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Haile Selassie Dokumentation (Stern TV 1972, deutsch/german) Teil 1/2

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Anglo-Saxon poem "Deor" with Lyre

2019-05-11T16:01:00.001-07:00

Love

2019-02-26T12:46:00.001-08:00

Comments on "The Faux Pas"

2018-10-24T09:27:00.000-07:00

The Faux Pas

(Pentameter)

The frivolity of youth is its charm;

Slowly fades away with the aging soul;

A fancy dress party raised the alarm;

The harried Prince, some way, has lost control.

Skeletons in the closet do have sway;

Secrets are tied to the bones in the chest;

In graveyards they no longer want to stay,

But invade young minds that want to impress.

Constant in battle are young rolling stones;

The ancestral flaws they like to expose;

Hypocrisy lies in these bags of bones,

So let’s throw a party and wear their clothes.

The stage was set for the ball of the year;

Tom, Dick and Harry wore mask in the crowd;

Common guys were not supposed to be there;

And their ragbag clothes made a Nazi cloud.

The commoners’ streets are not paved with gold;

So the hair comes down in any spotlight.

Top of the line, comes from a different mould,

So a faux pas is very impolite.

In the lens, paparazzi shoot the Crown;

No vetted shots, from them, for royal folks,

Who throughout the country they bring renown;

This mystic feeling, royalty evokes.

Mistakes are made so old folks reprimand,

But with every error something is learnt.
History as a core, not taught in England!
So youth do not know what folks Hitler burnt.

How well one seeks to correct every wrong,
Indicates the true measure of the man;
So you eat humble pie, to make you strong,
And reflect on the way it all began.

© Paterika Hengreaves

(Summer 2005/New Zealand)

This poem the “Faux Pas” is written in Pentameter style.

The Pentameter is a literary device that can be defined as that verse made up of five strong metrical feet or beats. The Pentameter functions are to govern the individual verses in the poem and to provide a structural form to a poem. The Pentameter also gives arrangement to words through the regular use of accents on the syllables, and help in emphasizing the specific words which the poet wishes to use. This is the major reason for variations in the text through stressed/unstressed patterns.

"The Faux Pas" was composed during my stay in New Zealand in the summer of 2005, to capture the universal outcry when Prince Harry one of the sons of Prince Charles threw a fancy-dress ball. Unknowing to the Prince, a picture of him wearing a Nazi war symbol was taken by the paparazzi. This royal blunter caused eyebrows to be raised among the Jewish community as well as with Leaders of Commonwealth countries. They felt his behavior was not in keeping with someone who could be heir to the British Crown. This conclusion was drawn from reports carried via the dead tree and electronic media on the matter. The distraught Prince after many days of mulling over this faux pas made a royal apology. This apology is seen as a very heroic act executed by the Prince. This brought him back in good favour with the people around the globe. This serves to strengthen the notion that any sincere apology can heal wounds.

The politics of 2016-2018 America among candidates for the various political positions have exhibited behaviors that are social mistakes and more often than not are impolite or beyond the pale. They have showcased their jungle-like behaviors so unbecoming of a nation that is supposed to be civilized and a leader of the free-world. However, no human being is perfect, but educated and civilized people of America seeking ruler-ship positions in those political establishments should take pause. They should not indulge in a barrage of ‘false steps’ and especially the forty-fifth occupant in the White House. Sadly this is the cycle of the present-day. One is left to say that candidates running for the highest office in the land should avid for starters: nasty comments or the faux pas. These embarrassing social mistakes should never become the main dish in the political food-basket. I am mainly sounding the warning bell on the disgrace-full conduct in political arenas aired on electronic communication devices and in the “free-press”. God bless the United States of America.

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2018-10-12T10:01:00.001-07:00

Structure of the Villanelle Poetry

2018-10-11T08:25:00.001-07:00

Kadooment Day Villanelle

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask
Revellers from everywhere, including France

In brazen wear and tear, they bask

In the sun, sipping fermented juice from a bamboo flask

Tourists, jumping, whirling and twirling have come to prance

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk away from cane-trash

Chanting calypso songs, in native parlance

In brazen wear and tear, they bask

Sea of people on Spring Garden, round a cask
while vermin grind, sweet grass, with a weasel-mouth lance

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask

So Crop Over comes many months after Pasch

All through the day and night they sing and they dance

In brazen wear and tear, they bask

All year these wild cats, make camouflaging an easy task
in the cane fields to flex the Ministry of Finance

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask

In brazen wear and tear, they bask.

