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	<title>Comments for Robust Writing</title>
	
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	<description>The portfolio blog of copywriter Jesse Hines</description>
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		<title>Comment on Twilight Fan? Aspiring Author? Check Out George Beahm’s Latest Book by thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Nov 2009 13:43:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can see Forks  is milking this twilight thing

&lt;em&gt;thomas's last blog post..&lt;a href='http://newtwilight.net/twilight-movie/sharp-outlines-of-a-few-big-screen-pictures/' rel="nofollow"&gt;Sharp Outlines Of A Few Big Screen Pictures&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can see Forks  is milking this twilight thing</p>
<p><em>thomas&#8217;s last blog post..<a href='http://newtwilight.net/twilight-movie/sharp-outlines-of-a-few-big-screen-pictures/' rel="nofollow">Sharp Outlines Of A Few Big Screen Pictures</a></em></p>
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		<title>Comment on Five Ways To Promote Your Blog Or Website With Robust Writing by Giftie @ clear top boxes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Giftie @ clear top boxes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Nov 2009 20:19:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I'm a real fan of commentluv and wordpress .... they make a bloggers life so much easier and for a relative beginner that has got to be good news!

&lt;em&gt;Giftie @ clear top boxes's last blog post..&lt;a href='http://cleartopboxes.com/one-of-a-kind-gifts' rel="nofollow"&gt;One of a Kind Gifts&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a real fan of commentluv and wordpress &#8230;. they make a bloggers life so much easier and for a relative beginner that has got to be good news!</p>
<p><em>Giftie @ clear top boxes&#8217;s last blog post..<a href='http://cleartopboxes.com/one-of-a-kind-gifts' rel="nofollow">One of a Kind Gifts</a></em></p>
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		<title>Comment on Five Ways To Promote Your Blog Or Website With Robust Writing by Ina</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 13:22:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love all of it! 
this little piece of plugin are powerful!

It's simply amazing! 
thanks for sharing it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love all of it!<br />
this little piece of plugin are powerful!</p>
<p>It&#8217;s simply amazing!<br />
thanks for sharing it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Grammar Tip: When to Use “We” or “Us” by Jesse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jesse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 02:44:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>bk,

Yes, I'm pretty sure it should be "just us two."

Thanks for the audio link. It sounded good, but, no I didn't remember that song.

A little before my time. 11 years to be exact.

But "Cream" is a cool name for a band. Good song.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>bk,</p>
<p>Yes, I&#8217;m pretty sure it should be &#8220;just us two.&#8221;</p>
<p>Thanks for the audio link. It sounded good, but, no I didn&#8217;t remember that song.</p>
<p>A little before my time. 11 years to be exact.</p>
<p>But &#8220;Cream&#8221; is a cool name for a band. Good song.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writer’s Block or Procrastination? Be Honest by Somebody Else Says: The Other Sixth-Letter-of-the-Alphabet Word « Becky Levine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Somebody Else Says: The Other Sixth-Letter-of-the-Alphabet Word « Becky Levine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 23:09:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] At Robust Writing: http://robustwriting.com/writer%E2%80%99s-block-or-procrastination-be-honest [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] At Robust Writing: <a href="http://robustwriting.com/writer%E2%80%99s-block-or-procrastination-be-honest" rel="nofollow">http://robustwriting.com/writer%E2%80%99s-block-or-procrastination-be-honest</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Grammar Tip: When to Use “We” or “Us” by bk</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 21:41:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So.  Every time I hear the song "Sunshine of Your Love" by Cream (1967), I cringe when they get to the lines:

  "Yes, I'm with you my love,
  It's the morning and just ... we ... two."

Shouldn't it be "just US two"?

(Sound clip available at 
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Sunshine.ogg 
in case you don't remember which song this is...)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So.  Every time I hear the song &#8220;Sunshine of Your Love&#8221; by Cream (1967), I cringe when they get to the lines:</p>
<p>  &#8220;Yes, I&#8217;m with you my love,<br />
  It&#8217;s the morning and just &#8230; we &#8230; two.&#8221;</p>
<p>Shouldn&#8217;t it be &#8220;just US two&#8221;?</p>
<p>(Sound clip available at<br />
<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Sunshine.ogg" rel="nofollow">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Sunshine.ogg</a><br />
in case you don&#8217;t remember which song this is&#8230;)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Grammar Tip: When to Use “We” or “Us” by Jesse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jesse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Oct 2009 21:58:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Melody,

My vote:

"Somebody is worse off than we."

My reasoning:

Extend the sentence to its natural conclusion:

"Somebody is worse off than we [are]."

That's more natural and correct sounding than writing:

"Somebody is worse off than us [are]."</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Melody,</p>
<p>My vote:</p>
<p>&#8220;Somebody is worse off than we.&#8221;</p>
<p>My reasoning:</p>
<p>Extend the sentence to its natural conclusion:</p>
<p>&#8220;Somebody is worse off than we [are].&#8221;</p>
<p>That&#8217;s more natural and correct sounding than writing:</p>
<p>&#8220;Somebody is worse off than us [are].&#8221;</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Best Book On Writing I’ve Ever Read by Random, Round up and Maybe a Few Surpises — Simply Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>Random, Round up and Maybe a Few Surpises — Simply Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2009 01:17:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Sadly, Jesse from Robust Writing recently say farewell. I’ll always be thankful for his work and excellent example as one of the best writers I’ve read online. Jesse recommended the book, and he is right, it is- along with On Writing Well- one of the best books on writing. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Sadly, Jesse from Robust Writing recently say farewell. I&#8217;ll always be thankful for his work and excellent example as one of the best writers I&#8217;ve read online. Jesse recommended the book, and he is right, it is- along with On Writing Well- one of the best books on writing. [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Grammar Tip: When to Use “We” or “Us” by melody tinder</title>
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		<dc:creator>melody tinder</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Oct 2009 20:12:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can't find the correct way to write this:

Somebody is worse off than us.
or
Somebody is worse off than we.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can&#8217;t find the correct way to write this:</p>
<p>Somebody is worse off than us.<br />
or<br />
Somebody is worse off than we.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Writer’s Energy Drink by Jesse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jesse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:04:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Chloe,

I don't think I've ever had one of the sugary, caffeinated energy drinks. The closest I've come is drinking Mountain Dew, which I do sometimes enjoy.

But, I much prefer tea, and especially green tea. In fact, I'm drinking some hot Ito En green tea as I type this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Chloe,</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve ever had one of the sugary, caffeinated energy drinks. The closest I&#8217;ve come is drinking Mountain Dew, which I do sometimes enjoy.</p>
<p>But, I much prefer tea, and especially green tea. In fact, I&#8217;m drinking some hot Ito En green tea as I type this.</p>
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