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	<title>Jennifer Crusie's Blog: Argh Ink</title>
	
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	<description>More than you ever wanted to hear from Bestselling Author Jenny Crusie.</description>
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		<title>Take the Kids To Work Day: Superhero Version</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 21 May 2013 14:39:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Andry &#8220;Shango&#8221; Rajoelina did a whole series of these on his blog. My fave? Wonder Woman, of course, and not just because of that fab golden jump rope. Found through io9.]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://elshangowuzhere.blogspot.fr/2013/05/justice-families.html">Andry &#8220;Shango&#8221; Rajoelina did a whole series of these on his blog</a>.  My fave?  Wonder Woman, of course, and not just because of that fab golden jump rope.<a href="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/05/wondermumsd.jpg"><img src="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/05/wondermumsd.jpg" alt="wondermumsd" width="320" height="320" class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-8398" /></a><br />
Found through io9.</p>
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		<title>Next Who Sunday: Bad Wolf/The Parting of the Ways: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 20 May 2013 10:39:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Who finales are always epic, but this one remains my favorite. It&#8217;s legitimately hide-behind-the-couch scary, equally funny, puts Our Guy and Our Girl front and center and throws a nightmare of Big Bads at them, and the pay-off at the end is searing and satisfying and right, tragic and true. We&#8217;ve talked a lot [...]]]></description>
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<p>The <em>Who</em> finales are always epic, but this one remains my favorite.  It&#8217;s legitimately hide-behind-the-couch scary, equally funny, puts Our Guy and Our Girl front and center and throws a nightmare of Big Bads at them, and the pay-off at the end is searing and satisfying and right, tragic and true.  We&#8217;ve talked a lot about endings in the McDaniel class, but the big takeaway is that if the end doesn&#8217;t work, the rest of the novel/story/episode/series is toast.  It&#8217;s what everything that has come before has been building up to.  It&#8217;s the Big Finish, the Payoff, the Climax in every sense of the word.  Davies very carefully built the whole season to culminate in this two-parter, layering the Doctor-Rose relationship so that it could only end in this way, building all the characters so that their actions here are the sum of everything that has gone before.  Davies does what Joss Whedon always did, he ENDS the season, he doesn&#8217;t shill out his narrative with a tacky cliffhanger because he knows if he delivers at the climax, his audience will be back.  Cliffhangers fall into the same category as prologues and epilogues; they&#8217;re weak writing, a sign of a writer who doesn&#8217;t trust his or her audience.  One of the great things about this two-parter is that while it&#8217;s both an ending and a beginning, it makes the season complete, a unified whole, a great filmed novel.  So let&#8217;s talk about endings this week, along with everything else.</p>
<p>Fun fact: There&#8217;s a &#8220;Bad Wolf&#8221; mention in every episode of Season One (and several after that in later series) although some are so hidden they&#8217;re hard to find.  </p>
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		<title>Who Sunday: Boomtown: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 19 May 2013 10:55:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;Boomtown&#8221; is a reward moment for faithful viewers, bringing back people we know in a character-driven script. It doesn&#8217;t have the emotional impact of &#8220;The Doctor Dances&#8221; or the big explosions of &#8220;WW3,&#8221; it just pits a lot of people who know each other and who have been through a lot together against a smart [...]]]></description>
