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		<title>No Poems?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[No poems. We just returned home from a speedy trip to Dallas. On the trip my cell phone took its last breath. So since we touched down at home I&#8217;ve been scrambling to research and buy a new phone. I&#8217;m now dependent on this technology to run my business. This means I have to research, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No poems. We just returned home from a speedy trip to Dallas. On the trip my cell phone took its last breath. So since we touched down at home I&#8217;ve been scrambling to research and buy a new phone. I&#8217;m now dependent on this technology to run my business. This means I have to research, buy and learn to use a new phone by Monday morning at 5AM.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s today&#8217;s prompt if you want to have a go at it. It looks like a fun one to me. Maybe I&#8217;ll write &#8220;11:45PM&#8221;. The first line will read &#8220;I learned how to make a phone call&#8221;.</p>
<blockquote><p>For today&#8217;s prompt, write a time of day poem.  In fact, make the title of your poem the time of day.  For instance, &#8220;5:54 a.m.,&#8221; 2:23 p.m.,&#8221; &#8220;Midnight,&#8221; etc.  Then, write your poem.  Of course, different things happen at different times of day.  So have fun with it.</p></blockquote>
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		<title>Goofy Poem?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today is our first &#8220;Two for Tuesday&#8221; prompt of the month. For those who are new to the challenge, I provide two prompts instead of one&#8211;usually polar opposites of each other&#8211;and poets can choose which one to use. Of course, quite a few poets write a poem for both prompts.
 
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Today is our first &#8220;Two for Tuesday&#8221; prompt of the month. For those who are new to the challenge, I provide two prompts instead of one&#8211;usually polar opposites of each other&#8211;and poets can choose which one to use. Of course, quite a few poets write a poem for both prompts.</a></p>
<p><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/"> </a></p>
<p><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">For today&#8217;s prompt, do one of the following:<br />
</a></p>
<ol>
<li><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Write a goofy poem.</a></li>
<li><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Write a serious poem.</a></li>
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<p><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Of course, I see the possibility for writing a seriously goofy poem and writing a serious poem with a little goofy thrown into the mix. I&#8217;m excited to see what kind of silly things may transpire the next 24 hours, and I&#8217;m interested in all the straight-faced poems as well.</a></p>
<p>What a full day. I took a few minutes this morning and wrote an especially dumb poem. I&#8217;m almost ashamed to post it. No, I AM ashamed to post it. And yet, here I go.</p>
<p>Shadow&#8217;s Farting:<br />
Our<br />
sweet<br />
old<br />
worried<br />
gassy<br />
Shadow<br />
an<br />
echo<br />
in<br />
our<br />
wakes<br />
our<br />
furry<br />
farting<br />
sweet<br />
old<br />
Shadow<br />
dumps<br />
us<br />
as<br />
soon<br />
as the<br />
weather<br />
breaks</p>
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		<title>The Volunteer’s Daughter:</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[One more for today&#8230;..
