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		<title>2026 Interview Series: Bookstagrammers and What You Should Know</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ann Marie Nieves]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Apr 2026 11:00:05 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>This year, for The Buzz series, I am interviewing marketing-minded authors and other book-loving creators who are doing great things in our industry. In my last post, I spoke with <a href="https://writerunboxed.com/2026/02/09/book-marketing-and-pr-part-xx-2026-interview-series/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">popular books podcaster, Courtney Marzilli</a>. Today, get to know how two popular bookstagrammers— <a href="https://www.instagram.com/electric_bookaloo/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">@electric_bookaloo</a> (Jen) and <a href="https://www.instagram.com/the_unwined/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">@the_unwined</a> (Sophia)—operate.</p>
<p>A few quick pointers about working with bookstagrammers from someone whose agency has been doing so for a decade:</p>
<ul>
<li>Get to know them. Follow them and engage with their posts first.</li>
<li>Pay attention to what genres they read.</li>
<li>Don&#8217;t have expectations that this unpaid influencer will love your book, post their review to all retail platforms, post on your publication day, and recommend you to their local libraries and personal book clubs.</li>
<li>Don&#8217;t have the expectation that a bookstagrammers post will lead to book sales.</li>
<li>Bigger doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean better. Don&#8217;t be so focused on the size of a bookstagrammers following.</li>
<li>Be gracious.</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>How long have you been a book influencer, and what are your preferred platforms?</strong></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><em><strong>@the_unwined</strong></em> I’d say I got more active in the book influencer community around 2019, so around 7 years now! I mainly focus on Instagram, consistently posting and always growing. I’m active on Goodreads but use it more for my own personal tracking ( I do try to keep it as updated with reviews as I can!). <a href="https://www.facebook.com/theunwinedbookclub" target="_blank" rel="noopener">I cross post to Facebook</a> so all my Instagram posts automatically post there too. I use Netgalley more as a means of discovering new titles and not so much to read off of (I hate ebook!)  </span></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><strong><em>@electric_bookaloo</em> </strong>I was <a href="https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/61068-jennifer" target="_blank" rel="noopener">an early adopter of Goodreads</a> &#8211; been on there since 2007!  Early on I just rated books and over time I began to review everything I read. I joined NetGalley in 2014 so posted reviews of those books there as well. I started a book blog in 2017 but it never became a really big thing and I no longer post there. </span></p>
<p><strong>Are you a paid influencer? </strong></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><em><strong>@the_unwined</strong></em> The short answer is no. Funny enough, I was offered a few paid opportunities back when I was a newer influencer but it was only once or twice and nothing much to speak of.  I was once offered a small sum to post a children’s picture book. When I received the book I didn’t feel it was appropriate for children and asked if they’d like me to send back the book, </span>&#8230;</p>]]></description>
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<p>This year, for The Buzz series, I am interviewing marketing-minded authors and other book-loving creators who are doing great things in our industry. In my last post, I spoke with <a href="https://writerunboxed.com/2026/02/09/book-marketing-and-pr-part-xx-2026-interview-series/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">popular books podcaster, Courtney Marzilli</a>. Today, get to know how two popular bookstagrammers— <a href="https://www.instagram.com/electric_bookaloo/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">@electric_bookaloo</a> (Jen) and <a href="https://www.instagram.com/the_unwined/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">@the_unwined</a> (Sophia)—operate.</p>
<p>A few quick pointers about working with bookstagrammers from someone whose agency has been doing so for a decade:</p>
<ul>
<li>Get to know them. Follow them and engage with their posts first.</li>
<li>Pay attention to what genres they read.</li>
<li>Don&#8217;t have expectations that this unpaid influencer will love your book, post their review to all retail platforms, post on your publication day, and recommend you to their local libraries and personal book clubs.</li>
<li>Don&#8217;t have the expectation that a bookstagrammers post will lead to book sales.</li>
<li>Bigger doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean better. Don&#8217;t be so focused on the size of a bookstagrammers following.</li>
<li>Be gracious.</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>How long have you been a book influencer, and what are your preferred platforms?</strong></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><em><strong>@the_unwined</strong></em> I’d say I got more active in the book influencer community around 2019, so around 7 years now! I mainly focus on Instagram, consistently posting and always growing. I’m active on Goodreads but use it more for my own personal tracking ( I do try to keep it as updated with reviews as I can!). <a href="https://www.facebook.com/theunwinedbookclub" target="_blank" rel="noopener">I cross post to Facebook</a> so all my Instagram posts automatically post there too. I use Netgalley more as a means of discovering new titles and not so much to read off of (I hate ebook!)  </span></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><strong><em>@electric_bookaloo</em> </strong>I was <a href="https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/61068-jennifer" target="_blank" rel="noopener">an early adopter of Goodreads</a> &#8211; been on there since 2007!  Early on I just rated books and over time I began to review everything I read. I joined NetGalley in 2014 so posted reviews of those books there as well. I started a book blog in 2017 but it never became a really big thing and I no longer post there. </span></p>
<p><strong>Are you a paid influencer? </strong></p>
<p><span style="font-weight: 400"><em><strong>@the_unwined</strong></em> The short answer is no. Funny enough, I was offered a few paid opportunities back when I was a newer influencer but it was only once or twice and nothing much to speak of.  I was once offered a small sum to post a children’s picture book. When I received the book I didn’t feel it was appropriate for children and asked if they’d like me to send back the book, </span>&hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>The Ethics of AI in Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jim Dempsey]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2026 11:00:15 +0000</pubDate>
				<category><![CDATA[Artificial Intelligence]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p><img data-recalc-dims="1" loading="lazy" decoding="async" class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-69350" src="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/Fiction-Therapy-WU-header-e1657631361414.jpg?resize=860%2C483&#038;ssl=1" alt="" width="860" height="483" srcset="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/Fiction-Therapy-WU-header-e1657631361414.jpg?w=860&#38;ssl=1 860w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/Fiction-Therapy-WU-header-e1657631361414.jpg?resize=300%2C168&#38;ssl=1 300w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/Fiction-Therapy-WU-header-e1657631361414.jpg?resize=525%2C295&#38;ssl=1 525w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/Fiction-Therapy-WU-header-e1657631361414.jpg?resize=768%2C431&#38;ssl=1 768w" sizes="auto, (max-width: 860px) 100vw, 860px" /></p>