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<p>&#8220;Boomtown&#8221; is a reward moment for faithful viewers, bringing back people we know in a character-driven script.  It doesn&#8217;t have the emotional impact of &#8220;The Doctor Dances&#8221; or the big explosions of &#8220;WW3,&#8221; it just pits a lot of people who know each other and who have been through a lot together against a smart enemy they&#8217;ve fought before, and then fights that fight all over again, this time with trickery and finesse instead of blowing up 10 Downing Street.  There&#8217;s a great deal of pleasure in watching characters we love do what they do beautifully, and the episode, sandwiched between two epic two-parters, is that small, quiet moment before the Big Finish, a chance for viewers to rest before going to war in &#8220;Bad Wolf.&#8221;  There are more very very close shots of characters in this show than in any other in the series; the camera practically goes up their noses.  It&#8217;s not one of the Great Who Episodes, but it&#8217;s a wonderful example of that (comparatively) still moment in any narrative before everything goes all pear-shaped.</p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday: 5-18-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 18 May 2013 10:21:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today is National Sea Monkey Day. No, I am not making that up. I am bummed that I missed Lumpy Rug Day (the 3rd), No Socks Day (the 8th, followed by Lost Sock Memorial Day on the 9th), and Dance Like a Chicken Day (the 14th). Must pay closer attention to holidays. What are you [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today is National Sea Monkey Day.  No, I am not making that up.<br />
I am bummed that I missed Lumpy Rug Day (the 3rd), No Socks Day (the 8th, followed by Lost Sock Memorial Day on the 9th), and Dance Like a Chicken Day (the 14th).  Must pay closer attention to holidays.  </p>
<p>What are you celebrating this week?</p>
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		<title>Charlie Jane Ander on Moffat’s Who</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 May 2013 06:09:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Charlie Jane Ander&#8217;s take on the problems with Moffat&#8217;s Who on io9. Her observation that Moffat likes writing the cleverest guy in the room (see Sherlock)is dead on, I think, but there&#8217;s so much more, especially the problem with making your protagonist the center of the universe. The protagonist has to be the center of [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://io9.com/the-central-problem-with-steven-moffats-doctor-who-507670201?utm_source=recirculation&#038;utm_medium=recirculation&#038;utm_campaign=afternoon">Charlie Jane Ander&#8217;s take on the problems with Moffat&#8217;s Who on io9.</a>  Her observation that Moffat likes writing the cleverest guy in the room (see <em>Sherlock</em>)is dead on, I think, but there&#8217;s so much more, especially the problem with making your protagonist the center of the universe.  The protagonist has to be the center of his or her universe, has to think the story is about her or him, but if everybody in that universe agrees, you&#8217;re undercutting the character&#8217;s vulnerability.  If your hero can yell at alien warships to tell them who he is and then watch them flee in fear, how worried can we be?  More than that, how much can we understand him?  I don&#8217;t think a protagonist has to be like us&#8211;normal&#8211;in order for us to attach, but I think that <a href="http://www.ted.com/talks/brene_brown_on_vulnerability.html">vulnerability is absolutely key</a>.  And Moffat&#8217;s Who isn&#8217;t vulnerable, which is odd because I think the actor can play vulnerability beautifully and is trying to, the scripts are just kneecapping him.</p>
<p>Also on io9: <a href="http://io9.com/10-totally-different-tv-shows-that-em-doctor-who-em-5833466">a summary of the different flavors of Who through 32 seasons</a>.</p>
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		<title>Next Who Sunday: Boomtown: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 10:05:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I was going to skip &#8220;Boomtown,&#8221; another Russell T Davies episode (when did the man sleep?), but I think it&#8217;s interesting because it&#8217;s a comparatively low key story that comes between two huge, high impact double episodes, so it acts as a valley, a small quiet story that relies on character, particularly drawing on what [...]]]></description>
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<p>I was going to skip &#8220;Boomtown,&#8221; another Russell T Davies episode (when did the man sleep?), but I think it&#8217;s interesting because it&#8217;s a comparatively low key story that comes between two huge, high impact double episodes, so it acts as a valley, a small quiet story that relies on character, particularly drawing on what viewers already know of all the characters.  It&#8217;s a good look at how to pace a novel or, in this case, a series, without undercutting the tension.  And for a <em>Who</em>, it&#8217;s very talky; the ratio of explosion and panic to discussion is reversed.  </p>
