type="text">It&#39;s hard to believe it&#39;s been almost a year since I&#39;ve posted. Isn&#39;t that a mess?

The good news is that between burgeoning gardens, broken computers, escaped yaks and rescued pit bulls (yes really) I&#39;ve finally got my ms to the point where I feel ready to send it to a publisher or agent.

I&#39;ve been working hard, and sometimes the lesson is that you need to cut down your areas of focus and just </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/1006348374414712513/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/back-finally.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/1006348374414712513'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/1006348374414712513'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2012/03/back-finally.html' title='Back Finally'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-5552681727872273420</id><published>2011-03-11T18:02:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-03-11T18:02:44.223-08:00</updated><title type='text'>AFK for the Tsunami</title><summary type="text">I know I was supposed to post about vain characters today. My apologies, I spent the day with my eyes glued to the TV.

More about my feelings on that here. 

I&#39;ll try to write something about writing tomorrow. Meanwhile my love and heartfelt wishes to all involved.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/5552681727872273420/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/afk-for-tsunami.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5552681727872273420'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/5552681727872273420'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/afk-for-tsunami.html' title='AFK for the Tsunami'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-6470191095954340000</id><published>2011-03-10T09:02:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:14:16.135-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="character tags"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="characters"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="sequels"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="series books"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Character Tag Clutter</title><summary type="text">Trying to come up with a theme for today&#39;s post, I asked a friend what was notable about the last book she read.

&quot;I&#39;m reading one of the books in a series,&quot; she said, &quot;it&#39;s a long series and in the current book the protagonist is listing her heroic achievements. She&#39;s vain. It gets annoying.&quot;

I pressed her on the issue. My buddy gave a sigh. &quot;Well the protagonist says, &#39;hello I am a *insert </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/6470191095954340000/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/character-tag-clutter.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6470191095954340000'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6470191095954340000'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/character-tag-clutter.html' title='Character Tag Clutter'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-4018076474581234894</id><published>2011-03-07T15:01:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:17:51.056-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="book reviews"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="books for writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Gary Provost"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Make Your Words Work"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="reading"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing books"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Make Your Words Work - Indispensable Books For Writers</title><summary type="text">If I had to choose just one book that would help improve my writing, Make Your Words Work: Proven Techniques for Effective Writing for Fiction and Nonfiction by Gary Provost would probably be it.

What does Provost mean by his title?

&quot;By writing that works, I mean writing that does the job it&#39;s supposed to do, whether that job is to inform, entertain, anger or instruct. Writing does not work if </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/4018076474581234894/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/make-your-words-work-indispensable.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4018076474581234894'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/4018076474581234894'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/03/make-your-words-work-indispensable.html' title='Make Your Words Work - Indispensable Books For Writers'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-6636376940536103208</id><published>2011-02-25T12:04:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:14:16.144-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="characters"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="where to get ideas"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>The Scrapbook - Get In Touch With Your Characters</title><summary type="text">This is an exercise designed to help you get in touch with your characters. It might even give you fodder for some new scenes. Try it, play with it, have fun!

Nowadays they have whole aisles in the craft stores devoted to scrapbooking, and some folks have turned this from a hobby to an artform. 

When I was a kid, it was just a blank album that I could stick mementos in. I was probably 10 or 14 </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/6636376940536103208/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/02/scrapbook-get-in-touch-with-your.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6636376940536103208'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/6636376940536103208'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/02/scrapbook-get-in-touch-with-your.html' title='The Scrapbook - Get In Touch With Your Characters'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-2296855696481966079</id><published>2011-02-10T08:14:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:14:15.979-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="editing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Gary Provost"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Make Your Words Work"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Nancy Drew Mystery Stories"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="transitions"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Unnecessary Scenes - What I Learned from Nancy Drew</title><summary type="text">PLEASE NOTE: No, I don&#39;t hate Nancy Drew. In fact, she&#39;s one of my favorite childhood heroines. That said, the Nancy Drew books      are an excellent example of writing that could use improvement. If   we    want to be good writers, we have to read a lot and face up to  when  we   or  others (even our icons) are less than excellent. For a detailed explanation of my feelings on this writing series</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/2296855696481966079/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/02/unnecessary-scenes-what-i-learned-from.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/2296855696481966079'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/2296855696481966079'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/02/unnecessary-scenes-what-i-learned-from.html' title='Unnecessary Scenes - What I Learned from Nancy Drew'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-370378593575640985</id><published>2011-01-13T11:04:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:14:16.031-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="adverbs"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="editing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Nancy Drew Mystery Stories"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Adverb Abuse - What I Learned from Nancy Drew</title><summary type="text">PLEASE NOTE: No, I don&#39;t hate Nancy Drew. In fact, she&#39;s one of my favorite childhood heroines. That said, the Nancy Drew books     are an excellent example of writing that could use improvement. If  we    want to be good writers, we have to read a lot and face up to when  we   or  others (even our icons) are less than excellent. For a detailed explanation of my feelings on this writing series, </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/370378593575640985/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/01/adverb-abuse-what-i-learned-from-nancy.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/370378593575640985'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/370378593575640985'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/01/adverb-abuse-what-i-learned-from-nancy.html' title='Adverb Abuse - What I Learned from Nancy Drew'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-306818986264049496.post-2288145161992846873</id><published>2011-01-05T11:26:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2012-03-27T13:14:15.970-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="characters"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="editing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="fiction writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Nancy Drew Mystery Stories"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writers"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="writing fiction"/><title type='text'>Too Many Characters At Once - What I Learned from Nancy Drew</title><summary type="text">PLEASE NOTE: No, I don&#39;t hate Nancy Drew. 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For a detailed explanation of my feelings on this writing series, go </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/feeds/2288145161992846873/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/01/too-many-characters-at-once-what-i.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/2288145161992846873'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/306818986264049496/posts/default/2288145161992846873'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://nakedwithoutapen.blogspot.com/2011/01/too-many-characters-at-once-what-i.html' title='Too Many Characters At Once - What I Learned from Nancy Drew'/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry></feed>