<p>There was a discussion recently on an editors’ group about whether to work on AI-generated content or not. Everyone who commented, more than 70 people, said that they would not.</p>
<p>Some of the editors refused to be the ones who would “put the humanity” into the words since that should be the responsibility of the person who would ultimately benefit from the text. Others commented that the text was often not up to a standard they would accept anyway, AI-generated or not.</p>
<p>The discussion was pertinent since <a href="https://www.theguardian.com/books/2026/mar/20/hachette-horror-novel-shy-girl-suspected-ai-use-mia-ballard">Hachette cancelled a novel</a> recently that was said to have been written at least partly by AI. The author claims that an editor friend had introduced these AI generated parts of the text.</p>
<p>I found this an odd defense for a few reasons, but mainly because I found it troubling that an “editor” had inserted significant sections of text into the manuscript. It’s not an editor’s role to improve the text by writing or even rewriting the text but to point out where and how the author could improve their own work.</p>
<p>This is a serious ethical question for a lot of people in publishing since many of these AI models were trained on copyrighted text without the consent of the original authors. Even though <a href="https://writerunboxed.com/2025/10/24/have-you-heard-of-this-lawsuit-you-may-benefit/">some of those authors are finally getting some money</a>, the “take now and apologize later” attitude of the AI companies rubbed a lot of people up the wrong way, to put it mildly.</p>
<p>Like most people involved in publishing, I’ve been seeing increasing amounts of text produced using by AI over the last year or two. Even established authors are using AI for some aspect of their writing. Can people in the industry, such as editors, keep refusing this work and stick to strictly human authors or do we accept that this is increasingly how writing will be done?</p>
<h3><strong>A force for <em>some</em> good?</strong></h3>
<p>I can see that there may be some situations where AI can help. For anyone with dyslexia, for example, large language models (LLMs) in particular, like ChatGPT, can be useful. Or for people who for one reason or another have not had the advantage of a solid education in writing or at least writing for an audience. These AI models can, at least in theory, offer an opportunity for many marginalized people to get their stories into the world.</p>
<p>I also know a &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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<p>There was a discussion recently on an editors’ group about whether to work on AI-generated content or not. Everyone who commented, more than 70 people, said that they would not.</p>
<p>Some of the editors refused to be the ones who would “put the humanity” into the words since that should be the responsibility of the person who would ultimately benefit from the text. Others commented that the text was often not up to a standard they would accept anyway, AI-generated or not.</p>
<p>The discussion was pertinent since <a href="https://www.theguardian.com/books/2026/mar/20/hachette-horror-novel-shy-girl-suspected-ai-use-mia-ballard">Hachette cancelled a novel</a> recently that was said to have been written at least partly by AI. The author claims that an editor friend had introduced these AI generated parts of the text.</p>
<p>I found this an odd defense for a few reasons, but mainly because I found it troubling that an “editor” had inserted significant sections of text into the manuscript. It’s not an editor’s role to improve the text by writing or even rewriting the text but to point out where and how the author could improve their own work.</p>
<p>This is a serious ethical question for a lot of people in publishing since many of these AI models were trained on copyrighted text without the consent of the original authors. Even though <a href="https://writerunboxed.com/2025/10/24/have-you-heard-of-this-lawsuit-you-may-benefit/">some of those authors are finally getting some money</a>, the “take now and apologize later” attitude of the AI companies rubbed a lot of people up the wrong way, to put it mildly.</p>
<p>Like most people involved in publishing, I’ve been seeing increasing amounts of text produced using by AI over the last year or two. Even established authors are using AI for some aspect of their writing. Can people in the industry, such as editors, keep refusing this work and stick to strictly human authors or do we accept that this is increasingly how writing will be done?</p>
<h3><strong>A force for <em>some</em> good?</strong></h3>
<p>I can see that there may be some situations where AI can help. For anyone with dyslexia, for example, large language models (LLMs) in particular, like ChatGPT, can be useful. Or for people who for one reason or another have not had the advantage of a solid education in writing or at least writing for an audience. These AI models can, at least in theory, offer an opportunity for many marginalized people to get their stories into the world.</p>
<p>I also know a &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>4 Ways Specificity Drives Your Story Forward</title>
		<link>https://writerunboxed.com/2026/04/09/4-ways-specificity-drives-your-story-forward/</link>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kathryn Craft]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Apr 2026 11:00:59 +0000</pubDate>
				<category><![CDATA[Book Talk]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p style="font-weight: 400">Detail creates story movement by inviting the reader into your story’s experience.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Sometimes.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">If you apply that detail indiscriminately, it’s equally possible that you’ll entangle your reader and dilute your story’s point. When seeking a balance between enticing and telling all, remember to leave room for the reader who wants to enter your story.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">While reading <em>Project Hail Mary</em> by <a href="https://andyweirauthor.com">Andy Weir</a>, for instance, “my” Ryland Grace looked nothing like Ryan Gosling, even though I was aware he would soon star in the role. Description is minimal because the book begins in deep POV as he tries to figure out who he is and why he&#8217;s alone on a spaceship—he&#8217;s not looking for a mirror to see what he looks like. Yet I owned my version of what this middle school teacher looked like the first time he lobbed a hacky sack toward a student while asking a science question—and no additional 50 words of detail about his looks could have taken that away from me.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Here are four tips to help you make your decision about what to include.</p>
<h3 style="text-align: left"><strong>1. Think “who they are” not “what they look like”</strong></h3>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Consider the following two descriptions.</p>
<blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">My father stood five-foot eight. His receding hairline was hidden beneath a Mack truck baseball cap. Only a few curly strands of brown could be seen reaching toward the collar of a flannel shirt, worn to cover a sweat-stained tee. It looked like the steel toes sticking out from beneath his oil-stained jeans were the only thing holding his work boots together.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">What have we learned about this man’s character? Very little. This fabricated description fails to drive story: he could be a farmer just in from the fields or a hedge fund manager who won’t trust anyone else to tune up his Bugatti sports car.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Now consider this excerpt from <a href="https://tarawestover.com">Tara Westover</a>’s bestselling memoir, <em>Educated.</em></p>
<blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">My father was not a tall man but he was able to command a room. He had a presence about him, the solemnity of an oracle. His hands were thick and leathery—the hands of a man who had been hard at work all his life—and they grasped the Bible firmly.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Suggesting the power this authority figure exerts over young Westover connects title to description to plot intrigue: how will this smart young woman gain the education she desires while her overbearing, fundamentalist father stands in the way?&#8230;</p>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="font-weight: 400">Detail creates story movement by inviting the reader into your story’s experience.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Sometimes.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">If you apply that detail indiscriminately, it’s equally possible that you’ll entangle your reader and dilute your story’s point. When seeking a balance between enticing and telling all, remember to leave room for the reader who wants to enter your story.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">While reading <em>Project Hail Mary</em> by <a href="https://andyweirauthor.com">Andy Weir</a>, for instance, “my” Ryland Grace looked nothing like Ryan Gosling, even though I was aware he would soon star in the role. Description is minimal because the book begins in deep POV as he tries to figure out who he is and why he&#8217;s alone on a spaceship—he&#8217;s not looking for a mirror to see what he looks like. Yet I owned my version of what this middle school teacher looked like the first time he lobbed a hacky sack toward a student while asking a science question—and no additional 50 words of detail about his looks could have taken that away from me.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Here are four tips to help you make your decision about what to include.</p>
<h3 style="text-align: left"><strong>1. Think “who they are” not “what they look like”</strong></h3>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Consider the following two descriptions.</p>
<blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">My father stood five-foot eight. His receding hairline was hidden beneath a Mack truck baseball cap. Only a few curly strands of brown could be seen reaching toward the collar of a flannel shirt, worn to cover a sweat-stained tee. It looked like the steel toes sticking out from beneath his oil-stained jeans were the only thing holding his work boots together.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">What have we learned about this man’s character? Very little. This fabricated description fails to drive story: he could be a farmer just in from the fields or a hedge fund manager who won’t trust anyone else to tune up his Bugatti sports car.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Now consider this excerpt from <a href="https://tarawestover.com">Tara Westover</a>’s bestselling memoir, <em>Educated.</em></p>
<blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">My father was not a tall man but he was able to command a room. He had a presence about him, the solemnity of an oracle. His hands were thick and leathery—the hands of a man who had been hard at work all his life—and they grasped the Bible firmly.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400">Suggesting the power this authority figure exerts over young Westover connects title to description to plot intrigue: how will this smart young woman gain the education she desires while her overbearing, fundamentalist father stands in the way?&hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>Why Do We Write?</title>
		<link>https://writerunboxed.com/2026/04/08/why-do-we-write-2/</link>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kathleen McCleary]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2026 11:00:30 +0000</pubDate>
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My youngest daughter got engaged last week, which means it’s been an intense weekend, with lots of hugs and joyful tears and gratitude and hope and excitement for the future. At the end of the weekend, a friend said to me: <em>This was so much intense emotion. Are you going to use that in a novel? </em></p>
<p>The question stopped me short, because it made me think about the many times in my life I’ve felt driven to write, in order to process intense emotion. And yet it’s almost always been because I needed to process something <em>hard</em>, something that knocked the steel from my knees and the breath from my lungs. For me, writing my way through painful experiences helps me regain my equilibrium; happy feelings don’t elicit the same need.</p>
<p>I finished writing my fourth novel last year. I started writing it during the pandemic, during a period of intense grief in my life when I’d suffered loss after loss. Writing fictional characters who also suffered loss and yet found a way to come through it was my lifeline, the one thing I could cling to when everything seemed dark. I’m still not sure if I’ll publish it, or find a publisher, which has made me wonder: <em>Why do I write?</em> Do I write to get published, to have others read and respond to my work? Or do I write for myself? Or some combination thereof?</p>
<p>The answers to the <em>Why do I write?</em> question are as varied as we are, we writers, we joyful, tormented souls. You can find a great compilation of quotes from well-known writers on why they write <a href="https://lithub.com/heres-33-writers-on-why-they-write/">here</a>. When I really thought through this question for myself, I came up with this list:</p>
<p>I write <strong>to process my own feelings</strong>. I became a novelist in my forties, when my husband and I made a cross-country move and I had so many intense feelings about leaving behind our home in Oregon—the first house we’d ever owned, the house we’d brought our babies home to, the neighborhood where we’d established deep, life-long friendships—that I didn’t know what to do with it all. So I started writing a story about a woman who had to sell a house she loved because she was getting divorced. I could pour all my sadness about the move, my passion for my house and my hopes for the &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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My youngest daughter got engaged last week, which means it’s been an intense weekend, with lots of hugs and joyful tears and gratitude and hope and excitement for the future. At the end of the weekend, a friend said to me: <em>This was so much intense emotion. Are you going to use that in a novel? </em></p>
<p>The question stopped me short, because it made me think about the many times in my life I’ve felt driven to write, in order to process intense emotion. And yet it’s almost always been because I needed to process something <em>hard</em>, something that knocked the steel from my knees and the breath from my lungs. For me, writing my way through painful experiences helps me regain my equilibrium; happy feelings don’t elicit the same need.</p>
<p>I finished writing my fourth novel last year. I started writing it during the pandemic, during a period of intense grief in my life when I’d suffered loss after loss. Writing fictional characters who also suffered loss and yet found a way to come through it was my lifeline, the one thing I could cling to when everything seemed dark. I’m still not sure if I’ll publish it, or find a publisher, which has made me wonder: <em>Why do I write?</em> Do I write to get published, to have others read and respond to my work? Or do I write for myself? Or some combination thereof?</p>
<p>The answers to the <em>Why do I write?</em> question are as varied as we are, we writers, we joyful, tormented souls. You can find a great compilation of quotes from well-known writers on why they write <a href="https://lithub.com/heres-33-writers-on-why-they-write/">here</a>. When I really thought through this question for myself, I came up with this list:</p>