<p>Fun fact I just discovered: Captain Jack was written with Barrowman in mind, which helps explain that perfect fusion of character and actor.</p>
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		<title>Who Sunday: The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances: Steven Moffat</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 12 May 2013 10:01:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;I&#8217;m looking for a blonde in a Union Jack. A specific one, mind you, I didn&#8217;t just wake up this morning with a craving.&#8221; Russell T. Davies brings us The Blitz, people turning into monsters, Rose stranded on Big Ben, and Captain Jack. Not to mention the creepiest repeated line in Who history: &#8220;Are you [...]]]></description>
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<blockquote><p>&#8220;I&#8217;m looking for a blonde in a Union Jack. A specific one, mind you, I didn&#8217;t just wake up this morning with a craving.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>Russell T. Davies brings us The Blitz, people turning into monsters, Rose stranded on Big Ben, and Captain Jack.  Not to mention the creepiest repeated line in Who history: &#8220;Are you my mummy?&#8221;  I talked about motif and metaphor in this story in the lecture I gave the McDaniel students, but there&#8217;s so much more.  This double-episode makes just about every Best of Who list out there: creepy, heart-breaking, funny, and romantic.  Plus, Captain Jack.  I wish I could write like this.</p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday 5-11-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 11 May 2013 10:02:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I typed &#8220;Cheery Saturday&#8221; and then thought, &#8220;Well, that&#8217;s good, too. Cherry Saturday&#8217;s make me cheery.&#8221; What&#8217;s cheery or not in your Cherry world?]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I typed &#8220;Cheery Saturday&#8221; and then thought, &#8220;Well, that&#8217;s good, too.  Cherry Saturday&#8217;s make me cheery.&#8221;<br />
What&#8217;s cheery or not in your Cherry world?</p>
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		<title>Next Who Sunday: The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances: Steven Moffat</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 May 2013 14:14:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[We&#8217;re skipping three episodes this time, &#8220;Dalek,&#8221; &#8220;The Long Game,&#8221; and &#8220;Father&#8217;s Day,&#8221; (I know, I know, but there are seven seasons to skim through, so we&#8217;re going to be skipping some good stuff), but we can&#8217;t skip &#8220;The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances.&#8221; If you forced me to pick the best Who story it would [...]]]></description>
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<p>We&#8217;re skipping three episodes this time, &#8220;Dalek,&#8221; &#8220;The Long Game,&#8221; and &#8220;Father&#8217;s Day,&#8221; (I know, I know, but there are seven seasons to skim through, so we&#8217;re going to be skipping some good stuff), but we can&#8217;t skip &#8220;The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances.&#8221;  If you forced me to pick the best <em>Who</em> story it would be this one, a blend of horror and comedy, heartbreak and jubilation, <em>Who</em> at its best.  You&#8217;ll never hear the word &#8220;Mummy&#8221; again without shivering, so one thing to look at is the way Davies never undercuts the horror with the comedy but balances the two to create just the right amount of tension.  Also metaphor: there&#8217;s a lotta talk about dancing going on here.</p>
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		<title>Who Sunday: Aliens of London/WW3: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 05 May 2013 10:15:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A cast of thousands, a broken Big Ben, and Harriet Jones. How do you feel about large casts, two-part episodes (could this have been done better in one?) and subplots explaining to loved ones where you&#8217;ve been for a year? Also, Harriet Jones.]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/05/harriet-jones-mp-for-flydale-north.jpg"><img src="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/05/harriet-jones-mp-for-flydale-north-300x168.jpg" alt="harriet-jones-mp-for-flydale-north" width="300" height="168" class="aligncenter size-medium wp-image-8209" /></a>A cast of thousands, a broken Big Ben, and Harriet Jones.  How do you feel about large casts, two-part episodes (could this have been done better in one?) and subplots explaining to loved ones where you&#8217;ve been for a year?  Also, Harriet Jones.  </p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday 5-4-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 04 May 2013 13:43:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Late again. Very sorry. So, what&#8217;s new with you? ETA: Cherries at RT, Jill and Kieran. Also, this is Argh&#8217;s 900th post.]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Late again.  Very sorry.  So, what&#8217;s new with you?</p>
