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			<name>Jackie Kessler</name>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Mom, I Don&#8217;t Want to Write Today]]></title>
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		<updated>2009-01-07T14:43:50Z</updated>
		<published>2009-01-07T14:43:50Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="publicity and promotion" /><category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="For Novelists" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Remember when you didn&#8217;t want to go to school, and you&#8217;d lie in bed and, well, lie about having a stomach ache? (Maybe that was just me. Don&#8217;t tell my mother. She&#8217;s already upset that I write about s-e-x under my legal name.) It didn&#8217;t matter that there were things to learn and homework to [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2009/01/07/mom-i-dont-want-to-write-today/"><![CDATA[<p>Remember when you didn&#8217;t want to go to school, and you&#8217;d lie in bed and, well, lie about having a stomach ache? (Maybe that was just me. Don&#8217;t tell my mother. She&#8217;s already upset that I write about s-e-x under my legal name.) It didn&#8217;t matter that there were things to learn and homework to hand in and tests to take and reports to give. You didn&#8217;t want to go to school that day, damn it. You wanted free time. You wanted to avoid the deadlines.</p>
<p>Same thing with writing. While there are some days when it&#8217;s like you&#8217;ve got an IV drip with liquid ideas filling your veins, there are plenty of days when it&#8217;s just staring at the screen and forcing the words to appear. Sometimes, this turns into nothing getting written, and sometimes that&#8217;s OK.</p>
<p>And then&#8230;there are the days when that happens and you&#8217;re on a tight deadline. (Oh noes!)</p>
<p>I&#8217;m on a deadline right now. I have to finish all my &#8220;Jet&#8221; chapters by 1/16. That comes down to 2 chapters a day, no excuses. Last night I had an emergency to deal with, so I had to drop everything. Today I have to write 4 chapters. The kids have no school today, due to ice and snow and hints of a wintery Armageddon. You see the snowball waiting to happen with my deadline.</p>
<p>My question to writers is this: What gets you to stick to your deadlines? Do you tell yourself &#8220;This is my job, and this is my deadline, and there&#8217;s nothing to discuss&#8221; and then pull a Nike and just do it? Do you bribe yourself with chocolate after a chapter, or with a round of Smash Bros. on the Wii when you hit your word count for the day? Do you OD on caffeine and writewritewrite? Do you call your agent or editor and beg for an extention?</p>
<p>One of the other distractions for me is a new release: <a href="http://search.barnesandnoble.com/Red-Hot-Valentines-Day/Jess-Michaels/e/9780061689390/?itm=3" title="Red Hot Valentine's Day">A RED HOT VALENTINE&#8217;S DAY</a> is now on the shelves. It&#8217;s an erotic anthology; my novella is a Hell on Earth standalone prequel. If smokin&#8217; demon nookie is your thing, you&#8217;ll probably enjoy &#8220;Hell Is Where the Heart Is.&#8221;</p>
<p>And with that shameless plug done&#8230; what keeps you honest when it comes to meeting deadlines?</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Alma Alexander</name>
			<uri>http://www.AlmaAlexander.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Series and serials]]></title>
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		<updated>2009-01-05T12:15:09Z</updated>
		<published>2009-01-05T12:15:09Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="writing process" /><category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="our books" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Very soon now the third and final book in my Worldweavers trilogy, &#8220;Cybermage&#8221;, will be hitting the bookstores (look at www.worldweaversweb.com for more info&#8230;) At least one writer friend is currently in the same boat as I am - namely, coming out with a capstone, the completing book in a story arcing over several books, [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2009/01/05/series-and-serials/"><![CDATA[<p>Very soon now the third and final book in my Worldweavers trilogy, &#8220;Cybermage&#8221;, will be hitting the bookstores (look at www.worldweaversweb.com for more info&#8230;) At least one writer friend is currently in the same boat as I am - namely, coming out with a capstone, the completing book in a story arcing over several books, and wrestling with the same notion of whether books in series are best tightly intertwined (necessitating a reading of the whole series in order, or not at all) or as much stand-alone as possible, giving individual readers who might come in at different points the ability to pick up the series and get enthralled in the storyline and THEN picking up the rest of the series and reading it in order so as to enrich their story-experience.</p>
<p>Several different ideas some into play here.</p>
<p>The identity and relative celebrity of the author enter into it in a big way for certain readers.  If you are a fan of Author X, and you find book 2 of a series that you hadn&#8217;t heard of before but book1 is not in evidence right then, you&#8217;re probably going to snap up book 2 and either squirrel it away until such time as you are able to find #1 or else just go and read the thing anyway and see if you can figure it out from there. You are much less likely to do this for an author who is not a household name, especially if you find the books in hardcover - these days shelling out more than $20 for a book by a complete unknown (at least unknown to you) without a guarantee that you&#8217;ll ever return for the rest of the series - well - it&#8217;s a serious investment. The unknown writer has to tread a tightrope in order to reel you in - the book HAS to be both a standalone and enough of a lure to make you come back for the rest.</p>