<p>I write <strong>to process my own feelings</strong>. I became a novelist in my forties, when my husband and I made a cross-country move and I had so many intense feelings about leaving behind our home in Oregon—the first house we’d ever owned, the house we’d brought our babies home to, the neighborhood where we’d established deep, life-long friendships—that I didn’t know what to do with it all. So I started writing a story about a woman who had to sell a house she loved because she was getting divorced. I could pour all my sadness about the move, my passion for my house and my hopes for the &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>Five Things I Didn’t Know About Publishing Five Years Ago</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Allison Winn Scotch]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Apr 2026 11:00:06 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>We&#8217;re thrilled to have former WU contributor and multi-published, New York Times bestselling novelist <a href="https://www.allisonwinn.com/">Allison Winn Scotch</a> back with us today to share some of what she&#8217;s learned! Eleven novels in, she&#8217;s learned quite a lot about what it takes to stay in the business longterm, and we&#8217;re here for it.</p>
<p>Speaking of that 11th novel, <a href="https://www.penguinrandomhouse.com/books/755798/the-insomniacs-by-allison-winn-scotch/">The Insomniacs</a>, which releases on April 14th, marks a genre-pivot for Allison&#8211;to thrillers! From <a href="https://people.com/allison-winn-scotch-the-insomniacs-cover-reveal-exclusive-11772868">People.com</a>:</p>
<p><em>Scotch&#8217;s new novel follows four strangers, who each are suffering from insomnia. There’s Sybil, a mother who is trying to navigate life as an empty-nester; Zeke, a pro baseball player whose career is in flux after an injury; Julian, a secretive retiree who is trying to rekindle a relationship with his daughter and Betty, a waitress who sees the group as an opportunity to fix her own problems. Over the course of a few months, the late-night cohort becomes more like a found family — one that is uprooted when a member of the group goes missing one evening. Suddenly, the strangers-turned-companions are thrown into a gripping mystery that it’s up to them to solve.</em></p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;Whip smart&#8230;a compelling mystery whose ending readers won&#8217;t easily predict.&#8221;<span class="a-text-bold">—Library Journal</span></p></blockquote>
<p>You can learn more about Allison and her novels, including The Insomniacs, on <a href="https://www.allisonwinn.com/">her website</a>.</p>
<p>Glad to see you back on WU today, Allison!</p>
<hr />
<p>Hi Writer Unboxed! Thanks so much for having me. Many moons ago, I was a regular contributor here, and I’m thrilled to return with a few lessons I’ve learned between then and now. I feel like a battle-worn veteran of the industry these days, but that doesn’t mean that I know everything there is about publishing.</p>
<p>Here are some insights I’ve gleaned of late:</p>
<h3><strong>Burnout Is Real (and not that spectacular)</strong></h3>
<p>For the younger readers, that’s a Seinfeld reference. 😊 I’ve been in some phase of burnout since about 2020, and I know so many others are as well. The changing landscape of the industry is one aspect, but the weight of the world is another, and in private conversations, so many of us are saying: How do we keep doing this? What is the point? Why do I feel like I’m just treading water? The solution to burnout will be different for everyone, but just giving voice to it helps others understand that right now, this is so so so normal. Veteran writers, new &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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<p>We&#8217;re thrilled to have former WU contributor and multi-published, New York Times bestselling novelist <a href="https://www.allisonwinn.com/">Allison Winn Scotch</a> back with us today to share some of what she&#8217;s learned! Eleven novels in, she&#8217;s learned quite a lot about what it takes to stay in the business longterm, and we&#8217;re here for it.</p>
<p>Speaking of that 11th novel, <a href="https://www.penguinrandomhouse.com/books/755798/the-insomniacs-by-allison-winn-scotch/">The Insomniacs</a>, which releases on April 14th, marks a genre-pivot for Allison&#8211;to thrillers! From <a href="https://people.com/allison-winn-scotch-the-insomniacs-cover-reveal-exclusive-11772868">People.com</a>:</p>
<p><em>Scotch&#8217;s new novel follows four strangers, who each are suffering from insomnia. There’s Sybil, a mother who is trying to navigate life as an empty-nester; Zeke, a pro baseball player whose career is in flux after an injury; Julian, a secretive retiree who is trying to rekindle a relationship with his daughter and Betty, a waitress who sees the group as an opportunity to fix her own problems. Over the course of a few months, the late-night cohort becomes more like a found family — one that is uprooted when a member of the group goes missing one evening. Suddenly, the strangers-turned-companions are thrown into a gripping mystery that it’s up to them to solve.</em></p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;Whip smart&#8230;a compelling mystery whose ending readers won&#8217;t easily predict.&#8221;<span class="a-text-bold">—Library Journal</span></p></blockquote>
<p>You can learn more about Allison and her novels, including The Insomniacs, on <a href="https://www.allisonwinn.com/">her website</a>.</p>
<p>Glad to see you back on WU today, Allison!</p>
<hr />
<p>Hi Writer Unboxed! Thanks so much for having me. Many moons ago, I was a regular contributor here, and I’m thrilled to return with a few lessons I’ve learned between then and now. I feel like a battle-worn veteran of the industry these days, but that doesn’t mean that I know everything there is about publishing.</p>
<p>Here are some insights I’ve gleaned of late:</p>
<h3><strong>Burnout Is Real (and not that spectacular)</strong></h3>
<p>For the younger readers, that’s a Seinfeld reference. <img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/1f60a.png" alt="😊" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" /> I’ve been in some phase of burnout since about 2020, and I know so many others are as well. The changing landscape of the industry is one aspect, but the weight of the world is another, and in private conversations, so many of us are saying: How do we keep doing this? What is the point? Why do I feel like I’m just treading water? The solution to burnout will be different for everyone, but just giving voice to it helps others understand that right now, this is so so so normal. Veteran writers, new &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>Write Anywhere, Write Everywhere</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Greer Macallister]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Apr 2026 11:00:04 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>When my first book came out, I was working full-time, writing, and parenting two kids under three. It was, to say the least, hard to find the time to write. It was also hard to find a <em>place</em> to write.</p>
<p>Neither of these problems were insurmountable. (Obviously, because my first book was not my last.) Because my schedule was tight, I was good about making use of time when I had it. On weekdays, I&#8217;d finish work at 5 and pick up the kids from daycare at 6. Once they were down for the night, I could often squeeze in more writing time before I got too tired to function. Weekends and holidays were writing time too. As for places, I learned to write anywhere and everywhere. At home, I&#8217;d most often write at the dining room table, but I could also bang out words with my laptop on my lap as I sat cross-legged on the couch or with my legs stretched out in front of me in bed.</p>