<p>ETA: Cherries at RT, Jill and Kieran.<br />
Also, this is Argh&#8217;s 900th post.  </p>
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		<title>Toni’s Post</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Apr 2013 18:53:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Toni Causey put up the most beautiful post on Murderati.]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Toni Causey put up <a href="http://www.murderati.com/blog/category/toni-mcgee-causey">the most beautiful post on Murderati</a>.  </p>
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		<title>Next Who Sunday: Aliens of London/WW3: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Apr 2013 00:14:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hate skipping two episodes, especially since we meet Cassandra in &#8220;The End of the World&#8221; and Charles Dickens in &#8220;The Unquiet Dead&#8221; (not to mention Gwyneth), but we can make up for it by meeting Harriet Jones (yes, Harriet, we know who you are), UNIT, and the Slitheen. The double episode is also a [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hate skipping two episodes, especially since we meet Cassandra in &#8220;The End of the World&#8221; and Charles Dickens in &#8220;The Unquiet Dead&#8221; (not to mention Gwyneth), but we can make up for it by meeting Harriet Jones (yes, Harriet, we know who you are), UNIT, and the Slitheen.  The double episode is also a good look at the effect time travel has on the people left behind, which I thought was an interesting way to go; it&#8217;s not all exploring worlds, it&#8217;s about people, too.  Mostly about people, actually; the Doctor is a real people person.  Unfortunately, it&#8217;s two hours of fart jokes, which I could do without, but it&#8217;s still good storytelling.  Plus Harriet Jones.  </p>
<p>One thing to look at in this story is managing huge casts.  I love a large cast of characters to work with, but this story has a lot of speaking parts&#8211;the Doctor, Rose, Mickey, Jackie, Harriet Jones, the  Slitheen who show up in different bodies, the political aide who should have been wearing a red shirt, UNIT, a platoon of soldiers, the morgue attendant, the pig&#8211;and they&#8217;re all established pretty well, both visually and by their character actions.  I have to confess, I like the smaller cast stories because they feel more intimate (see the two episodes we&#8217;re skipping), but I think handling this many characters takes skill, although it does help that the plot is your basic Aliens Here To Take Over the World.  Thank God they&#8217;re calcium based.</p>
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		<title>Who Sunday: “Rose”: Russell T. Davies</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Apr 2013 10:09:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[When Russell Davies rebooted the Dr. Who series, he took on an epic with all the troubles that entails: You don&#8217;t mess around with the Doctor. He had to satisfy fans, most of whom were adults with very clear and very rabid ideas from their childhoods of Who the Doctor was (that would be twenty-six [...]]]></description>
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<p>When Russell Davies rebooted the <em>Dr. Who</em> series, he took on an epic with all the troubles that entails: You don&#8217;t mess around with the Doctor. <span id="more-8187"></span> He had to satisfy fans, most of whom were adults with very clear and very rabid ideas from their childhoods of Who the Doctor was (that would be twenty-six previous seasons, starting in 1963).  But he also had to make the series accessible to people like me, who&#8217;d never seen it before.  He had to make it old and make it new and make it on what was evidently a limited budget, although not as limited at the classic <em>Who</em>s (compare the first season to the seventh and you&#8217;ll see a big budget increase apparent on the screen).  </p>
<p>A lot was riding on &#8220;Rose,&#8221; the first episode.  That made it a big undertaking for him, but a perfect place for us to talk about how to begin a story.  For example:</p>
<p>What makes &#8220;Rose&#8221; a brilliant reboot to the old series? (You can disagree that it&#8217;s brilliant, of course, but really, did you watch it?)</p>