<p>This is HARD.</p>
<p>Inexperienced and/or less adroit experienced writers may fall into the Infodump Trap, wherein they attepmt to summarise the events it is necessary for the reader to know (and which occurred in a previous book, or books) by doing some sort of summary or precis in the current volume. It can be more or less well disguised - a recap done in dialogue, or a page torn from someone&#8217;s journal or diary, or an honest-to goodness flashback, or a prologue&#8230; and they all have their troubles. Do it too little, and the new reader may get lost in the current book without the necessary backround knowledge to help him along. Do it too much, and you run the risk of annoying the readers who HAVE read the previous books and DO know the material (&#8221;Yes, yes, yes, YES, we know all this already, get to the chase&#8230;[flipflipflip]&#8221;) or simply annoying readers in general because you&#8217;re sliding into the storied swamps of &#8220;as you know Bob&#8221; territory and expounding at length on things that are blindingly obvious because you no longer know how much information is too much information.</p>
<p>Sometimes the waters are muddied by the simple fact that your readers are individuals too and their perceptions of what you have attempted to do may differ widely. DIfferent reviewers of &#8220;Spellspam&#8221;, the second Worldweavers volume, have individually called it difficult to follow if you haven&#8217;t read &#8220;Gift of the Unmage&#8221; (book #1 in the trilogy) or a brilliant stand-alone novel which can be read without recourse to the previous volume - unh, well, yeah. that. I dread to think what some of those people will actually make of &#8220;Cybermage&#8221; because although it IS a self-standing story on its own it does use as a cornerstone of it an artefact that was discovered by my protag and her friends at the tail and of book 2, and the roots of its existence and importance lie squarely in THAT book.</p>
<p>So, for what it&#8217;s worth, here is what *I* tried to do with a trilogy.</p>
<p>First, the pitfalls I was aware of and tried to avoid:</p>
<p>1. large-scale infodumping of explanatory material from previous books, where I could help it</p>
<p>2. using book 2 as a bridge between books 1 and 3, without giving it any redeeming merits of its own</p>
<p>3. making it absolutely IMPOSSIBLE to read any one of these books without having touched on the previous ones.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s what I DID try to do:</p>
<p>1. Build two different kinds of story arc - smaller individual volume-length story arcs which resolved the storyline of each individual book at the end of that book, giving the books a stand-alone feel, and an over-reaching trilogy arc which began building in book one and crescendoed throughout the three volumes until the greater story was resolved at the end of the third and final book and hopefully gave closure to the entire series as a whole.</p>
<p>2. Give enough complexity to each book for it to be worthwhile as a read as and of itself, as opposed to being &#8220;filler&#8221; or backstory.</p>
<p>3. Built up the tension and the stakes in incremental measure, sort of like putting the frog into water that is only gradually being brought to the boil instead of dumping it into boiling water in the first place, teasing out individual ideas and issues of interest, making the reader involved with the small things in my protags&#8217; lives so that they could not help but become involved in the big picture because they now cared about what happened to these characters.</p>
<p>4. Realise that characters who are still growing up have goals that change and mutate as the characters change, and adapt the actions and the storylines to these changes as they occur - and making the stakes bigger and bigger in each book as more information, more knowledge, and more wisdom becomes available to the characters as they mature. I hope that what I eventually achieved is a character who is capable and responsible enough, at the end of book 3, to take up the burdens that her broadening world-view is giving her to bear - and who would have been recognisably unable to bear those burdens at the beginning of her journey, when the reader first meets her at the start of book 1. I hope I have achieved organic, believable growth for my character over the course of the three books chronicling her journey - and more importantly, that this growth and this journey are sufficiently recognisable and interesting to the reader for the reader to follow its course.</p>
<p>Worldweavers is a series (finite and rounded, recognisably part of the same pattern but with a final closure at the end) rather than a serial (think &#8220;Wheel of Time&#8221;&#8230;) The third book in the trilogy closes out THIS part of the story, at least. There may well be other stories set in the same universe but they will have to definitely stand on their own, their only connection to this trilogy a tenuous worldbuilding thread which might lead the cognoscenti back to the original three books but which is not a primary plot node. Once the third book is well and truly out, I look forward to hearing from readers about how well I achieved the goals that I tried to aim for, how well the series succeeded as a whole, and how easy/hard/impossible it might have been to read these books individually or out of their projected order.</p>