© Paterika Hengreaves

(July 2018 (Barbados)

Structure of the Villanelle Poetry

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask (A1)……
Revellers from everywhere, including France (B) ……………… Tercet stanza

In brazen wear and tear, they bask (A2)…………………………….

In the sun, sipping fermented juice from a bamboo flask (A)……

Tourists, jumping, whirling and twirling have come to prance (B)....Tercet Stanza

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask (AI…….

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk away from cane-trash (A)…

Chanting calypso songs, in native parlance (B)……………………. Tercet Stanza

In brazen wear and tear, they bask (A2)………………………….

Sea of people on Spring Garden, round a cask (A)…………………..
While vermin grind, sweet grass, with a weasel-mouth lance (B)…… Tercet Stanza

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask (A1)….

So Crop Over comes many months after Pasch (A)…………..

All through the day and night they sing and they dance (B)……. Tercet Stanza

In brazen wear and tear, they bask (A2)………………………

All year these wild cats, make camouflaging an easy task (A)…….
In the cane fields to flex the Ministry of Finance (B)………...……Quatrain Stanza

Jamming on kadooment day, from dawn to dusk, playing mask (A1)......

In brazen wear and tear, they bask. (A2)…………………….............

The "Kadooment Day" poem is written in the form of the English Villanelle. The Villanelle is of French origin. This poetic form uses repetition. The English equivalent of the French Villanelle is a fixed form poetry consisting of:

Nineteen verses of any length divided into -:

- 6 stanzas
- 5 tercet stanzas
- 1 concluding quatrain

Verses 1 and 3 of the initial Tercet rhyme. These rhymes are repeated in each subsequent Tercet (aba) and in the final two verses of the quatrain (abaa)

Verse 1 appears in its entirety as verses 6, 12 and 18

Verse 3 reappears as verses 9, 15 and 19.

Crop Over is a Bajan-Caribbean cane harvest festival in the West Indies. The festivities run for several weeks to celebrate the end of the sugar cane harvest.

Kadooment Day is the last day of Crop Over which commences on July 1 and ends on the August 1. It is a summer street festival with all the noise, colour and vibrancy you’d expect from a Caribbean festival. Folks get into the furrow with local drinks and cuisine; join the throng as bands and calypso musicians parade through the streets. Glittering costumes and plenty of “bare skin” are on show amidst a melee of revellers, stilt walkers, musicians and entertainers. Such fun and celebrations continue well into the wee hours of the morning so you’ll need plenty of stamina. Tourists world over are drawn to this festival annually.

“fermented juice from a bamboo flask” = rum in bottle
“sweet grass” = sugar cane

The Orthodox Understanding of Salvation, part 2

2018-09-19T15:07:00.001-07:00

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2018-09-19T07:52:00.001-07:00

Dragonfly

2018-07-29T15:30:00.002-07:00

Gone is the rain, chased by sky candle. Everywhere is blooming, on bird-road the dragonfly, devil's darning needle, ear cutter, snake doctor. Earth dwellers' dreadful names you wear; your translucent wings soar in the sun. You stalk. You prey, in broad daylight. You open mouth to prey, a predator on the loose. Mosquitoes, gnats are in your noose. Flying high, you search for a mate. Rest, you must on blade of grass. In careful watch, you must; children passing by, your wings wishing to pluck. How they laugh at you, you standing on your head on the grass; tail straight, the giraffe. In the groove, in the notch you conjugate. Mating wheel clear to watch. Audible impact, the lust; teasing and fussing a dragonfly on my callaloo; oh ho! you are the tantaboo.