<p>But home wasn&#8217;t always writing-friendly, so I wrote in other places too. I&#8217;d get a babysitter for a couple of hours on a weeknight and spend that time writing at the local coffee shop. (It didn&#8217;t have wi-fi, so those times were particularly productive.) I learned to push back my seat and write sitting in the driver&#8217;s seat of my car in the Trader Joe&#8217;s parking lot. As the kids got older, I kept snatching these moments&#8211;in the stands at soccer practice, in the coffee shop closest to the dance studio, in the chilly bleachers at the ice rink, in the waiting room at the dentist&#8217;s office&#8211;to make progress on my work. As the pandemic lockdowns began to ease and I was desperate to write somewhere that wasn&#8217;t my house but not ready to sit indoors with strangers, I wrote outdoors on benches and restaurant patios, bundled up in a coat, scarf, hat, and fingerless gloves.</p>
<p>My mantra was simple: write anywhere, write everywhere.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve gotten to the point that I write better outside my house than in it. Even though our current house has an office with a desk, that office also has a washer and dryer. Nothing turns an hour of free time into 20 minutes of writing time like laundry. So I&#8217;m still writing anywhere and everywhere outside the house: waiting rooms and school pick-up lines, ice &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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<p>When my first book came out, I was working full-time, writing, and parenting two kids under three. It was, to say the least, hard to find the time to write. It was also hard to find a <em>place</em> to write.</p>
<p>Neither of these problems were insurmountable. (Obviously, because my first book was not my last.) Because my schedule was tight, I was good about making use of time when I had it. On weekdays, I&#8217;d finish work at 5 and pick up the kids from daycare at 6. Once they were down for the night, I could often squeeze in more writing time before I got too tired to function. Weekends and holidays were writing time too. As for places, I learned to write anywhere and everywhere. At home, I&#8217;d most often write at the dining room table, but I could also bang out words with my laptop on my lap as I sat cross-legged on the couch or with my legs stretched out in front of me in bed.</p>
<p>But home wasn&#8217;t always writing-friendly, so I wrote in other places too. I&#8217;d get a babysitter for a couple of hours on a weeknight and spend that time writing at the local coffee shop. (It didn&#8217;t have wi-fi, so those times were particularly productive.) I learned to push back my seat and write sitting in the driver&#8217;s seat of my car in the Trader Joe&#8217;s parking lot. As the kids got older, I kept snatching these moments&#8211;in the stands at soccer practice, in the coffee shop closest to the dance studio, in the chilly bleachers at the ice rink, in the waiting room at the dentist&#8217;s office&#8211;to make progress on my work. As the pandemic lockdowns began to ease and I was desperate to write somewhere that wasn&#8217;t my house but not ready to sit indoors with strangers, I wrote outdoors on benches and restaurant patios, bundled up in a coat, scarf, hat, and fingerless gloves.</p>
<p>My mantra was simple: write anywhere, write everywhere.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve gotten to the point that I write better outside my house than in it. Even though our current house has an office with a desk, that office also has a washer and dryer. Nothing turns an hour of free time into 20 minutes of writing time like laundry. So I&#8217;m still writing anywhere and everywhere outside the house: waiting rooms and school pick-up lines, ice &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>What Noir Can Teach Any Writer</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Apr 2026 11:00:36 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>Please welcome author <a href="https://ruthsetton.com/">Ruth Knafo Setton</a> to Writer Unboxed today! Ruth is the author of two novels, <em>The Road to Fez,</em> and her latest, <em>Zigzag Girl, </em>&#8220;[a] mystery that understands how easily a performance can become a crime—and how dangerous it is to confuse the two.&#8221; (Kirkus Reviews)</p>
<p>From Ruth&#8217;s bio:</p>
<blockquote><p>(Zigzag Girl was) a finalist for the 2026 International Thriller Writers Award for Best Standalone Novel, and recipient of the Grand Prize in ScreenCraft’s Most Cinematic Book Competition, and the Daphne du Maurier Foundation’s First Prize. An NEA fellow, she has studied magic with Teller, Jeff McBride, and Eugene Burger, been sawed in half and in thirds, and escaped from a regulation straitjacket. She is a multi-genre author whose work has been widely published in journals and anthologies. Her screenplays have received honors from Austin Film Festival, Sundance Screenwriters&#8217; Lab, and Page International Screenwriting Awards. She has taught Creative Writing at Lehigh University and with Semester at Sea.</p></blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400;">You can learn more about Ruth Knafo Setton on <a href="https://ruthsetton.com/">her website</a>, by subscribing to <a href="http://www.ruthsetton.substack.com">her monthly Substack for creatives</a>, and by following her on <a href="https://www.instagram.com/rksetton">Instagram</a>.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400;">Thanks for being with us today, Ruth!</p>
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<p>It began with Venetian blinds.</p>
<p>I was eleven, watching a black-and-white movie on late-night TV. A detective knocks on the final woman’s door—a motel room, maybe. He was trying to solve the case of a murderer who slashed women’s faces. He knocks repeatedly. Calls her name. No answer. He turns and walks away into the dark. The camera shifts to the window. Through the slats of the blinds, a woman’s eyes appear, then her face—already slashed, disfigured. She watches him go, the only person who ever tried to find her, the only one who might have believed her. The blinds close. The screen fades to black.</p>
<p>I didn’t know the word “noir” yet, but I felt it in my bones: hope snuffed out, dread made visible, yearning trapped behind bars of light and shadow. Noir speaks in visual language, expressing what words cannot.</p>
<p>When I began writing my new novel, a murder mystery set in Atlantic City’s haunted theaters and seedy boardwalk, I returned to noir—that magnificent, morally crooked tradition born from the wreckage of the twentieth century. I wandered through Chandler’s labyrinthine Los Angeles, Hammett’s fog-choked San Francisco, the suffocating psychological interiors of <em>In a Lonely Place</em>. I rewatched the films that forged noir’s &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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<p>Please welcome author <a href="https://ruthsetton.com/">Ruth Knafo Setton</a> to Writer Unboxed today! Ruth is the author of two novels, <em>The Road to Fez,</em> and her latest, <em>Zigzag Girl, </em>&#8220;[a] mystery that understands how easily a performance can become a crime—and how dangerous it is to confuse the two.&#8221; (Kirkus Reviews)</p>
<p>From Ruth&#8217;s bio:</p>
<blockquote><p>(Zigzag Girl was) a finalist for the 2026 International Thriller Writers Award for Best Standalone Novel, and recipient of the Grand Prize in ScreenCraft’s Most Cinematic Book Competition, and the Daphne du Maurier Foundation’s First Prize. An NEA fellow, she has studied magic with Teller, Jeff McBride, and Eugene Burger, been sawed in half and in thirds, and escaped from a regulation straitjacket. She is a multi-genre author whose work has been widely published in journals and anthologies. Her screenplays have received honors from Austin Film Festival, Sundance Screenwriters&#8217; Lab, and Page International Screenwriting Awards. She has taught Creative Writing at Lehigh University and with Semester at Sea.</p></blockquote>
<p style="font-weight: 400;">You can learn more about Ruth Knafo Setton on <a href="https://ruthsetton.com/">her website</a>, by subscribing to <a href="http://www.ruthsetton.substack.com">her monthly Substack for creatives</a>, and by following her on <a href="https://www.instagram.com/rksetton">Instagram</a>.</p>
<p style="font-weight: 400;">Thanks for being with us today, Ruth!</p>