<p>Over to you, readers - what do you look for in a series or a trilogy? How important is stand-alone-ness to you? How annoyed DO you get when you can only find book 2 of a trilogy with books 1 and 3 unavailable or even out of print&#8230;?</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Stephanie Burgis</name>
			<uri>http://www.stephanieburgis.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Christmas Stories]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-26T09:26:27Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-26T09:26:27Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Yesterday was our first Christmas with our son. Of course, at just under 3 months old, he wasn&#8217;t aware of most of what was going on around him, but we loved it all anyway, and I enjoyed the whole holiday even more because I was thinking of how we&#8217;d be sharing it with him in [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/26/christmas-stories/"><![CDATA[<p>Yesterday was our first Christmas with our son. Of course, at just under 3 months old, he wasn&#8217;t aware of most of what was going on around him, but we loved it all anyway, and I enjoyed the whole holiday even more because I was thinking of how we&#8217;d be sharing it with him in the future.</p>
<p>Because we&#8217;re in England - and because my husband and I are both SF fans as well as writers - one of the main events of the day was, of course, the <em>Doctor Who </em>Christmas special. (The new <em>Wallace &amp; Grommit</em> Christmas special would also have been a great feature except that it was on at 8:30, and, as new parents, we&#8217;d already collapsed into bed by the time it started!) As writers do, we had a great time watching it and then just as good a time discussing it afterwards and debating how we would have changed bits if we&#8217;d written it. (Sorry, Russell T. Davies! No offence meant.)</p>
<p>I grew up without a television in the house, so there were no Christmas specials to watch on TV, but there were stories in books that made the holiday feel real to me. Every year, we read Dickens&#8217;s <em>A Christmas Carol</em> out loud, finishing on Christmas Day, and every Christmas Eve, before bed, we read <em>The Night Before Christmas</em>. I still have lines from both books memorized, and they pop into my head frequently around Christmastime!</p>
<p>As we look forward to sharing our Christmases with our son in the future and forming our own new family traditions, I&#8217;ve been thinking about what stories make Christmas for different people. I love the new British tradition of <em>Doctor Who</em> Christmas specials - and to fans like us, Doctor Who fighting Victorian-age Cybermen really can make Christmas Day special. So can Scrooge and Marley (in the book or any of the films), or Big Bird and Cookie Monster, in <em>Christmas Eve on Sesame Street</em>, my favorite Christmas video when I was a kid. For me, so can an origami bird in <a href="http://www.strangehorizons.com/2003/20030609/beauty.shtml" title="Five Things of Beauty, by Patrick Samphire">&#8220;Five Things of Beauty&#8221;</a> - it&#8217;s not a Christmas-themed story in any way (and in fact, <em>Strange Horizons</em> published it in sunny July), but <a href="http://www.patricksamphire.com" title="Patrick Samphire">my husband</a> wrote it for me as a Christmas gift several years ago, and every time I read it, I feel Christmas-y again.</p>
<p>What stories make Christmas, for you?</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Mindy Klasky</name>
			<uri>http://www.mindyklasky.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Stocking Stuffers]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-25T18:39:18Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-25T18:39:18Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[So?  For those who celebrate the winter holiday season, what writing and/or reading related gifts did you get?  What will you go out and purchase for yourself, now that you&#8217;ve heard about the cool things received by your friends and family?
Me?  My holidays mostly fed my non-writing passions - the beading fun that I have [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/25/stocking-stuffers/"><![CDATA[<p>So?  For those who celebrate the winter holiday season, what writing and/or reading related gifts did you get?  What will you go out and purchase for yourself, now that you&#8217;ve heard about the cool things received by your friends and family?</p>
<p>Me?  My holidays mostly fed my non-writing passions - the beading fun that I have in down time - and my clotheshorse passion (it&#8217;s odd to have gone six months without buying a single new item of clothing - but who *needs* new clothes when she works from home full time?)</p>
<p>Happy holidays to all who celebrate!</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Jim C. Hines</name>
			<uri>http://www.jimchines.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Holiday Greetings from Jig the goblin and Smudge the fire-spider]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-25T01:35:11Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-25T01:35:11Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Not Remotely Writing Related" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[(With Apologies to Clement C. Moore)
’Twas the night of midwinter, and all through the cave,
Every goblin was starving; their outlook was grave.