Comments on the Dragonfly Poem:

Two Versions of writing a prose poem are shown below:

Version 1

Gone is the rain, chased by sky candle. Everywhere is blooming, on bird-road the dragonfly, devil's darning needle, ear cutter, snake doctor. Earth dwellers' dreadful names you wear; your translucent wings soar in the sun. You stalk. You prey, in broad daylight. You open mouth to prey, a predator on the loose. Mosquitoes, gnats are in your noose. Flying hing, you search for a mate. Rest, you must on blade of grass. In careful watch, you must; children passing by, your wings wishing to pluck. How they laugh at you, you standing on your head on the grass; tail straight, the giraffe. In the groove, in the notch you, conjugate. Mating wheel clear to watch. Audible impact, the lust; teasing and fussing a dragonfly on my callaloo; oh ho! you are the tantaboo.

Version 2

The rain is gone and the sky glows in the sun. Everywhere is blooming and in the sky is the dragonfly. The dragonfly is also known by such names as the "devil's darning needle" , air cutter and snake doctor.

These names have been given to the dragonfly by people who have seen the way it behaves. People have observed that dragonfly is a predator for mosquitoes and gnats while flying in the air.

When not searching for food the dragonfly can be seen perched on the grass with a keen eyes out for its predators. When the dragonfly is not preying on mosquitoes and other flying insects it can be seen perched on grasses in a provocative stance. Its head is down on the grass or whatever, and its tail is straight in the air like the neck of a giraffe and kids find this stance of the dragonfly to be amusing while they plot to sneak yup quietly while its head is down on the ground and pluck its wings so to proof if the dragonfly can still fly.

Structure of the Dragonfly Poem

This "Dragonfly" poem is defined by rhythmical prose. Prose poems are set on the page in continuous sequence of sentences without line brakes. It establishes its poetic qualities through cadence, heightened imagery, parataxis and emotional effects as shown below:

These names have been given to the dragonfly by people who have seen the way it behaves. People have observed that the dragonfly is a predator for mosquitoes and gnats while flying in the air.

Parataxis is what defines Prose Poetry. Normal Prose is defined by subordination conjunctions; line breaks and paragraphs. Parataxis is a poetic device that favors short simple sentences, with the use of coordinating rather than subordinating conjunctions. Examples of the use of paratactic syntax and as taken from poem "Dragonfly" are shown underlined in the excerpt below:

Gone is the rain, chased by sky candle, on bird-road You stalk. You prey, in broad daylight. You open mouth to prey, a predator on the loose. In careful watch, you must; children passing by, your wings wishing to pluck, tail straight, the giraffe. In the groove, in the notch Mating wheel clear watch. Audible impact, the lust

The Simile is a poetic devise found in poems. In order to be a simile the word "like" or "as" must be present. This rule is broken in paratactic syntax: for example, take this excerpt from the prose poem, Dragonfly:

...you standing on your head on the grass; tail straight, the giraffe...

Would you not say that "tail straight, the giraffe" is a special kind of simile, the "implied simile"? Some would say it is not a simile because it does not include "like" or "as". Some would say the phrase simply says that the giraffe tail is straight...and that would be correct. Some would say that the phrase is a simile because it is in a paratactic syntax. You know what, the answers supplied are correct because parataxis creates heaps of ambiguity and is only used in prose poetry and not used in regular prose or rhetoric. So yes, "tail straight. the giraffe" is an "implied simile".

Bear in mind though, that "parataxis" is a poetic device that favours short, simple sentences with coordinating rather than subordinating conjunctions. Parataxis is also refers to a technique in prose poetry in which two images or fragments usually startle dissimilar images or fragments, are juxtaposed without a clear connection. Readers are left to make their own connections by the paratactic syntax. The "implied simile" can be found in prose poetry.

Another poetic device used in Prose Poetry is "kenning" where a phrase is used to describe a common thing. Some kennings can be more obscure than others, and then grow close to being a riddle. Kenning can be more obscure than others, and then grow close to being a riddle. Kenning is a much-compressed form of metaphor; and object is described in a two-word phrase. Here is an example:

"Sky-candle" for the "sun"

Characteristics of the Dragonfly

The dragonfly mates in the air in what is known as the mating wheel. The baby dragonfly is called a larva but its proper name is a nymph. It is an aquatic insect because the female dragonfly lays its eggs in stagnant water where they hatch and fly away as dragonflies.

