Read It Aloud
Posted by Joshua Dodson in General Writing on 24 September 2009

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I read all of my writing aloud. It is an excellent practice that I cannot recommend highly enough. It gives me a chance to get into the work and see it from a different angle. It also gives me a deeper appreciation for the richness and beauty of language. When I listen to the way certain words fit together, and know that I made that happen, then I am grateful for being a writer.
Why should you read all of your work out loud? I have compiled a list of reasons why you might want to.
- It ensures that your readers will “hear” your writing the way you intend for them to. Most people sub-vocalize as they read. That means that even when people do not read your work out loud, it is as if they can still hear it being read. This happens naturally, and is what gives language its musicality, even when read silently.
- It helps you catch mistakes. The quickest way that I find mistakes within my writing is to read it out loud. I can catch typos, improper punctuation, incorrect words, etc., almost instantly when I read a work out loud. This often means that I have to read the work out loud several times––once to find the simple mistakes, another few times to listen for the nuances.
- It helps you pay attention to the nuances within the language. This is the poetic part of writing, and it can apply to prose just as easily as it does to poetry. A writer’s style is often contained within word choice or simple use of techniques like alliteration. A writer that takes time to understand and develop the details within a work will produce a better piece of writing.
- It helps you establish your “voice.” It is important to establish a consistent voice within a work. If you read your work aloud, then you can more easily determine where the voice differs, then find a way to bring the work back to your regular voice.
- It prepares you for readings. Reading your work out loud—to yourself or someone else—prepares you for public readings of your work. If you are a serious writer, then there is a good chance that you will do public readings. It always helps to know how you want to read it out loud before the actual event.
Reading your work out loud is good for a work-in-progress, or for final editing. If you feel like it, grab a buddy and read to each other. Sometimes the simple act of having someone else read your work to you can give you a completely new perspective. Listen for the parts that sound constrained. Did you intend for it to be that way? If not, fix it. What parts read quicker than you would like? How can you slow it down to give it more impact? Work with punctuation and line spacing. There are lots of methods that you can use to get your desired effect.
Most importantly, read your work aloud. You will be glad that you did, and so will your readers!
Cloudy, Rainy Days
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Starters on 17 September 2009
Today is one of those cloudy, rainy days. You know the type. Everything is a bit dreary. You feel like sleeping longer than you should. Coffee serves as a way to daydream instead of a pick-me-up.

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These days tend to be more about process, for me at least. I do not accomplish more than usual on days like this–quantitatively, that is. I ease myself into the process and try not to set goals that will cause me to let myself down.
Days like this can be amazingly productive in one sense. They encourage a wandering mind. Where do you go next? What happens when you leave here? Where did you come from? How is this shaping your story? Is your story somehow shaping you?
Today’s Writing Prompt
Write about a cloudy, rainy day. What do you, or your characters, do to pass the time? Is this a languid time for you, or an empowering time? What processes happen during this time that otherwise get no attention?
Whispered Library of Babel
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Great Lines on 13 September 2009
I stumbled upon this mysterious, whispered version of Jorge Luis Borges’ “Library of Babel” and thought that I’d pass it along. “Library of Babel” is a fantastic short story, and this version is worth checking out.
Writing With Sense
Posted by Denton Loving in General Writing on 9 September 2009