Jig sorted through discarded garbage with care,
In the hopes that some scrap of food might be found there.
The children were hungry and wailed from their cribs,
Their baby fangs scraping on bare old dwarf ribs.
And [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/24/holiday-greetings-from-jig-the-goblin-and-smudge-the-fire-spider/"><![CDATA[<p>(With Apologies to Clement C. Moore)</p>
<p>’Twas the night of midwinter, and all through the cave,<br />
Every goblin was starving; their outlook was grave.<br />
Jig sorted through discarded garbage with care,<br />
In the hopes that some scrap of food might be found there.</p>
<p>The children were hungry and wailed from their cribs,<br />
Their baby fangs scraping on bare old dwarf ribs.<br />
And Jig in his loincloth with Smudge on his lap,<br />
Knew he would soon take a permanent nap.</p>
<p>When deep in the tunnels came a terrible fuss.<br />
So Jig stood to go, “’Cause they always send us.”<br />
Away through the darkness he tiptoed in fear,<br />
Listening hard with his pointy blue ears.</p>
<p>With Smudge on his shoulder and knife in his hand,<br />
He crept toward the snow-covered, cold, moonlit land.<br />
When what to Jig’s wide rheumy eyes should appear,<br />
But the wreck of a sleigh and eight vicious reindeer.</p>
<p>The driver in red cracked a wicked long whip,<br />
Making Jig’s small knife start to shake in his grip.<br />
Larger than stallions the great beasts appeared,<br />
Their teeth bared and ready, their antlers like spears.</p>
<p>“Smudge, what are we doing?  They’re going to eat us!<br />
We’re goblins!  Everyone always defeats us.<br />
In every fight it’s the goblins who fall,<br />
So run away, run away, run away all!”</p>
<p>While the stranger struggled to extract his sleigh,<br />
Jig and his spider were soon on their way.<br />
When what of all things should choose to betray him,<br />
But the growl of his stomach, calling out to slay him.</p>
<p>And Smudge in his fear grew as hot as a coal.<br />
The intruder advanced, like a vicious red troll.<br />
Jig threw his spider at the stranger’s white beard.<br />
Smudge burst into flames, and the man’s face was seared.</p>
<p>The stranger wore fur from his head to his foot,<br />
And now, thanks to Smudge, he was covered in soot.<br />
A strange lumpy bundle he had in his sack,<br />
Like bodies to feed to his animal pack.</p>
<p>His eyes how they glowed, and his scowl was so scary,<br />
His whip was a viper to slay the unwary.<br />
His cloak was thick fur, just the color of blood.<br />
His breath smelled all sour from within his hood.</p>
<p>He stomped on the floor, his face red with fury.<br />
While Smudge ran away, Jig cowered and worried.<br />
The man doffed his cloak and howled from his belly,<br />
And he shook from his rage like a bowlful of jelly.</p>
<p>He was chubby and plump, a damn pointy-eared elf!<br />
And Jig groaned when he saw him, in spite of himself.<br />
A glint of the eye and a twist of his head,<br />
Gave Jig to know he might soon end up dead.</p>
<p>He came after Jig with his whip and a dirk,<br />
While the poor goblin fled, then turned with a jerk.<br />
At the mouth of the lair Jig gave a great shout.<br />
“He’ll feed twenty mouths, and he’s brought eight huge mounts!”</p>
<p>A desperate whistle called reindeer to fight,<br />
But the goblins were starving and set them alight.<br />
And Jig said to himself as he thought of those beasts,<br />
“Happy winter to all, and to all a good feast!”</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Kate Elliott</name>
			<uri>http://www.kateelliott.com</uri>
		</author>
		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Cliches I Have Loved]]></title>
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		<id>http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/18/cliches-i-have-loved/</id>
		<updated>2008-12-18T06:22:29Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-18T06:22:29Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Recently I was reading Eva Ibbotson’s The Countess Below Stairs as my evening recreational brain-relaxing reading.  I very much like Ibbotson’s clear, graceful prose, and the way she scatters the telling detail through text otherwise unencumbered by the weight of endless scene-setting detail in her historical landscape.