The volunteer&#8217;s daughter:
6 PM he is paged to dispatch at the station
Midnight to a smoke investigation
2AM it&#8217;s a medical emergency
someone&#8217;s child is choking
3AM I&#8217;m awakened
by my father&#8217;s arms around me -
I know another child has died.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One more for today&#8230;..</p>
<p>The volunteer&#8217;s daughter:</p>
<p>6 PM he is paged to dispatch at the station<br />
Midnight to a smoke investigation<br />
2AM it&#8217;s a medical emergency<br />
someone&#8217;s child is choking<br />
3AM I&#8217;m awakened<br />
by my father&#8217;s arms around me -<br />
I know another child has died.</p>
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		<title>Boo Wears a Tinfoil Hat</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Apr 2011 17:31:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here we go with Robert&#8217;s suggestion for today:
For today&#8217;s prompt, pick a type of person and write a poem about him or her. To help set the scene, you may want to title your poem as who the type of person is. For instance, you could write a poem titled &#8220;Firefighter,&#8221; &#8220;Cynic,&#8221; &#8220;Optimist,&#8221; &#8220;Teacher,&#8221; &#8220;2-year-old,&#8221; [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here we go with Robert&#8217;s suggestion for today:</p>
<blockquote><p>For today&#8217;s prompt, pick a type of person and write a poem about him or her. To help set the scene, you may want to title your poem as who the type of person is. For instance, you could write a poem titled &#8220;Firefighter,&#8221; &#8220;Cynic,&#8221; &#8220;Optimist,&#8221; &#8220;Teacher,&#8221; &#8220;2-year-old,&#8221; etc. The list is endless.</p></blockquote>
<p>I&#8217;m really enjoying these prompts, I&#8217;ve never tried to write like this. It&#8217;s like opening a new toy every morning and seeing if I can figure out how to play with it.</p>
<p>I think if I look at these poems as sketches I&#8217;m able to free myself up a bit. Think little place holders for ideas that might grow into a completed poem at some point.</p>
<p>If you write something, do share your poem with me. I encourage you to go to <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Poetics Asides</a> and read all the other prompt poems being created and post your own words there as well!</p>
<p>BOO WEARS A TINFOIL HAT:<br />
She hears my voice<br />
but doesn&#8217;t know who&#8217;s talking.<br />
Boo speaks in seven languages<br />
but dreams of a silent heaven -<br />
Erased are the buffer lines<br />
that hold back imagination<br />
In her head an orchestra<br />
of TV warning crawlers<br />
breaking news and danger talkers<br />
She stock piles bottled water<br />
taps her hat<br />
and suggests I tune<br />
my hound dog&#8217;s radio wire.</p>
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		<title>Imagine the world without you</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robert&#8217;s prompt today is to imagine the world without you.
Here&#8217;s what he wrote:
Today&#8217;s prompt is to write a poem in which you imagine the world without you. Since my favorite movie (It&#8217;s a Wonderful Life) plays with this idea, I&#8217;m surprised I&#8217;ve never used this prompt before. The world could be a much worse place [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,05ddad48-5549-40a7-b222-d8074dd01ddb.aspx#commentstart">Robert&#8217;s</a> prompt today is to imagine the world without you.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s what he wrote:</p>
<blockquote><p>Today&#8217;s prompt is to write a poem in which you imagine the world without you. Since my favorite movie (It&#8217;s a Wonderful Life) plays with this idea, I&#8217;m surprised I&#8217;ve never used this prompt before. The world could be a much worse place without you, could be pretty much the same, or I guess, it could even be better. Anyway, it&#8217;s interesting to contemplate our individual contributions to this planet in ways small and large.</p></blockquote>
<p>I was playing with ideas for a poem earlier today but came up empty handed so far. Do I want to imagine that I was never born, or just went up in a poof of smoke yesterday&#8230;maybe something in-between? I&#8217;m thinking I&#8217;ll try imagining the world without the me that I have become. Hmmmm&#8230;</p>
<p>If I get lucky, I&#8217;ll have something to post before I go to bed. What do you come up with using this prompt?</p>
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		<title>A Postcard Poem</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[April is National Poetry Month and over on Robert Lee Brewer&#8217;s site Poetics Asides, he has a poem a day challenge going on. Well, I&#8217;m not sure I&#8217;ll get one out every day but I spit one out today.
Robert&#8217;s challenge reads:
For today&#8217;s prompt, write a postcard poem. Make it brief and communicate what it is [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>April is National Poetry Month and over on<a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/"> Robert Lee Brewer&#8217;s site Poetics Asides</a>, he has a poem a day challenge going on. Well, I&#8217;m not sure I&#8217;ll get one out every day but I spit one out today.</p>
<p>Robert&#8217;s challenge reads:</p>
<blockquote><p>For today&#8217;s prompt, write a postcard poem. Make it brief and communicate what it is like where you are. Also, make it personal. My poem is on the way, but I am having trouble producing line breaks with my smart phone. In the meantime, get poeming.</p></blockquote>
<p><strong>A Postcard from St. Joe&#8217;s</strong></p>
<p>I wasn&#8217;t scheduled to arrive here<br />
but the surgeon pointed me in this direction.<br />
It will take a bit of getting used to<br />
I&#8217;m not sure yet how to travel under<br />
such strange and new conditions.</p>
<p>Your turn. Let&#8217;s see what you can do with Robert&#8217;s prompt.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Poor whynotrachel.com. I continue to use and abandon it. Now I want to use it for snippets of thoughts and words I&#8217;m playing with. A home for my mental scrapbook, where an ideas does not have to be complete to be alive. A place to enjoy a raw word diet.
