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		<title>Comment on submissions by Book Reviews, Editing, etc. « Aubrie Cox</title>
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		<dc:creator>Book Reviews, Editing, etc. « Aubrie Cox</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 Apr 2011 20:33:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] understatement. The submissions deadline for is May 21st. For more information, see haijinx‘s submissions page.             Hello! This is my personal space on the web. Writing samples can be viewed under [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on submissions by News, Book Reviews, and Other Things « Yay Words!</title>
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		<dc:creator>News, Book Reviews, and Other Things « Yay Words!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Mar 2011 01:41:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] understatement. The submissions deadline for is May 21st. For more information, see haijinx‘s submissions page.    The freshest in culture.    Featured on PopPressed   Perrier-Jouët Turns 200          [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Shooting My Poetry Mouth Off (May 2010) by Lynne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Feb 2011 22:22:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Richard - hmmm... For me 'family picnic' is poetry. It might not have the lyrical element you identify from 'rainy season' in the first haiku but it does have tension from the line break in line 2, a line break that has the 'new wife's rump' hanging delightfully off the end of the line! And it also has strong poetic closure - the one syllable word 'mine' anchors or lands the poem yet it feels open enough for me to enter and leaf through the ideas these few words are suggesting.

I suppose the lyric is only one choice when it comes to writing haiku.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Richard &#8211; hmmm&#8230; For me &#8216;family picnic&#8217; is poetry. It might not have the lyrical element you identify from &#8216;rainy season&#8217; in the first haiku but it does have tension from the line break in line 2, a line break that has the &#8216;new wife&#8217;s rump&#8217; hanging delightfully off the end of the line! And it also has strong poetic closure &#8211; the one syllable word &#8216;mine&#8217; anchors or lands the poem yet it feels open enough for me to enter and leaf through the ideas these few words are suggesting.</p>
<p>I suppose the lyric is only one choice when it comes to writing haiku.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Shooting My Poetry Mouth Off (April 2010) by Lynne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Feb 2011 20:02:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It's so good to read critical analysis on writing haiku. I think that the more we can talk about the craft of haiku writing, the conscious choices that writers make to achieve particular effects, the better. But in my few years association with the haiku world I've learned that it's not always welcome. 

Workshopping has always been a part of my writing experience, the kind of workshop where the author has to remain silent while the rest of the group discuss his/her work. Yes, it can be tough but the one most valuable thing I've learned from it is the separation of 'the writer' from 'the writing'. And it's only when we can do that, for ourselves, that we can objectively assess our own work, decide what 'it' needs.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s so good to read critical analysis on writing haiku. I think that the more we can talk about the craft of haiku writing, the conscious choices that writers make to achieve particular effects, the better. But in my few years association with the haiku world I&#8217;ve learned that it&#8217;s not always welcome. </p>
<p>Workshopping has always been a part of my writing experience, the kind of workshop where the author has to remain silent while the rest of the group discuss his/her work. Yes, it can be tough but the one most valuable thing I&#8217;ve learned from it is the separation of &#8216;the writer&#8217; from &#8216;the writing&#8217;. And it&#8217;s only when we can do that, for ourselves, that we can objectively assess our own work, decide what &#8216;it&#8217; needs.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Shooting My Poetry Mouth Off (January 2011) by Lynne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Feb 2011 19:42:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great article, Richard. I've 'shared' it on my FB page. Yes, writing and publishing are two different things. When I was writing mainly free-verse I was happy if I wrote 6 'good' poems in a year. And I still feel the same as far as haiku, and haibun, go.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great article, Richard. I&#8217;ve &#8216;shared&#8217; it on my FB page. Yes, writing and publishing are two different things. When I was writing mainly free-verse I was happy if I wrote 6 &#8216;good&#8217; poems in a year. And I still feel the same as far as haiku, and haibun, go.</p>
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		<title>Comment on a jumble of flowers (Melissa Allen) by francesannjones@gmail.com</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 16:45:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I've just had a haiku accepted by Shamrock.  I'm still feeling my way with haiku, so this acceptance in an overseas publication was a pleasant surprise. I encourage any hesitant haiku writer to submit work for publication.  It's free feedback and sometimes a wide-spread net catches a surprise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve just had a haiku accepted by Shamrock.  I&#8217;m still feeling my way with haiku, so this acceptance in an overseas publication was a pleasant surprise. I encourage any hesitant haiku writer to submit work for publication.  It&#8217;s free feedback and sometimes a wide-spread net catches a surprise.</p>
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		<title>Comment on about Melissa Allen by Alan Summers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alan Summers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 13:37:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome aboard Melissa!  

The haiku world is fast moving, and there is so much to offer both newcomers and veterens.  

It becomes ever more necessary to create a useful central accessible core of information. I can't think of a more ideal person to help with this than you.

As I've long been a fan and admirer of your collating skills and good humor in your Red Dragonfly blog, I am very excited that you've become a member of the haijinx staff.

Alan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome aboard Melissa!  </p>
<p>The haiku world is fast moving, and there is so much to offer both newcomers and veterens.  </p>
<p>It becomes ever more necessary to create a useful central accessible core of information. I can&#8217;t think of a more ideal person to help with this than you.</p>
<p>As I&#8217;ve long been a fan and admirer of your collating skills and good humor in your Red Dragonfly blog, I am very excited that you&#8217;ve become a member of the haijinx staff.</p>
<p>Alan</p>
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		<title>Comment on submissions by a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</title>
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		<dc:creator>a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 00:58:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] haijinx publishes around the solstices and equinoxes each year. The first 2011 issue will be released on March 20th and the submission deadline for Melissa’s a jumble of flowers is March 8th. All other submissions are due by March 1st. For more information, please visit our submissions page. [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on a jumble of flowers (Melissa Allen) by a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</title>
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		<dc:creator>a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 00:57:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] (circle as many as apply) to share the following announcement with you: haijinx welcomes Melissa Allen as our newest regular [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] (circle as many as apply) to share the following announcement with you: haijinx welcomes Melissa Allen as our newest regular [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on haijinx staff update: Melissa Allen by a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</title>
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		<dc:creator>a jumble of flowers: some news « Red Dragonfly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 00:53:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] very excited/pleased/proud/terrified (circle as many as apply) to share the following announcement with you: haijinx welcomes Melissa Allen as our newest regular [...]</description>
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