But this book was rough for me in terms [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/18/cliches-i-have-loved/"><![CDATA[<p>Recently I was reading Eva Ibbotson’s <em>The Countess Below Stairs</em> as my evening recreational brain-relaxing reading.  I very much like Ibbotson’s clear, graceful prose, and the way she scatters the telling detail through text otherwise unencumbered by the weight of endless scene-setting detail in her historical landscape.</p>
<p>But this book was rough for me in terms of the plotting because the characters have no depth - the good are good and the bad are bad, no gray, no ambivalence;  therefore, there are no plot surprises.  None.</p>
<p>Yes, the young earl with the impoverished estate who has just been released from hospital after injuries received in World War I (now over) has become engaged to one of his nurses, a beautiful heiress who was efficient and orderly as a nurse (her ability for compassion is never mentioned;  red flags raised!) and who is, we learn, an eager adherent of the science of New Eugenics.</p>
<p>Ah-ooo-gah!  Ah-ooo-gah!</p>
<p>(Periscope down!  Dive!  Dive!)</p>
<p>There’s a subplot skewering anti-Semitism, which I appreciated, but whose impact is diluted because in this post-WWI England, evidently only the eugenics people are prejudiced against Jews.  There’s a subplot advocating humane treatment of the mentally disabled, the elderly and infirm, and there’s a sweet crippled premature child whose struggles are thoughtfully touched on.  This is all genuinely touching.</p>
<p>But the story did get a <em>wee bit</em> predictable.  I admit that, in the end, I was disappointed.</p>
<p>Surely I was disappointed <em>because of the cliches</em>.</p>
<p>But then I thought:  Who am I kidding?  Is there a single cliché in this book I haven’t used at one time or another, either consciously with an attempt at a twist, or unconsciously because it’s stuck in my unexamined assumptions box, or just because I liked it and wanted to trot it through its paces?</p>
<p>I know, I know.  Some of you, or perhaps many of you, or perhaps all of you, are better than me in this regard.  But sometimes, you know, I love a cliché.  I love its bright trumpets and rattling drums.  I love the way the shiny length of twirling batons catches in the light.  The music makes me cry.  I am weak.  I am sentimental.  Let me go and wipe away my tears.</p>
<p>I think <em>The Countess Below Stairs</em> might function very well as a comfort book (I have comfort books, like comfort food).  It veered in the direction for me, but ultimately I was disappointed because there were too many cliches too predictably deployed and handled for my taste.  Plot cliches are like a certain style of overly ornate prose, or the lengthy and detailed description of a single silver salver.  You don’t have to have them, and often its best if you don’t, but you can use them <em>if</em> you use them sparingly and at the appropriate time textually.</p>
<p>And, of course, the truth is that many popular and even respected books are popular because they are playing a riff on a cliché that readers respond to.  It’s just that the tune is good, or subtle, or just so much darn fun.  That’s why I generally finish any discussion on “rules” of writing&#8211;what to do or what not to do&#8211;by saying:  you can do anything as long as you make it work.</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Marie Brennan</name>
			<uri>http://www.swantower.com</uri>
		</author>
		<title type="html"><![CDATA[There&#8217;s Something About Monarchy]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-16T10:00:45Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-16T10:00:45Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Fantasy gets a lot of guff for its kings and queens.  I won&#8217;t even get into the critics who call everything &#8220;feudalism-lite&#8221; without the blindest clue what feudalism actually means; let&#8217;s just agree they&#8217;re generally talking about a hierarchical and hereditary aristocratic system with a single ruler on top.
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		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/16/theres-something-about-monarchy/"><![CDATA[<p>Fantasy gets a lot of guff for its kings and queens.  I won&#8217;t even get into the critics who call everything &#8220;feudalism-lite&#8221; without the blindest clue what feudalism actually means; let&#8217;s just agree they&#8217;re generally talking about a hierarchical and hereditary aristocratic system with a single ruler on top.</p>
<p>What is it about monarchy?  Why is it so common in fantasy?</p>
<p>There have been <a href="http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kateelliott/craft/in-the-wake-of-the-usa-presidential-election-deep-genre-is-thinking-about-politics-class-and-fantasy-and-science-fiction">several</a> <a href="http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/loistilton/craft/on-fantasies-and-kings">good</a> <a href="http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kateelliott/misc/caliban-and-his-mirror-a-guest-post-by-james-enge">posts</a> about this on Deep Genre lately, with many great comments therein.  <a href="http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kateelliott/craft/in-the-wake-of-the-usa-presidential-election-deep-genre-is-thinking-about-politics-class-and-fantasy-and-science-fiction#comment-87177">Lois Tilton</a> points out, for example, that &#8220;For most of human political history, the kingdom has been the default mode of governance, once a society reached a certain size.&#8221;  If you threw a dartboard at the portions of human existence involving sedentary agricultural populations (which is where most fantasies take place), she&#8217;s right; you&#8217;d probably hit a monarchy.  (If you put <em>all</em> of human existence on your dartboard, 9 throws out of 10 would hit a roving band of about 25 hunter-gatherer-fisher-scavengers without much of a government at all.)</p>