<p>What shorthand did Davies use in characterization to get the major players in the viewers&#8217; minds quickly and indelibly?</p>
<p>How did Davies handle twenty-six seasons of back story for the new people?</p>
<p>Feel free to add your own questions, too.  Much like the Doctor, we&#8217;re here to explore, just looking for things that make us say, &#8220;Fantastic!&#8221;</p>
<p>Oh, and if you haven&#8217;t see &#8220;Rose&#8221; yet, you might want to avoid the comments:<br />
<a href="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/04/riverspoilers.jpg"><img src="http://www.arghink.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/04/riverspoilers-214x300.jpg" alt="riverspoilers" width="214" height="300" class="aligncenter size-medium wp-image-8197" /></a></p>
<p>[Note: I can't find the original of that image; if anybody knows who made it, please let me know so I can give credit.]</p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday 4-27-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Apr 2013 10:35:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[So what&#8217;s new with you?]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So what&#8217;s new with you?</p>
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		<title>Anybody Interested in Who Sundays?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Apr 2013 16:35:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[We&#8217;ve been talking about motif and metaphor in the McD course on unity, and I referenced &#8220;The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances&#8221; episodes of Dr Who. There&#8217;s so much to talk about in the Who-verse: some of the episodes are works of art and some of them are abysmal (I hate &#8220;Love and Monsters&#8221; with the [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We&#8217;ve been talking about motif and metaphor in the McD course on unity, and I referenced &#8220;The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances&#8221; episodes of <em>Dr Who</em>.  There&#8217;s so much to talk about in the Who-verse: some of the episodes are works of art and some of them are abysmal (I hate &#8220;Love and Monsters&#8221; with the passion of a thousand firey suns) but they&#8217;re all worth taking apart for character, structure, conflict, metaphor, all that good stuff.  The problem is, we don&#8217;t have time in the McD classes.  I offered to do it on the class blog as an option, not a requirement, and then I said as an afterthought, &#8220;Or we could do it on Argh.&#8221;  They voted for Argh on the more-the-merrier principle, so I&#8217;m running the idea by all of you now.<span id="more-8178"></span></p>
<p>My plan, which can change depending on the comments, would be to take one <em>Dr.Who</em> episode a week, selecting stories that I think would generate good craft analysis.  We&#8217;d concentrate on the new series&#8211;Doctors Nine, Ten, and Eleven, aka Eccleston, Tennant, and Smith&#8211;and I&#8217;d choose a couple of stories from each year (there are seven years, we&#8217;re not going to do them all) to see the arc of the new <em>Who</em>.  I think the change of showrunners between ten and eleven (Davies to Moffat) does interesting things to the stories, too.  So I&#8217;d choose a show (feel free to nominate in the comments) and then I&#8217;d put up a post on Sunday with a short intro and a starting discussion question and let the rest of you take it from there, talking about whatever you wanted to in regards to the storytelling (I bow to no one in my ability to squee over Eccleston, Tennant, and Barrowman, but it&#8217;s not terribly fun or helpful to read that stuff, so let&#8217;s stick to the writing).</p>
<p>As an experiment, let&#8217;s do <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Rose/dp/B003LZ5B7S" target="_blank">&#8220;Rose,&#8221;</a> the first episode in Season One of the new <em>Who</em>, free on Amazon Prime.  (I&#8217;m ambivalent about Amazon in general, but Amazon Prime is a great deal.)  If it works, we&#8217;ll keep going, picking at least three stories per season (some stories are two-parters so we&#8217;ll do both parts) and taking them apart to see how they work, the good and the bad.  Three times seven is twenty-one so that&#8217;s about four months of <em>Who</em> Sundays if we decide to go for it.  If we start and then it turns out to be a dud, I&#8217;ll pull the plug, but it could be a good time.  </p>