Here are more facts concerning the dragonfly. It is an insect in the order odonata; with multifaceted eyes, two pairs of transparent wings and an elongated body. It is different from the damselfly because the damselfly's wings are not held along and parallel to the body when at rest and its eyes are separated. They do share similar morphing skills.

The dragonfly is an important predator feeding on mosquitoes and other small insects like flies, bees, ants, wasps. Very rarely does the dragonfly eat butterflies. Stagnant water because any army of dragonflies keep hovering it. The dragonfly's egg is the larva and the proper name for it is nymph and lives in the water for a long time before morphing into a dragonfly and is therefore aquatic. Though the dragonfly is predator, birds, lizards, frogs, spiders, fish, water bugs and even other large dragonflies are its predators.

©Paterika Hengreaves

(July 2003)

No Compassionate Consideration

2018-07-15T14:51:00.002-07:00

Just real thoughts to you we say

Elizabeth we love this Queen

And her father George the same way

Not that trumpet so crude and mean

God bless this Royal Queen on Thrown

Royalty love, around the globe

America’s trumpet bemoan

Music of hate fills his wardrobe.

So when your own big dog bit you,

You are properly well bitten;

He likes pudding’s plate and souse too,

But walked in front Queen of Britain,

Where does his manners lie pray tell?

Queen circled him, took back her spot,

No real manners in him doth dwell

More manners in Royal teapot,

(Wait for the continuation)

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2018-05-28T12:59:00.001-07:00

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2018-04-08T20:46:00.001-07:00

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2018-02-18T18:07:00.001-08:00

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2017-10-26T05:50:00.001-07:00

A poem: Everybody wants to save the world

2017-10-19T16:20:00.000-07:00

Humanity Rose

2017-10-04T07:56:00.002-07:00

To great extent, people mean so much more
In the jails we lock up males and females
Nevertheless, people we must adore
With human kindness let no one curtails.

People like roses are found far and near
Among Asia and lands across the sea
Petals are those families there to care
And cherish those colours and names we see.

The mind becomes the interpretive dance
As eyes behold the wonderful valley
In Arkles Bay where trees do dance and prance
Around those homes, children do play gladly.

As delicate as rose-petals unwind
But tough as thorns, which grow to guard the stem
Yet beautiful mid shine and rain behind
The rainbow of love from us we give them.

Fragile is life, and round the globe lies strife
Nature is stressed; oceans in deep motion
Tsunami waved to cut with butcher's knife
With vengeful acts, God's work of creation.

As folks did eat beneath the Christmas tree
Never a thought that plates would crash on floor
Instincts made animals and birds to flee
The leap-year tide did wash dead shoals ashore.

The day Tsunami washed away the ground
His waves were more that fifteen meters high
The pelts of folks did carpet ground around
Heaps of carrion fumes perfumed the sky.

The blooms of earth did wash away that day
By Davy Jones a fraught with bloody rage
On Boxing Day beneath a sky so grey
Now growing poppies write their story page.

What great sadness lingers in minds not clear
The loss surpassed Ivan in Grenada
This catastrophic blow still Ache's fear
That sent after shocks beyond Nevada.

The heavy ruin plays on most CDs
To cue the minds to graves with drab decor
As fingers scratched for life amid debris
They longed once more for blissful days of yore.

To keep this hope alive with will to strive
Humanity rose with great devotion
As people across the globe took the drive
They sent dough to souls with deep emotion.

Their cries of praise reached on high Jehovah
For hearts of gold that eased the souls' laments
To lands of the Asian Diaspora
Life-water flows out of those gory tents.

© Paterika Hengreaves

Composed in Arkles Bay, New Zealand on Boxing Day 2004 after watching TV footage on the aftermath of the Asian Tsunami and the billions of dollars collected from around the world to assist the recovery efforts of these Tsunami survivors.

Who is this "Davy jones?"