<p>Of course, that&#8217;s taking &#8220;monarchy&#8221; in the simplest sense: rule by one person.  <a href="http://www.deepgenre.com/wordpress/kateelliott/craft/in-the-wake-of-the-usa-presidential-election-deep-genre-is-thinking-about-politics-class-and-fantasy-and-science-fiction#comment-87183">Sarah Beach</a> rightly adds that &#8220;&#8216;monarchy&#8217; is not some sort of monolithic institution;&#8221; sovereign rulers come in all kinds of different flavors, depending on the culture.  The philosophical justification of their authority, the political mechanisms by which it is exercised &#8212; those things and more can vary quite sharply.  I&#8217;d love to see more fantasy explore that variety.  (Then again, I&#8217;d love to see fantasy explore <a href="http://www.swantower.com/marie/essays/philosophy/cf-manifesto.html">more variety in general.</a>)</p>
<p>But okay.  Let&#8217;s grant a basically European monarchy, with a hereditary nobility to back the king up.  (Or cut him down, if the nobles are ambitious.)  Leaving aside the complex interrelationship of that governmental model with all the other cultural institutions that characterize pre-modern Europe . . . why is it that so many fantasies feature something in that vein?</p>
<p>They don&#8217;t have to.  I love my genre dearly, but I&#8217;m willing to grant that laziness and inertia are undeniable factors here; since many fantasies are set in monarchies, many fantasy writers will think of stories taking place in such settings, because that&#8217;s the model in front of them.  God knows it took years for me to question it myself, and to expand my mental net to include other forms of governance.  Writing it all off as laziness is an equally lazy cop-out, though, because I do think monarchies (of many flavors) offer certain useful features that, say, democracies do not.</p>
<p>On the practical level, they offer scope to the individual.  Look at modern democracy: if you tried to write a plot about political machinations in the U.S. Congress, how many characters do you think it would have to involve?  I&#8217;ve just finished revising a novel involving the seventeenth-century English Parliament, so I speak from experience when I say it&#8217;s a <em>beast</em> to do.  There are committees; there are bureaucratic procedures.  Things get <em>complicated</em>.  You would probably fare a little better with, say, the Roman Senate, or ancient Greek democracy, where there were fewer representatives, fewer people voting for them, and fewer political hoops for individuals to jump through.  But if you want to catapult a character into power in a democratic system, step one is that you have to persuade or buy enough votes to get the guy <em>in</em> to begin with.  And then your problems have only started.</p>
<p>Contrast that with a monarchy, where a pretty face and a bit of encouragement took George Villiers from a minor gentleman to the Duke of Buckingham in seven years flat.  He ended up one of the most powerful men in England because a couple of guys wanted to replace the King&#8217;s favorite, and the King obligingly took the bait.  Monarchies &#8212; at least of the sort we&#8217;re discussing &#8212; tend to be less bureaucratic, less bound by institutions and procedures; individual personalities, whether that of the king or his close advisers, have a great deal of scope in which to act, and you can build a reasonably plausible court plot by introducing two or three important people and a handful of minions.</p>
<p>This only matters if you want to write about politics.  If you&#8217;re telling an entirely different kind of story, then the national government can be whatever; urban fantasy does this all the time.  But secondary-world fantasies, and especially epic fantasies, often take place on a large enough canvas that you need to touch the government eventually.  It isn&#8217;t surprising that many authors choose a less bureaucratic model.</p>
<p>The other feature monarchies offer is that, frankly, they&#8217;re more mythic.  I don&#8217;t mean they&#8217;re cooler; I <em>like</em> living in a democracy, and think it has many awesome advantages.  But let&#8217;s face it, we don&#8217;t have so many timeless legends about how Arthur convinced a plurality of nobles to vote him president, or how Winston Churchill will return from death when England needs him most.  It&#8217;s the flip side of the individual power mentioned before: all across the world, cultures have myths that invest that single figure with numinous force, whether it&#8217;s the sword in the stone or the promised return or the land suffering because the king is wounded.  And fantasy is often about the numinous.</p>