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If you’ve ever taken a creative writing class or attended a fiction workshop, you’ve heard this clear set of directions: “Show. Don’t Tell.” That seems easy enough, but I admit I’ve had to give a lot of thought to that at times to ensure I’m not guilty of the reverse. How do you not tell when you’re telling a story? The nuances of those words must be given some serious thought to find the answer. One way to practice showing is to be sure you write with the senses.
Flanary O’Connor wrote about what she called “the texture of existence around you.” I’ve been reading her collection of essays published as Mystery and Manners, and I’ve found a lot of good advice that is certainly still applicable several decades later. Here are some words of wisdom to consider:
Fiction operates through the senses, and I think one reason that people find it so difficult to write stories is that they forget how much time and patience is required to convince through the senses. No reader who doesn’t actually experience, who isn’t made to feel, the story is going to believe anything the fiction writer merely tells him. The first and most obvious characteristic of fiction is that it deals with reality through what can be seen, heard, smelt, tasted, and touched. Now this is something that can’t be learned only in the head; it has to be learned in the habits. It has to become a way that you habitually look at things. The fiction writer has to realize that he can’t create compassion with compassion, or emotion with emotion, or thought with thought. He has to provide all of these things with a body; he has to create a world with weight and extension.” (91-92)
When reading this, I was taken back to a few months ago when I was workshopping with other writers. One of the workshop participants was Rodney, a sometimes difficult reader to sell and, therefore, one of the best readers I can have critique my work. After I read and Rodney was ready to comment, he referred back to a what I considered a minor detail in the scene. Near the end, as one of my characters was preparing for bed after a long day of working in the summer, I wrote, “He still felt the heat of the day inside him. He was sure it radiated off him.”
Rodney said those two short sentences had struck him because he had experienced that sensation himself. He went on to talk in more detail about how your skin feels after being in the sun all day and how it makes you tired. He talked more about those conditions than I did in the scene, because with those two lines, he gained a stronger identification with the character. That made the rest of the scene seem more real to him.
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Now, this happened to be the feeling that hit Rodney over the head. It may not have the same effect on other readers, but it’s my hope there are other details that might evoke the same sort of attachment for someone else. Let me correct that last sentence. I don’t just hope this, I plan for this by providing details about the smell in the air, the way the moon shines into the room after the lights are turned off, the feel of the newly washed bed sheets, the quality of the summer air as it blows through the open window. Not all of these details will work in the end, but try to consider the senses from the beginning and cut the excess out later.
O’Connor goes on to say many writers educate themselves about the senses by painting. The author Silas House says to visualize your scenes as frames in a movie. I think still photography often can serve the same purpose and help deepen your understanding of what you see around you. Journaling is another good way to practice recording details about textures and smells and tastes, as well as the kinds of impressions that come from your experiences with the senses.
Remember that these details must never become too technical. As Flannary advises, use only essential details to move your story forward.
Letters to a Young Poet
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Great Lines on 6 September 2009

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A book that I frequently return to for encouragement and direction with my writing is Rainer Maria Rilke’s Letters to a Young Poet. I often think of the following section from his first letter. It inspires me to look into my past and into myself, but in a practical way. Letters to a Young Poet was intended to assist a poet, but I think it can be applied to all creative endeavors.
You ask whether your verses are any good. You ask me. You have asked others before this. You send them to magazines. You compare them with other poems, and you are upset when certain editors reject your work. Now (since you have said you want my advice) I beg you to stop doing that sort of thing. You are looking outside, and that is what you should most avoid right now. No one can advise or help you – no one. There is only one thing you should do. Go into yourself. Find out the reason that commands you to write; see whether it has spread its roots into the very depths of your heart; confess to yourself whether you would have to die if you were forbidden to write. This most of all: ask yourself in the most silent hour of your night: must I write? Dig into yourself for a deep answer. And if this answer rings out in assent, if you meet this solemn question with a strong, simple “I must,” then build your life in accordance with this necessity; your while life, even into its humblest and most indifferent hour, must become a sign and witness to this impulse. Then come close to Nature. Then, as if no one had ever tried before, try to say what you see and feel and love and lose. Don’t write love poems; avoid those forms that are too facile and ordinary: they are the hardest to work with, and it takes great, fully ripened power to create something individual where good, even glorious, traditions exist in abundance. So rescue yourself from these general themes and write about what your everyday life offers you; describe your sorrows and desires, the thoughts that pass through your mind and your belief in some kind of beauty – describe all these with heartfelt, silent, humble sincerity and, when you express yourself, use the Things around you, the images from your dreams, and the objects that you remember. If your everyday life seems poor, don’t blame it; blame yourself; admit to yourself that you are not enough of a poet to call forth its riches; because for the creator there is not poverty and no poor, indifferent place. And even if you found yourself in some prison, whose walls let in none of the world’s sounds – wouldn’t you still have your childhood, that jewel beyond all price, that treasure house of memories? Turn your attentions to it. Try to raise up the sunken feelings of this enormous past; your personality will grow stronger, your solitude will expand and become a place where you can live in the twilight, where the noise of other people passes by, far in the distance. – And if out of this turning-within, out of this immersion in your own world, poems come, then you will not think of asking anyone whether they are good or not. Nor will you try to interest magazines in these works: for you will see them as your dear natural possession, a piece of your life, a voice from it. A work of art is good if it has arisen out of necessity. That is the only way one can judge it. So, dear Sir, I can’t give you any advice but this: to go into yourself and see how deep the place is from which your life flows; at its source you will find the answer to the question whether you must create. Accept that answer, just as it is given to you, without trying to interpret it. Perhaps you will discover that you are called to be an artist. Then take the destiny upon yourself, and bear it, its burden and its greatness, without ever asking what reward might come from outside. For the creator must be a world for himself and must find everything in himself and in Nature, to whom his whole life is devoted.
~Rainer Maria Rilke, Letters to a Young Poet. (Bold formatting added)
Must you write?
How do you turn your attention to your memories?
Unbecoming a Writer, or, Exploding Cigars
Posted by Liz Lamont in General Writing on 2 September 2009
Not long after graduating from college in the seventies, I headed to New York City with big dreams of leading some kind of glamorous literary life. These were the days when female English majors with a 3.9 GPA, unlike their male counterparts, had no reason to hope for an immediate writing or editorial position, so I started off as a secretary to the editor-in-chief of a well-known private publishing house. He was a good man, and he didn’t begrudge my ill-concealed desperation to be promoted into the ranks of the underpaid editorial assistants,all of whom wandered into the office sometime about noon, apparently still very sleepy, and labored until about 9 p.m., when, suddenly energized, they were sucked toward some literary New Jerusalem like the east Village. They might have been editors by trade, but we all knew what they really were: writers. I, on the other hand, wouldn’t qualify as a “writer” no matter how much I wrote or how much black I wore as long as I remained a secretary.