<p>So is this something you&#8217;d like?  What would you want the series to cover/concentrate on? (I&#8217;m thinking writing craft, but I&#8217;m open.) For those of you who are already <em>Who</em> fans, what episodes must be covered? (&#8220;The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances,&#8221; &#8220;Blink,&#8221; and &#8220;Let&#8217;s Kill Hitler&#8221; are already in as far as I&#8217;m concerned.)  Feedback please.   And then we&#8217;ll do a trial run on &#8220;Rose&#8221; on Sunday.</p>
<p>So what do you think?</p>
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		<title>Kindle Daily Deal: Anne Stuart’s A Rose At Midnight</title>
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		<comments>http://www.arghink.com/2013/04/24/kindle-daily-deal-anne-stuarts-a-rose-at-midnight/#comments</comments>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Apr 2013 15:02:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Get your vintage Stuart at Amazon right now for $1.99 as a Kindle Daily Deal: A Rose at Midnight.]]></description>
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Get your vintage Stuart at Amazon right now for $1.99 as <a href="http://www.amazon.com/A-Rose-at-Midnight-ebook/dp/B00BMQU89E/ref=tmm_kin_title_0?ie=UTF8&#038;qid=1366815435&#038;sr=8-1">a Kindle Daily Deal: A Rose at Midnight.</a></p>
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		<title>Name That Heroine</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Apr 2013 10:22:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[One of the dumber articles I&#8217;ve read recently was called &#8220;Fifteen Female Names We&#8217;ll Never See Again.&#8221; For the record, they were Blanche, Myrtle, Ethel, Barbara, Mildred, Agatha, Phyllis, Beatrice, Marge, Ruth, Gretchen, Gertrude, Martha, Opal, and Rose. (Rose? Really?) Setting aside the inanity of anybody saying &#8220;never&#8221; about anything, this particular subject is especially [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of the dumber articles I&#8217;ve read recently was called &#8220;Fifteen Female Names We&#8217;ll Never See Again.&#8221;  For the record, they were Blanche, Myrtle, Ethel, Barbara, Mildred, Agatha, Phyllis, Beatrice, Marge, Ruth, Gretchen, Gertrude, Martha, Opal, and Rose. (Rose?  Really?)  Setting aside the inanity of anybody saying &#8220;never&#8221; about anything, this particular subject is especially dumb because parents are going the extra mile these days to give their children names nobody else will have, which means all of these names are up for grabs.  I would use any of these names for a heroine, and in fact I&#8217;ve already named one Gertrude (&#8220;Hot Toy&#8221;).  Another list began with the name Jezebel, and now I really want to write a heroine named Jezebel.  Now that I think of it, some of my favorite heroines that I&#8217;ve written had names that would hit a longer list: Matilda, Zelda, Agnes, Minerva, Maybelle, Prudence, not to mention Mariposa, Sharrat, and Andromeda.  I LOVE odd names.</p>
<p>But some readers don&#8217;t.  (I had a complaint about &#8220;Andromeda.&#8221;)  What&#8217;s your take on names in books?  (Don&#8217;t feel you have to stick to heroine names, not that you would.)</p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday 4-20-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Apr 2013 11:30:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yes, I am going to post again. As soon as I get the McDaniel curriculum done&#8211;I could post on that&#8211;and start on getting the yard here cleared up (see post on ReFab), and work on Liz and put in some kitchen cabinets and get some exercise . . . I&#8217;ll post, I really will. But [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I am going to post again.  As soon as I get the McDaniel curriculum done&#8211;I could post on that&#8211;and start on getting the yard here cleared up (see post on ReFab), and work on Liz and put in some kitchen cabinets and get some exercise . . .   I&#8217;ll post, I really will.  But in the meantime, thank you all for the recommendations (I loved <em>Flipped</em>) and keep them coming.   Also, what&#8217;s new with you?</p>
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		<title>Cherry Saturday 4-12-2013</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Apr 2013 10:21:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#8217;s spring. No, really, I can see tulips coming up and the daffodils are out. How&#8217;s your week been? Also, Jill W. wants more good book recommendations if you have any left.]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s spring.  No, really, I can see tulips coming up and the daffodils are out.  How&#8217;s your week been?  Also, Jill W. wants more good book recommendations if you have any left.</p>
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