<p>Before I close this out, I should acknowledge the rhetorical trick I&#8217;ve been playing here, which some of you have probably noticed: I&#8217;ve been talking as if the only options are monarchy or democracy.  They kind of represent ends of a spectrum; one puts sovereign authority in a single individual, while the other puts it in the people <em>en masse</em>.  But monarchs delegate their authority to subordinates, and democracies usually have a leader at the top, and moreover there are <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Form_of_government">other options</a>.  Really, any given government features a selection of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Form_of_government#Attributes_of_government">attributes</a>, some combinations of which work better than others.  Monarchies &#8212; especially of the general European type discussed here &#8212; operate on a set of attributes that works very well for storytelling.  It isn&#8217;t just laziness that pushes us toward them.</p>
<p>There is, however, variety in the world, and I&#8217;d be delighted to hear about more of it.  Who has done a good job with non-monarchical governments in fantasy?  How have the politics of those societies played out in the story?  I&#8217;m always looking for good examples to copy. <img src='http://www.sfnovelists.com/wordpress/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<author>
			<name>S.C. Butler</name>
			<uri>http://www.valingstoneways.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[&#8220;The Experience of Boredom and Disgust&#8221;]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-15T05:25:30Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-15T05:25:30Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Revolutionary Road is replete with moments like that, conveying with great economy the experience of boredom and disgust&#8230;
This quote appears in a review by Christopher Hitchens in the latest issue of the Atlantic. Hitchens is praising the novel (Richard Yates’s Revolutionary Road, which lost out the 1961 National Book Award to Walker Percy’s The Moviegoer), [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/15/the-experience-of-boredom-and-disgust/"><![CDATA[<p><em>Revolutionary Road is replete with moments like that, conveying with great economy the experience of boredom and disgust&#8230;</em></p>
<p>This quote appears in a review by Christopher Hitchens in the latest issue of <a href="http://www.theatlantic.com">the Atlantic</a>. Hitchens is praising the novel (Richard Yates’s Revolutionary Road, which lost out the 1961 National Book Award to Walker Percy’s The Moviegoer), but a statement like that was bound to raise my hackles as soon as I saw it. Who on earth wants to read a book “replete with moments&#8230;conveying the experience of boredom and disgust?” I don’t.</p>
<p>Disgust alone might have been okay, especially if I were a horror fan. But boredom? Why would I want to spend time reading a book that conveys the experience of boredom, no matter how economically? Or spend money on it? (Especially these days.) I’d much rather read something that’s interesting. And fun.</p>
<p>That’s what I try to do in my own writing. Make the books interesting and fun. My characters might be evil or good, (or something in between), and my endings might be happy or sad, (or something in between), but either way I’m trying to make the book interesting and clever and enjoyable the entire time. In short, as a writer, I’m trying to entertain.</p>
<p>Guess I’m never going to be nominated for the National Book Award.</p>
<p>Why is it that the tastemakers in America so often define ‘art’ as that which isn’t fun, or even entertaining? Is it some last vestige of the puritan in us?</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>David B. Coe</name>
			<uri>http://www.DavidBCoe.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Making Worlds That Make Sense]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-10T17:04:17Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-10T17:04:17Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="reading" /><category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="writing process" /><category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="our books" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[Earlier today I posted something at my own blog site about the political mess in Illinois.  In that post I said that the state&#8217;s governor, Rod Blagojevich, was so corrupt, so delusional, so inept, and so blinded by hubris, that if I were to write him into a book, my editor would tell me to tone [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/10/making-worlds-that-make-sense/"><![CDATA[<p>Earlier today I posted something at <a href="http://davidbcoe.livejournal.com">my own blog site</a> about the political mess in Illinois.  In that post I said that the state&#8217;s governor, Rod Blagojevich, was so corrupt, so delusional, so inept, and so blinded by hubris, that if I were to write him into a book, my editor would tell me to tone him down.  Even his nickname, Blago, is too perfect, sounding more like a new villain in Gotham City than the governor of a large Rust Belt state.  There&#8217;s that old quote &#8212; I&#8217;ve heard it attributed to Tom Clancy &#8212; [paraphrasing]:  The difference between reality and fiction is that fiction has to make sense.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m in the early stages of developing a project right now; I&#8217;m writing the first book in a new series that I hope to sell in the spring.  And like all SF/Fantasy writers, I&#8217;m doing all I can to make my plot fit together seemlessly, to make my characters act in ways that are consistent with the background work I&#8217;ve done on them, to make my created world function logically.  And then I see Blago in the news; I see the world&#8217;s economy falling to pieces under the weight of decades of irrational decision making; I see families tearing themselves apart all around me; and I wonder why I bother.</p>