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<p>It began with Venetian blinds.</p>
<p>I was eleven, watching a black-and-white movie on late-night TV. A detective knocks on the final woman’s door—a motel room, maybe. He was trying to solve the case of a murderer who slashed women’s faces. He knocks repeatedly. Calls her name. No answer. He turns and walks away into the dark. The camera shifts to the window. Through the slats of the blinds, a woman’s eyes appear, then her face—already slashed, disfigured. She watches him go, the only person who ever tried to find her, the only one who might have believed her. The blinds close. The screen fades to black.</p>
<p>I didn’t know the word “noir” yet, but I felt it in my bones: hope snuffed out, dread made visible, yearning trapped behind bars of light and shadow. Noir speaks in visual language, expressing what words cannot.</p>
<p>When I began writing my new novel, a murder mystery set in Atlantic City’s haunted theaters and seedy boardwalk, I returned to noir—that magnificent, morally crooked tradition born from the wreckage of the twentieth century. I wandered through Chandler’s labyrinthine Los Angeles, Hammett’s fog-choked San Francisco, the suffocating psychological interiors of <em>In a Lonely Place</em>. I rewatched the films that forged noir’s &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>Getting Down to Business</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Densie Webb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2026 11:00:57 +0000</pubDate>
				<category><![CDATA[REAL WORLD]]></category>
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<p>&#160;</p>
<p>March was a wild month, and nothing was wilder than all the news about AI. Top headline: The novel, <em>Shy Girl</em>, by Mia Ballard, was published in the UK by Hachette and was set for release in the US, but was pulled before publication, when AI detection systems revealed that the book relied heavily on AI. It&#8217;s a warning sign of possible things to come as AI generative systems become more sophisticated. Grammerly, an AI writing assistant program, is being sued for providing suggestions by a writer, only she had nothing to do with it. Jane Friedman offers up valuable Q &#38;As on AI in publishing. Authors and publishers are joining music publishers in a lawsuit against AI company, Anthropic. A survey of North American publishers found that 31% of respondents are ethically opposed to the use of AI. Hmmm. I would have thought it would have been more. On a more positive note, Audible is expanding to 11 more markets, including Sweden. Want to know the bestsellers of the last 100 years? It&#8217;s below. There&#8217;s a gothic romance boom that goes beyond <em>Wuthering Heights</em>. Penguin Random House is letting its Penguin logo go wild. It&#8217;s cute! A whopping 81% of Americans feel they have a book in them. What it really takes, would likely shock all 81% of them.</p>
<p><strong>AI</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/19/books/shy-girl-book-ai.html?unlocked_article_code=1.UVA.jH70.yHYsxbx1jZoK&#38;smid=url-share">Horror novel, <em>Shy Girl</em>, cancelled over AI use</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/19/books/ai-fiction-shy-girl.html?unlocked_article_code=1.UlA.k_bT.44Ai0Zqz0Nxd&#38;smid=url-share">AI is writing fiction and publishing industry is unprepared</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/25/opinion/shy-girl-ai-publishing.html?unlocked_article_code=1.V1A.Ec8u.C4AAALfnQOu-&#38;smid=url-share">Author Andrea Bartz weighs in the <em>Shy Girl</em> debacle</a></p>
<p><a href="https://janefriedman.com/my-concerns-about-the-authors-guild-human-authored-certification-and-their-comprehensive-response/?fbclid=IwY2xjawQnsrpleHRuA2FlbQIxMQBzcnRjBmFwcF9pZBAyMjIwMzkxNzg4MjAwODkyAAEe4Si6mBkc-xlQBJy59fKgfFn9Sxrjs4K-uxjtavRC4JhcIXnPBlrPCn9wPU8_aem_Ax8QRwZHtqtyfugPv-iBqg">Jane Friedman concerned about the Authors Guild human-authored certification</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2026/03/09/business/ai-writing-quiz.html?unlocked_article_code=1.R1A.76y6.fws_VWOEVTmm&#38;smid=url-share">Can you tell the difference between AI and human-penned words? Take the quiz</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/13/opinion/ai-doppelganger-deepfake-grammarly.html?unlocked_article_code=1.TFA.iKsW.NVwMAS-qKaEe&#38;smid=url-share"> </a><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/13/opinion/ai-doppelganger-deepfake-grammarly.html?unlocked_article_code=1.TFA.iKsW.NVwMAS-qKaEe&#38;smid=url-share">Journalist is suing Grammerly for giving writing suggestions from her, but it&#8217;s a deepfake  </a></p>
<p><a href="https://janefriedman.com/ai-and-publishing-faq-for-writers/">Everything you ever wanted to know about AI and publishing but were afraid to ask</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/publishers-authors-file-brief-supporting-music-publishers-in-lawsuit-against-anthropic/">Publishers and authors join music publishers in filing a lawsuit against Anthropic</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/lets-get-practical-about-ai-aimedia-international-march-24th/">Survey of North American publishers about the use of AI</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.theguardian.com/technology/2026/mar/10/thousands-authors-publish-empty-book-protest-ai-work-copyright">Thousands of author publish an empty book in protest over AI using their work</a></p>
<p><strong>Audiobooks</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/audible-expands-platform-to-11-new-markets-including-sweden/">Audible expanding to 11 new markets, including Sweden</a></p>
<p><strong>Book Bans</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://bookriot.com/hr7661-advances-to-house/">The Nationwide book ban bill moves to the House. How to take action</a></p>
<p><strong>Book Sales</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://bookstr.com/list/100-years-of-fiction-the-bestselling-books-of-the-past-century/">Best selling books of the last century</a></p>
<p><a href="https://crimereads.com/gothic-romance-boom-2026-beyond-wuthering-heights/">There&#8217;s a gothic romance boom</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/media-control-and-nielseniq-bookdata-to-publish-booktok-charts-for-the-u-k/">BookTok is playing a role in bestseller charts in the UK</a></p>
<p><strong> </strong><strong>Publishing</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/simon-schuster-taps-former-amazon-exec-greg-greeley-to-succeed-jonathan-karp-as-ceo/">Simon and Schuster taps former Amazon exec as CEO</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.publishersweekly.com/pw/by-topic/industry-news/publisher-news/article/99993-rising-costs-due-to-war-rattle-publishing-s-global-supply-chain.html">The war is </a>&#8230;</p>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img data-recalc-dims="1" loading="lazy" decoding="async" class="aligncenter wp-image-75759 size-featured" src="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/01/GDtB4Final-1-e1680221721721-860x484.png?resize=860%2C484&#038;ssl=1" alt="Densie Webb's column on the Business of Fiction" width="860" height="484" srcset="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/01/GDtB4Final-1-e1680221721721.png?w=860&amp;ssl=1 860w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/01/GDtB4Final-1-e1680221721721.png?resize=300%2C169&amp;ssl=1 300w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/01/GDtB4Final-1-e1680221721721.png?resize=525%2C295&amp;ssl=1 525w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/01/GDtB4Final-1-e1680221721721.png?resize=768%2C432&amp;ssl=1 768w" sizes="auto, (max-width: 860px) 100vw, 860px" /></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>March was a wild month, and nothing was wilder than all the news about AI. Top headline: The novel, <em>Shy Girl</em>, by Mia Ballard, was published in the UK by Hachette and was set for release in the US, but was pulled before publication, when AI detection systems revealed that the book relied heavily on AI. It&#8217;s a warning sign of possible things to come as AI generative systems become more sophisticated. Grammerly, an AI writing assistant program, is being sued for providing suggestions by a writer, only she had nothing to do with it. Jane Friedman offers up valuable Q &amp;As on AI in publishing. Authors and publishers are joining music publishers in a lawsuit against AI company, Anthropic. A survey of North American publishers found that 31% of respondents are ethically opposed to the use of AI. Hmmm. I would have thought it would have been more. On a more positive note, Audible is expanding to 11 more markets, including Sweden. Want to know the bestsellers of the last 100 years? It&#8217;s below. There&#8217;s a gothic romance boom that goes beyond <em>Wuthering Heights</em>. Penguin Random House is letting its Penguin logo go wild. It&#8217;s cute! A whopping 81% of Americans feel they have a book in them. What it really takes, would likely shock all 81% of them.</p>