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As it turned out, I was promoted three short weeks after my arrival, apparently some sort of record for a secretary, and for no other reason than that I could spot and fix errors in punctuation or grammar better than my boss. I remember looking over an article he’d written and spotting the sorts of errors unworthy of anyone who actually makes his or her living off the printed page. I could have just fixed his mistakes;I suppose it was my job to do so, but I didn’t. Instead I marched into his office. “Um, about punctuation, spelling, and grammar,” I said. “I’m confused. They stopped mattering in writing, when?”
He looked up from his work; then he blushed. “It’s that bad?”
“We’re talking conduct unbecoming a writer,” I told him. “If I were your boss, you’d be fired.”
“Then it’s a good thing you’re not my boss,” he said.
“And it’s a disgrace I’m not in editorial.”
Congratulations to Meela [Contest]
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Poetry, Resources on 1 September 2009
Congratulations to Meela for winning In the Palm of Your Hand: The Poet’s Portable Workshop by Steve Kowit!

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For those who did not win, check out Online Audio Poetry Resources: Listening to Mimic. The post has lots of wonderful, free examples of great poetry.
Memoir Writing Workshop in Berea, KY
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Resources on 1 September 2009

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Noted journalist and memoirist Jason Howard is offering a nonfiction workshop, “Writing Memoir,” at the Appalachian Center in Berea on Saturday, September 26th from 9 AM to noon. In addition to class-time, the workshop will feature a manuscript critique and a 20-minute individual conference. Howard is the coauthor of Something’s Rising and the editor of the anthology We All Live Downstream. The former senior editor for Equal Justice Magazine in Washington, D.C., his works have appeared in publications such as The Louisville Review, Paste, Appalachian Heritage and Kentucky Living. He is also acquisitions editor at MotesBooks.
Registration is $50; space is limited. The registration deadline is September 19th. To register or for more information, contact Howard at kynatureboy@gmail.com.
Inspiration Posts from Around the Web
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Resources on 28 August 2009
In the spirit of cultivating inspiration, I would like to list posts from around the web that will help you get your inspiration juices flowing. If you have any other inspiring suggestions, please add them to the comments.

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- Write When Inspired
- 31 Ways to Find Inspiration for Your Writing
- Discover Hundreds of Post Ideas for Your Blog with Mind Mapping
- Blogging Tip: How to Use Social News Aggregators as a Source for Content Ideas
- 50 Ways for Writers to Find Article Ideas
- 100 Reasons to Mind Map
- Opening Yourself to Inspiration
Automatic Writing: Writing from Your Stream of Consciousness
Posted by Joshua Dodson in Resources, Starters on 27 August 2009
A great way to overcome writer’s block or just start a writing session is by using stream of consciousness writing. A goal that a writer should always have is to expand the scope of consciousness. You must first tap into the wealth of the subconscious. During stream of consciousness writing the subconscious bubbles up to the surface and displays itself to you on the page.

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Try to write a couple of pages in a stream of consciousness style. This is not poetry. This is playing with unrealized possibilities. When you have several pages and are ready to stop (don’t stop until you are ready), look at what you have written. Be sure to read this uncritically. Either use a line, or a thought from the pages you have written as a jumping point for your next poem or short story.
When you put pen to paper without thinking about it at all, something happens. It is possible to be swept away into an unfamiliar and wonderful place where you write directly from the thoughts you don’t always acknowledge. The thoughts that are waiting beneath the surface of your mind are displayed on the page. This can be stunning and brilliant. It can also help you generate some great ideas to work with.
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