<p>Yes, novels have to make sense.  But isn&#8217;t that just a bit odd?  We live in an irrational, illogical, incomprehensible world.  But when we go to read fiction &#8212; and I&#8217;m as guilty of this as anyone &#8212; we expect the stories we read to make sense.  If the characters we encounter in a book behave in ways we can&#8217;t explain, that don&#8217;t seem &#8220;consistent&#8221;, we get mad at the author.  &#8220;This character wouldn&#8217;t do that!&#8221; we say.  &#8220;It makes no sense.  It violates everything we know about her!&#8221;  Never mind that our own Uncle Cy has just left his devoted wife of forty-two years and is now running a tattoo parlor in Santa Cruz with a woman named Spruce.  We cringe at logical inconsistencies in the created worlds we read about, but we think nothing of living in a world in which fools run nations and brilliant academicians are paid a pittance.</p>
<p>People often refer to genre fiction as &#8220;escapist,&#8221; a term I deeply resent.  It implies a certain whimsical shallowness that I think belittles the literature that our field actually produces.  But wouldn&#8217;t it be ironic if the escapism charge carried some shred of truth, only in precisely the opposite way?  Isn&#8217;t it possible that people turn to the carefully crafted works of fantasy and science fiction because they seek logic and rationality?   Could it be that the &#8220;real&#8221; world, rather than being too mundane, is actually too freakin&#8217; crazy?</p>
<p>I really have no larger point to make here, no grand conclusion to give deeper meaning to what I&#8217;ve written thus far.  I read my local paper this morning, and tuned in briefly to CNN, and found myself thinking that the entire world is pretty much nuts.  And all I want to do now is go back to my new book, where things make at least a bit of sense.</p>
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		<entry>
		<author>
			<name>Kelly McCullough</name>
			<uri>http://www.kellymccullough.com</uri>
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		<title type="html"><![CDATA[Writing and Sanity—Two Lists]]></title>
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		<updated>2008-12-10T07:32:11Z</updated>
		<published>2008-12-10T07:32:11Z</published>
		<category scheme="http://www.sfnovelists.com" term="Uncategorized" />		<summary type="html"><![CDATA[One do list. One don&#8217;t list.
First the do. I posted this elsewhere recently and the response suggested that it was worth showing to larger audience. It&#8217;s about how you balance your mental attitude about your writing and stay sane in a fundamentally irrational business.
The six stages of engagement with a story.
First, the way you should [...]]]></summary>
		<content type="html" xml:base="http://www.sfnovelists.com/2008/12/10/writing-and-sanity%e2%80%94two-lists/"><![CDATA[<p>One do list. One don&#8217;t list.</p>
<p>First the do. I posted this elsewhere recently and the response suggested that it was worth showing to larger audience. It&#8217;s about how you balance your mental attitude about your writing and stay sane in a fundamentally irrational business.</p>
<p>The six stages of engagement with a story.</p>
<p><strong>First</strong>, the way you should feel about whatever book or story you are writing this very minute, is that it is absolutely your best work ever and will be irresistable to readers.</p>
<p><strong>Second</strong>, whatever book or story you are revising or getting critiqued at this very moment, is a solid piece of work that can and will be improved if you work at it and learn from comments.</p>
<p><strong>Third</strong>, whatever work you have just finished, is ready to go out to agents or editors and you&#8217;re excited to get it in the mail.</p>
<p><strong>Fourth</strong>, whatever work has been bought or is being shopped around, no longer exists until and unless a decision is called for on your part.</p>
<p><strong>Fifth</strong>, whatever work has been published or set aside is complete and an example of your work at the time, not something that reflects the writer you are now.</p>
<p><strong>Sixth</strong>, whatever work you are going to embark on next will be made better by what you will learn from the completion of what you are working on now. So much so that once you have finished the current work, this new project will be the best thing you have ever written, bar non.</p>
<p>Repeat as often as possible.</p>
<p>And now, the don&#8217;t list. This came out of recent discussion of how to deal with one&#8217;s Amazon reviews.</p>
<p>The seven steps of Amazon Madness.</p>
<p><strong>Step one</strong> is checking for reviews and counting the stars.</p>
<p><strong>Step two</strong> is reading the reviews.</p>
<p><strong>Step three </strong>is engaging with the reviews.</p>
<p><strong>Step four</strong> is taking them seriously in any way shape or form.</p>
<p><strong>Step five</strong> is trying to do something about it.</p>
<p><strong>Step six</strong> is engaging with the reviewers in comments.</p>
<p><strong>Step seven</strong> is where your editor has to call to have nice people in the white suits haul you off for some &#8220;rest.&#8221;</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t do this.</p>
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