Still, as both a fan of all things meat and a restaurateur, I have to speak truth to power: The bacon craze has gone too far…. Bacon coffee, bacon cereal, bacon ice cream — America, cut it out!

— Tim Love, “Stop the Bacon Insanity!”

Daily Beast, February 23, 2010

There’s the punctuation of Standard Written English, and then there’s nonstandard punctuation that signals an informal, conversational tone. The informal commas in the last sentence bend the standard rules.

Lighthearted journalism is one context. But in business writing, nonstandard punctuation can lower your credibility.

Adding the word and to the quotation’s last sentence would keep it informal, but make it impeccably standard: “Bacon coffee, bacon cereal, and bacon ice cream — America, cut it out!”

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— Isabel Wilkinson, “The Best of London Fashion Week,”

“Burberry Prorsum” page, The Daily Beast, February 24, 2010

Sometimes, perfect punctuation isn’t enough to make a sentence perfectly clear. Rewriting is the best answer.

Take this last sentence. Viewers in all five cities probably got the 3-D glasses, but the excellent punctuation still leaves you guessing whether the glasses were a perk of being in L.A.

We’d suggest this revision for clarity:

Crowds packed the London show at the Chelsea College of Art and Design. The show was live-streamed in 3-D to Tokyo, New York, Paris, Dubai, and Los Angeles, enabling all these viewers around the world to don special Burberry 3-D glasses and sit in the front row.

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— Daniel Eran Dilger, “Hands on with Apple’s iPad (with videos and photos),”

Apple Insider, January 27, 2010

Imagine this sentence were longer. Would it still be correct without any commas if it read this way?

Activities like looking at large webpages and reading e-books that aren’t practical on the iPhone due to its small size are natural and almost magical on the iPad.

Yes, it would still be correct. That’s because those highlighted words are crucial to the author’s meaning. The sentence would mean something else without them.

It would be incorrect to use commas in either sentence – e.g., “Activities like reading e-books, that aren’t practical on the iPhone due to its small size, are natural and almost magical on the iPad.”

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— Priya Ganapati, “Apple iPad’s Display Is More Like a TV Than a Laptop,”

Wired magazine, January 28, 2010

This quote’s first and last sentences are good illustrations of when you need two commas — not just one — to surround information inside your sentence.

The last sentence would still be true if you left out the prices inside the orange commas, so those two commas are correct. That’s also why the single comma in the first sentence is incorrect.

The sentence would mean the same thing without the product name (as “Apple launched its tablet on Wednesday”). So the product name needs to be set off with commas: “Apple launched its tablet, the iPad, on Wednesday.”

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— Jeré Longman, “Battle of Weight Versus Gain in Ski Jumping” (photo caption),

New York Times website, February 11, 2010

Commas like the one after “Canada,” above, are always required. If a place name or street address includes one comma, add the second comma if your sentence goes on to include further information.

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— David Epstein, “Luge dangers exaggerated,”

CNN Opinion, February 16, 2010

“Skeleton” in the sentence above refers to a winter sport (AKA tobogganing). The writer uses only one comma because it’s standard journalistic practice to leave out a comma before “and” in a list of three or more items in a series.

For most writers, though, we’d strongly recommend adding a comma after “luge” in this sentence. Always including the series comma means your reader will always understand how many separate things you’re listing in a sentence.

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