So welcome to my treehouse. You&#8217;re [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Poor whynotrachel.com. I continue to use and abandon it. Now I want to use it for snippets of thoughts and words I&#8217;m playing with. A home for my mental scrapbook, where an ideas does not have to be complete to be alive. A place to enjoy a raw word diet.</p>
<p>So welcome to my treehouse. You&#8217;re welcome to come in and hang out and be yourself here. You&#8217;re ideas don&#8217;t have to be completely formed to be worth mentioning. A poem can be one hot line you want to build something around. A story idea can be just that, an idea. Here grammar is not king and you don&#8217;t have to know what the ending is before you begin.</p>
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		<title>It’s a Writers Life for Me?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[(Another post like the last one, but different&#8230;sort of)
I didn&#8217;t sleep through k-12 but I struggled. It would be years after public school that I would get my first pair of low vision reading glasses. I had a learning disability and was told I had ADD. So here I am at 46, a poor speller, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>(Another post like the last one, but different&#8230;sort of)</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t sleep through k-12 but I struggled. It would be years after public school that I would get my first pair of low vision reading glasses. I had a learning disability and was told I had ADD. So here I am at 46, a poor speller, with a Fundamentals of Grammar book in one hand and my laptop in the other. I don&#8217;t know how to write fiction. I don&#8217;t know how to tell a good story. But I&#8217;m going to find out if I can learn.</p>
<p>I have been saying I&#8217;m writing a non-fiction book for nearly 3 years and have about 12 first chapters and reams of uncategorized ramblings. As much as I would like to write that book I think I want it to write itself. I&#8217;ve lost my way and my enthusiasm for it. I am pretty sure it would be an okay book. Maybe even good one. When I sit down to work on it, however, it feels like learning a language I don&#8217;t want to speak. At least it does right now.</p>
<p>I need to lube my joints. I miss making something from nothing or something from something else. In my visual arts I build stories out of objects. I want to see if I can learn to build stories out of words. So I&#8217;m going to try.</p>
<p>First lesson: Write. I&#8217;m working my way through the book <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Immediate-Fiction-Complete-Writing-Course/dp/031228716X">Immediate Fiction, by Jerry Cleaver</a>. Today I learned that you&#8217;ve gotta make your characters suffer. A lot. And then see how they deal with all the trouble you keep tossing in their way. Seems so mean. Do I conger an amalgam of a few people that have rubbed me the wrong way and sic the dogs on them? That might actually be kind of fun. Then there&#8217;s the idea that if I design this Franken-fuck do I want to spend all my writing time with them? I get ahead of myself.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m doing the exercise on page 38 (of my addition of the book) where Cleaver has given a few scene ideas to see what I can do with it. The scene I&#8217;ve chosen to try is:</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;Trapped on a ski lift, on an airplane, or in a taxi with someone who starts talking or acting strange. The <strong>want</strong> is to be left alone, to be at peace to e safe. The <strong>obstacle</strong> is this weird person who is acting strange and maybe is dangerous. &#8220;</p></blockquote>
<p>Earlier in this chapter the author explains that the character has to have a want and an obstacle. (hope I&#8217;m explaining this right). A big want, not just a want like &#8220;I&#8217;m thinking I want some chocolate milk.&#8221; More like &#8220;if I don&#8217;t get the hell out of this cab this wack-job with the bang-the-ho music jacked-up is going to do something really freaky that if I live to tell about it will damage me for..ever&#8221; want. The obstacle is the wack-job of a drive who has a want just as big as the characters. That&#8217;s all I know so far. I&#8217;m going to try and write a scene. My character is trapped in the taxi. Wish them luck because if I do this right, it&#8217;s going to get ugly.</p>
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