StoryTime Comments

Thanks for your comments, everyone. I'll keep...

2012-02-23T18:29:52.564+02:00

Thanks for your comments, everyone. I'll keep writing. Not easy, but even Achebe and Roy had to start somewhere.
AB

Thank you, Panakibaba for taking time to read...am...

2012-02-21T08:53:43.430+02:00

Thank you, Panakibaba for taking time to read...am glad you like it.

Lovely!, I love the imagination behind every scene...

2012-02-20T16:48:11.170+02:00

Lovely!, I love the imagination behind every scene. It made me laugh. More please!

I saw two stories here. Beautifully merged into on...

2012-02-20T09:44:21.632+02:00

I saw two stories here. Beautifully merged into one that can be adapted into a novel. Good job.

Thank You for this piece.

2012-02-20T00:43:58.449+02:00

Thank You for this piece.

U delve into ur stories wt simplicity n so, make i...

2012-02-19T22:49:18.485+02:00

U delve into ur stories wt simplicity n so, make it easy 4 a lay-man thereby, bringing clarity wc ensures d maximum entertainment, fun n undastnding u clearly set out 2 achieve frm d onset. Kudos man.

Thanks Muyis and Oluwatosin.

2012-02-18T23:16:22.723+02:00

Thanks Muyis and Oluwatosin.

Thanks very much Donijo, for your kind comments. y...

2012-02-17T14:21:13.606+02:00

Thanks very much Donijo, for your kind comments. yes the story has a second part entitled Sunrise. I am glad you enjoyed reading this part, and i want to encourage you to blog it for me, or to refer your friends to the story, so they would have a read. The second part of this story is part of the novel ,Keys in the river, so i would like to interest you to buy the novel once its out. You can get in touch with me for a copy. thanks very much

Amazing piece and well writing. i m looking forwar...

2012-02-15T20:21:41.008+02:00

Amazing piece and well writing. i m looking forward to read more.

Nice story!

2012-02-14T15:33:43.880+02:00

Nice story!

Wow!... so much suspense. Was on the edge of my se...

2012-02-13T16:58:31.481+02:00

Wow!... so much suspense. Was on the edge of my seat all through, didnt know when my eyes started getting wet. This is definitely not the end of this story. pls, i'ld really like to get the full story......

Beautiful Story.....I love it! Transition...excell...

2012-02-13T14:32:03.870+02:00

Beautiful Story.....I love it!
Transition...excellent!!!

Nice interpretation of a day in the life of a jobl...

2012-02-13T10:40:09.193+02:00

Nice interpretation of a day in the life of a jobless Nigerian youth...Well done, Sir. You should do more of this.

I saw a part of me in this story! love it. Its so ...

2012-02-11T18:04:00.898+02:00

I saw a part of me in this story! love it. Its so real.Don't stop!
Julua L gham

Great story AB. Loved it. Keep writing, I love rea...

2012-02-03T22:13:04.642+02:00

Great story AB. Loved it. Keep writing, I love reading. And now that I know about story time, I'll always come back to read more.
Anota

Well Done !!! A lot of our young African generatio...

2012-01-26T19:23:46.330+02:00

Well Done !!! A lot of our young African generation, in the diaspora, can definitely relate. I am not sure if it is a case of "Old women feeling uncomfortable when old bones are mentioned in a proverb" or not. It does cause one to reflect.

B.I.L

Bene bene bene...nice story AB.Poor Nams and poor ...

2012-01-24T11:38:49.405+02:00

Bene bene bene...nice story AB.Poor Nams and poor Tunde.Who knows whether the story would have ended differently if they were both sincere to each other right from the start?! Good descriptions of the scenes AB.
Kome

Job well done AB. Hope this will be helpfull to th...

2012-01-23T16:27:14.583+02:00

Job well done AB. Hope this will be helpfull to the youths out there. More grease to your elbows.
Mom.

well written!!looking foreward to read more of you...

2012-01-23T11:06:41.332+02:00

well written!!looking foreward to read more of your writtings..

Beautiful piece, well written and depicting the bi...

2012-01-23T09:17:28.996+02:00

Beautiful piece, well written and depicting the biggest challenge young people face.
Keep up the good work AB and keep the faith.

Good literary piece dabbled fluidly with social re...

2012-01-22T21:12:48.939+02:00

Good literary piece dabbled fluidly with social realities and cultural nuances of growing up. Kudos A.B and keep the wheels spinning.

Benedict

This is a very good and compelling story.The atten...

2012-01-17T10:56:59.347+02:00

This is a very good and compelling story.The attention to detail was wow and character development was great too.

And I wonder why she calls herself an aspiring writer. With this quality in her writing, we want to begin seeing those books!

great staff. well structured and very interesting ...

2012-01-16T22:31:37.166+02:00

great staff. well structured and very interesting . MOORE FROM ALISON PLEASE

A thought provoking piece that addresses social an...

2012-01-16T20:08:08.884+02:00

A thought provoking piece that addresses social and cultural issues with a subtle hint of conflict. With a relate-able protagonist and a well developed narrative, 'Les Amoureus' is not only a great story, but an artistic work of literature that showcases not only African talent, but Alison Bwalya Erlwanger's skills as a rising author. READ IT!

This is a very compelling story, and among the mos...

2012-01-16T17:42:05.934+02:00

This is a very compelling story, and among the most well-crafted pieces on this site. I found the characterization of Neville especially heartfelt and engrossing - but really, all of the characters felt so real and complex.

I want to see more from Alison Bwalya Erlwanger!