<p><strong>AI</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/19/books/shy-girl-book-ai.html?unlocked_article_code=1.UVA.jH70.yHYsxbx1jZoK&amp;smid=url-share">Horror novel, <em>Shy Girl</em>, cancelled over AI use</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/19/books/ai-fiction-shy-girl.html?unlocked_article_code=1.UlA.k_bT.44Ai0Zqz0Nxd&amp;smid=url-share">AI is writing fiction and publishing industry is unprepared</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/25/opinion/shy-girl-ai-publishing.html?unlocked_article_code=1.V1A.Ec8u.C4AAALfnQOu-&amp;smid=url-share">Author Andrea Bartz weighs in the <em>Shy Girl</em> debacle</a></p>
<p><a href="https://janefriedman.com/my-concerns-about-the-authors-guild-human-authored-certification-and-their-comprehensive-response/?fbclid=IwY2xjawQnsrpleHRuA2FlbQIxMQBzcnRjBmFwcF9pZBAyMjIwMzkxNzg4MjAwODkyAAEe4Si6mBkc-xlQBJy59fKgfFn9Sxrjs4K-uxjtavRC4JhcIXnPBlrPCn9wPU8_aem_Ax8QRwZHtqtyfugPv-iBqg">Jane Friedman concerned about the Authors Guild human-authored certification</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2026/03/09/business/ai-writing-quiz.html?unlocked_article_code=1.R1A.76y6.fws_VWOEVTmm&amp;smid=url-share">Can you tell the difference between AI and human-penned words? Take the quiz</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/13/opinion/ai-doppelganger-deepfake-grammarly.html?unlocked_article_code=1.TFA.iKsW.NVwMAS-qKaEe&amp;smid=url-share"> </a><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/03/13/opinion/ai-doppelganger-deepfake-grammarly.html?unlocked_article_code=1.TFA.iKsW.NVwMAS-qKaEe&amp;smid=url-share">Journalist is suing Grammerly for giving writing suggestions from her, but it&#8217;s a deepfake  </a></p>
<p><a href="https://janefriedman.com/ai-and-publishing-faq-for-writers/">Everything you ever wanted to know about AI and publishing but were afraid to ask</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/publishers-authors-file-brief-supporting-music-publishers-in-lawsuit-against-anthropic/">Publishers and authors join music publishers in filing a lawsuit against Anthropic</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/lets-get-practical-about-ai-aimedia-international-march-24th/">Survey of North American publishers about the use of AI</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.theguardian.com/technology/2026/mar/10/thousands-authors-publish-empty-book-protest-ai-work-copyright">Thousands of author publish an empty book in protest over AI using their work</a></p>
<p><strong>Audiobooks</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/audible-expands-platform-to-11-new-markets-including-sweden/">Audible expanding to 11 new markets, including Sweden</a></p>
<p><strong>Book Bans</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://bookriot.com/hr7661-advances-to-house/">The Nationwide book ban bill moves to the House. How to take action</a></p>
<p><strong>Book Sales</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://bookstr.com/list/100-years-of-fiction-the-bestselling-books-of-the-past-century/">Best selling books of the last century</a></p>
<p><a href="https://crimereads.com/gothic-romance-boom-2026-beyond-wuthering-heights/">There&#8217;s a gothic romance boom</a></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/media-control-and-nielseniq-bookdata-to-publish-booktok-charts-for-the-u-k/">BookTok is playing a role in bestseller charts in the UK</a></p>
<p><strong> </strong><strong>Publishing</strong></p>
<p><a href="https://publishingperspectives.com/2026/03/simon-schuster-taps-former-amazon-exec-greg-greeley-to-succeed-jonathan-karp-as-ceo/">Simon and Schuster taps former Amazon exec as CEO</a></p>
<p><a href="https://www.publishersweekly.com/pw/by-topic/industry-news/publisher-news/article/99993-rising-costs-due-to-war-rattle-publishing-s-global-supply-chain.html">The war is </a>&hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<title>Failing the Perception Check</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kelsey Allagood]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Apr 2026 11:00:44 +0000</pubDate>
				<category><![CDATA[CRAFT]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Editing]]></category>
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<p>There’s a part of revisions that feels, to me, like failing that check over and over again.</p>
<p>I open the manuscript. I open a calculator. I think: this book needs to be 95,000 words to be competitive in traditional publishing (said someone, somewhere), which means the inciting incident must occur by word 11,400—that’s 12%, or halfway through the first act. I took Math for Liberal Arts in college and here I am calculating percentages. Already, we’re having a great time.</p>
<p>I start measuring and moving things, cutting scenes or characters not because they don’t serve the story, but because I Must Structure It Correctly. I work for hours and at the end I have a document that hits its marks and a story that reads like a Rube Goldberg machine held together by duct tape and paperclips.</p>
<p>The trap was always there. I just failed the Perception check.</p>
<p>I’ve started calling it the container trap.</p>
<h2><strong>Two Types of Writers</strong></h2>
<p>Craft culture doesn’t always name this explicitly, but I think a lot of writers feel it: there are container people, and there are contents people. (Yes, we’re doing taxonomy today, in addition to math.)</p>
<p>Container people gravitate toward how a story is <em>shaped </em>above all. They think in structure and thrive on word count goals, daily sprints, outlining, and beat sheets. The architecture of a story is where they feel oriented: get the shape right and the substance will follow. This is a completely legitimate and often extraordinarily effective way to write. The best container people don’t sacrifice themes, character depth, or emotional beats for structure; they’re holding both at once.</p>
<p>Contents people, on the other hand, tend to start somewhere else. We think in emotional logic, thematic urgency, and character truth. We need to know what a story is <em>doing</em>—what it’s trying to say, what it’s pushing against—before we can figure out what shape it needs to be. The meaning of the story generates the structure, not the other way around.</p>
<p>Story requires structure. We know this. We just&#8230;tend to encounter it later.</p>
<p>So when we try to front-load container issues—e.g., “I’m &#8230;</p>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://unsplash.com/photos/a-lit-up-box-sitting-on-top-of-a-table-mkxTOAxqTTo?utm_source=unsplash&amp;utm_medium=referral&amp;utm_content=creditShareLink"><img data-recalc-dims="1" loading="lazy" decoding="async" class="aligncenter wp-image-87047 size-featured" title="Ashin K Suresh" src="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash.jpg?resize=860%2C484&#038;ssl=1" alt="" width="860" height="484" srcset="https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=860%2C484&amp;ssl=1 860w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=300%2C169&amp;ssl=1 300w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=525%2C295&amp;ssl=1 525w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=768%2C432&amp;ssl=1 768w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=1536%2C864&amp;ssl=1 1536w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=2048%2C1152&amp;ssl=1 2048w, https://i0.wp.com/writerunboxed.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/ashin-k-suresh-mkxTOAxqTTo-unsplash-scaled.jpg?resize=1320%2C743&amp;ssl=1 1320w" sizes="auto, (max-width: 860px) 100vw, 860px" /></a>In the video game <em>Baldur’s Gate 3</em>, you will occasionally stumble across traps—small landmines or treasure chests rigged to explode. To avoid taking damage, you roll a Perception check to see if you notice the trap before running right over it and potentially exploding your companions.</p>