"Davy jones" means the bottom of the sea or ocean

According to the Etymology Dictionary, this term first surfaced in "The Spirit of the Sea" in 1751 in Smollett's "The Adventures of Peregrin Pickle (Chapter 15) as an ominous and terrifying fiend who presides over all the evil spirits of the deep, and is often seen in various shapes, perching among the rigging on the eve of hurricanes, shipwrecks and other disasters.

Other interesting accounts come from

Davy Jone's Locker "bottom of the Sea" is 1803, from nautical slang of unknown origin.

Another premise is that it might as well come from the biblical Jonah, regarded as unlucky by sailors.

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Father Abraham

2017-06-12T17:49:00.000-07:00

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2017-03-16T14:42:00.001-07:00

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2017-01-19T01:49:00.001-08:00

Comments on "The Tear-filled Heart"

2016-11-16T09:23:00.000-08:00

The Tear-filled Heart Rhyme scheme: aaAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAb

What a travesty? (Set me free) aa

From brutality, (set me free ) Refrain

Your ways are far too agrestic

The vulgarity; set me free Aa

Your lies; no Qantas jets you own;

From depravity, set me free Aa

Even cats and dogs need respect

From bestiality, set me free Aa

In your mess you have lost your wits;

Have no chastity; set me free Aa

A rat will always be a rat;

From your vanity, set me free Aa

Your Texas ranch is my prison

From calamity, set me free Aa

So many sad days I endure

From barbarity, set me free Aa

Trumpery is now my nightmare

From insanity, set me free Aa

I see clearly you cannot love

You must Cassidy, set me free Aa

Your RiRi is on bended knees

From tragedy, please set me free. Aa

(July 17, 2015)

The Ghazal is a poem of five to fifteen couplets. It is made up of a short monorhyme. The first two verses rhyme with a repeated rhyme in the second of each succeeding couplet. The Ghazal usually deals with themes of love in a melancholy mood. The roots of the Ghazal blossomed in seventh-century Arabia and gained prominence in the thirteenth- and fourteenth-century much credit to such poets as Rumi and Haftz. In the eighteenth-century, the Ghazal was used by poets writing in Urdu, a mix of the medieval languages of Northern India, including Persian. Among these poets, Ghalib is the recognized master.

Indian musicians such as Ravi Shankar and Begum Akhtar popularized the Ghazal in the English-speaking Diaspora during the 1960s. The poet Agha Shahid Ali introduced the Ghazal in its classical form to Americans. Ali practiced his poetic craft in USA universities before cancer took his life in December of 2001. He left with English Poetry writers’ a legacy on how to write a Ghazal based on its traditional roots since it appeared from his many poetic statements he was not particularly a fan of Ghazal in free verse. His guidelines on how to write an English Ghazal suggested the following:

No enjambments between couplets

Couplets should be linked to a strict formal scheme

The rhyme scheme and refrain should remain the same throughout the Ghazal

Each line should have the same length inclusive of rhyme and refrain whether the verses

are metrical or syllabic

The last couplet should be a signature couplet

The scheme of rhyme and refrain should emerge from the opening couplet of the Ghazal

These pointers have influenced how the poem, “The Tear-filled Heart” is written. During the composition of this English Ghazal, every effort was made to ensure that the poem reflected this “constant longing”. The Ghazal is defined by this constant longing. This conforms to Ali's view. The poem, "The Tear-filled Heart" has eleven tetrameter couplets. A couplet has two successive verses of poetry, is usually of equal length and rhythmic correspondence with end-words that rhyme. The couplet is the shortest stanza form. It is joined frequently with other couplets, to form a poem with no stanzaic divisions.

A monorhyme is a poem in which all the verses have the same end rhyme. An end rhyme is a rhyme occurring in the terminating word or syllable of one verse of poetry with that of another verse, as oppose to internal rhyme.

The rhyme scheme used in this poem is - aaAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAbAb representing as well the eleven stanzas in the poem. In a rhyme scheme, repeated rhymes are shown in capital letters.

A refrain can sit on a stanza, verse, or phrase, generally pertinent to the central theme, which is repeated verbatim, usually at regular intervals throughout a poem, most often at the end of a stanza.

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