<p>There’s a part of revisions that feels, to me, like failing that check over and over again.</p>
<p>I open the manuscript. I open a calculator. I think: this book needs to be 95,000 words to be competitive in traditional publishing (said someone, somewhere), which means the inciting incident must occur by word 11,400—that’s 12%, or halfway through the first act. I took Math for Liberal Arts in college and here I am calculating percentages. Already, we’re having a great time.</p>
<p>I start measuring and moving things, cutting scenes or characters not because they don’t serve the story, but because I Must Structure It Correctly. I work for hours and at the end I have a document that hits its marks and a story that reads like a Rube Goldberg machine held together by duct tape and paperclips.</p>
<p>The trap was always there. I just failed the Perception check.</p>
<p>I’ve started calling it the container trap.</p>
<h2><strong>Two Types of Writers</strong></h2>
<p>Craft culture doesn’t always name this explicitly, but I think a lot of writers feel it: there are container people, and there are contents people. (Yes, we’re doing taxonomy today, in addition to math.)</p>
<p>Container people gravitate toward how a story is <em>shaped </em>above all. They think in structure and thrive on word count goals, daily sprints, outlining, and beat sheets. The architecture of a story is where they feel oriented: get the shape right and the substance will follow. This is a completely legitimate and often extraordinarily effective way to write. The best container people don’t sacrifice themes, character depth, or emotional beats for structure; they’re holding both at once.</p>
<p>Contents people, on the other hand, tend to start somewhere else. We think in emotional logic, thematic urgency, and character truth. We need to know what a story is <em>doing</em>—what it’s trying to say, what it’s pushing against—before we can figure out what shape it needs to be. The meaning of the story generates the structure, not the other way around.</p>
<p>Story requires structure. We know this. We just&#8230;tend to encounter it later.</p>
<p>So when we try to front-load container issues—e.g., “I’m &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Donald Maass]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Apr 2026 11:00:17 +0000</pubDate>
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I moved recently. My new place is great. It’s all set up, but that took some doing. Unpacking. Arranging. Assembling some flat-pack furniture. Hanging pictures and art. Naturally, I needed tools.</p>
<p>What surprised me were which tools were the most needed. Like many, I have a toolbox. I’ve collected quite a few over the years. Chisels. Scrapers. Wire strippers. Plumber’s wrench. Vice grips. The workhorse tools in the box would be screwdriver and hammer, you would think, and I did use those but not as much as a couple of others. I came to appreciate those overlooked tools.</p>
<p>Which reminds me: In the fiction craft toolbox there are many tools. The hammer and screwdriver get the most attention, but they are not necessarily the ones that perform the most useful and necessary work. Let’s take a look at a few overlooked tools and see what they can suggest to us about craft.</p>
<h3><strong>Box Cutter</strong></h3>
<p>Countless cardboard boxes had to be sliced open and broken down for recycling. The cardboard also protected floors or countertops while working. I keep extra clean cardboard around, in useful sizes. Stuff comes in handy. You never know.</p>
<p>Cardboard is the ubiquitous container and carrier. Everything comes in a box. Thing is, the stuff you want doesn’t do much good when it’s taped up in a box. You have to slice open the box, look inside, take out what’s in there, and use it.</p>
<p>Just like with plot and characters. They are boxes. Shells. The useful stuff is inside. You’ve got to slice them open and get your hands in there. What does that mean in practical terms? In fiction craft, what is the equivalent of a box cutter? A box cutter is sharp. It cuts. In your hands it is merciless and unflinching, or can be.</p>
<ul>
<li>What is your protagonist hiding from you?</li>
<li>Where does your plot not want to go?</li>
<li>What threat or pleasure is hiding in your story world?</li>
<li>What isn’t being said?</li>
<li>What isn’t difficult enough?</li>
</ul>
<h3><strong>Scissors</strong></h3>
<p>My utility scissors not only opened bags and plastic packaging, but trimmed and shaped a roll of black rubber kitchen drawer liner for a dozen different spots. For instance, in my distressed, steampunk, glass-fronted dining cabinet, my collection of artisan brown bowls really pops against the black mat beneath them. (Recessed lights help too.)</p>
<p>Honestly, I used my utility scissors more than any other tool. &#8230;</p>]]></description>
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I moved recently. My new place is great. It’s all set up, but that took some doing. Unpacking. Arranging. Assembling some flat-pack furniture. Hanging pictures and art. Naturally, I needed tools.</p>
<p>What surprised me were which tools were the most needed. Like many, I have a toolbox. I’ve collected quite a few over the years. Chisels. Scrapers. Wire strippers. Plumber’s wrench. Vice grips. The workhorse tools in the box would be screwdriver and hammer, you would think, and I did use those but not as much as a couple of others. I came to appreciate those overlooked tools.</p>
<p>Which reminds me: In the fiction craft toolbox there are many tools. The hammer and screwdriver get the most attention, but they are not necessarily the ones that perform the most useful and necessary work. Let’s take a look at a few overlooked tools and see what they can suggest to us about craft.</p>
<h3><strong>Box Cutter</strong></h3>
<p>Countless cardboard boxes had to be sliced open and broken down for recycling. The cardboard also protected floors or countertops while working. I keep extra clean cardboard around, in useful sizes. Stuff comes in handy. You never know.</p>
<p>Cardboard is the ubiquitous container and carrier. Everything comes in a box. Thing is, the stuff you want doesn’t do much good when it’s taped up in a box. You have to slice open the box, look inside, take out what’s in there, and use it.</p>
<p>Just like with plot and characters. They are boxes. Shells. The useful stuff is inside. You’ve got to slice them open and get your hands in there. What does that mean in practical terms? In fiction craft, what is the equivalent of a box cutter? A box cutter is sharp. It cuts. In your hands it is merciless and unflinching, or can be.</p>
<ul>
<li>What is your protagonist hiding from you?</li>
<li>Where does your plot not want to go?</li>
<li>What threat or pleasure is hiding in your story world?</li>
<li>What isn’t being said?</li>
<li>What isn’t difficult enough?</li>
</ul>
<h3><strong>Scissors</strong></h3>
<p>My utility scissors not only opened bags and plastic packaging, but trimmed and shaped a roll of black rubber kitchen drawer liner for a dozen different spots. For instance, in my distressed, steampunk, glass-fronted dining cabinet, my collection of artisan brown bowls really pops against the black mat beneath them. (Recessed lights help too.)</p>
<p>Honestly, I used my utility scissors more than any other tool. &hellip;</p>]]></content:encoded>
					
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